manveer ff: Aa Dekhe Zara chpt 7 updated(pg 42) - Page 18

Originally posted by: sunshinehkl

Thank u 😊. Take ur time with the other chapters. Well I don't know abot other websites to write ff's as I've never written an ff before as I've said in the intro. This is the first time I'm writing an ff. Infact this is the first time I'm actually writing something in hindi. All my prevous works are in english. So if u r into english noverls or stories or poems u can try wattpad or bookrix. Actually u can write their ff's too. But all the ff's written there are mostly based on vampire diaries, 1 direction, twilight saga, animes etc. Not anything related to hindi serials . Anyway thanx again for visiting my ff 😊

Originally posted by: vampire12345678

please please please

update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update

Originally posted by: ...navina...

Superb update Zarin 👍🏼. The dialogues between Uday & Manyata were so accurate , so close to their actual characters. I could picture the entire encounter happening before me!!! Very well written👏. I actually predicted that Uday would ask Manyata to take Jai's place and marry him ... when he finally said it in the last line - I ended up laughing like an idiot! Really loved this chapter Dear, ... do continue soon, & thanx 4 the PM😊.

Originally posted by: -Zina-

update please 😔

Originally posted by: Jarin04

Omg this ff is freaking awesome. I really loved it. Pls cont. Soon and pm me

Originally posted by: Jarin04

hey do u know about fanfiction.net? It's a great place for writers lyk u

Originally posted by: Shahista01

Awesome update Zarin.

Loved it. written superbly.

The dialogues between uday and manyata.

Both are headstrong and challenging. lol.

I had an idea that uday would want manyata in jai's place

After her challenging him... lol.

Keep up the awesome work sweety. muuaahh.

Originally posted by: manisha98

Awesome update dea!!

luvd it !!

can't wait wat manyta's reaction wud be...

plz continue soon!!