DREAMS OR REALITY - Updated Chap 9 - Pg 69

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pia

@pia.raha

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#231

ye kya kahani to abhi suru hui hai,aur tum abhi uske khatam hone ke dates de rahi ho

abut ur updates they were jstt fabbb!!!!!!!! manyata and uday bth r feelingg smethng while shaking hands!!!!!! soo uday iss recgnsing her beautyy!!!!!! thaaankk uu kimmy!!!!! hmmm soo udaay is very much intrsted in manyata!!!!!!! soo soo waitng for mre!!!!!!! plzz plzz pm me if possible!!!!!!!!😊😊😊

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sloppy-hope

@sloppy-hope

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#232

wow! u totally roked it shahi...

that was a gr8 update...

i guess the battle is just going to start now!

really amazing... :D

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Fekta Holic

@WhatTheF

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#233

What?shahu ur ending ur both story...
No no no,...u cnt do this
what yaar abhi toh manveer ki love story start bhi nahi hue aur ye end kahase agaya...not fair bachcho ko rulao mat dekho muje roi roi aarahi hai...
Update was awsomeee...really enjoye it both the updates were beutifull...
Lolzz...kimmy is too much already lattu on uday kahin ye triangle toh nahi hone wala uday-manyata-kimmy...
OMG...this mrs. Malhotra is such a kamini haww...kimmy ki setting uday ke sath karne wane ki firak me hai...
Ufff...lagta hai uday ko kuch kuch horaha...lolzz...manyata maiya ki jai ho uday ka CS ka likha hai mamdam ne...🤣
manveer last scene was superb...
Update soon...

Edited by Ashish.Holic - 12 years ago

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.HookandHybrid.

@.HookandHybrid.

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#234

loved it
sorry for late commment

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sree devi

@lucia

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#235

awesome update... make sure the next update will be soon... waiting for it badly...

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LittleDhampir.

@LittleDhampir.

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#236

gfabulous update
loved the both updates
nd it really was a treat 4 us readers
what u aere ending both your ffs????

Edited by edward123 - 12 years ago

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manisha98

@manisha98

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#237

such a long update dea...!!

i'm in luv wid ur ff...

awsum dea...

thnx 4r d pm...do continue soon..!!😉

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andy.a

@andy.a

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#238

hi shah😛 loved the double update. it was simply awsome uday once again meets " the maid" and starts thinking of her mrs malhotra is such a snob.😡 really she is a aggogent bit*h uday is so full of himself😆 loved manyata to the core so kimmy has fallen head over heels on uday and manyta considers him to be a arrogent fellow
kimmy is really a good friend.she is really concerned about manyata😃

i really loved how she reacted to uday's talk during the interview

and that final scene at the office where she refuses to truly apologise to udaywas simply awsome😳

so now uday is truely intersted in manyata

cant wait to read more

do update soon

and thanks so much for the pm😃