DREAMS OR REALITY - Updated Chap 9 - Pg 69 - Page 39

Originally posted by: Sanarasheedroxx

Chapter 5 ws Awesome
LIFE IS LIKE A BOOK,
SOME CHAPTERS SAD,
SOME HAPPY
AND SOME SO VERY EXCITING
BUT IF YOU NEVER TURN THE PAGE YOU WILL
NEVER KNOW WHAT THE NEXT CHAPTER
HOLDS'' So True
control,anger and posession again the grey factor is dere lolz bt uday is a gr8 man
(anger for being abandoned by his biological dad
who walked out them after his mom became a
manic depressive' for being left alone when he
really needed them'. for being blamed for the
death of ADHI his baby brother, while he didn't
know or remember his father, he remembered his
mother' he could never forget her scent and
resented her for leaving him, she hated him after
ADHI had drowned). He tried to explain but she
never listened, she became a different person and
he got to feel the brunt of her anger and misery
every night for dad walking out, for losing ADHI
for every pain and hardship in her life,( yes he
was abused not only emotionally but physically
as well) . dats sad bt y did she blamed him bt uday still luvs her
dis show y he need to control things and posess them
a 5 year kid going through all dis *can't even imagine*
W*F? Did I just do that? PARATHA'S ??? YOU
NEED SLEEP SINGH, THIS GIRL.. YES MS
INNOCENCE PERSONIFIED IS MESSING WITH
YOUR HEAD.This girl is going to be very trouble,
the more I see her.. the more' NO' I have to stay
away from her. More like she needs to stay
away from me, I am trouble that she can not
handle and she is trouble that I most certainly
dont need. lolz she is d trouble dat he doesn't need????Really ?? he is trpuble she can't handle lolz
and uday asking her to hand deliver paranthas shahi u cracked me up
love uh

Originally posted by: Sanarasheedroxx

thank you sana😉
Although i missed uday in dis part
THE WAY SHE LOOKS
STRAIGHT THROUGH ME? OR THE PAIN I SEE
SUPPRESSED IN THAT INNOCENCE?'' dis indicates k dono mai kuch toh hai... Manyata ka kuch pata nahi but Uv.. definitely😳
manyata going to visit a beauty salon Omg!!!dat will be fun.. haan considering she is a natural beauty thought to enhance it...😆
i must say dat manyata jai and kimmy share a gr8 bond yes they do bt jai and kimmy are dominating and emotional blackmailers lolz haan kya kare.. thats what makes their bond so special
poor jai her dream man ws being insulted ' JIJI he is not Damian Vampy.. He is DAMIAN
SALVATORE' please don't insult him like that' lolz manyata is so cutevand innocent and jai is still a small baby cuties.. lol yes both sisters have their moments I think gudiya manyata n jai r sisters *i'll be d nxt shelock holmes lolz*.. lol sherlock homes hey.. 2good more like inspector klusea.. pink panther
and unnati ka lafda vj hai sath chl rha hai yha kuch nhi bhut kuch gadbad hai 😆😉 DHALL MEH DEFINITELY KUCH KAALA HAI SANA... SPOT ON
komal kis cheez k soch vichaar mai ??? apne husband ki kiss baat se inna pareshaan thi YOU WILL KNOW SOON
she would never wish him
any harm or want any downfall on his part but
could she do what he had asked her? Did she
have the strength?

😕😉there is sumething fishy plz update Asap
hope to see more of manveer *fingers crossed* WILL TRY TOO

thanxx fr dis beautiful,amazing,confusing,cute ,fantabulously awesome update AWW THANKS SANA FOR SUCH A LOVELY COMMENT
u did a splendid job GLAD YOU THINK SO
and sorry fr d aweful cmnts dat i gave on d previous qcc to me they were pathetic bt u noe na dat i have turned into a lazy queen sooo SORRY... THEY WERE NOT AWFUL SANA, NO COMMENT FROM YOU COULD EVER BE PATHETIC AS YOU SAY.. IT WAS LOVELY AND I TRULY APPRECIATE THEM AND THANK YOU FOR TAKING TIME OUT TO COMMENT.. HUGS
love uh loads

Originally posted by: humairaa1

Awesome update THANKS HUMAIRAA..😉
Is Vijay, Unnati's frind (the one Uday is looking for) 😆 NOW THAT WOULD BE TELLING.. WAIT FOR NEXT UPDATE..
Thanks for the pm 👏

Originally posted by: pari_vania

very nice story awsome dear keep it up.. THANK YOU
n please pm me add me ur pm list n whatever
but please pm me please SEND ME A FRIEND REQUEST WILL PM YOU
n story is very awsome i read full 6 chapters THANK YOU
i loved ur all chapters
i read forward to more please update very soon 😉

Originally posted by: ...navina...

Hi Shahi 😊. Hi navi

Surprised to find me here after such a long time? 😆 yes and its a good surprise

Well ... U & ME both 😉😆!!!! I finally caught up with my reading ... chapter 5 & 6 in 1 go 😃. thats good..

Both updates were superb 👏. Thank you I really felt sad reading about Uday's story😭 ... but lucky that he found such a wonderful and loving family that took him in . Rohan is quite a character 😳 ... I kinda missed him in this part. yes uday had a rough childhood but thankfully he has great parents and siblings now.. rohan is quite a character😆 This chapter , the high-light was the tease-session between the 3 girls. yes i like the girls session they have.. I could just visualise that scenario 😊. thats good.. Manyata didn't stand a chance with Jai & Kimmy 😉!!! nope she didnt...😆

Komal's story seems very intriguing ... waiting to read more about that. next few chapters will unravel alot..

Lastly ... U gave us SOOO little of Uday 😭😒!!! lolz. 😆 i had to give him a break.. his mind is on overtime with manyata...

Loved the update, thank you navi.. for the lovely comment.

please continue soon.. WILL TRY TO...

... thanks 4 the PM😊. .. you welcome😉

Originally posted by: -Zina-

Superb Updates shahi👏, i just finished reading the 4 chapter which i had missed.😛 THANK YOU ZAINUB.. YOUR COMMENTS ALWAYS BRING THE BIGGEST SMILE TO MY FACE..

really sorry for that. 😭 PLEASE DONT BE SORRY.. 😉

As i have always said that your writing is really intense, with lots of passion and depth😳 same was with this, AWW THANK YOU.. i just loved it to the core.😊 GLAD YOU DID

ManVeer meetings were really cute, no doubt uday is falling for HIS MS INNOCENCE PERSONIFIED😆. LOL.. HAAN SEEMS LIKE

i wonder what new look will manyata get from her bestie and sister. LOL I AM SURE THEY WILL MAKE THE BEST OF HER BEAUTY.. 😉

eagerly waiting for the next part.

please update soon shahi WILL TRY TO.. THANK AGAIN FOR THE LOVELY COMMENT. ITS ALWAYS SO SWEET, HUMBLING AND MOTIVATING ZAINUB...

&

Thanks for the PM.😃 YOU WELCOME

Love ya❤️ LUV YA 2

Hugs RIGHT BACK AT YA..

🤗

Originally posted by: Afsana01

Spectacular!!!! great piece of writing.

Originally posted by: PrincessZaneb

amazing di ,awesome THANKS ZANEB
loved it to the core GLAD YOU DID
outstanding AWW THANKS
hey hve a question is this the ff were there's i think a lil girl that manyata knws but it still hasn't been revealed.. i think my pm has cleared that confusion for you.. 😉 Gudiya is the little girl and its not just manyata but jai. kimmy infact everyone knows about her...
jiji please clear this confusion for me