'THE SECOND SHADOW' chap 30 pg 146 new

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huma

@huma12.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#371

mr shark say manyata princess😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕 kahi ju main soch rahi hoon wo such tu nahiii update soonnn

Edited by huma12. - 12 years ago

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zainab

@--Zinay--

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#372

Superb chappy andy!
Poor manyata got betrayed by her own mother but i am still unnable to get who mr.shark is! It cant be uday may be if he had kidnapped her is to keep her safe from her enemies!
This story is so interesting!
That's not fair andy this such a small chapter please give a longer update next time...i cant wait mmore please update soon!
Thanks for the lovely story and pm
🤗

Edited by -Zina- - 12 years ago

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andy.a

@andy.a

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#373

Originally posted by: -Zina-
res!! updateee jldiii krooo🤗

done already

do read it

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Fekta Holic

@WhatTheF

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#374

OMG...pinch me plzzz...
Really uday is MR.shrak?
Superb update andy...i tell u u r a GR8 writter dear...pllzzz...uppdate next chppy...soon.

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Gargi

@sweet_gargi

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#375

Fantastic Andy...you are a true writer of thriller and suspense...I suspected somewhere that Komal can be the family member and m very sure that UV is Mr Shark now...hehehe...keep it up...👏👏⭐️

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Pranoti aka Sanju

@Damon.Holic

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#376

hey updated my comment on pg 50...
uday shud not be mr. shark, but as per u write, it feels that uv is mr. shark. mr. shark smirks, he calls manyata princess...
thats wat uv does...
thats why shark kinda left her on didnot kill her..
chemicl locha in my head. solve it fast...

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Shahista

@Shahi01

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#377

Well done andy

Like always you have left us even more intrigued.

You really are shaping up your suspence thriller

Very weel and we are left wondering

Is mr shark uday or not???

Ur enjoying leaving us hanging after each update... lol

Very nice andy. do continue soon

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Safia Rafiq

@safia25

Explorer

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#378

This is not fair Andy...why u didn't unmasked mr.shark.😒..but i know and i think that its not uday☺️..its ajit i think i forgot his name😈,,...so when u will next update..well the update was fabulous , well written, and yes well planned.👏..waiting for the next update..

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sonu/ sonali

@preya_radev

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#379

sorry for the late reply was reading the remaining parts cant beleive komal would be the one... but who is this mr shark is it uday coz mr shark calls her princess as well... or is that ajay really curious and now i cant wait for the next part so please update soon and thanks for the pm