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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: catty2000

Fantastic update 👍🏼

I cracked my first case 🤣 I mean I knew MR. SHARK was UDAY 🤣

But you know what, even after knowing the truth i am not at all angry on Uday 🤣

Coming to the chapter, It was superb 👏

Great job Andy 👏

All the scenes were written so well !

And yeah finally my headaches are over 🤣

And what do you mean by :

Will you read this story again after knowing the truth?

Of course we are going to read it 😡

Continue soon ...

... Do PM me

thanks so much catty
happy to know that you are not angry with uday
now dont worry only one of your head aches are over the others are on the way
will pm you for sure
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: cnibir

Yay!!! I guessed right!!! I had a strong feeling that uday was Mr shark!! Finally the truth is out!!! Anyway coming to the chapter it was really good!! And Wht do u mean if we will read further or not? Of course!!! I wanna find out how manyata changes uday for the better... C their relationship progressing!!! Thnx for the pm and so excited about whts gonna come next. Gd luck for next chapter and plz pm me!!

thanks so much dear
yes manyata will cahange uday for good very soon😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Ashish.Holic

Soo...finally MR.shark is uday...
Superb update...eagrly waiting for next part...plzz..update soon thanx for PM.

thanks so much dear😊
will update the next part soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: iluvmanveer

res..

unres...
woowww!!!!!
andy that was a brilliant update...
u really are e gr8 writer...
continue soon cant wait!!
thankgod manyata felles sumthing for uday!!!

thanks so much dear
manyata does feel something for uday😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: eyecatchers

aha!!!!!!!

my guess was rite😉

I am the guiness😆

Now stopping my jokes😊

ur updates are fantastic 👏

pls up⭐️date soon

and pls don't forget to pm me😛

thanks so much dear
will update very soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: arna753

awesum chapter.


so uday is Mr Shark as i guessed..

waiting to read the upcoming chapter.

thanks so much dear😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: safia25

I dont know but still i m not fully convinced that mr. Shark is uday. Uday is hiding something really big about his past.. ..i guess he is saving his best friend ajay.. Only i guess so. As if uday is mr. Shark then he would go in the jail for ever for his sins, and manveer would not have a happy ending, but how its possible. They would have. And if not then nobody from us would be happy, so i m still thinking that uday is saving may be someone.. And u also guess that manyata had took the name of mr. Shark and that is ajay.. Might be ..so coming to the chappy, that was superb, fabulous, awesome, mindblowing and yeah well written.. Update soon andy..

dont doubt take my word uday is mr shark
manveer will have a happy ending if not now but later for sure
i love happy endings
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Posted: 12 years ago
thanks so much😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Shahista01

RES😉

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So Sorry for Late reply.thats no problem dear😃
This suspence of yours has left my mind wandering. I know you confirmed uday is the Mr Shark. Lekin there are a few things i dont get... like this:

U: sure you don't want to visit the hospital

M: no uday I am ok

She held udays hand as they crossed the road and uday started the car

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Mr shark was angry, very very angry as he drove his car away who is that guy trying to spoil his plans .he was trying hard to finish this assignment soon and here comes a guy trying to spoil his whole plan he will pay for his mistake he had noted the car's number he will pay dearly

How could Mr Shark aka Uday be at 2 places at the same time?😕 So who was driving the car?😕 when uday saved manyata and why would he take down his own number plate... How could he have been at manyata's side and trying to get rid off her at the same time?? Like you said it was Mr Shark that drove away angrily... at the guy that is ruining his assignment???😕😕😕
Also

''A lot of people gathered around there as uday looked he saw his favorite car crushed into rubble and and the flower lady lying in a pool of blood ,if uday had not moved he too would have died Mr shark anger knew no bounds, the person was still alive, no he woudnt accept defeat so fast''

How is it possible for uday to be standing at the roadside while mr shark drives away angry that he missed his target... when he is the TARGET😕😕
AND TO ADD THE CONFUSION
Uday aka Mr Shark was in Manyata's office when they were both getting all hot and bothered yet

Sark was listening to the conversation in manyata's office He heard a period of silence, the only sound was the changing of the slides Then came the sound of kissing Button being opened The fabric being lifted Again repeated kissing And manyatas moans and that fellows grunts Finally he stopped the conversation hearing the voice say sorry Mr shark was very irritated ... as if he had no knowledge of the incident he was listening to moans and kissing knowing full well it was him...😕 NO man thats just weird

and here it was made to seem like ajay is mr shark as it could not have been uday... he was busy with another partner right...his mirch masala...

Mnyata was paired with mr shark

Mr shark placed one hand on her slender waist and in the other hand took her hand.manyata placed one hand on his shoulder They started dancing to the tunes of the song, each move he pulled her close to him, though manyata kept backing of. She was not comfortable dancing this close. But he didn't accept defeat so fast and pulled her close and danced. Soon he pulled her away from the crowd , all were busy dancing that they didn't notice their absence. Manyata continued to protest but then he pushed her to a dark corner of the dance floor. He started kissing her neck passionately .manyata was trying to push him away but failed he continued to stoke her back and kissed her cheeks. Manyata pushed him and went away.

U: what princess, the dance, I really enjoyed it. My partner was a mirch masala

M: uday you so shameless

U: I know princess , I know

M: that ajay was disgusting

U: why?

M: nothing I hate his attitude

Another Confusion

she wore a read gown cut in all proper places. she looked well build but not bulky the curves were perfect. Make up could do wonders Before that he needed to see his second prey manyata

M: uday that lady in that red dess is staring at me for a long time

U: maybe she is thinking what a handsome man like me is doing with a girl like you

M: what! (shocked)

U: chill I was just joking your just worried about this Unknown to them someone was tapping their conversation and capturing their talk with a telescopic camera Soon they left the place and uday left for the disco after leaving manyata home

Now if uday is Mr Shark and he supposed dressed up as a women.. how is he sitting with manyata at the same time??? And unknown to both of them as in UDAY and Manyata??
good work detective shah
all answers and confusions will be cleared in the next chapter
i wrote my updates in such a way no one will find uday easily
dont worry will reveal all soon
There is so much in this stroy of yours andy.. 😆 That brings out the detective in me. Please clear out all my confusions. Thanks for the lovely update. muuaahh continue soon😉
LOL SORRY TO EAT YOUR BRAINS... LEKIN ITS ONLY FAIR YOU HAVE RATTLED MINE...🤣

thanks shah for this huge comment
this comment did not eat my brains for sure
i loved it
all confusions will be cleared soon😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: milhan

awsum andy! well i told u that it was him...and ofcourse m gonna read more coz the story has turned out amazingly!

thanks so much dear

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