'THE SECOND SHADOW' chap 30 pg 146 new

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Nimrit

@arna753

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Posted: 12 years ago

#481

awesum chapter.

so uday is Mr Shark as i guessed..

waiting to read the upcoming chapter.

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Safia Rafiq

@safia25

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Posted: 12 years ago

#482

I dont know but still i m not fully convinced that mr. Shark is uday. Uday is hiding something really big about his past.. ..i guess he is saving his best friend ajay.. Only i guess so. As if uday is mr. Shark then he would go in the jail for ever for his sins, and manveer would not have a happy ending, but how its possible. They would have. And if not then nobody from us would be happy, so i m still thinking that uday is saving may be someone.. And u also guess that manyata had took the name of mr. Shark and that is ajay.. Might be ..so coming to the chappy, that was superb, fabulous, awesome, mindblowing and yeah well written.. Update soon andy..

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Shahista

@Shahi01

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Posted: 12 years ago

#483

RES😉

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So Sorry for Late reply.

This suspence of yours has left my mind wandering. I know you confirmed uday is the Mr Shark. Lekin there are a few things i dont get... like this:

U: sure you don't want to visit the hospital

M: no uday I am ok

She held udays hand as they crossed the road and uday started the car

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Mr shark was angry, very very angry as he drove his car away who is that guy trying to spoil his plans .he was trying hard to finish this assignment soon and here comes a guy trying to spoil his whole plan he will pay for his mistake he had noted the car's number he will pay dearly

How could Mr Shark aka Uday be at 2 places at the same time?😕 So who was driving the car?😕 when uday saved manyata and why would he take down his own number plate... How could he have been at manyata's side and trying to get rid off her at the same time?? Like you said it was Mr Shark that drove away angrily... at the guy that is ruining his assignment???😕😕😕

Also

''A lot of people gathered around there as uday looked he saw his favorite car crushed into rubble and and the flower lady lying in a pool of blood ,if uday had not moved he too would have died Mr shark anger knew no bounds, the person was still alive, no he woudnt accept defeat so fast''

How is it possible for uday to be standing at the roadside while mr shark drives away angry that he missed his target... when he is the TARGET😕😕

AND TO ADD THE CONFUSION

Uday aka Mr Shark was in Manyata's office when they were both getting all hot and bothered yet

Sark was listening to the conversation in manyata's office He heard a period of silence, the only sound was the changing of the slides Then came the sound of kissing Button being opened The fabric being lifted Again repeated kissing And manyatas moans and that fellows grunts Finally he stopped the conversation hearing the voice say sorry Mr shark was very irritated ... as if he had no knowledge of the incident he was listening to moans and kissing knowing full well it was him...😕 NO man thats just weird

and here it was made to seem like ajay is mr shark as it could not have been uday... he was busy with another partner right...his mirch masala...

Mnyata was paired with mr shark

Mr shark placed one hand on her slender waist and in the other hand took her hand.manyata placed one hand on his shoulder They started dancing to the tunes of the song, each move he pulled her close to him, though manyata kept backing of. She was not comfortable dancing this close. But he didn't accept defeat so fast and pulled her close and danced. Soon he pulled her away from the crowd , all were busy dancing that they didn't notice their absence. Manyata continued to protest but then he pushed her to a dark corner of the dance floor. He started kissing her neck passionately .manyata was trying to push him away but failed he continued to stoke her back and kissed her cheeks. Manyata pushed him and went away.

U: what princess, the dance, I really enjoyed it. My partner was a mirch masala

M: uday you so shameless

U: I know princess , I know

M: that ajay was disgusting

U: why?

M: nothing I hate his attitude

Another Confusion

she wore a read gown cut in all proper places. she looked well build but not bulky the curves were perfect. Make up could do wonders Before that he needed to see his second prey manyata

M: uday that lady in that red dess is staring at me for a long time

U: maybe she is thinking what a handsome man like me is doing with a girl like you

M: what! (shocked)

U: chill I was just joking your just worried about this Unknown to them someone was tapping their conversation and capturing their talk with a telescopic camera Soon they left the place and uday left for the disco after leaving manyata home

Now if uday is Mr Shark and he supposed dressed up as a women.. how is he sitting with manyata at the same time??? And unknown to both of them as in UDAY and Manyata??

There is so much in this stroy of yours andy.. 😆 That brings out the detective in me. Please clear out all my confusions. Thanks for the lovely update. muuaahh continue soon😉

LOL SORRY TO EAT YOUR BRAINS... LEKIN ITS ONLY FAIR YOU HAVE RATTLED MINE...🤣

Edited by Shahista01 - 12 years ago

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sloppy-hope

@sloppy-hope

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Posted: 12 years ago

#484

awsum andy! well i told u that it was him...and ofcourse m gonna read more coz the story has turned out amazingly!

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anushruthi

@anushruthi

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#485

Awesome Update

so Uday is Mr.Shark

thought so ...

But i think there is a reason behind UV's killings

I think UV killed only the people that deserved to die

cont soon

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InkAndFable

@InkAndFable

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#486

Now,we know Uday is Mr.Shark.
Sometime our past is so brutual,that it can make us that we don't want,to escape from the guilt that u did not do sumthing makes u to do things that we don't want.
Getting out of track.
The chapter is fantastic.
Loved it.
Plez update sun

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Gargi

@sweet_gargi

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#487

Awesome chapter Andy👏...loved it and I already knew that its Uday when u had written about his past. I didn't like the way M talked to UV..

Plz update soon darling😊

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Priya

@Priya46

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#488

knew it I knew it that uday was mr shark but still I was hoping it wasn't him anyway am quite sure u'll find someway to get those two together😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉