DREAMS OR REALITY - Updated Chap 9 - Pg 69 - Page 14

Originally posted by: shana0127

very nice loved it ...looking forward for next update 😊

Originally posted by: pia.raha

dat was gr88 start!!!!!!! aww jai is soo sweeet and crazzyy!!!!! ohh bechari manyata,she has lost all her happiness,colr of her life!! kimmyy iss soo fun lovingg and loved it wen she said "he is the one"😆 karan is such a sweet guy,he gt smethng for every1!!! manyata and jai's relationshp a prfct exmple of sister bonding!!!!!!! jai ki saari blessings ka bas ek hi answer hai UDAY!!!!!! waitng now for his dhamakedar entry!!!!!!!! willl bee waitng for ur nxt update😊😊

p.s- i frgt to say in my earlier comment,i am a craaazzyyy fan of ian i.e damon,love his attitude,looks!!!!!!!!!😉😉 so thank uu for incldng him also!!!!!!!!

nice update. next update may be uday-manyata meeting😉

Sha i just have one line 4 u'I'm in luv wid your ff and your writing as well' u rock girl

Again an fantastic update.
Really liked it.
Jay-Manyata : they really luv each other nd care 4 each other.
I luv the story.
A girl who forget to laugh because of responblity and the betray that his mother.
Then a boy comes in her to give her all hapiness.
Am i catching the correct storyline or it is different?

WOW WOW & WOW.What a start!! the first few lines were great and awesome shahi apu..
jai's character was good here? wow!!
the prayer part was nice.the love between two sisters was amazing just like silent love but pure.i think we will find uv in ur 2nd chap..
well done dear.thanks 4 ur pm.continue soon.
with love<3<3
shifat

JIJI it was full of fun 🤣 jay is crazy over damon lol ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
manyta and jay fight lyk me and my cousin... haha
kim and karan are awesome!!

love hannia

Awesome update dear
loved it
do continue soon

very well started...nxt chap i want my prince charming Uday...okk???