MANVEER FF : The journey of a wife... (Book 1)

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Andrea Marie Villegas Baid

@diorslik

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#301

Originally posted by: ...navina...

Thanx Andrea...coming from u - it's a huge compliment!

...And u just made mine!!!

GLAD I COULD HELP...

Lol call me andy 😉

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Zainab

@--Zenu--

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#302

Heyy Navina! I'm Zainab u Can Call Me Zenu! Well I Read All Your Parts They Were Fabulous ! I'll Try Yo Read Your Updates On Time As I'm Busy Dese Days! Pls PM Me Regarding Your Future Updates!

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NAVINA

@HunsraJ

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#303

Originally posted by: MsLuscious

Navina yot are amazing writer ur ff ix epic!
I read all the parts and trust i loved it to the core do update s0on n do pm me:)

Wow...Thanx SARAH

...Actually, your ff is EPIC!

Sure, I'll PM u...No problem!

Originally posted by: ashukapoor007
Heyy Navina! I'm Zainab u Can Call Me Zenu! Well I Read All Your Parts They Were Fabulous ! I'll Try Yo Read Your Updates On Time As I'm Busy Dese Days! Pls PM Me Regarding Your Future Updates!

Nice to meet u Zenu.

Thanx 4 the compliment.

Okay then...I'll add u to my PM list.

THANX 4 COMMENTING!

Edited by ...navina... - 12 years ago

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NAVINA

@HunsraJ

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#304

Originally posted by: lilybabes
woah finally pura update padne ka mauka
the ahem ahem was 😳😳😳...

J 's condition is pitiable but considering de

things she did and cud hav done 2 M i

personally dont pity her tat much

gr8 update

cont soon and thanks 4 de PM

Yep...I finally updated my update 😆

Haan...ahem-ahem...kuch zyada ho gaya na?

I don't pity her either...She deserved it!!!

Thanx.

I'll continue when I work out what to put in next 😕

Welcome!

THANK YOU, ANU...FOR ALWAYS COMMENTING!!!

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757315

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#305

Originally posted by: ...navina...

Glad u think so(about the idea).

Out of Control...WE LIKE😉

Jai will be there for a while...I NEEDED A BREAK FROM HER 😆

ABOUT YOUR QUERY:

Okay...Let me try to explain:

Chapter 2.2 ended with this:

Manyata cried and Uday consoled her. I'm sorry Uday. The party was a disaster... No Princess- don't apologise! It was MOST ENTERTAINING. I enjoyed it: 2 gorgeous girls fighting over me! WHAT MORE CAN I ASK FOR? ,he joked playfully. Manyata laughed through her tears. You gonna pay for saying that Mr Singh! Just tell me when and where, he winked.

...Manyata saying that Mr Singh will pay...was just a joke!

Paragraph 3 in chapter 2.3:

...Uday asks what he'll pay...there, he was just teasing Manyata, not really expecting her to answer...but, she did (although she was joking)...of course, her joke back-fired on her and he DELIVERED on it in the bathroom. 😳

Manyata whispered a single word to him...the word was : CUNNILINGUS.

...If u didn't know what it means...I'M SURE U KNOW NOW!!!

...I did have that word in the update, but I decided to edit it...I didn't want to give everyone a new word to add to their vocabulary...

HOPE THAT ANSWERED YOUR QUESTION!!!

oh i get the point

CUNNILINGUS. i knew what that meant but u did not use it in the actual update so i wondered what the word would be i thought ti was a manyata giving uday oral pleasure or something

thanks for solving my doubt

Good!

I didn't want to put in that word...in case somebody didn't know what it meant...and if they asked me to explain...I WOULD JUST DIE!!!...but now if anybody asks...I'll refer them here 😆😆😆

Manyata giving Uday oral pleasure...GOOD IDEA...CAN I USE IT???

of course u can navi

i would love to read that

in the next chapter u can write

manveer honeymoon

2 weeks only on bed😳

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NAVINA

@HunsraJ

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#306

Originally posted by: mahi0809
OMG... ☺️☺️☺️... This was my reaction in all Manyata and Uday parts, I'm such a nanhi bachi, I tell you! 😆... and Jai she has really lost it, cutting off her own eyebrows and cutting off her skin and hair... poor girl.. though she deserves to be punished but can't help feeling a bit sad for her seeing her in this condition!

Jai is too stubborn to see the reality, her one sided love/ obsession is just too much! Fab update 👍🏼

🤣🤣🤣...and that was my reaction to U BEING A NANHI BACHI !!!

Actually Mahi...I thought of doing something different: In everybody's ff's...Jai gets off too easily...even in the show, she was let off too lightly...I decided to punish her, how I saw fit...BUT , if you're feeling sad for her...then I could bring her back to turn Manveer's life upside-down...YOUR CHOICE !!!

THANX 4 ALWAYS COMMENTING , MAHI.

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NAVINA

@HunsraJ

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#307

Originally posted by: vampire12345678

Glad u think so(about the idea).

Out of Control...WE LIKE😉

Jai will be there for a while...I NEEDED A BREAK FROM HER 😆

ABOUT YOUR QUERY:

Okay...Let me try to explain:

Chapter 2.2 ended with this:

Manyata cried and Uday consoled her. I'm sorry Uday. The party was a disaster... No Princess- don't apologise! It was MOST ENTERTAINING. I enjoyed it: 2 gorgeous girls fighting over me! WHAT MORE CAN I ASK FOR? ,he joked playfully. Manyata laughed through her tears. You gonna pay for saying that Mr Singh! Just tell me when and where, he winked.

...Manyata saying that Mr Singh will pay...was just a joke!

Paragraph 3 in chapter 2.3:

...Uday asks what he'll pay...there, he was just teasing Manyata, not really expecting her to answer...but, she did (although she was joking)...of course, her joke back-fired on her and he DELIVERED on it in the bathroom. 😳

Manyata whispered a single word to him...the word was : CUNNILINGUS.

...If u didn't know what it means...I'M SURE U KNOW NOW!!!

...I did have that word in the update, but I decided to edit it...I didn't want to give everyone a new word to add to their vocabulary...

HOPE THAT ANSWERED YOUR QUESTION!!!

oh i get the point

CUNNILINGUS. i knew what that meant but u did not use it in the actual update so i wondered what the word would be i thought ti was a manyata giving uday oral pleasure or something

thanks for solving my doubt

Good!

I didn't want to put in that word...in case somebody didn't know what it meant...and if they asked me to explain...I WOULD JUST DIE!!!...but now if anybody asks...I'll refer them here 😆😆😆

Manyata giving Uday oral pleasure...GOOD IDEA...CAN I USE IT???

of course u can navi

i would love to read that

in the next chapter u can write

manveer honeymoon

2 weeks only on bed😳

Thanx Saira.

OH GOD...If I write about their 2 week honey-moon in bed,

...I'LL NEED 2 WEEK BED-REST 😆

In fact...I have something more interesting in mind

...& I know U WILL LOVE IT!!! 😃

It will come after the next 3 parts...HOPE U'LL STILL BE INTERESTED !!!

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757315

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#308

Originally posted by: ...navina...

oh i get the point

CUNNILINGUS. i knew what that meant but u did not use it in the actual update so i wondered what the word would be i thought ti was a manyata giving uday oral pleasure or something

thanks for solving my doubt

Good!

I didn't want to put in that word...in case somebody didn't know what it meant...and if they asked me to explain...I WOULD JUST DIE!!!...but now if anybody asks...I'll refer them here 😆😆😆

Manyata giving Uday oral pleasure...GOOD IDEA...CAN I USE IT???

of course u can navi

i would love to read that

in the next chapter u can write

manveer honeymoon

2 weeks only on bed😳

Thanx Saira.

OH GOD...If I write about their 2 week honey-moon in bed,

...I'LL NEED 2 WEEK BED-REST 😆

In fact...I have something more interesting in mind

...& I know U WILL LOVE IT!!! 😃

It will come after the next 3 parts...HOPE U'LL STILL BE INTERESTED !!!

something interesting

what will that be

if i will love it then it must be in the romance genre

of course i will be interested u are such a fab writer

please update soon

i know u must have figured out what will be next😛

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NAVINA

@HunsraJ

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#309

Originally posted by: vampire12345678

Good!

I didn't want to put in that word...in case somebody didn't know what it meant...and if they asked me to explain...I WOULD JUST DIE!!!...but now if anybody asks...I'll refer them here 😆😆😆

Manyata giving Uday oral pleasure...GOOD IDEA...CAN I USE IT???

of course u can navi

i would love to read that

in the next chapter u can write

manveer honeymoon

2 weeks only on bed😳

Thanx Saira.

OH GOD...If I write about their 2 week honey-moon in bed,

...I'LL NEED 2 WEEK BED-REST 😆

In fact...I have something more interesting in mind

...& I know U WILL LOVE IT!!! 😃

It will come after the next 3 parts...HOPE U'LL STILL BE INTERESTED !!!

something interesting

what will that be

if i will love it then it must be in the romance genre

of course i will be interested u are such a fab writer

please update soon

i know u must have figured out what will be next😛

Nope...not romance genre!

It's in the EROTICA genre !!!

Yeah...finally got some ideas on upcoming plots:

...next is ...A TRIP TO JAIGARH

...then...A MARRIAGE OF CONVENIENCE

...after that...A NIGHT TO REMEMBER 😉

Thanx 4 calling me a fab writer

...U DO WONDERS FOR MY EGO!!!

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757315

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#310

Originally posted by: ...navina...

of course u can navi

i would love to read that

in the next chapter u can write

manveer honeymoon

2 weeks only on bed😳

Thanx Saira.

OH GOD...If I write about their 2 week honey-moon in bed,

...I'LL NEED 2 WEEK BED-REST 😆

In fact...I have something more interesting in mind

...& I know U WILL LOVE IT!!! 😃

It will come after the next 3 parts...HOPE U'LL STILL BE INTERESTED !!!

something interesting

what will that be

if i will love it then it must be in the romance genre

of course i will be interested u are such a fab writer

please update soon

i know u must have figured out what will be next😛