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Posted: 12 years ago
so piya ka kanyadan manyata ke pariwar waalein karwayen!!!!! seven vows were beautifully explained!!!!! loved it,waitng for more๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: eyecatchers

nice update
the vows were really amazing
thanks bhumika๐Ÿ˜ƒ
is piya Princess Manyata or not?????????????
yeah she is๐Ÿ˜‰
thanks for the pm
ur welcome๐Ÿ˜ณ

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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey zina remember me๐Ÿ˜†...iam extremely sorry for reading and commenting so late...actually i m not at home so i don't get much time to come to IF... But now i got alot of time and first thing i done was to read your amazing Updates of your FF...๐Ÿ˜ŠChapter ten was beautifully written i love how manyata couldn't deny uday wish and gave herself to uday in every way... But what scared me was the last line... I hope you think about it again and doesn't make it their first and last night of pleasure... I know alot of things needs to be cleared You can take time to shape up the story but do unite them at the end... I had sad endings๐Ÿ˜•Chapter twelve was again superb...I think something did happened between ds and piya... They decided something and that's why manyata agreed to get married at her own home moreover ds called her manyata which clearly means now ds knows piya is manyata and together they have made a plan against uday...Chapter 13 was awesome seriously loved it to bits... Seriously i loved how you wrote each phera in detail... But iam still guessing why manyata is marrying him... She could have took her revenge by not marrying him... She knew he was head over heels in love with her... She could have hurt him easily by rejecting his love... You better answer my questions zinaa๐Ÿ˜‰Sweetie iam done with my comment... N yea this is surely the longest comment i have wrote uptil now... Have liked each chapter... Now you better update fast and yea this time i need longgg chapter...๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 12 years ago
oh wow zina... i loooved the wows...๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ
awesome update...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
i m looking forward to know how story unfolds further...๐Ÿ˜‰
u are an fab writer zina.๐Ÿ‘.. i m wondering how beautifully u write this story.๐Ÿ˜‰.. i loooved every bit of it:)๐Ÿ˜ณ
thnx 4 pm dear:)๐Ÿค—
*sorry 4 late reply*๐Ÿ˜ญ
bubye!!!๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: pia.raha

so piya ka kanyadan manyata ke pariwar waalein karwayen!!!!! seven vows were beautifully explained!!!!! loved it,waitng for more๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š


thanks a lot dear๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 12 years ago

thanks๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: PrincessZaneb

Great update !!!!
Awesome :)


thanks a lot๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: MsLuscious

Hey zina remember me๐Ÿ˜†...
of course๐Ÿ˜Š
iam extremely sorry for reading and commenting so late...actually i m not at home so i don't get much time to come to IF...

i kn
ow, its way to difficult to catch up๐Ÿ˜ญ
But now i got alot of time and first thing i done was to read your amazing Updates of your FF...๐Ÿ˜Š
thanks baby, for wasting your time
๐Ÿคฃ
Chapter ten was beautifully written i love how manyata couldn't deny uday wish and gave herself to uday in every way... But what scared me was the last line..
that line scared all my readers
๐Ÿคฃ
I hope you think about it again and doesn't make it their first and last night of pleasure...
hmmm, let me think๐Ÿค”
I know alot of things needs to be cleared
i guess i cleared all doubts๐Ÿ˜†
You can take time to shape up the story but do unite them at the end... I had sad endings๐Ÿ˜•
may be๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Chapter twelve was again superb...
thank you๐Ÿ˜ณ
I think something did happened between ds and piya...
hoskta hai๐Ÿ˜•
They decided something and that's why manyata agreed to get married at her own home moreover ds called her manyata which clearly means now ds knows piya is manyata and together they have made a plan against uday...
Great mind๐Ÿ˜‰
Chapter 13 was awesome seriously loved it to bits...
thanks again๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Seriously i loved how you wrote each phera in detail... But i am still guessing why manyata is marrying him...
she always wanted to๐Ÿ˜ณ
She could have took her revenge by not marrying him... She knew he was head over heels in love with her... She could have hurt him easily by rejecting his love...
yea that's rite, but it could be a better revenge if she marries him & then leaves him๐Ÿ˜‰
You better answer my questions zinaa๐Ÿ˜‰
yup, soon๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Sweetie iam done with my comment...
really๐Ÿ˜ฒ
N yea this is surely the longest comment i have wrote uptil now...
ohh ya i can see that๐Ÿ˜† but thanks a lot i loved this beautiful comment of yours and its the first longest comment i received on this SS๐Ÿ˜ณ
Have liked each chapter... Now you better update fast and yea this time i need longgg chapter..
๐Ÿ˜ƒ
dekhoon gi sochoon gi kal parsoon kuch kahoon gi



thanks for the lovely comment Sarah!
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Posted: 12 years ago

okay baby๐Ÿ˜‰
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Posted: 12 years ago

thanks ji๐Ÿ˜ณ

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