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Great update Andy 👏
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Looking forward to read more ...
... Continue soon
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A GREAT UPDATE
Udayveer wants Manyata to fall 4 him
But in the way himself falls 4 her...
Just loved it 2 the core
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GR8 update andy👏
love it plzz..update soon than for PM.
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It can be defined

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update next part soon.

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aha a wonderful chap 1!!!!
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This chapter is a continuation to the last chap that I wrote

It is all flashback. Do read and find about mr shark's tricks

Chapter 19.1

Rohan loved manyata very much. More than her he loved her riches and her position in the society. He was the person who introduced uday to manyata. Now he regretted that decision. Manyata was more attached to uday than he was to her now. All his dreams was going to be scattered due to that bas**d . he needed to do something about it . he needed to remove manyata from uday's influence.

Rohan took the file and went to mayata's cabin. Earlier that day, He was having conversation with manyata when that uday had entered, and manyata had excused them. He was totally shocked, she had put him out for some idiot she met 2 weeks back

Later when he had felt that uday would have left, he went to meet her, only to find an empty cabin😲

Her secretary informed him, that manyata had gone out with uday. He was fuming with anger, as he looked of manyata's cabin he saw that they had arrived, he went down to confront them

As he approaches them he sees them enjoying their private conversations. He wanted to insult uday😡

R: ( who had just come that time) uday don't you think your car is a bit out dated ,man you're a big business king and your riding this?

U: (a bit hurt, )I love this car so didn't change it, just because you're rich that doesn't mean I need to display it right?

M: right, so we have a deal na

U: yes

Rohan was burning with hatred😡 watching uday leave

He phoned an underworld don he knew and asked him to finish uday. Mr shark was not needed to finish this tiny fly

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Uday had successfully implanted the listening devices in manyata's office. Now his hobby was to listen to her conversations. The night he spent with manyata at her office was his favorite. Manyata was in a romantic mood relishing each of his touch and kisses that night.

Mr. Shark (uday) was listening to the conversation in manyata's office

He heard a period of silence; the only sound was the changing of the slides

Then came the sound of kissing

Button being opened

The fabric being lifted

Again repeated kissing

And manyata's moans and that fellows grunts

He was enjoying these sounds remembering that night. A smile appeared on his lips

Finally he stopped the conversation hearing the voice say sorry

Mr shark was very irritated 😡

If only rohan had not come to the office that time he could have advanced his relation with manyata. He was busy tasting her milky white skin, her pink rosy lips, her soft tender waist, her juicy inviting legs and other regions of her beautiful body. He wanted to kill rohan that instant itself for disturbing his love making scheme

The guy was giving him one one reasons to kill him

No, that fellow was digging his own grave

Yes, rohan had to die and I (uday) would have the privilege of finishing him of

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Uday was riding his car when he saw a lady selling roses he remembered manyata, so he parked the car and went to buy a bouquet of red roses. Ha was looking for the perfect one when his instinct said that he was in danger, he looked up he saw a speeding truck(that truck you saw in the ending part of final destination) he immediately jumped into the store by the side shattering its window. The truck crushed his car and hit the flower stall then it quickly left the place. A lot of people gathered around there as uday looked he saw his favorite car crushed into rubble and and the flower lady lying in a pool of blood ,if uday had not moved he too would have died

Mr shark (uday)anger knew no bounds, the person who wanted him dead was still alive, no he wouldn't accept defeat so fast. He knew who planned this murder- it was rohan. He would suffer for it

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rohan was boiling with anger

this uday he is behind my girl

my riches ,that is to be mine after I marry her

no he must die 😡

I want him dead 🤢

Manyata is and will be only mine

He took his phone and dialed a number

Ms: hallo

R: mr shark I have an assignment for you; name uday veer

Uday smiled as he heard rohan speak his name. so finally he found uday was worthy to be killed by mr shark. Rohan I want to see to which extent you would go in this battle, uday thought😆

R:The photo will be sent soon ,it must be done immediately

Ms: ok

Rohan was happy he was so elated

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Mr shark fished the photo that rohan had sent him

It was a lovely photo. A young dashing fellow was posing by the side of a lake

He knew who that person was- udayveer singh ,age 25 years

A self made man, a business tycoon

Owner of many industries, factories , hotels, malls ,cinema theaters and many others

His latest venture ' a joint collaboration with manyata kumara to start a school for illiterates in that city

Mother and father dead rather killed by underworld dons

Yes there was many more to that past

Yes he knew that past . he knew uday as he was uday itself. He was given a contract by rohan to kill himself. How was he supposed to finish that contract, commit suicide or what? He could not say no when the contract was given as rohan would approach other assasssins to finish uday. It would mean double work for uday. As if he did not have enough and more head ache . If he killed rohan, then this problem will be solved. So he accepted the deal to kill uday, him

Mr shark took another photo of his soon to be victim rohan and pinned it beside manyatas

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Manyata left her office to meet uday . as he was attending a conference she waited for him in his cabin. Uday comes in later and they enjoy their talks without realizing that the time was speeding away

Someone was waiting outside looking at the watch

Its 3 hrs since she had gone over to his room

What the hell are they doing

He fumed with disgust

She is such a wh**e, 🤢thought rohan, who was waiting for manyata to return from udays office

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Ajay had invited uday , rohan and manyata to enjoy a night at his restobar. All of them agreed

uday took the wheel, rohan sat on uday's side and manyata on the back

they listened to songs and joked. Anybody watching them at the road would feel that they were college students enjoying out and not prominent business tycoons

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the moment uday heard manyata was going for a party and there would be a lot of people, he decided to join the company. The people around would be a perfect cover. If he was lucky he would be able to dance with manyata, their bodies may touch during that dance. It would be delicious He looked at himself in the mirror. He looked perfect. He was VERY VERY HAPPY as he drove away, singing songs with rohan and manyata

Mr shark(uday) saw her seated on the table, she looked so mouthwatering, delicious , he decided to go to that table. It was the same time Ajay approached that table were manyata was seated , he looked at manyata and said would you join me for a dance

Mr shark felt this was the perfect opportunity for their first dance. He soon moved close towards her .she was so involved in dancing that she didn't notice his presence. Soon both were dancing wildly to the hit number ,his hands at times touching her waist and arms they did a twirl and manyata landed in his hands . manyata soon moves out of his hands as she did not want to repeat what happened in the office somedays ago

The dj changed the tune to a slow number and asked them to form pairs . manyata was paired with mr shark(uday)

Mr shark placed one hand on her slender waist and in the other hand took her hand.manyata placed one hand on his shoulder

They started dancing to the tunes of the song, each move he pulled her close to him, though manyata kept backing of. She was not comfortable dancing this close. But he didn't accept defeat so fast and pulled her close and danced. Soon he pulled her away from the crowd , all were busy dancing that they didn't notice their absence. Manyata continued to protest but then he pushed her to a dark corner of the dance floor. He started kissing her neck passionately .manyata was trying to push him away but failed (as she too was enjoying uday's love for her) he continued to stoke her back and kissed her cheeks. Manyata pushed him and went away (she started losing her self control as his touch was driving her crazy. If it continued any longer she could no longer control herself ). Uday thought" This was ENOUGH FOR NOW. A PROMO BEFORE THE ACTUAL SHOW"

Manyata later sat down , uday approached her, he had finished dancing with a sexy hot girl( who was none other than manyata, then whom did you think)

U: princess

M: what was that for?(referring to his passionate behavior during their dance)

U: what princess, the dance, I really enjoyed it. My partner was a mirch masala(looking into her eyes)

M: uday you are so shameless (she said this blushing red like a tomato)

U: I know princess , I know(smirking)

M: that ajay was disgusting

U: why?

M: nothing I hate his attitude

They then went for another dance and later midnight they returned home

Manyata had clearly enjoyed her time

Uday too enjoyed his time, so did mr shark😉

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Manyata was at udays home that night. She stayed over there as the nearest hotel was in Mumbai and it was a long journey ahead. As they mixed their drinks and settled down, uday asked

U: princess will you dance with me

M: yes, sure

Manyata and uday were a bit drunk so they start dancing first maintaining a distance between their bodies soon they came closer and closer

They were so close that their bodies were not two but one

Soon it ended in a very passionate kiss . they just didn't stop they continued to kiss each other in all available places soon both were breathless they continued to hug each other

M: I love you uday , I love you so much ,I want you to my life partner

U: (suddenly came to his senses) I am sorry princess but I cant

M:(teary) why uday?

U: pls princess I just cant

Manyata breaks the hug and says

M: I think I should go to sleep

Her tone showed its sorrow

Manyata soon went to her room , she just couldn't accept that truth, she cried and fell asleep

Uday too could not sleep. He went into her room and saw her sleeping she looked angelic

U: princess I too love you , but I cant accept it .this relationship cannot take place

How could he advance this relationship when he was to kill her soon

His face became hard

U: no I wont allow it to be. I have to be strong. I am sorry princess

My past is not as clean as my present😕

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Rohan was fuming. Manyata spent the night in udays house. God knows what happened between them

Its time he implement his plan or he should see his dreams fly away in the wind. He got ready as he wanted to visit devgarh

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scroll down for part 19.2

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Chapter 19 ... Wow!!! So many questions of mine were answered here. I had many queries about what happened that day Uday took Manyata out on a date. Then when they were leaving , Manyata almost got run over by a speeding car ... I was sure that you had made a mistake there ... but u didn't . All has been PERFECTLY explained in this part👏. I had commented after that update ... that "IF I DIDN"t LOVE UDAY SO MUCH - I'D SAY THAT HE WAS THE 1 THAT TRIED TO KILL MANYATA ... Saving her was just an act so that he would look like a HERO" (COMMENT ON PAGE 8) ... NOW all my doubts have been cleared. ( Although I wasn't completely wrong there😉) Briliant work Andy 👍🏼!!!
Chapter 19.1 ... Rohan was a pest😡. I didn't like him from the start. He deserved what he got 😈. I know I sound harsh ... BUT I'm ON UDAY'S SIDE HERE😆😉. Rohan hired some under-world goon to take out Uday ... and destroyed his PRIZED POSSESSION (his car) in the process, obviously Uday was going to take revenge for that!!! Mr Shark getting cosy with his victim was going to be his downfall. All that time he was spending getting close to her ... indirectly - he was developing feelings for her😳. Very interesting chapter ... very informative!!! Well done to u👏.
Edited by ...navina... - 12 years ago
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Chapter 19.2

Mr shark (uday) was annoyed with himself. He had just found out that he loved manyata😡

No it was not possible, no it cant happen

I only lust her , no said another part of his mind

God , I should not love. Love makes you weak .😕

how could the lion fall in love with a lamp

Stop it . it is just lust it must never be love

He had never failed till date😕

He would not allow any stupid feelings to stop him from completing his mission😡

He took the photo of his latest prey - rohan

He stared at the picture

He knew his prey very well too well and his passion for hot chicks

Uday was his best friend who knew him inside out, mr shark was just a mask

Isn't it ironic. Uday was very very close to him, no it was him and now he had to kill him

Mr shark laughed 😆 , maybe he should commit suicide

It was time to separate business from friend ship

The person must die today. Rohandeserved death for what he had done

he took a red pen and crossed the photo

Today he would disguise himself as a woman

A simple make up and hot dressing and he was ready

He stared himself on the mirror it was perfect

The lady staring him was a beauty her hands and legs were waxed .she wore a red gown cut in all proper places. She looked well build but not bulky the curves were perfect. Make up could do wonders

Before that he needed to see his second prey manyata. Uday removed his make up. That was just a foreplay before the actual killing

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Manveer goes out . soon they reach a restaurant

Manyata and uday sit and uday order for them

M:uday my life is in danger

U: what? (uday was genuinely surprised)

She then narrates to him on how she found about the killer and how someone in her family wanted her dead and how her office was bugged how rathode had found about the bugs and how he was nearing the end of his investigation . and soon mr sharks identity will be brought out

Uday was shocked hearing this. ( he thought, " I was so careful in all my steps and now a simple bodyguard had found his secrets. I need to be more careful. I should give her some false trails)

U: my god I cant believe this😲

M: even I did not believe it initially but the evidence says so

M: uday I am scared I feel that I am being followed by some unknown force who wants me dead

U: I don't know what to say, I must leave to London tomorrow as soon as I return we will sort this out (uday wanted to create a cover for him when he would be enjoying with manyata after kidnapping her, so he planned this London trip so that no one would ever suspect him)

M: uday that lady in that red dess is staring at me for a long time(CHILL GUYS THAT LADY IS NOT UDAY, SHE IS SOME LADY WHO WAS PRESENT THERE AT THE WRONG TIME)

U: maybe she is thinking what a handsome man like me is doing with a girl like you

M: what! (shocked)😲

U: chill I was just joking. You're just worried about this

Unknown to them someone was tapping their conversation and capturing their talk with a telescopic camera

Rajat captured all this scenes and kept them in a blue file. Mr shark would go behind the bars soon

Soon they left the place and uday left for the disco after leaving manyata home

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Mr shark entered the disco and soon spotted his prey . he had gone home for a quick makeup aand was ready soon

The person (rohan) was thinking of conversation with manyata when he saw a beauty approach him. She was not his usual type, she was very tall and wore a red dress her curves were however very perfect

Girl: can I sit here

rohan: sure

He continued to stare her and she noticed it

She placed her arm on his leg and looked seductively . he loved it

G: will you buy me a drink

r: sure

He thought of manyata and felt guilty but now it was time to enjoy

Soon they were talking very animatedly and his hands kept touching her and she did not mind

G: your place or mine

r: mine

They left the place and went to his house. No one was over there. Servants were given 2 days off

They soon became confortable he was trying to kiss her but she moved away shyly ( as if uday wanted to be kissed by this idiot)

He placed his hands on her hips and tried to lift her frock

She stopped him and said what about a drink

As she fixed their drinks she added a powder in his drink and gave it to him both enjoyed their drinks but suddenly he went numb he could not move his body he was paralyzed. She soon removed the knife she had conceled in her dress and approached him

His eyes revealed fear

Her voice changed

G: hallo I wanted to meet you for a long time iam mr shark

R: Mr shark oh god I just cant move . god save me, he thought

No this cant happen. How could uday be mr shark. How could he foolishly give uday the contract to kill himself. All this does not make any sense

Mr shark: lets start

and he cut away his fingers 🤢

rohan could not even cry out as he was paralyzed

Ms: with this hands you touched manyata so iam taking it away

Ms: with this tongue you talked to her so harshly

And he cut his tongue🤢

You were trying to be intimate with manyata for this iam removing your balls

And he removed it and stuffed it in his mouth🤢

U: this is the punishment you get for being intimate with my manyata

You should never ever messed with me. You destroyed my favorite car and try to kill me. To kill the king among all killers. You should never have given me the contract to kill me. All your life you made mistakes. That too grave mistakes. You deserve to die rohan

And he cut his head away🤢

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It was night .uday after the killing rohan was driving enjoying the late night breeze, but something was not correct . his intuition said so . there was a driver who was following him for a long time trying to be invisible . any other person would never have noticed it , but his intuition told this was some big problem, it need his immediate attention. Manyaata had told him about her bodyguard trying to unmask mr shark. The poor fellow too should die

All that he needed was for rajat to approach him.

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Manyata went to see rohan's body with uday. She just could not digest the scene in front of her. Rohan's body mutilated by that terrible assassin, uday viewed his handiwork with pride. He was irritated with manyata for shedding tears for this bast**d. she should be happy that this nuisance is finally out of her life. Uday got worried. He needed to know if rajat had unmasked him or not. No , till now manyata had not known the truth as she was behaving normally with him. But he needed to be careful and alert

He took her to the beach to improve her mood. But her talks about ajay made him sure that she had began to doubt him. He knew human psychology well and manyata was an open book. She wanted to give him a false sense of security in her talks. Any other person would have believed her but not him. He became more and more alert. He needed to see rajat first.

Manyata told him that she was going home. but uday did not believe it. he secretly followed manyata and found out that she had gone to meet rajat. After that meeting he followed rajat and finished that chapter. All that was left was manyata. He knew where she would be at this time. He drove his car in high speed towards his home

Manyata by this time discovered mr shark's identity. She wanted to confront him. So she went to his home . the servant took her to his study. She then discovered the secret passage and place where uday hid his documents

She saw a cd named manyata and she played it. It was the conversations in her office, all that she had said when the bug was in there

"hallo, darling, so how do you like my work place"

Manyata turned back and saw uday at the entrance , he slowly moved forward

Manyatas blood boiled with anger

Ms: so princess manyata has come knowingly into the lions den.eh

M: you creep, I doubted a long time that it was you

Ms: oh, that's wonderful

He tries to stroke her cheeks but she hits his hand of

M: don't you dare to touch me mr udayveer singh. I loathe you

Ms: that nice darling

He then hit her head . she became unconscious. He then waited for the police force to start searching for manyata. Then he disguised both of them and took manyata right under the watchful eyes of the police department. It gave him great thrill doing that. He took manyata to his guest house and hid her in the basement which he had modified to look like a room, he chained her legs to prevent her from escaping

After removing his makeup he went to meet jaggat to discuss about manyata's kidnapping. Jaggat was a good fellow and a good cop. He did notice the bit of makeup that was on his face. Uday lied that it was grease. Jaggat noticed even tiny details. So he need to be alert at all times

Finally when he was home, manyata starta to taunt him with his family problems.

He was confused with his feelings for mnyta. A part of his mind loved her unconditionally

Present

uday threw the glass in his hand. Everything had to end now. This very instant. He went down to meet manyata

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pheww it was such a long update

so how was it?

was it ok?😃

So how do you feel now that all puzzles have fallen in place

The promo is same as the one I gave in pg 47😉

Do hit the like button for both updates and please do comment please😭

Will be waiting for your comments

It motivates me a lot

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Fabulous update (again) Andy👏.
Mr Shark fell in love with his victim ... so right is the saying : LOVE HAPPENS AT THE WORST POSSIBLE TIME😳 😆!!! That messed up his plans of killing her.
Rohan's killing was gruesome and AWESOME (at the same time). I loved that part , it was ingenius! However there's 1 thing I HAVE TO SAY ... as dashing as Uday looks ... I think he would make a very ugly woman ( however much make-up he can use😆).
So , Uday knew that Manyata was suspecting him of being the killer ... and he still went along playing mind-games with her (& us) 😕 ... as I said before , his feelings got in the way & became his downfall😒!!!
These last three updates were great Andy. It was cleared all my doubts. Very well thought out by you ... and really well executed👏.
Continue soon,
can't wait to read the next part ...
... I'm sure that u will now reveal how Manyata got back to her home!!!
Edited by ...navina... - 12 years ago
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Chap 2

You seem to know a lot about BSNL 😃

Good work

I really loved Mnayata's POV when she sees uday 😊

And he talks only about businesss Bechari

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