MANVEER FF : The journey of a wife... (Book 1) - Page 30

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ...navina...

Thank u Saira (FOR ALL 11 COMPLIMENTS)
Thank God u liked it...Had to dedicate it to my best friend😉
Yeah...we better not talk anything more about the ahem-ahem scenes,
...I don't want to start blushing again!
...so, u also remember the invisible nighty part...(you would have done a better job...for sure).
I gave Jai, what she deserved...but ,there are some readers feeling sorry for her 😭...I think I have to get her treated quickly😆
I'll update when I recover from this 1...it took a lot out of me!
U ARE MOST WELCOME!!!
LOVE YOU 2 SWEETY!!!

no u used it super nicely(the idea)
if i would have used it then things would go out of control😆\J deserves this i hope to see her mental for some more time
and i forgot to ask u some thing when commenting earlier
K
there is this part when manyata tells uday some thing in his eyes and he gets shocked
pleease tell me what did she say
if it not apportiate for some readers and please pm me
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Posted: 13 years ago
woah finally pura update padne ka mauka
the ahem ahem was 😳😳😳...

J 's condition is pitiable but considering de
things she did and cud hav done 2 M i
personally dont pity her tat much

gr8 update
cont soon and thanks 4 de PM
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: adorable_rana

Woaahhh Navi dear...It was super electrifying and sparky...ahem ahem☺️☺️☺️

I don't more words to say...☺️ ☺️😆

and what happened to J...is she gone mad😆

Thanx for the pm dear and update soon🤗

whats next now

🤗

Thanx Ruba...U really think so???
I know what u mean...after that update...I'm also wordless😆
Jai has gone off the deep end...hope u aren't sad about it!
Welcome!
Good question...Do u have any ideas???
🤗 SAME TO U DEAR!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: zinayrules

WOW...
how passionate love it navina very very nice update love the manveer scenes...
jay in mental asylum...thats better for that phsyco...lol
thanks for pm...update soon...!

U really think so???
Thank you!
...so glad u agree with me.
Welcome.
THANX 4 COMMENTING!!!

Originally posted by: Shals9

Loving the update, nok-jhok, Uday's chedkaani, manyata's naughtyness!! Superb update! Pls update asap! Ufff yeh guests!! Simply hate them!

Thanx Shalini...
The programme never showed us Manveer after-marriage scenes 😭...I wrote these parts as I imagined it would be...THIS IS MY DREAM!!! 😳
I also hate when guests arrive unannounced...😡
& then don't know when to say Good-bye!
THANK U FOR COMMENTING!!!

Originally posted by: Fantasyangel

whom u r talking abt guys?

😕

Originally posted by: pmpm1

Loved the Manveer scenes. And although I hate J, I felt sad for her in this update.😭 I wish she had changed for the better and found true love herself instead of ending up in an assylum.

I'm so glad...I had to put in a lot of effort into it.
I also felt sad for Jai...but I can only deal with 1 villain at a time and the main villain is on his way ...that's why I sent Jai away to the mental-institute.
THANX 4 COMMENTING!!!

Originally posted by: milhan

i am in luv wd ur ff! its awsom!...:D plz pm me the next tym

I'm also in love with it😆.
Thank u Dear.
I'll add u to my PM list...no problem!
THANX 4 YOUR COMMENT!!!

Originally posted by: Hawa.Hawai

Oh no again updating.Navi dear meri beemari lag gayi kya tumhe???Pliz cont soon...
RES

...Haan Swini...tumhari bimari bohot contagious he 😆

Originally posted by: hemvb

mindblowing update!!!!!!!!!!!! love maanveer's chemistry but feel bad for J...do continue soon :P

Thank u!!! Manveer is a very electrifying couple...
...Don't worry about Jai, WE ALL NEED A BREAK FROM HER!!!
...Will continue when I get some new ideas.😆
Edited by ...navina... - 12 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Navina yot are amazing writer ur ff ix epic!
I read all the parts and trust i loved it to the core do update s0on n do pm me:)
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: vampire12345678

no u used it super nicely(the idea)
if i would have used it then things would go out of control😆\J deserves this i hope to see her mental for some more time
and i forgot to ask u some thing when commenting earlier
K
there is this part when manyata tells uday some thing in his eyes and he gets shocked
pleease tell me what did she say
if it not apportiate for some readers and please pm me

Glad u think so(about the idea).
Out of Control...WE LIKE😉
Jai will be there for a while...I NEEDED A BREAK FROM HER 😆
ABOUT YOUR QUERY:
Okay...Let me try to explain:
Chapter 2.2 ended with this:
Manyata cried and Uday consoled her. I'm sorry Uday. The party was a disaster... No Princess- don't apologise! It was MOST ENTERTAINING. I enjoyed it: 2 gorgeous girls fighting over me! WHAT MORE CAN I ASK FOR? ,he joked playfully. Manyata laughed through her tears. You gonna pay for saying that Mr Singh! Just tell me when and where, he winked.
...Manyata saying that Mr Singh will pay...was just a joke!
Paragraph 3 in chapter 2.3:
...Uday asks what he'll pay...there, he was just teasing Manyata, not really expecting her to answer...but, she did (although she was joking)...of course, her joke back-fired on her and he DELIVERED on it in the bathroom. 😳
Manyata whispered a single word to him...the word was : CUNNILINGUS.
...If u didn't know what it means...I'M SURE U KNOW NOW!!!
...I did have that word in the update, but I decided to edit it...I didn't want to give everyone a new word to add to their vocabulary...
HOPE THAT ANSWERED YOUR QUESTION!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ...navina...

Glad u think so(about the idea).
Out of Control...WE LIKE😉
Jai will be there for a while...I NEEDED A BREAK FROM HER 😆
ABOUT YOUR QUERY:
Okay...Let me try to explain:
Chapter 2.2 ended with this:
Manyata cried and Uday consoled her. I'm sorry Uday. The party was a disaster... No Princess- don't apologise! It was MOST ENTERTAINING. I enjoyed it: 2 gorgeous girls fighting over me! WHAT MORE CAN I ASK FOR? ,he joked playfully. Manyata laughed through her tears. You gonna pay for saying that Mr Singh! Just tell me when and where, he winked.
...Manyata saying that Mr Singh will pay...was just a joke!
Paragraph 3 in chapter 2.3:
...Uday asks what he'll pay...there, he was just teasing Manyata, not really expecting her to answer...but, she did (although she was joking)...of course, her joke back-fired on her and he DELIVERED on it in the bathroom. 😳
Manyata whispered a single word to him...the word was : CUNNILINGUS.
...If u didn't know what it means...I'M SURE U KNOW NOW!!!
...I did have that word in the update, but I decided to edit it...I didn't want to give everyone a new word to add to their vocabulary...
HOPE THAT ANSWERED YOUR QUESTION!!!


oh i get the point
CUNNILINGUS. i knew what that meant but u did not use it in the actual update so i wondered what the word would be i thought ti was a manyata giving uday oral pleasure or something
thanks for solving my doubt
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Posted: 13 years ago
HOT HOT HOT!!! Now that was really hot
Navina baby muahh :* you made my day
By updating i was feeling so low today
Now you made me so happy 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Glad u think so(about the idea).
Out of Control...WE LIKE😉
Jai will be there for a while...I NEEDED A BREAK FROM HER 😆
ABOUT YOUR QUERY:
Okay...Let me try to explain:
Chapter 2.2 ended with this:
Manyata cried and Uday consoled her. I'm sorry Uday. The party was a disaster... No Princess- don't apologise! It was MOST ENTERTAINING. I enjoyed it: 2 gorgeous girls fighting over me! WHAT MORE CAN I ASK FOR? ,he joked playfully. Manyata laughed through her tears. You gonna pay for saying that Mr Singh! Just tell me when and where, he winked.
...Manyata saying that Mr Singh will pay...was just a joke!
Paragraph 3 in chapter 2.3:
...Uday asks what he'll pay...there, he was just teasing Manyata, not really expecting her to answer...but, she did (although she was joking)...of course, her joke back-fired on her and he DELIVERED on it in the bathroom. 😳
Manyata whispered a single word to him...the word was : CUNNILINGUS.
...If u didn't know what it means...I'M SURE U KNOW NOW!!!
...I did have that word in the update, but I decided to edit it...I didn't want to give everyone a new word to add to their vocabulary...
HOPE THAT ANSWERED YOUR QUESTION!!!

oh i get the point
CUNNILINGUS. i knew what that meant but u did not use it in the actual update so i wondered what the word would be i thought ti was a manyata giving uday oral pleasure or something
thanks for solving my doubt
Good!
I didn't want to put in that word...in case somebody didn't know what it meant...and if they asked me to explain...I WOULD JUST DIE!!!...but now if anybody asks...I'll refer them here 😆😆😆
Manyata giving Uday oral pleasure...GOOD IDEA...CAN I USE IT???
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: AndreaBaid

HOT HOT HOT!!! Now that was really hot
Navina baby muahh :* you made my day
By updating i was feeling so low today
Now you made me so happy 😊

Thanx Andrea...coming from u - it's a huge compliment!
...And u just made mine!!!
GLAD I COULD HELP...
Edited by ...navina... - 13 years ago

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