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anushruthi

@anushruthi

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Posted: 12 years ago

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@wendy25

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Posted: 12 years ago

#112

It was spectacular beginning !

Loved it.

Manyata is so disheartened soul . her character is completely different so unlike from her original characterization like jovial, bubbly, vivacious. She is still not over the betrayal her dad causes to her mom. I wish in future we would have face off b/w daughter and father. I always want to see manyata in such character. she is so focussed, independent, tyrant, strict, hot headed, responsible girl who at the same time has golden heart which she hides from every one. she has emotions withing her which she has killed because of the harsh reality she faced at such a tender age. Indeed she had grown up before time. I felt so sad for her. Hope she finds he happiness soon.

For J, all i can say is Awww!

Love her, she is so young but still so concerned about her sister and love M-J bantering over music.And in last para where is she prayed for manyata, my heart just went out for both girls. That was damn cute! Karan was so sweet and so is komal.

Now Kimmy, she is really cutey .Love Manyata-Kimmy BFFs bonding. They are such a support to each other. kimmy is so hillarious and funny and at the same time so concerned about her Best friend.

Great start, i must say!

CONTINUE SOON😊

ps: A little confusion, manyata with her family is living in USA or India as you have mentioned that she studies in UCLA?

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Nibir Chowdhury

@cnibir

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Posted: 12 years ago

#113

Wow di I did not expect an update so soon. But I m not complaining I n just tooo happy!!! It was a really good start to ur f2f... U set the scene right and the concept sounds good too. Thnx for the pm and plz continue whenever and pm me!!!

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Shahista

@Shahi01

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#114

Originally posted by: anushruthi
Le me 😉

(Anushruthi pov )

i come home after a tiring day from school and log into

my IF account

to my delight i find Chapter 1 of Dreams Or Reality updated!!

the feeling of happiness radiated through me as i read through an update

by one of my Favourite Author

How can Shahista write so Beautifully ?? how does she get naya naya ideas?...

how indeed

that moment i decide i need to research on Shahista's brain

who cares if i m not a science student ? playing around wid a brain musnt b tat hard

phew it isnt rocket science 😉

end of my Pov

I hope it explains how de update was😆

PS i wanted this comment to b a little hatke from usual one😳

cont soon

Aww that was so kind and swweet of you. Muuaaahh.

U brought a huge smile to my face. Here's a beeg hug 4 u Anu.

Muuaahh😉

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Pranoti aka Sanju

@Damon.Holic

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#115

Originally posted by: catty2000

Hona padta hein ... Nahi to skates mein fit nahi aaungi 🤣🤣🤣

wateva...

itna skating health keliye accha nai

skate karte karte chakkar aa gaye toh??

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Shahista

@Shahi01

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#116

😉

Originally posted by: wendy25
It was spectacular beginning !
Loved it.

Manyata is so disheartened soul . her character is completely different so unlike from her original characterization like jovial, bubbly, vivacious. She is still not over the betrayal her dad causes to her mom. I wish in future we would have face off b/w daughter and father. I always want to see manyata in such character. she is so focussed, independent, tyrant, strict, hot headed, responsible girl who at the same time has golden heart which she hides from every one. she has emotions withing her which she has killed because of the harsh reality she faced at such a tender age. Indeed she had grown up before time. I felt so sad for her. Hope she finds he happiness soon.

For J, all i can say is Awww!

Love her, she is so young but still so concerned about her sister and love M-J bantering over music.And in last para where is she prayed for manyata, my heart just went out for both girls. That was damn cute! Karan was so sweet and so is komal.

Now Kimmy, she is really cutey .Love Manyata-Kimmy BFFs bonding. They are such a support to each other. kimmy is so hillarious and funny and at the same time so concerned about her Best friend.

Great start, i must say!

CONTINUE SOON😊

ps: A little confusion, manyata with her family is living in USA or India as you have mentioned that she studies in UCLA?

Oh wow wendy... 😉

Thanks for such a beautiful, long comment. I love reading long comments

The story is set in India... lol i have created my own UCLA in INDIA. 😆

Yes i also wanted to create a different side to manyata. Her dad walking out on

them was the turning point in her life. She hides her emotions very well.

Funny enough manyaata does not believe in dreams and lives in reality but what

will happen when her reality becomes a dream??? 😉

All in all a beautiful comment very good analisis sweety. muuaahh

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Shahista

@Shahi01

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#117

Originally posted by: cnibir
Wow di I did not expect an update so soon. But I m not complaining I n just tooo happy!!! It was a really good start to ur f2f... U set the scene right and the concept sounds good too. Thnx for the pm and plz continue whenever and pm me!!!

Thanks nibir... Muaahh😉

Glad you liked😉