DREAMS OR REALITY - Updated Chap 9 - Pg 69 - Page 37

Originally posted by: anjuroopak

NICE👏GOOD👏GREAT👏LOVELY👏

SUPERB👏AMAZING👏BEAUTIFUL👏
WONDERFUL 👏 FANTABULOSE 👏
WELL WRITTEN 👏 aww thank you for such lovely words anju...

update was excellent shahi.👏loved it a loads.😃 thank you.. glad you enjoyed

so uday cant stop thinking of manyata.he found he is not sure what attracts him to her

manyata as innocence personified with tranquil

aura.manyatha noticed udays chocolatebrown

eyes😉.aag tho dono taraf lagi hai.😆 for uday maybe, manyata has a long way to get there, she still doesnt understand him or his captivating eyes

even if dey

dont admit it.kimmy manyatha and jay teasing

and pulling legs each other was very cute.😊 😆 yes very sweet

i think now brijraj is in mental asylum.now he got

punishment for his bad deeds.very good.👏 😆 mental asylum... now thats an idea.. unfortunately he is not in the loony bin but he is paying for his sins

ie y komal is sad 😭who was dat small girl uday

talking about.ithink its gudiya.and something is you will know soon enough...

cooking between unnathi and vijay bhai.

uday is

possessive brother.poor vijay bhai😲🤣 ... uday is quite the possesor😆 especially with his sister

all in chappy was fabulose.loved every bit of it.👏 thank you anju.. loved the comment

cant wait.try to update as soon aspossible. will try to.. but not promising that it will be anytime soon

😊

Originally posted by: candy08

superb work

excellent story

keep it up

well done👍🏼

Originally posted by: Surish

Absolutely entertaining, elastic, introspective and awe inspiring! Loved it!

Originally posted by: huma12.

Fantastic shahiii

Originally posted by: dumas

loved the update so uday can't stop thinking about manyatha so cute loved that she has taking up his mind and she noticed his eyes loved the update thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: ricna

Hey sha' once again words fail me '..

aww thank you.. 😳

It was such a nice surprise to actually see a pm from you and that too with an update and a new story'. SUPA FANTABOULOUS. Omg this story of yours would make an excellent serial, simply outstanding. I love the little chats you have with us readers and the messages and quotes within them. You are quiet motivating and inspiring that I must say. thank you ricna glad you find me motivating.. and inspiring😉

From the beginning and Udays state of mind anxious and actually losing sleep of ms innocence personified' loved his reasoning with himself and all I can say is that manyata must really be something for him to be so strung out. The Man and little girl?... I think gudiya. Did something happen to them was that the same girl that was running in the rain when he got ramsingh to ask her whats wrong?? Has to be. Once again you have woven out a nice little join the plot here and there and after reading Komals state of mind it made sense to me' wonder how it will fall together even though I have the just of it. yes that was the same little girl running in the rain, lol i see you are joining the dots

Jai, kimmy and manyata share such a beautiful relationship. they do The way they exploit manyata's soft spot, and the talk of uday and damon ' aka Indian version of vampire diaries lol that was hilarious,😆 this was truly a lovely bonding session, I love how you depicted it and once again I could actually picture each characters reaction and expression. Very well written. thank you ...

Once again I see a definite linkup to the guy in unnathi's life as does her possessive brother, my suspicions were confirmed when I read about chadda's function, coz I remember vijaybhais reaction on seeing a very beautiful lady entering so those two definitely have a connection. AND THE HOTSHOT BROTHER THAT BOUGHT THE FASHION HOUSE FOR HIS SISTER' THAT'S MR SINGH OFCOURSE and like kimmy says her guardian angel gave her a second chance coz that night on the way home he heard the conversation between K and M'. I must say you link it up very well'. lol well ricna i must say you really read between the lines and take note of every small thing.. its nice to know you understand my story so well and thank you...

Poor komal felt sorry for her, I kind of get the impression of what she went to the hospital for' wonder whats wrong with him and what he could have asked her that she needs strength for'. lol now if i say that would be telling.. so lets just wait for next update😉 komal will have a decision to make

And your views on the on going rape cases I feel the same way, the perverts need to shot or better yet hanged to death. I was also sick to my stomach when I heard about the 6 year old girl who was not only raped but had her throat slit' the bloody dogs but like you said each will meet their maker and we can all try to do something positive so we can actually feel like we helped in someway'. yes its just getting to me day by day thing s are worsening and nothing seems to be getting done about it... i hate these molesters and rapists and wish they face the most severe punishments

THANK YOU SHA, FOR SUCH A LOVELY AND SUPA FANTABOULOUS UPDATE. NOT ONLY WAS IT BRILLIANT BUT FILLED WITH A LOT TO THINK ABOUT. thank you ricna for such a lovely comment, glad it left you something to think about and you are most welcome...

Originally posted by: angeldream14

loved it

Originally posted by: annesha18

awesome jiji did i say how much i love u hugsss thank for updating uday toh manyata ke pyaar mei pagaal hogaya lol the convo between jai manyata nd kimmi was so funny hahaha thx for pm update asap i hope u r feeling much better