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K shahistu first and fore most I am so so so so so sorry for this a little actually very super duper late reply I know I have being the biggest moron and have being telling u to update but have not being commenting and I keep telling u too keep updating I am not even sure whther I have liked all the updates but will like all once I comment on each chapter . And warning its a comment of 4 chapters don't fall asleep reading lol.
Prologue and characterizations
the prologue with u started was just so amazing it shows the reality the true face of life I personaly was dreaming of prince charming till the age of 15 then all the guys I dated were prince charmings and now I have settled on sameer so I am understand the prologue more better
Then comes the characters
Manyata ; she is more of the people I have never met only read about ( she minds of u ) the struggle and all
J; now I can connect to j because I am like that lol and I have damons picture too a smaller one though
Kim: she is amazing I love her character and she has a lot of potential and she will be quite a help in future and I love the pic u used for her
Rahul ; I am very happy u kept someone for manyata and he could also be helpful to kim in future too so its good and we can get jealousy scenes also
Uday; this guy is amazing in all as sual after all its udayveer lol ( I loved the pic u used) his character as sual is so so intruding and awesome rahul: he is a sweet boy will want to see how his character develps
Jagat: I personally love the guy because hour is played by rithwik lol he can also play a cupid between manveer and also the consoling shoulder
Unnati : unnati is spoiled I want too see how that goes along
Then chapter 1
I first of all loved and loved ur qoute ur the saying to bits it is amazing
This whole chapter is amazing, awesome , out of this world , fantastic and asusual mind blowing
Staring with the beggining where J and manyata have this little fight which is so funny and then manyata getting upset over a small thing shows that even though she pretends to be strong she is sesitive from inside
I loved komal she is playing a typical mom and J and her poster was so funny and I have done that too in 2010 lol
Then we see the past of manyata and we know why she acts the way she does I loved how u portrayed that
Then we see manyata and kim text and they so different and still get along so well kim with babes and muah and manyata more sensible lol
Oh then we see karan and komal aunty and jai and kim
Now I am so glad kim likes J
So J can also get riches lol
The dish washing scene was amazing shows how down to earth kim is and how mature and philosophical manyata is
( Shahistu manyata is reminding of u now )
And at the end of the chapter we see J again my dear lord she reminds so remind me myself now lol so I love her character her relationship with god is like mine lol haha
At the end of the chapter I would again say u are a beautifull writer , loved this chapter so super much, the whole thing is amazing
chapter 2
This chapter is awesome , super duper and amazing and just so so so so fantastic
Now in this chapter our udayveer is introduced and what a grand entry so awesome and so playboy
I loved kim's place it was so nicely decribed
Now for the first time manveer meet and the enetry is so so filmy and superb and I loved how everyone calls uday MR singh its awesome and manyata she has so much pride and I love her character
And how she suprised udayveer was amazing
They are just so perfect for each other
I must say shahistu the dialogues u write and the characters u think off are so amazing hats off to ur brain
At the end again I would u like to say u ROCK
I have already like the chapter now ( so sorry again for the delay)
Chapter 3
This chapter the beginning words for manyata's character now shahistu are u describing urself because now I can visualise u and not priyal lol
This chapter again was so so superb and awesome and so so magical I loved it
Thank u for decicating it for me and all the others love u hugsss
Loved the kim and manyata bonding and there conversations are just so fantastic
Uday admiring manyata and then screaming at himself was so nice and I loved that scene
I hate mrs malhotra she sucks but she even admires manyata
Aww poor mr malhotra
And now this interview and job thing is turning out to be so amazing
And udayveer is just a funny man here lol first I loved his choice of women wow
And then him drolling over manyata and screaming at himself everytime he realises he has being drolling is really something I find really funny
Chapter 4
This is my favourite chapter as first it is dedicated to me and I am so ashamed I have not commented on it so so sorry shahistu
I have just being a lazy moron please forgive me
Coming to the chapter it was amzing and super nice and perfectly written and awesome and aLl the great things
Now kim drooling over udayveer is so so obvoiusl. Anyone would even a lesbian lol hahaha
I this chapter what I loved the most was the monolgues and thoughts of manveer
And the charaterizations of all the characters kim and manyata and udayvver
Now now looks like someone is seriously falling in love
And manyata got the job party time I am so so so so happy
Please update super duper soon shahaistu
I love this story and I want an update
This is the logest comment I have written my hands are paining now
I hope u have not fallen alseep
Love u muah
Thanks for the pms
Sorry for the delay
I am finally done
Muah
Edited by vampire12345678 - 12 years ago
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