manveer ff: Aa Dekhe Zara chpt 7 updated(pg 42)

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sunshinehkl

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Posted: 12 years ago

#161

Originally posted by: arna753
wonderful update. just loved manveer convo.
eager to know wht manyata replies.

cont. soon thanks for the pm

thanx. let's hope for d best! 😆

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sunshinehkl

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Posted: 12 years ago

#162

Originally posted by: Ashish.Holic
Awsome...update
plz...update soon thanx for PM.

thanx :). I'll try to update soon.

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sunshinehkl

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Posted: 12 years ago

#163

Originally posted by: -Zina-
that was awesome update read all three chapters today! Very well writtten...!
I really love the concept...all the chapters were very nice and the last one was amazing...they both are so challengeing...!
Lets see if manyata accepts his deal...!
Its gonna be fun..
Please update soon!
And pm me please!

oh thank u so much! I'm really happy that u liked it so far and I hope that u keep enjoying it. 😊 I'll try to update soon.

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sunshinehkl

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Posted: 12 years ago

#164

Originally posted by: sweet_gargi

Great Character sketch and I loved the concept...I have not started reading ur FF as m a bit busy but just read the concept and charac sketch..once am a bit free ill read regularly...😊

But welcome to the forum and looking for more FFs, SS and OS to read from you🤗

Can you tell me which are the other websites to write FFs?😊

Thank u 😊. Take ur time with the other chapters. Well I don't know abot other websites to write ff's as I've never written an ff before as I've said in the intro. This is the first time I'm writing an ff. Infact this is the first time I'm actually writing something in hindi. All my prevous works are in english. So if u r into english noverls or stories or poems u can try wattpad or bookrix. Actually u can write their ff's too. But all the ff's written there are mostly based on vampire diaries, 1 direction, twilight saga, animes etc. Not anything related to hindi serials . Anyway thanx again for visiting my ff 😊

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sunshinehkl

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Posted: 12 years ago

#165

Originally posted by: Priya46
mindblowing update awesome love it

thank u thank u! 😳

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sunshinehkl

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Posted: 12 years ago

#166

Originally posted by: fireroad99
pm really soon

haha I'll try to! 😊

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sunshinehkl

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Posted: 12 years ago

#167

Originally posted by: livvy
Love it love it love it just love it

ih come on u r making me blush! 😳 Thnx btw 🤗

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Posted: 12 years ago

#168

please please please

update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update

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Posted: 12 years ago

#169

Superb update Zarin 👍🏼. The dialogues between Uday & Manyata were so accurate , so close to their actual characters. I could picture the entire encounter happening before me!!! Very well written👏. I actually predicted that Uday would ask Manyata to take Jai's place and marry him ... when he finally said it in the last line - I ended up laughing like an idiot! Really loved this chapter Dear, ... do continue soon, & thanx 4 the PM😊.