DREAMS OR REALITY - Updated Chap 9 - Pg 69 - Page 25

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Posted: 12 years ago
nahiii
you just can't end it plzzz
nahiii na plzz na i like it so much
plzz na do not end
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: anushruthi

FIRST of all Shah Didi the treat was awesome 😉

At first I thought You were updating only one chapter
I was pleasantly surprised when I scrolled down to find Chapter 4 😆

Thanks for the dedication YOU WELCOME ANU
so sweet of You
This quote was awesome


'She is the kind of girl who is always smiling and loves to laugh, if you are falling down, she will pick you up. She is the one that always says sorry, even if its not her fault, even if she is feeling like the scum of the earth, she will never let you know... This is the girl who is afraid of Love because she has already lost so much'


Loved it THANKS DEAR
It truly does sum up Manyata's character in ur FF beautifully YES IT DOES
Love M 's character here 😉
so different so intriguing YES I WANTED TO BE FAIRLY SIMPLY YET EQUALLY INTRIGUING


CHAPTER 3

this was awesome THANKS
starting was very nice GLAD YOU ENJOYED
Mr.Malhotra seems like a nice person SHE IS ISNT
On the contrary Mrs.Malhotra isnt so nice
a definite gold digger YEP DEFINITELY, ONLY THINKS OF HERSELF...
wonder how Mr.Malhotra married her 😆 WELL HER LOOKS SHE IS AFTER ALL A SCHEMER, AND MEN THINK MORE WITH THEIR... THAN THEIR BRAIN...😆

I also Like Kimmy's character very much SHE IS AWESOME
She cares SO much for M YES SHE DOES


Karan is a nice guy HE IS AND VERY SWEET ALSO
IT seems he has a crush on J 😉 THAT HE DOES
Kimmy thinks UV is hot LOL KIMMY WILL BE KIMMY
lets face it , who wouldnt / EXACTLY...😳
But ofcourse M vudnt b affected by his hotnessEmbarrassed NOPE... 😆
Love the way U portray UV and M's thoughts about Each other THANKS DEAR
UV ke thought me Kuch toh hai 😉 ALWAYS...
Seems like UV finally finds a girl intriguing and interesting 😃 SHE IS SO DIFFERENT I SUPPOSE THATS WHAT INTRIGUING... LIKE HE SAYS PLAIN JANE
M - Kimmy friendship is adorable 😉


All in all An Awesome chapter Shah THANKS ANU

Scroll down to read comment on Chapter 4 ⭐️

THANK YOU MY SWEETEST ANU.. FOR SUCH A LOVELY COMMENT. LIKE ALWAYS, YOU ALWAYS BRING A SMILE TO MY FACE... 🤗 MUUAAHHH.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: anushruthi

Another Amazing chapter Shah

loved it to bits THANKS ANU
Kimmy's thoughts mirrors de thoughts of many girls here 😃 LOL.. YES IT DOES

Loved these lines
U have indeed painted a pretty picture of UV's thoughts


Two very different girls.. one rich and living the life of luxury.. the other.. so simple'. What is it about her. Kim is beautiful no doubt, she has a sense of vibrancy and she sure has her way, she proved that with her mother earlier' and she loves this plain jane. Strange.. even plain jane adores her, it was so visible when she sucked up to Malhotra's wife not wanting kim to have a go with her mother. Admirable'Two total opposites


Amazing words that describe the awesome friendship of M and Kim THEY REALLY ARE VERY CLOSE
It is indeed true that opposites attract YES IT DOES
M's thought

just get this over with so we can leave and hopefully for me I never have to see him again.


not see him again ? 😆😉 SHE WISHES...
I dont think so 😆 LOL ME TOO
I hope UV-M continue to meet 😉 I AM SURE THEY WILL

This chapter explained beautifully de characteristics of
UV and M
both r able 2 knw othr people's characters
and They understood each other very well Indeed
It was Amazing

Yes both can assess and each other and other ver well, uv from his many years of harsh reality as a businessman, manyata from her reflections of her life and current conditions because of her dad. He left quite a scar on her outlook of life...
UV cancels a meeting to knw more about M ?😆😉 and so begins his inquisition of plain jane..

Looks like some is gradually falling for Someone 😉😳 he has a long way for that.. coz he doesnt believe in love... she starts off has an intrigue...

Loved both the chapters very much Shah didi THANK YOU ANU
U manage to surprise me with ur writing skills each and every tym AWWEmbarrassed UR SO SWEET, THANK YOU
You are an amazing writer
keep up de good work
THANKS SO MUCH ANU.. LOVED BOTH YOUR COMMENTS.

Wonder who this Gudiya is ... YES FINALLY SOMEONE HAS MENTIONED GUDIYA..LOL😆 SHE IS ACTUALLY A KEY CHARACTER IN THIS STORY AND PLAYS A MAJOR PART IN MANYATA AND THE KAPOOR FAMILY

Cont whn U r free WILL TRY 2
Will miss u AWW WILL MISS U 2
especially whn u r less active in de forum

Sorry IF i bored u wid long comment
Thanks again for de dedication

NO ANU.. YOU CAN NEVER BORE WITH SUCH A LOVELY COMMENT. I REALLY ENJOY READING ALL YOUR COMMENTS, THANKS FOR THE KIND WORDS. MUUAAHH HUGS AND LOTSA LOVE...
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Posted: 12 years ago
hi Shahi...
why are u ending it soon 😭😭??
both parts were good...u described their characters n feelings in very good way..Gudiya kaun hai??...do reveal abt her soon...malhotra family is nice except mrs.malhotra...
Aplogization scene was good..hoping that next scene will also be good...pls do post the next part asap...waiting for it !!!
thanx for PM
Edited by kaurz - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Jarin04

yayyy double dhamaka 🥳. khusi ke mare nach rahi hu mai


Aap khushi ke mare nach rahe hai... lol. 4 my double update all u have 2 say... lol.
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Posted: 12 years ago
'She is the kind of girl who is always smiling and
loves to laugh, if you are falling down, she will
pick you up. She is the one that always says
sorry, even if its not her fault, even if she is
feeling like the scum of the earth, she will never
let you know... This is the girl who is afraid of
Love because she has already lost so much' SIMPLY WOW
OMFG!!! another grey??? i mean benafector,old woman and d interview god he is just lyk Grey 😲
by now u may know dat i am a big grey fan😆
Old woman u got to be kidding me i hope yaha koi elena na ho lolz
i really liked it when uday ws checking her out
ye gudiya ka kya raaz jldi se btana ok
Mrs.malhotra admires manyata dats kinda unexpected lol
all n all these 2 chapters were awesome
grey ki yaad dilate hai lolz
Ms manyata kapoor an intresting topic fr uday now
thanxxx fr dis amazingly beautiful update


Edited by Sanarasheedroxx - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome updatd di
Loved manyata speaking up
I am confused who is gudiya really want to knw who she is
Edited by PrincessZaneb - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
I am really very much exicted
pls pm me
n sorry for latre comment
busy with exams
n update soon
ur update is not possible to be described in a word
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Posted: 12 years ago
sorry that i didnt comment i was lil busy...welll firstly thank you so0o0-0o0o0o very much shah 4 giving us double update...u cant imagine how much i was happy...😃 love you so0o0o0o much...

welll about chappies both were very great and mindblowing...seriously out of this world... 👏 👏👏...manyata is really great in this story and uday is very arrogant ...well i love him like that...😳
the last scene when he tolds the p.a to cancle the meeting was just hell awsum...i just loved it... well i m thinking and my 6th sense is saying that it will be a very great story...welll keep it up... let me in the list of your die hard fans...whole both chaps was nicely and perfectly written...keep it up , do continue so0o0o0on and thanks 4 the p.m...love u.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey , comment edited pg34. THANX😊

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