manveer ff: Aa Dekhe Zara chpt 7 updated(pg 42) - Page 5

wow awesome update.Loved it.Cont soon and ty for the pm:D

Originally posted by: Shahista01

Hey sweety.

Superb concept. Done very well... love both the CS and prologue.

Muuaahh. Looking forward 2 1st chapter.

Thanks 4 pm, continue soon.

oh thanks shahi! I'm so glad that u checked it out 😃

Originally posted by: Marooshmalik

loved it continue soon and pm me

thank u 😊

Originally posted by: chitra_rao

OMG loved the prologue, it was amazing, cant wait to read more 😳😳

Amazing chapter 👏👏, loved it OMG manveer first meeting was so so cold, lol but I can already imagine hot intense their upcoming meeting would be😉😳😳. Cant wait to read more. this is an amazing story 👍🏼

Thank u sooo much sweety i'm so glad that u liked it and omg! u hv already started predicting the storyline! this is amazing and I just hope that u'll keep enjoying my work. 🤗

Originally posted by: Roze12

nice start... 👍🏼 ...great...awesum&fantastic...update... 👏 ...loved it...jay&manyata best friends...wow...very nice... 😆 ...cont soon...thanks for the wonderful update..&also thanks for the PM...

Oh thank u so much sweety 🤗 . hehe yeah I knw how easy it is to imagine jay and manyata as best frnds!😉

Originally posted by: eyecatchers

it is indeed very nice and I loved ur first chapter
plspm me if possible!!!!!!!!!!😃

Thanks 😃 and I'll surely pm u

Originally posted by: ...navina...

Wow Zarin - that was amazing👏. The character sketch as well as the prologue was fantastic 👍🏼👍🏼. RES - for ch1😊.

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Awesome start Dear. So Uday is the prospective groom for Jay , who already has her eyes set elsewhere😳. I'm sure Manyata will straighten things out for all😉.

Uday /Manyata introduction to each other was rather cold. I'm sure when Uday sees Manyata's feisty side - he will start to take an interest in her☺️😉.

Do continue soon ... I love this ff already ❤️.

omg! navi thank u so much for taking the time to read my story and putting such a sweet comment on it. 🤗. Yeah their introduction was cold. I did it intentionally 😉. It was a first sight hate for manyata and for uday well u never know with him 😉. Who knows may be he has already taken an interest on her or may be not. Who knows what's going on in his mind. 😉 He is after all our mystery man! 😆

Originally posted by: manisha98

hey zarin...SuPErB update...!!

u write really gud!!

btw thanx 4r d pm nd do continue soon😉!!

Thanks dear and u r always wc. And hopefully the next update will be up soon 😉

Originally posted by: Shahista01

😉😉 awesome zarin

Love the 1st chappy.

Jays prospective groom

And manveers cold introduction, lol.

Going 2 b an awesome story. thanks 4 pm.

Continue soon.

thanks shahi 😃. I'm glad that u liked it😊