manveer ss-have faith on my love chap2(A)-13 updtd - Page 3

wow just read the prologue sonia and it was awesome plz add me to u pm list and update the first part soon

nice start plz do update soon n pm me if u can😛

It was awesome dear ...next time plzzz make it longer and plzzz update it asap

Hello everyone!!!!!!!!!

First of all a Big SORRY!!! To those whom i said i was going to update yesterday. Actually i had written it was in half way at that time my little naughty neighbour and switched on the monitor and i hadn't saved it because i was still writing so had to rewrite it again. Sorry those who all waited yesterday for my update. So guys i wont delay further here's Chapter 1 of my SS – HAVE FAITH ON MY LOVE!!!!!

The sun was shining brighter today than any other day. The grand D&J (devgarh and jaigarh) palace stood in the midst of the city of dreams decorated like a new bride!!!! Why shouldn't it be??? As today was a very special day in the lives of the Devgarh and the Jaigarh family. Everyone was busy in the preparations for the evening's grand event. As we enter we see Rajmata Mrinalini Devi along with Maharani Komal and Maharani Vasundara instructing the servants.

Vasundara :- Masaheb, sab kuch thik toh hoga na??? Na jane kyun hume bohot dar lag raha hai.🤔

Komal :- Vasundara sab kuch acche se hoga. Dekhiye toh aaj din kitna subh hai.

Rajmata :- Haan beta, Komal sahi keh rahi hai. Iss din ka hum sabne phichle 16 saalo se intezaar kiya hai. Aaj kuch ashub nahi hoga.😊😊😃

Giriraj :- Haan vasu, masaheb sahi keh rahi hai ahkir aaj sola saalo baad hum dost se RISHTEDAR banege. Kyun brij??😕

Brijraj :- Ha giri, akhir voh sunehra din aa hi gaya. Aaj hum bohot khush hai. Kyun na ho akhir humara bachpan ka jigri dost he humara RISHTEDAR ban raha hai. ( all had tears in their eyes. Khushi ke aashu.)😭😭😭

Menka :- Aaj itna bada din hai hum sab ke liye aur aap sablog yaha khade ho ke baate kar rahe hai. Kitni ssari tyyariya abhi baki hai.

Servant comes bows down infront of the elder members of the most two powerful royal families and informs them that the breakfast is ready.

Scene shifts to breakfast table.

Elders go to have their breakfast. They don't find the youngsters there. Rajmata asks a servant.

Rajmata :- Seema, sab bache kaha hai??

Seema :- Rajmata rajkumari Jaynandini aur rajkumari Unati apne Designers se sath beth ke sham ke function ke liye apni dresses select kar rahi hai.

Brijraj & Giriraj :- Yeh ladkiya kabhi nahi sudrengi !!!! (all laugh.)😛😃

Menka & Komal :- Karan aur Vijay kaha hai??

Seema :- Jee His Highness or rajkumar Vijay dono morning walk pey gaye hai aur phir vaha se Gym jayenge.

Vasundara :- Thik hai. Par humara rani bitya kya kar rahi hai??

Giriraj :- Haan, manyata kidhar hai??

Seema : - Maharaj Her Highness unki study mey Mr. Shikawat ke sath meeting mey busy hai.

Brijraj & Komal :- thik hai aap jayiye. Masebeh yeh ladki toh J aur Unnati se bhi zyada hai. Jab dekho tab Kaam Kaam.😃

Rajmata :- rehne dijye na komal aur brijraj. Applog yeh mat bhuliye sab bacho mey voh he sabse zimmedar hai.

All(every1 except rajmata) :- haan hum jante hai masaheb akhir aapki ladli joh hai n everyone laughs including Ds.😃😃

Few hours later, a girl was siting infront of the mirror getting ready for her special day. She was in her own world. She got some flashback, " Two kids were playing suddenly the girls fall down and gets hurt. The boy runs to her and says,

Boy :- " Princess, are you ok?? ".

Girl :- " yeess, i am fine."

Boy :- " don't lie to me. Come we will go inside and tell nanny to dress your wound."

Girl :- " No No pleashee she will tell ma and ma will shout on me." saying so she starts crying in pain.😭😭

The boy wipes her tears and says," No dear, come. Aap phele rona band kijye. Aap rote huye achi nahi lagti." Flashback ends. The girl is none other than Her Highness Yuvrani Manyata Kumari Singh, the Yuvrani of Devgarh.

Present

A few pearls escape her eyes. " Why did u go leaving me alone that day??? Why didn't you bother to take me with you. I MISS YOU !!! I miss u very much. Please come back i want my best friend back. I need you. Why Why Why you went away?? Where are you??? Do you remember me?? Why you left UV why?? There was a knock on the door which brought her back to the reality around her. She asked who is there?"

Person :- " Jiji its me j. Can i come in."

Manyata :- " yes jini (jaynandini). And she quickly wipes her tears and composes herself."

J :- "jiji."😊

Manyata :- " Jini what happened? Do had some work? "😕

J :- "OMG!!! Jiji. Kamse kam aaj ke din toh kaam se bare mey mat socho. Aur yeh kya abhi tak aap ready bhi nahi hui. "

Manyata :- " hum bas ja he rahe the (cutoff by J)

J :- "kab sare guest aane ke baad. Ohhfo jiji chaliye aaj hum aapko ready karwate hai. "😆😆

Manyata :- " par jinni agar aap hume ready karenge toh khud kab ready hongi?"😕😕

J :- " Par hum toh phelese he ready hai. Ab aap apne Prince Charming ke sapno mey itni busy hai ki hum notice bhi nahi kiya, jayiye jiji hum aapse katti n J pouts.😔 "

J's dress

Manyata :- " aare aise nahi hai jinni. Sorry (holding ears) waise aaj aap bohot beautiful aur hot lag rahi hai. Kise marne ka erada hai?? Huh bataye bataye.😉😉"

J :- (slightly blushing)☺️ " what rubbish are u talking jiji. Aisa kuch nahi hai."

Manyata :- "toh phir kaisa hai J. Humne toh sunna hai aaj Jaggat bhi aane wale hai. Kahi yeh sab unke liye toh nahi na?? "

J :- (turns red like a tomato)" Jiji, aap bhi na. Hume ma bula ahi hai hum bas abhi aaye,"saying so she runs out of the room.😳😳

Manyata :- "Aare humari baat toh sunniye."n she laughs😆😆. She gets ready in her red heavy worked dress and the then her stylist set her hair and leaves. She is looking at herself in the mirror and gets another Flashback

A boy of 5 and a little cute girl of 4 were playing among the royal kids. After that they both went to their elders and took there blessings. Rajprohitji told them to follow some rituals and then they exchanged rings. Then both posed for the photographs with Dadisaab. At night they both slept in each others arms away from sorrow and politics.🥱🥱

Two days later it was the worst day for the Devgarh and the Jaigarh family. All elders along with Karan ,Vijay and both little J and Unnu went out for some function. Only the two the most INSEPARABLE stayed back in th care of their nannies and some servants. They inspite of the warnings given by their elders went out in the palace garden. After a long qrguement they both decided to play 'HIDE N SEEK'. The little girl was the seeker and the boy was hiding from her at the far end of the garden near the little warehouse. Unaware of the Danger ahead the boy hided there. Suddenly someone from back covered his mouth with a cloth. Even before he could realise what was happening everything blackened infront of his eyes. The little girl searched for the boy everywhere but didn't find him. She was annoyed that he hided in a place in which she couldn't find him. Not knowing that she will not see her Best Friend again ever after that unfaithful day. Flashback ends.

Manyata stood infront of the picture of the three Ds she herself and the little boy which was taken during their engagement. A few tears rolled from her eyes. Her gaze shifted to the adjacent frame. And a few more tears made their way through her eyes. She was confused what to do???😕😕

Someones voice from the back catched her attention and she turned to see her two souls there the Devil in red and the Angel in white. The Devil spoke up first, " Manyata you are not happy with this engagement then why are you doing it. You wont be happy with Him. " then the Angel spoke," no dear He will keep you happy. Don't you forget he was there for you everytime you needed help." Both together, 'think about what we said the rest depends on you. After all the final decision is yours. ' Saying so both disappears leaving Manyata more confused than before. She decided to cancel the ENGAGEMENT. Then all of a sudden her gaze felt on their joint Family picture. It was just so perfect. A slight smile makes its way on her lips by seeing them both together. His hand was on her shoulder. And then realisation struck her. She thought to herself, ' This a new beginning for you. You should be happy because everyone is happy Ds, ma, data, jini, unnu, vijay bhai, uncle giri , bhua, vasu aunty and HIM. No you cant do this to Him. He was always there for you whenever you needed him even before you could ask him for help. He used to make you laugh when you ever upset. No no no you cant do this to Him. You cant hurt your Best Friend, your family who have waited for this day from the last 16 years. You cant be so Selfish only thinking about yourself. Remember when you became you took vow that your family and peoples happiness will come first and then yours.' Her thoughts were broken by the knock on the door. It was servant informing her that she is called down by Ds as all the guest have arrived. She look a last glance of herself in the mirror and made her way down to the gathering.

Everyone was their all the family members including close family friends, members of the mahasabha along with their head Maharaj Prithviraj Rathore of Raigarh and other celebrities, top most industrialists etc etc. Suddenly the lights dimmed and a dim purple light focused on the stairs from were she made her entry all alone. All eyes fixed upon her. Her gaze once travelled upon the crowd infront and then finally stuck up upon him. He was looking extremely hot, handsome, cute and mostly a PREFECT ROYAL!! Standing beside him Unnati was looking cute in her dress.

Unnati's dress

In his black sherwani. He was on the other hand starring at her continuously. She was beautiful before but today she seemed to him like a angel down to earth that to only for him. He made his way to her as she decended the stairs with full grace and attitude which only a princess can manage to. He forwarded his hand and she accepted it by putting her hand upon his. Karan whispers in her ears, " you look beautiful today doll just like an angel from heaven. " Manyata blushes at this and whispers a small shy 'Thank you.' and they both made their way to their families. While moving they heard whispers from the crowd about how prefect they look with each other. MFEO (made for each other.) etc.

As soon they reached there. They were complimented by the family members.

Manyata's dress

Karan's sherwani

J :- " wow jiji you looking awesome in this dress."👍🏼

Unnati :- " ya J you are right. Dada you are also looking handsome i must say."😃

Giriraj & Vasundara :- " Manyata beta you are looking like an angel. "🤗

Vijay :- " angel toh dekhenge he na akhir bhai kiske hai. By the way Karan you are also not bad at all."

Menka :- " haan vijay's right. Aap dono bohot khubsurat lag rahe hai. Kyun dada😕??"

Brijraj :- " Yes, Karan you are looking like perfect royal and a perfect yuvraj that you already are. And manyata toh humari bte hai toh khubsurat toh voh dekhengi he."🤣🤣

Komal :- " Maharaj voh humari bhi beti hai na ki sirf aapki. You both look good together. Kiseki nazar na lage." She puts blach spot behind Manyata and karan's ear.

Dadisaab :- "yes beta you both look nice together. THE PERFECT COUPLE."

Manyata & Karan :- "Thanks everyone."😳😳☺️

Rajprohitji arrived everyone took his blessings one by one. At last they both took his blessings together.

Rajprohitji :- " khush rahiye dono. Aap dono sada saath rahe aur khup unnati kare."

Dadisaab :- " chaliye phir aur der kis baatki rasame puri karte hai."

Rajprohitji :- " haan haan rajmata. Chaliye muhrat bhi hogaya hai." All went towards the stage ezcept the youngsters . Engagement hai aur J, vijay bhai, unnati, jaggat sab chup hoke dekhe aisa ho sakta hai kya.😉😉

Vijay :- (holding karan from his arm)" Aare aap kaha chaldiye?? 😕"

Karan :- " Vijay banna aap ne shayad sunna nahi lekin rajprohitji ne abhi toh kaha ke rasme karni hai."😕😕

Jaggat :- " haan toh rasme unhe karni hai vaha aapka kya kaam. Aap yaha khade rahiye humare aur vijay banna keh saath."😊

Karan :- (confused) kya?? Par hum yaha kyun ruke??😕

J :- " Kyunki hume company chahiye. Dekhiye na yeh jaggat jabse aaya hai tabse vijay bhai se chipka hai fevicol ke tarah. Hume toh ek compliment bhi nahi di. " and shows fake anger on jaggat. Manyata and unnati were beside them hearing all this. Manyata spoke,

Manyata :- " aww jaggat abt um toh gaye kaam se," saying so she and unnati hi-fives each other.😃😃

Jaggat :- "kya manyata jiji ab bhi."😳

Karan goes near Manyata and forwards his arm and says, " chale dar ho rahi hai??." Even before manyata could reply or link her arm with his unnati who was standing beside karan immediately linked her arm with karan and said, " Haan chliye dada, chalte hai der ho rahi hai." Karan passed a annoyed look to manyata while the other youngsters had a hearty laugh😃. Soon Ds announced, " Welcome everyone. Thank you ke aap sablog yaha humari khushi mey shaamil hone ke liye aaye. Aaj hum sab yaha par Maharaj Giriraj ke bete aur Jaigarh ke Yuvraj Karanveer Singh aur mere badi poti yaneki Maharaj Brijraj ke badi beti Yuvrani Manyata Kumari Singh ki engagement hai. So Karan- Manyata and the others please join us on stage. " now Karan leaves Unnati's hand and forward his hand towards Manyata and they along with others make their way on the stage.

Rajprohitji does all the rituals. Now its the most awaited moment of exchanging the rings. Rajprohit, " yuvraj ab phele manyata beti aapko ko ring pehnaage aur phir aap unhe." Both nodded. Manyata turns towards J and asks her,

Manyata :- " J ring do???"

J :- "kya jiji? Aap humse kyun ring maang rahe hai??."

Karan :- (confused)😕" toh phir kise puche. Aaj subh he toh manyata ne aapko ring di thi na rakhne ke liye humne dekha tha."

J :- "nahi jiji ne hum koi ring nahi di. Shayad unhone dad ko di hogi."

Karan :- " thik hai. (Turns towards Brijraj and says) uncle ring dijiye na. " till that time J winks at Brijraj😉. Now he understands that everyone is just teasing Karan so he to joins in.

Brijraj :- "ring humare pass toh nahi hai." Karan now fully shocked and this was fully seen on his face.😲😲😲

Vijay :- " ab engagement nahi hogi. Chaliye manyata bhai aap bach gayi. Time for party🥳🥳. M bhai you are still a Bachelorette. All your male fans and admirers will be very happy kyun J ( but he stops by seeing karan giving him a you are dead glare.)" seeing the expression on Karan everyone bursted out in laughter even Manyata.🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

Karan gave manyata what the hell was that look.

Komal :- " ab bas bhi kijiye aap sab. J chalo ring doh apni jiji ko."

Brijraj :- " yes beta. Jaldi se dedo ring ab dekho Karan ko aur sabar nahi ho raha hai."

Karan :- (smiles at this brijs comment )😊 :- " kya uncle brij ab bhi!! Aisa kuch nahi hai."

Jaggat :- " toh thik hai phir engagement postpone karte hai. Waise bhi Karan ko koi jaldi nahi hai. Aap kya kehti hai Manyata jiji??"

Manyata doesn't know what to say but she decides to tease Karan. So she says, "hume bhi koi jaldi nahi hai. You are right jaggat engagement postpone karte hai." She looks at Karan who was fuming with anger😡😡. Now Ds speaks,

Ds :- "enough of your teasing. Chaliye J beta Manyata ko ring dijiye." J nods and gives the ring to Manyata. Manyata takes the ring and slips it into Karans finger. Everyone claps👏👏. Now its Karan turn to put the ring.

Unnati gives him the ring. He asks Manyata to forward her hand. He waits for few seconds as she doesn't forward her hand he looks up and is shocked to sees J holding Manyata's hand.

Karan ;- "ab yeh kya hai J??😕😕"

J :- "itni bhi kya jaldi hai Karan or shuld i say Future jijusa. " at this Karan smiles😊.

Karan :- "now please stop it J. Dekhiye muhrat nikla ja raha hai. "All laugh at karans eagerness. J leaves Manyatas hand. Now karan takes her hand in his and is going to slip the ring in her finger. At that time his mobile starts ringing. He curses himself silently for not keeping the mobile on silent mode and also the caller for his wrong timing😡😡.

Karan :- "hello kya hua??"

Caller :- "Sorry yuvraj sa hum aapko disturb nahi karna chahte the par baathi kuch aisi thi."

Karan :- "Its ok. Ab jaldi bolo kya hua?? Itni konsi important baat hai."

Caller :- " Humne Avantika ko pakad liya hai."

Karan :- "kya tum sach keh rahe ho??? Iss bar hume koi galti nahi chahiye. "

Caller :- " Galti ke koi gunjaesh he nahi. Humne unhe padak ke aapke lonvala ke Farmhouse par laya hai. "

Karan :- " tum vahi ruko hum abhi aa rahe hai."and he cuts the call.

Giriraj :- "kya hua karan beta kiska phone tha?? Aur yeh aap kaha jane ki baat kar rahe hai???"

Karan :- (happily)😃😃" dad humare logone avantika ko pakad liye hai aur unhe humare Lonvala ke farmhouse par rakha hai. Hum vahi jaa rahe hai. "

Hearing avantikas everyone has slight tears in their eyes😭😭. Vasundara is the one who speaks first.

Vasundara :- "Matlab ab humara beta hume wapis milega. Sunna aapne unnati dada ne kya kaha."

Unnati :- "haan ma hum bhi bohot khush hai. Akhir 16 salo baad hum dada se milenge. "

Giriraj :- "Hum nahi chodenge uss aaurat ko uske baje se hum apne bete se 16 saal dur rahe ab aur nahi. Akhir 16 salo baad hume humara 'UDAY' wapis milega. " saying so happily he hugs brijraj🤗.

Who is dis Avantika???😕 What happened to Uday??? How he was away from his family for 16 years??? Everything will be answered in the next chapter. Till then think think and not only just think about it also comment.

The End

Sorry for the spelling or grammatical mistakes. That's it for today. So guys jutas /chappals /tomatoes /eggs /likes/comments/criticisms all WELCOME. Sorry anisha, Krishna di and other writers bcz i dint comment on ur updates. Thnks 4 d PMs. I will read it and also comment!! Character sketch on its way!!!!!!

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Originally posted by: khalilshahista

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That was awesome yaar.

Loved it. its dfferent.

Uday is the one that went missing.

Can not wait for his entry.

There wll surely be plenty drama

With his brother getting engaged to manyata who

So fondly thinks of her childhood friend.

Do continue soon.

Hugs

Shahista

Aww u read it so quickly!!!

thnks shahista!!

first will post the Cs den the next chapter😃😃

thnk god u liked it!!!!!!

Originally posted by: Manveerfan123

Its a great prologue! Continue soon and plz PM me!😛

Originally posted by: Khawaunju

Plz add me to pm list n loved da concept

omg this was awesome omf karan and manyata engagement but thank god karans phone rang at the right time... manveer r just made at least they r not engaged coz karan didnt put the ring on manyata fingers... so uday had been kidnapped i hope he didnt forget his family and remembers everyone espeically his princess hope karan doesnt become negative to get manyata just the way j had become in the show update soon and thanks for the pm sonia

Awesum!yar plz can u pm me.n loved that part when everyone was teasing karan