manveer ss-have faith on my love chap2(A)-13 updtd

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Hii everyone!!!😊😊
This is my first ever attempt. Here is the prologue. I knw its too long for a prologue😳
but do give it a try by reading and let me knw hws it??????😕😕😕



And here's d Prologue...😳😳



In the palace, everyone is busy attending the guest as this was a very special day in the life of the people of DEVGARH and JAIGARH!!!! inspite of the warnings been given by the elders the
two very the rulers of their own hearts. No one could make them bow down infront of others or do anything if they dint want to!!!!!!! Both went to their elders after having their share of FUN together!!😊😃😉They exchanged rings as told by Rajprohitji and took his blessings. Later they took the blessings of other elders. Soon the sunset with the two sleeping peacefully side by side.😆🥱🥱

Days passed soon and now the palace was quite. All the events had got over. It was a stormy day. The two were told
not leave the palace and go in the garden as it was very cloudy outside. The two sat in their room heads on their hands😭😭 peeking out of the balcony in the greeny garden infront of them. To their despise in stared pouring slighty. Now this was the limit both stood up hand in hand and sneaked out😉😉 of the palace into the
garden to their good luck there no one in the palace except their nannies and a few servants. After quarrelling for about some time they decided to play HIDE N SEEK!!!!!!!
Among the two one was hiding while the other was seeking. The hider after thinking for awhile rushed quickly behind the small ware house at the far end of the garden and decided to take
shelther there from the seeker. The kid was overjoyed after finding a safe place away from the seeker but wasn't aware of the DANGER nearing😃😃😕. Someone covered the kids mouth with a cloth😲😲. Even before the kid could realise what was happening everything infront Blacked out!!!😲😲
The kid was lifted up by the mysterious person who lead the kid away from the little ones whole world, whichwas none other than the seeker, the kids BEST FRIEND,the little ones very own family, the kingdom of
which the kid was the future RULER!!!
On the other hand the
seeker tried up best to find the hider but little did the young life knew whathad happened to the kids best friend!!😭😭



Will the two kids ever
meet again??😕 Will the seeker be able to find out the hider ever?? Will they be
BEST FRIENDS after staying away from each other?? Will they remember each
other?? What has Destiny in store for them is yet to DISCOVER!!!!



This is the END!!!!!!!
So hws it???? Sorry i knw its too long n boring for a prologue
but couldn't stop myself from writing it. Sorry if i wasted ur tym !!!!!!😭😭 Do let me knw hws it gud or bad????😕😕
Criticisms always welcum.
Let me knw shuld i continue or nt??????😕😕

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Index For the SS - HAVE FAITH ON MY LOVE on PG 3😃😃

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Shahi01 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Do continue. its always great to read something new and add to the forum.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow AMAZING loved it continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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its great dear!
i really enjoyed the prolouge! and it was not long!
very nice start! so the girl is lost who is manyata! i guess!
well i hope they meet soon!
do continue and pm me when u update the next chapter!
pari.prisha thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice prologue dear
do continue soon
please pm me
MrsSSO thumbnail
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Nice prologue 😊
Continue soon ...
Do PM me ...
HunsraJ thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Prologue was nice. Continue soon😃.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Very interesting story. I always like to read something new. And it is just fab. Please continue soon and add me in your pm list if you can.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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doo cntinuee soon,love to read new storiess!!!!!!!!😊
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it was a cute one..do update soon😉

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