ManVeer SS:**The Unknown Truth** [Last Part p:59]

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Nibir Chowdhury

@cnibir

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Posted: 12 years ago

#281

very nice update!! thanks for the PM. as i said in my earlier comments, sometimes you need boring updates to continue the story cause you can't always have sizzling hot chapters. Anyways, good job on the vows - done really well and very romantic.

can't wait for next chappy. please pm me when you have finished thanks.

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andy.a

@andy.a

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Posted: 12 years ago

#282

Wow nice update
the marriagn is now over
piya uday convo was nice
the vnws were beautifully written
cntinue soon and thanks for pm

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Gargi

@sweet_gargi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#283

Zina this was not a boring update dear...It was a great update👏👏..i liked it...bt i have read this FF in bits and pieces as for some days i had net issues...so ill read ti complete and give u more good comments darling... until then it ws very nice...the vows in detail was great..u must have to work hard for that..i don't know any of the vows actually😆...

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manisha98

@manisha98

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Posted: 12 years ago

#284

superb update dea...!!

d vows wer so beautifully written...

it was d best thing in d update!!

thnx 4r d pm nd plz continue soon...!😃

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zainab

@--Zinay--

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#285

Originally posted by: humairaa1
Hey Zina 😊 hello😛
Thanks for the pm ur welcome😃
Coming back to the update it was very nice and I loved it ⭐️ thanks a lot😳
Can't wait for the next update

will update asap!😉

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zainab

@--Zinay--

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Posted: 12 years ago

#286

Originally posted by: Chamakchallo30
It was superb Zina

The Seven pheras were explained so beautifully
loved the chapter
Thanx for the PM😳
update the next one soon

thanks a lot vibha😳loved the cute comment😃
ur welcome 4 the PM.😉i will😊

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zainab

@--Zinay--

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#287

Originally posted by: roopali15
nice update lets see what happens further

thanks a lot😳

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zainab

@--Zinay--

Inactive

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Posted: 12 years ago

#288

Originally posted by: cnibir
very nice update!! thanks for the PM. as i said in my earlier comments, sometimes you need boring updates to continue the story cause you can't always have sizzling hot chapters. Anyways, good job on the vows - done really well and very romantic.

thanks dear,😳 ur absolutely rite, we have to update according to the need of the story, not always hot or hillarious chapters can work, sometimes it has to be a bit boring, though this one was extreme boring😆

can't wait for next chappy. please pm me when you have finished thanks.
i will PM u 4 sure😉

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zainab

@--Zinay--

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Posted: 12 years ago

#289

Originally posted by: andy.a
Wow nice update
thank you andy😛
the marriagn is now over
yup it is😉
piya uday convo was nice
the vnws were beautifully written
thanks😃
cntinue soon and thanks for pm
i will😳 ur welcome😊