'THE SECOND SHADOW' chap 30 pg 146 new - Page 41

Originally posted by: Sunshinegirll

hey nice chapter😊 love d suspense u always hav in ur story..
continue soon😊

Originally posted by: milhan

that is freaking awsum!

uday udau uday i knew it was him!

thanx for pm and update soon

Originally posted by: san.gar

Andy.
Now tell the truth yar.yes
Now it is limit of suspense.no it is not. there is more to come
Babes u must try hands on suspensive stories.i am not so sure about it
Btw
chapter is short but awesome or can say short nd sweet. it was not so short
Plez update sun asap

Originally posted by: Priya46

please please don't let it be uday am begging u😔

Originally posted by: Softy17

comenting after long time
busy with work
awesome update👏
never thought komal wants manyata dead😲
oh god!!!!when this suspense wii reveal
pls update soon

Originally posted by: ...navina...

Hi Andy ... GREAT UPDATE!!! thanks navi😃

So - it was Mr Shark's tipp off that sent the ball rolling. How clever of him to finger Brijraj .. knowing that this would bring the real culprit forward.yes he was smart . he knows human nature well😉

Now here is where I am confused. 1 moment Jaggat says this ...He looked at mr shark and he gave him an assuring smile. ...the next moment Jaggat asks this question :

J: who is he .. that bas*** Help me out Andy!!! Navi, ok mr shark tipped jaggat about the culprit but jaggat does not that this person itself is mr shark. he wants that fellow punished,so he says so

Was I right in my last assumption that Jaggat got Uday to pretend to be Mr Shark in order to protect Manyata? no jaggat is innocent here, he does not know about this. it was manyata who betrayed mr shark

I think Manyata has gottten the WRONG guy.no😉 And I think that it was Uday that she accused.maybe We always associate "smirk"with Uday. The man smirked at her as he was led away in handcuffs ... therefore UDAY!!!maybe i wont comment on this or i will end telling the whole story

Manyata spoke about proof ... is she refering to the file which Rajat compiled about Mr Shark. If it is ... then she should have another look at it - maybe she will discover who the correct assassin is!that file is with mr shark. she knows mr sharks hideout and work place. it could serve as an evidence

(FLASH BACK 10 DAYS AGO)

mr shark looked at the angelic form in front of him, she was indeed a greek goddess. he looked at her face and got lost in its beauty

she was now his own, his property,

I LOVE YOU PRINCESS he said to her

forgive me for what i did

I DONT HAVE ANOTHER OPTION , MY LOVE

*********************************This was the most interesting part of the chapter. And the last line speaks volumes. UDAY WAS FORCED TO DO IT!!! no mr shark did it on his own wish, but now he feels sorry about it I won't comment more on that just yet ... I will wait for the next update😉😆.

ok the next update is on the way

Thoroughly entertaining chapter Dear ... Well done to u👏 . thanks navi😃😳

Yet again , u have succeeded in giving me a head-ache. But I love the suspense😳. i also have given mr shark a head ache in the next chapter, even i love to create suspence

Please update soon,update on the way

thanks for the PM😊.

Originally posted by: eyecatchers

god!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
It's so mind blowing

Originally posted by: ...navina...

Okay Andy ... u asked for my prediction ... here it is :

(BTW - I didn't sleep last night as I was trying to figure this puzzle out)

now navi, you should have slept. oh iam touched😳 thanks navi

Manyata has fingered Uday to be Mr Shark. Jaggat has arrested him and now he is in jail. I think Uday may be a partner of Mr Shark and not the actual guy himself. There will be some HIDDEN story of why Uday did what he did. mr shark has no partners yet, mr shark does have a hidden story

Manyata will be heart-broken. But she will move on and get engaged to the REAL MR SHARK. Of-course she wouldn't know that until it's too late.

no comments this is half true and half false

After a year , she will meet up with Uday again ; find out about his past ... they'll rekindle their love for each other. He will propose to her - she will accept. But when she goes to break-off with her fiance ... the problem will start. He will not let her go so easily and he will cause trouble for them. And his TRUE IDENTITY will be revealed.mr sharks identity will be revealed this time itself

THAT'S ALL I GOT FOR NOW😆!!!

Hope I'm right ... at least 80% right😉!!!should i say 64%

Hi friends, this chapter tells about mr shark's past.😊

It's actually a flashback , about 10 days before manyata's accident took place

ie the day manyata was kidnapped

mr shark has a history behind his behavior and I ask you to read this chapter carefully as this tells you why mr shark is so😉

Chapter 17: THIS WAS MR SHARK

Mr shark left that room and went to his room upstairs. He mixed himself a drink and settled on the sofa.

Manyata was sleeping in the basement; he had modified to make it look like a room. Anybody standing outside will not know there is a room in the other side. After all he was the designer of that room.😈 Manyata would never be discovered when she was here. All that he could do was to mislead the police and he was successful to an extent. All he had to do was twist her neck and it would be over.🤢 Then why did he find it difficult to do so.

"Don't tell me her presence was making you weak" he thought

"I am a killer in the dark, a cold blooded one. I killed many with these hands then why am I hesitating now. Oh this is giving me a head ache"😈

"I just wanted to have some fun with her, so now why do I feel like a teenage boy having his first love"

"Why did not I kill her when I had a chance, why did I wait for long. My mistake, my bloody mistake"

"God, don't tell me this is love❤️, I hate love💔, oh I am going mad" he said keeping his hand on his head

Did he not cleverly take her out of the police jurisdiction right under their noses? Did he not finish that rajat who tried to unmask him, then why? Then why not manyata.

He poured himself another drink and devoured it in one go

Now why did he not kill manyata in one go?? Why?

He better do it now before he has second thoughts

His eyes fell on a family photo hung in his room. He looked at it with his drunken eyes

There he was, in between his mom and dad and his little sister- his chotti. All of them were smiling happily unaware of what was in store for them. This was the last photo they took before they were erased from this world, he lay on the sofa and closed his eyes. He was transported back in the past

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8 years back, morning scene

"beta get up , its already 7 30 you have to go to college. Suraj is already here"

"ma let me sleep for sometime more please, yesterday did not even get a chance to close my eyes "

"who asked you to watch the cricket match till 4 30 am, did I ? no, so get up and get ready or I will pour a bucket of water on your head"

"ma be a sport, 5 more minutes please"

"hi aunty, I will wake this sleeping beauty" said suraj

S: bhai, get u por do you want me to kiss you just like the prince who had to kiss sleeping beauty to wake her up. Wake up na

Mr shark: oh oh you too, ok iam getting up, but I will get you for this

S: catch me if you can

He goes and checks mr shark's phone

S: oh what is this? 3 messages by 3 hot girls in the class. You are lucky man. Your really lucky

Ms: give me back my phone suraj

S: ya ? I don't think so. I think I must show aunty these messages

Ms: I will kill you if you do so😡

S: then I should see it😆

And he moves outside the room, mr shark stops him and say

Ms: now what do you want?

S: 200 rupees

Ms: what?😲

S: or should I go to aunty

Ms: ok ok , here is it and he gives him that money

Ms: now give me that phone

S: ok romeo here is your phone

Then mr shark goes to freshen when suraj goes to mr shark's sister's room and hugs her from behind

S: hallo darling unni missed me eh?

U: no, leave me na, what if someone sees😳

S: no problem, you are mine, let me get a job and then I would come here to ask for your hand

And they kiss, unknown to them mr shark sees that and fumes in anger.😡 His friend flirting with his sister- no he would not allow it. He needed to speak to his third partner

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The terrific threesome was their gang name, but people called their gang the terrible threesome

Uday, ajay and suraj. They were best friends since kg classes. If there was any mischief in the neighborhood, the people first thought of this gang

But they were also good helpful boys. Uday and ajay had one younger sister each (unnathi and unnimaya respectively)while suraj was an orphan. He lived with his mama and mami. But he was more rich than uday and ajay combined. His mama was earning less than the amount he spend .uday and ajay did ask him about this money. But always he gave some lame excuses not to answer that question.