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Posted: 12 years ago
#41
hey hi dear,,,,,,
just read the firstt chapter of ur story...must say its really awesum yaar,,,amazing,,👏,, u really left me stunned ???😲
u know whay ???
becoz ,,,whn i started reading the chapter,,,, i thought its the same old concept...

tht 2 kids who are the childood sweethearts are betrothed to each other but thn the girl kid gets kidnapped ... slowly nd gradually whn they both meet each other after 16 years thn everything turns upside down as the boy kid has grown to become a cunning,manipulative ,evil, yet charming,hot nd sexy prince whereas the girl kid is cute ,sweet helpful but a fierce commoner who lives in a chawl or has grown in a middle class family
...one day they both accidentally meet each other nd thn begins the story of a prince nd long lost princess...,their journey form hatred to love...

i thought its the same old concept,,,,but as i reached the last chunk of the chapter,,,,u really left me stunned dear with the amazing concept of urs in which u turned upside down,,,...😆
as in this story it wasnt manyta who got kidnapped but was instead prince himself who got kidnapped...😲😉😆..amzing yaar...nd truly fresh concept...

but now will it be uday who will keep on ranting "HAAN NAHI TOH" or "HALKAT, VEDI,,YEDI, KHASMANUKHANI "etc🤣🤣

i think he either would have grown as a local conman or a thug ,,,u know tapori dada😕😆🤣 or might be a typically adarsh beta of a gharelu maa,,,,,, like boy next door of a middle class family in love with another girl of his stature😲😆

but i want to read what u have in store fr us...i can wait to see uvs entry now...
really cnt wit to read ur next chapter yaar...plz post soon nd dont forget to pm me...ok

plz plz plz update soon😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42
so so sorry for comnting this late!
ok coming to the update its awesome!
manyata is getting engaged to udays brother and it was him who got kidnapped!
thank God they found him before the engagement! i hope now manveer get engaged and then married but i wonder what would be the reaction of karan will he turn evil! will he fight from uday to get manyata! so interesting! i am eager to read more update ASAP!
thanks for pm! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
gr8 update love it...update soon thanx for PM.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44
it was awesomeee waitng for uday's entrryy!!!!!!!!! waitnf for manveer noww!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: coolsaloni.nira

hey hi dear,,,,,,

just read the firstt chapter of ur story...must say its really awesum yaar,,,amazing,,👏,, u really left me stunned ???😲
u know whay ???
becoz ,,,whn i started reading the chapter,,,, i thought its the same old concept...

tht 2 kids who are the childood sweethearts are betrothed to each other but thn the girl kid gets kidnapped ... slowly nd gradually whn they both meet each other after 16 years thn everything turns upside down as the boy kid has grown to become a cunning,manipulative ,evil, yet charming,hot nd sexy prince whereas the girl kid is cute ,sweet helpful but a fierce commoner who lives in a chawl or has grown in a middle class family
...one day they both accidentally meet each other nd thn begins the story of a prince nd long lost princess...,their journey form hatred to love...

i thought its the same old concept,,,,but as i reached the last chunk of the chapter,,,,u really left me stunned dear with the amazing concept of urs in which u turned upside down,,,...😆
as in this story it wasnt manyta who got kidnapped but was instead prince himself who got kidnapped...😲😉😆..amzing yaar...nd truly fresh concept...

but now will it be uday who will keep on ranting "HAAN NAHI TOH" or "HALKAT, VEDI,,YEDI, KHASMANUKHANI "etc🤣🤣

i think he either would have grown as a local conman or a thug ,,,u know tapori dada😕😆🤣 or might be a typically adarsh beta of a gharelu maa,,,,,, like boy next door of a middle class family in love with another girl of his stature😲😆

but i want to read what u have in store fr us...i can wait to see uvs entry now...
really cnt wit to read ur next chapter yaar...plz post soon nd dont forget to pm me...ok

plz plz plz update soon😳





Omg wat a long comment
U made my day dear
thnks thnk thnk u so very much
i vil cont soon

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Posted: 12 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: Roze12

Superb & great update!!!!...cont soon...thanks for the PM...!!!!





glad u .liked it!!!!!!
yep i wil cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: swetsurati

gr8 update love it...update soon thanx for PM.



thnks sweta dear
i will try 2 update wenever m free
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: -Zina-

so so sorry for comnting this late!
ok coming to the update its awesome!
manyata is getting engaged to udays brother and it was him who got kidnapped!
thank God they found him before the engagement! i hope now manveer get engaged and then married but i wonder what would be the reaction of karan will he turn evil! will he fight from uday to get manyata! so interesting! i am eager to read more update ASAP!
thanks for pm! 😊



well abt karan turning evil or nt tht u will cme 2 knw in d furthr updates!!!!!!


thnks 4 liking it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: pia.raha

it was awesomeee waitng for uday's entrryy!!!!!!!!! waitnf for manveer noww!!!!!!!!




m working on it
dnt worry uday's entry will be zor ka zatka!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: princessSonia




m working on it
dnt worry uday's entry will be zor ka zatka!!!

ABHI HUME AUR INTEZAR MAT KARO...PLZ UPDATE SOON ...AWESOME STORY 👏👏👏N LUVED SIS SIS KA PYAAR...ATLEAST J IS NOT CRUEL IN THIZ..😃

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