'THE SECOND SHADOW' chap 30 pg 146 new - Page 42

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Posted: 12 years ago
ok the more i read about mr shark's past and his behaviour always uday's face flashes before my eyes!!!! i am definitely getting a strong vibe that uday is mr shark...

may b may b not but i will just have to wait and find out..

i like wht u did with ajay and uday's sisters' names : unnati and unnimaya ahahahaha trying to cofuse ur readers...

very well written but i wanted it to be longer. never mind u r the writer so its ur choice. thnx so much for the PM. plz PM me again when u r done with next chappy. dying to know more about mr shark!!!

continue soon and good luck!!!!!1
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow Great Update
very nice
it was interesting knowing about Mr.Shark's past
wonder who is Mr.Shark
Uday or Ajay ??
I think its Ajay bcuz whn manveer went out
Mr.Shark was spying on them
how cud Uday spy on himself ?...
I guess Manyata will mistake Uday to be Mr.Shark
do cont soon
thanks for de PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
Sorry, bohot dino baad comment korneki liye. But I didn't get anything. And the precap was scary. Can you please tell me what relationship he has with uday?
andy.a thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Archi02

Sorry, bohot dino baad comment korneki liye. But I didn't get anything. And the precap was scary. Can you please tell me what relationship he has with uday?


did u read the parts till now? Now mr shark has every thing to do with uday
uday,suraj and ajay were friends
out of this one is mr shark
andy.a thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: eyecatchers

pls unfold the mystry soon
i'm dieing out of curiosity
ur update always blows my mind away
nice update
who is this mr. shark?????????



thanks dear
every thing will be revealed soon including who is mr shark
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: cnibir

ok the more i read about mr shark's past and his behaviour always uday's face flashes before my eyes!!!! i am definitely getting a strong vibe that uday is mr shark...


may b may b not but i will just have to wait and find out..

i like wht u did with ajay and uday's sisters' names : unnati and unnimaya ahahahaha trying to cofuse ur readers...

very well written but i wanted it to be longer. never mind u r the writer so its ur choice. thnx so much for the PM. plz PM me again when u r done with next chappy. dying to know more about mr shark!!!

continue soon and good luck!!!!!1


thanks dear
this was not a long update not fair ok
yes i did want to confuse you all with the names he he he
andy.a thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: anushruthi

Wow Great Update

very nice
it was interesting knowing about Mr.Shark's past
wonder who is Mr.Shark
Uday or Ajay ??
I think its Ajay bcuz whn manveer went out
Mr.Shark was spying on them
how cud Uday spy on himself ?...
I guess Manyata will mistake Uday to be Mr.Shark
do cont soon
thanks for de PM


thanks anu
nice guess ok
will have to wait to see if they r correct
mr shark will be revealed soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
OK now seriously one whole chappy on the villian and his tragedy, I have a very strong hunch that Mr shark is Uday 😃.

Res for analysis ...
andy.a thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: chitra_rao

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#cc00ff">OK now seriously onewholechappy on the villian and his tragedy, I have a very strong hunch that Mr shark is Uday😃.</font>


<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#cc00ff">Res for analysis ...</font>


hi chitra
mr shark is indeed a very important part of this story
his past is not yet over there is another part to it
then only we can under stand who mr shark is and was once
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Posted: 12 years ago

Hey ANDY 😊 . Excellent update👏👏👏.

So Mr Shark is human after all. He has feelings . And his feelings are coming in the way of carrying out his job. He's finding it difficult to kill Manyata because he is in love with her😳. So , when he couldn't complete his task of killing her ... that's when he staged Manyata's accident.
Oh this is giving me a head ache"😈 ... I know exactly how he feels - I've been saying that after every chapter😡😆!!!

Now , the flashback from 8 years ago. This was the best part. We get an insight into the MAN behind the mask. We discover that Mr Shark was a loving family person. He adored his little sister ... he was loved by his parents ... he was a cricket-fanatic ( who sacrificed his sleep for his favourite sport) ... he was a part of a trio of great friends ... he was a heart-throb ( courting 3 of the hottest girls in his class). Circumstances forced him to become a tyrant.

Mr Shark would be fuming after today's events ... Ajay was fuming due to todays developments ... Thus MS is Ajay!!!
Beside circumstance turning him evil ... I think he had a dark side even before all that. When the results were released ... he made mention about this ... (the 2 mark difference) A: but 2 marks less than your previous exams, then he gives his father a statement like this : Ms: baba, you know I don't like comparing.

U: and kfc too ... yet ANOTHER Reason I LOVE UDAY😳!

Everything did happen and their family was wiped off ... well , now we know why he turned to a life of crime.
I don't wanna say too much about the promo ... but it's obvious Suraj was acquiring his money from the FLESH TRADE😡. I bet Suraj became Mr Shark's first victim!!!
Finally wrote this update, but the chapter is not complete
not complete😲
- but the heading says : CH 17 - PG 55 UPDATED FULLY😕.

How was it? Good or bad?😃 or🤢 It was GREAT!!!!

I know there are no manveer scenes in this update😕 ... no problem😃.

But mr shark is equally an important character in this story

... I like Mr Shark😉😳.

I not asking the number of likes I got for the last update, but only half of it Which reminds me ... I couldn't hit the LIKE button after the last update - but I did it now😉.

Will end mr sharks past in the next update ... yipeee 🥳 - can't wait!

Loved the chapter Andy ... as always - it was superb👍🏼.
Edited by ...navina... - 12 years ago

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