'THE SECOND SHADOW' chap 30 pg 146 new

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andy.a

@andy.a

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Posted: 12 years ago

#111

Originally posted by: ...navina...
Nice chapter Andy.
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I don't like this Ajay(sorry I dont have a reason for the dislike). The party scene was great but MR Shark ... is giving me the creeps😡. He called Manyata "mouth-watering & delicious" ... DID HE THINK SHE WAS A PLATE OF BREYANI😆???

Mr Shark dancing with Manyata , then taking her into a corner and getting "cosy" with her, was ...DISGUSTING. This character YOU created Andy is a REAL MONSTER🤢!!! I don't know if he's more scary or u are😕 ... because all his evil deeds is coming from your head😉!!!

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Good job with this update Dear 👍🏼.

PLEASE DON'T KILL UDAY😭😭😭!!!

Thanks for the PM😊.

thank you navi for this comment
mr shark is my own creation but iam 100% better than him
mr shark is some one manyata know
the word delicious was used to show his inner thoughts
he has a story behind his cruality
and uday is not a saint too
mr shark personaly knows uday
now who first killed uday?
Ajay 'could be' mr shark
Its my turn now

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andy.a

@andy.a

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Posted: 12 years ago

#112

Originally posted by: anushruthi
First to comment
Interesting update ...
Is Ajay Mr.Shark ??
de suspense is great
Kya promo tha !!
Plz dont kill Uday ...
please save him

Thanks for de PM do cont soon

thank you dear
ajay could be mr shark
wait and watch

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andy.a

@andy.a

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Posted: 12 years ago

#113

Originally posted by: Fantasyangel
gr8 update bt plz dont kill uday...

thank you dear

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andy.a

@andy.a

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Posted: 12 years ago

#114

Originally posted by: arna753
wonderful update.

thank you dear

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andy.a

@andy.a

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Posted: 12 years ago

#115

Originally posted by: Archi02
Very nice update. But please don't kill uday. And mr. Shark is disgusting.;->

thank you dear
mr shark is going to be even more disgusting when he kills you know who

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chitra_rao

@chitra_rao

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Posted: 12 years ago

#116

Part 1: A new entry: OK now you must have introduced this MR ajay fro some reason, definitely he has some shades to his character. Waiting to see it unfold. And his Dosti with Uday is making me little uncomfortable, UV is the hero but he is too good and perfect to be true, I guess there is some mystery to him too. But at teh end, I want UV to be with Manyata. I mean just M's story will make it boring.

Part 2: Manyata dances with her killer: WOW no UV-M dance instead u gave us al a jhtaka by making M dance with MR shark, and that pig, was successful in kissing and feeling Manyata 😡. sick psychopath 🤢. And with M angry on Ajay's attitude it means she must have complained about Mr Shark to him, and he must have taken it lightly😕. And somehow I felt andy that u have all of a sudden started sidelining UV's character, I'm not sure is it because u r planning to kill him and ease him out of ur story, or for some other reason .

Promo: OMG u killed UV, OK so M is not supposed to end up with UV, hmmm... well lets see what u have in store.I would have loved to see UV till the end but then if u r planning for such a big twist then u must have something big going on in ur mind. Hope M is gonna survive till the end.

BUT DONT KILL UDAY, I can understand u giving a twist and M realising her love and then uday comming back, but dont kill him, he is the main character

Edited by chitra_rao - 12 years ago

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Gargi

@sweet_gargi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#117

That was a great update. I loved it Andy...Thanks for the PM👏👏...

But is Mr Shark and Ajay the same man?...😕...I have doubts here?...Promo was scary...

Update soon...And keep the promo..I liked it and it will make the plot different👏

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andy.a

@andy.a

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Posted: 12 years ago

#118

Originally posted by: sweet_gargi

That was a great update. I loved it Andy...Thanks for the PM👏👏...

But is Mr Shark and Ajay the same man?...😕...I have doubts here?...Promo was scary...

Update soon...And keep the promo..I liked it and it will make the plot different👏

thank you dear
did you read the previous chaps
ajay could be mr shark
you want me to kill uday
ok let me see if i could do it

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andy.a

@andy.a

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Posted: 12 years ago

#119

Originally posted by: chitra_rao
res for my analysis:

BUT DONT KILL UDAY, I can understand u giving a twist and M realising her love and then uday comming back, but dont kill him, he is the main character

ok dear take your time
i just love reading your detailed comment
it makes me write better.r u
sure that you want uday live
after all its a war bw
manyata and mr shark

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NAVINA

@HunsraJ

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Posted: 12 years ago

#120

Originally posted by: andy.a

thank you navi for this comment
mr shark is my own creation but iam 100% better than him
mr shark is some one manyata know
the word delicious was used to show his inner thoughts
he has a story behind his cruality
and uday is not a saint too
mr shark personaly knows uday
now who first killed uday?
Ajay 'could be' mr shark
Its my turn now

Andy ... u are becoming evil😡!!!

I think , U ARE JOINING ME TOO MUCH 😈😆!!!

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