DREAMS OR REALITY - Updated Chap 9 - Pg 69 - Page 35

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Posted: 12 years ago
Absolutely entertaining, elastic, introspective and awe inspiring! Loved it!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Hey sha… once again words fail me …..

It was such a nice surprise to actually see a pm from you and that too with an update and a new story…. SUPA FANTABOULOUS. Omg this story of yours would make an excellent serial, simply outstanding. I love the little chats you have with us readers and the messages and quotes within them. You are quiet motivating and inspiring that I must say.

From the beginning and Udays state of mind anxious and actually losing sleep of ms innocence personified… loved his reasoning with himself and all I can say is that manyata must really be something for him to be so strung out. The Man and little girl?... I think gudiya. Did something happen to them was that the same girl that was running in the rain when he got ramsingh to ask her whats wrong?? Has to be. Once again you have woven out a nice little join the plot here and there and after reading Komals state of mind it made sense to me… wonder how it will fall together even though I have the just of it.

Jai, kimmy and manyata share such a beautiful relationship. The way they exploit manyata's soft spot, and the talk of uday and damon … aka Indian version of vampire diaries lol that was hilarious, this was truly a lovely bonding session, I love how you depicted it and once again I could actually picture each characters reaction and expression. Very well written.

Once again I see a definite linkup to the guy in unnathi's life as does her possessive brother, my suspicions were confirmed when I read about chadda's function, coz I remember vijaybhais reaction on seeing a very beautiful lady entering so those two definitely have a connection. AND THE HOTSHOT BROTHER THAT BOUGHT THE FASHION HOUSE FOR HIS SISTER… THAT'S MR SINGH OFCOURSE and like kimmy says her guardian angel gave her a second chance coz that night on the way home he heard the conversation between K and M…. I must say you link it up very well….

Poor komal felt sorry for her, I kind of get the impression of what she went to the hospital for… wonder whats wrong with him and what he could have asked her that she needs strength for….

And your views on the on going rape cases I feel the same way, the perverts need to shot or better yet hanged to death. I was also sick to my stomach when I heard about the 6 year old girl who was not only raped but had her throat slit… the bloody dogs but like you said each will meet their maker and we can all try to do something positive so we can actually feel like we helped in someway….

THANK YOU SHA, FOR SUCH A LOVELY AND SUPA FANTABOULOUS UPDATE. NOT ONLY WAS IT BRILLIANT BUT FILLED WITH A LOT TO THINK ABOUT.

Edited by ricna - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved the update so uday can't stop thinking about manyatha so cute loved that she has taking up his mind and she noticed his eyes loved the update thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome jiji did i say how much i love u hugsss thank for updating uday toh manyata ke pyaar mei pagaal hogaya lol the convo between jai manyata nd kimmi was so funny hahaha thx for pm update asap i hope u r feeling much better
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing update di...
poor manyata...jai and kimmy(love them)
didn't get any manveer but it was a very nyshhh update ...
loved it
plz continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome Update Shahi
Loved it
As Always Beautifully Written

These words

IF YOU FAIL AND FEEL THE PAIN, THAT IS A GOOD SIGN
IT SIMPLY MEANS YOU ARE GIVEN MORE CHANCES TO TRY AGAIN...
AND IT ALSO MEANS... YOU ARE HUMAN!!
IT TAKES COURAGE TO GROW UP AND BECOME WHO YOU REALLY ARE
BE OPEN... AND THEN THE TRUTH FOLLOWS...

are indeed very wise
thanks for sharing them
Like I said before I love it when U begin updates
with quotes or such wise words
They get me deep in thought and keep my mind gainfully occupied



UV'S POV was very nice
his thoughts portrayed what he felt very well
Uday does have a deep bond with his adopted family ...
The Little Girl ... Wonder IF she is Gudiya


Kimmy and Jai make a deathly pair
Its amazing how well they co-ordinate together and Knw M
So well
Glad M agreed for the Photoshoot
I guess Uday bought Lves and if things go well... Maybe he will
see Manyata's modelling Photos 😃😉



Vijay - Unnati story seems interesting
Love the space U give to ur characters and take time
to think and beautifully convey in words about their life ...


Poor Komal
Glad she isnt hurt
She stil loves her husband ?
aftr all that he did ? Well I guess love is blind and can
make a person extremely forgiving

The Note at the End Was ...
The world is truly becoming a disgusting place
Men who dont knw how to respect a women/girl are truly monsters ...


This note


WE ALL SHOULD HAVE ONE ULTIMATE GOAL ON EARTH:

THAT IS TO LEAVE A LASTING LEGACY AS BETTER PEOPLE THAN

WHEN WE CAME AND TRY IN A SMALL SIMPLE WAYTO MAKE THE WORLD A BETTER PLACE FOR

THOSE COMING AFTER US' WHAT WILL BE YOUR MISSION REPORT WHEN YOU MEET YOUR MAKER??


was truly good
ALL of Us should have a purpose , a goal , in life
IT Doesnt matter how long we lived
what matters is how we lived ...


ALL in ALL a great update
Thanks for taking time to update

Take Care
Stay Safe
Edited by anushruthi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Shah

Awesome update, Loved it!!! <3
but Manveer nahi tha is update main
Lekin joh lika, bahut bahut bahut khoob lika

I've got to love Jai and Kimmy! I'm sure Kimmy will be the one to unite Manveer
hmmm... something is wrong with unnati?! Mujhe lagta hai ki unnzie aur vijay ke beech main kuch na kuch to zaroor hai

Superbbb, love your writing skills!
Ab bas ek aur kaam karna hai tujhe...

Yes you've guessed right UPDATE D.E.K.

Varna

hahaha just kidding babe!
Waiting for your update!

Love you,
Fati

Edited by fatima4a - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved it loas loads dear...
manveer eksath na hoke bhi there was lots of manveer...
aww this was awesumly written...
update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey shah thAnks for updating sis...😃 i was overjoyed after witnessing your p.m in my inbox...😆

welll a really fantabulous and marvelous update by u... well i m loving the condition of uday ri8 now ...i mean seriously u defined it very well🤣 and the bonding between kimmy, manyata and jay is very lovely...😃 feeling bad 4 komal...😭

but overall a great chap...and nicely written by u...keep it up. do continue so0o0on and thanks 4 the p.m...love u,
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Posted: 12 years ago
itss awesommee,fabbb!!!!!!! soo uday's eyes affedct manyata also!!!!!!!! hayeee!!!!!!!!! i agree wit ur note,the brutalty is icresng day by day,it should stop!!!!!!!!

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