'THE SECOND SHADOW' chap 30 pg 146 new - Page 54

Originally posted by: panchaali

Chap 2

You seem to know a lot about BSNL 😃 a lot of guess work and some common knowledge

Good work
thanks so much dear
I really loved Mnayata's POV when she sees uday 😊now she is romantic

And he talks only about businesss Bechari no he is also a romantic guy

Originally posted by: ...navina...

res😊 (again😆 ... this is for 19.2)

Thanks for updating for me Andy .anything for my dear loving friend I read both and it has answered a lot of questions I had. I will give u a more detailed comment tomorrow.will wait for it

As usual - I loved the update!!!thanks so much navi

It was superb!!!

Thanks for the pain-killer 😆😉!!! so finally you agree that it was a pain killer😆

Originally posted by: chitra_rao

OMG andy so ant chapters in one go 👏👏, I must say what a commendable job you have done in joining all the loose ends and answering almost all of out questions and confusion in these 3 chapters.thanks so much chitra

What I really like about u and navina is u both know how to close all the loop holes. All there three chapters were like you solving the complicated jigsaw puzzle beautifully put every piece in its rigt place. Must say Uday is one smart guy. Or I must say u are one smart girl. 😳👍🏼it was tough writing all that in the starting but this chapter i loved solving the story. i just completed all parts i left unanswered in the many past updates

Though I know Uday's back story, and he killing the ones who destroyed his family, but that is no justification for going and killing people around 😕. He is still a cold blooded murder. And there can not be any justification for his killing those people.he is a assassin so he is just doing his job I know they were all not good people either, but Uday has already reached a place of no return . I doubt if after knowing all this I would ever see him as a hero.dont worry he is always this story's hero There can be no justification as to why he killed Rajat. He was innocent, just because he was about to expose Uday an innocent soul lost his life .he had no other option in that case. his hard earned reputation was at stakeAnd who knows how many other inocent lives he has killed so far 😕.only one, others wetre all guilty And Uday , the way he kills and the way he has a satisfaction when he takes a life makes me feel he is already turning into a half psychopath.he is but he will be given some serious councelling by which he will turn into a new leaf. a fresh loving uday, free from his dark past

I being a die hard Udayveer fan, I'm still somewhere pitching for him and manyata. And not sure how are you going to mold the story from here on and how are u going to convince the readers that manveer will happen after all thismanveer will happen for sure (if u r planning for manveer of cource iam). eagerly waiting for ur next chapter.will have to wait for sometime for it😭

PS. I dint do analysis by parts because it was quite a long chapter, so this comment is more of what I feel of Uday's character 😊its ok this comment itself speaks a lot. really happy to see your comment after a long time. i was worried whether i lost a good reader like you

Originally posted by: panchaali

Chapter 3

Breathtaking!!!!!

From the Very beginning I thought Uday would be that Mr. Shark-the second shadow...

Now I see Shark is completely different person!!!

Originally posted by: andy.a

thanks chitra 😃

very delighted to see this comment

uday will become manyata's second shadow in all respect in coming chaps

Originally posted by: panchaali

I just wanna kill that S**T head Rohan...

spoiling Manveer moment is a high rated crime

and above all he is a dirty criminal...

let Mr.shark kill him

Originally posted by: chitra_rao

andy 🤗, as I said I'm a die hard Uv pankha, 😆 I'm so happy to read your reply, I was skeptical as to how will you be taking this drk and blood ozing story ahead, but with your comment and confidence, I sure its going to be one amazing journey😳😳. Cant wait to read more. Take your time, and give us sucj long update 😆. and I like ur last line of Uday being M's second shadow 😉😳