manveer ff: Aa Dekhe Zara chpt 7 updated(pg 42)

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NAVINA

@HunsraJ

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#31

Wow Zarin - that was amazing👏. The character sketch as well as the prologue was fantastic 👍🏼👍🏼. RES - for ch1😊.

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Awesome start Dear. So Uday is the prospective groom for Jay , who already has her eyes set elsewhere😳. I'm sure Manyata will straighten things out for all😉.

Uday /Manyata introduction to each other was rather cold. I'm sure when Uday sees Manyata's feisty side - he will start to take an interest in her☺️😉.

Do continue soon ... I love this ff already ❤️.

Edited by ...navina... - 12 years ago

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manisha98

@manisha98

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

hey zarin...SuPErB update...!!

u write really gud!!

btw thanx 4r d pm nd do continue soon😉!!

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Shahista

@Shahi01

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#33

😉😉 awesome zarin

Love the 1st chappy.

Jays prospective groom

And manveers cold introduction, lol.

Going 2 b an awesome story. thanks 4 pm.

Continue soon.

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Fekta Holic

@WhatTheF

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#34

GR8 start
love the update plz...update soon thanx for PM.

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pia

@pia.raha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

dats a gr8 concpt,looking frward to reading it!!!!!!! do pm mee if possible😊

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pia

@pia.raha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

just read the 1st chpter,its goingg suprblyy!!!!!!!!😊😊

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princess369

@princess369

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

update quickly next part and don't forget to pm me

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sunshinehkl

@sunshinehkl

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Posted: 12 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: Roze12
welcome dear... 🤗 ...awesum concept... 👍🏼 ...great character sketch... 👏 ...nice and dffierent story...please cont soon...and please PM me if u can...please update first chappy ASAP... 😃

oh thank you so much! That was really sweet of you 🤗

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sunshinehkl

@sunshinehkl

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Posted: 12 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: eyecatchers
It's so damn intresting!!!!!!!!!!!!!😛
I could'nt have wrote likethis FF
Hey I'm also new here
Pls pm me if possible
and welcome to our forum!!!!!!!!!😉

aww.. thank u so much. And I'm sure that u r capable of writing far better than me. I don't even consider myself a writer 😆

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@.maleficent.

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#40

omg i love the prologue and 1 chapter too it was awesome u are really good fantastic man
hey btw welcome to dek forum hope u make lots of frnds here
and get addicted to this forum like us
a big hugzz from me
and xont soona nd pm me plzzz whenever u update next part

and siwni and swetu kamini apni chatting ki dukkan kahi aur jake suru karo kamini kisi ke bhi ff pe suru hojati hoo 🤣

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