MANVEER FF : The journey of a wife... (Book 1)

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sloppy-hope

@sloppy-hope

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Posted: 12 years ago

#281

i am in luv wd ur ff! its awsom!...:D

plz pm me the next tym

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pmpm1

@pmpm1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#282

Loved the Manveer scenes. And although I hate J, I felt sad for her in this update.😭 I wish she had changed for the better and found true love herself instead of ending up in an assylum.

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Fekta Holic

@WhatTheF

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Posted: 12 years ago

#283

Superb superb ...amazing update kehate hai naa k sabar ka fal mitha hota hai...ye fal bhi kuch aisa hi tha...
Manveer lift scene was sooo...cute...lolzzz...manyata really dosent know any thing about senser shower...i love that lailought kya princess isi hoti hai?
Manyata : nahi biwiya aisi hoti hai...
Haila J bhai lost her mental balance...i think she needs electric shock tretment tabhi life ke itne bade shock se bahar aa payegi...to be honest i dnt feel bad for J ab jaisa karoge waisa bharoge...ok...thanx for lovely update and PM.

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hemvb

@hemvb

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Posted: 12 years ago

#284

mindblowing update!!!!!!!!!!!! love maanveer's chemistry but feel bad for J...do continue soon :P

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NAVINA

@HunsraJ

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Posted: 12 years ago

#285

Originally posted by: snowdream
ahhh visitors i hate them...😡
finally finally finally navi thanks thanks thank for such a gr8 cute update...

love u🤗

feeling bad for J poor lost her mental balance bt what to do jaisi karni waisi barni...

hey waiting for the next part...the more u write the more we demand😆

I actually didn't know how much I hate visitors...until yesterday!!!

Thank u for calling it CUTE.

Love u 2.

U are absolutely right!

Krishna...after that part...I'm taking a holiday. 😆

...will update when I recover!!!

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NAVINA

@HunsraJ

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Posted: 12 years ago

#286

Originally posted by: swetsurati
abhi tak visitors gaye nahi kya?

Originally posted by: swetsurati
urghhh...😡 these guest...kabhi bhi kahib bhi kisi ke bhi ghar muh utha ke chale atate hai...but yaar plzzz...try toh karna.

Originally posted by: swetsurati
visitors gaye k nahi?????

Originally posted by: swetsurati
Superb superb ...amazing update kehate hai naa k sabar ka fal mitha hota hai...ye fal bhi kuch aisa hi tha...
Manveer lift scene was sooo...cute...lolzzz...manyata really dosent know any thing about senser shower...i love that lailought kya princess isi hoti hai?
Manyata : nahi biwiya aisi hoti hai...
Haila J bhai lost her mental balance...i think she needs electric shock tretment tabhi life ke itne bade shock se bahar aa payegi...to be honest i dnt feel bad for J ab jaisa karoge waisa bharoge...ok...thanx for lovely update and PM.

Thank u Sweta...was it really that sweet???

I try to make all Manveer scenes cute...it's easy with them!!!

I agree with everything u said about Jai.

THANX 4 COMMENTING!!!

Edited by ...navina... - 12 years ago

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NAVINA

@HunsraJ

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Posted: 12 years ago

#287

Originally posted by: vampire12345678
awesome update
sweetness
rightous
impressive
super
amazing
great
wonderful
fanstastic
fantabulous
and finally:
SUPERCALIFRAGILISTIC EXPIALIDOCIOUS!!!

i loved this update thanks for dedicating it to me

and i loved the manveer ahem ahem scenes so vividly described especially the bathroom and uday licking k getting to graphic i better stop writing😆 that part was very nice and manyata being so super naughty and the invisible nighty idea u still remembered it and used it super nicely

now coming to J she has just lost her mental balance

i am happy how u are treating her she deserved it

i loved this update and manveer scenes were the best please update soon

thanks so so much for the pm

and a wonderful birthday gift

love u

Thank u Saira (FOR ALL 11 COMPLIMENTS)

Thank God u liked it...Had to dedicate it to my best friend😉

Yeah...we better not talk anything more about the ahem-ahem scenes,

...I don't want to start blushing again!

...so, u also remember the invisible nighty part...(you would have done a better job...for sure).

I gave Jai, what she deserved...but ,there are some readers feeling sorry for her 😭...I think I have to get her treated quickly😆

I'll update when I recover from this 1...it took a lot out of me!

U ARE MOST WELCOME!!!

LOVE YOU 2 SWEETY!!!

Edited by ...navina... - 12 years ago

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@-SilverAngel-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#288

OMG... ☺️☺️☺️... This was my reaction in all Manyata and Uday parts, I'm such a nanhi bachi, I tell you! 😆... and Jai she has really lost it, cutting off her own eyebrows and cutting off her skin and hair... poor girl.. though she deserves to be punished but can't help feeling a bit sad for her seeing her in this condition!

Jai is too stubborn to see the reality, her one sided love/ obsession is just too much! Fab update 👍🏼

Edited by mahi0809 - 12 years ago

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NAVINA

@HunsraJ

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Posted: 12 years ago

#289

Originally posted by: pia.raha
manveer ka to aj sprks hi sprks ho raha thaa!!!!!!!!! it wass gr88 and suprbb updatee!!!!!!!!!!!! and wen udayy said dat she is hnging her room nt for uday bt for sshower,dat was soo hilariouss and tyhe pthr partss wass awesme chmstry!!!!!!!!!!

Haan Pia...bohot ELECTRIC ho gaye na!!! Thank you!!!

Dear...after every update u seem to find something hillarious

...I'm so happy...I can make u laugh!!!

THANX 4 COMMENTING!!!

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Sunshinegirll

@Sunshinegirll

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#290

loved the chapter😊😊
no words.. such an awesome chapter..👏
uday removing the saree's pin in d elevator😆😆
n manyata asking whether he cant wait even a bit.. so damn cute..😳😳😳
manyata giving uday punishment and getting caught herself😳😳😳

n coming to jay.. finally i get to see someone writing on jay getting wat she deserved..😊
or else in most cases she is forgiven very easily😡😡

continue soon navina😊😊

Edited by Sunshinegirll - 12 years ago

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