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Posted: 13 years ago

Manveer ss.
Two HEART:that BEAT as One.:-)
Part-18th
Jagat'o sun lal mirchi tere papa
ko kuch ni hoga..
Manyata'lekin wo khana ni kha rhe
h,unko weaknes ho jayegi.
Uday'hm khana khila ayenge,
Manyata'keise?
Uday naugtynes'phle tum btao
keise khilati ho?
Manyata'chamch se,weise wo
apne hatho se jyada khate h.
Uday jagat launghng'oye ye bi bta
chamch kise pkdti h.
Manyata'apne muh se gadho hath
se pkdti hu...ye to sb ko pta hota
h.
Jagat'oye hoye mujhe lga muh se
chamch pkdti h or tb khana khilati
h..
Uday'o mujhe ye lga ki chamch
pair se pkdti h.
Manyata'oye uday,tu kya apne
papa ko aise khana khilata h kya?
Uday uske pas jata h'o g wo kya h
na jo aapke papa kbi kbi khana
apne hatho se khate h,wo mere
papa roj krte h..ha ni to..
Manyata tightly bolti h uska coler
pkd k'mere papa bi roj apne hatho
se khate h.smjha tu...piche hat
mujhse.
Uday'o g man to ni kr rha h dur
jane ka pr,coller chod doge to
chala jaunga...
Manyata'tu na ek nu.ka.
Jagat'jhkaas h.arey main apne
bhai k baare me sb janta gu
mujhse puch le..
Suddn'akash knock d
door'drwaaza khol jagat.
Unanti darwaaza kholti h'jaldi
ander aao..
Jagat'oye hoye kya bat h akash
kya hua itna dra kyn h.
Akash'arey yar tum had krte
ho,raste me wo jeet k kuch
aadmi mil gye mujhe,dra rhe the
chodge ni..
Uday'or tu dar gya gadha,bolna
tha na uday jagat ko bula
dunga.apne aap bhaag jate.
Akash'arey maine kha ki,main
manyata ko bta dunga,tb
bhaagte-2 ruk gye...
Sb manyata ki trf dekhte h.
M'kya h?
jagat'oye tu to apni dhasat bna ri
h..
Uday'knife leke daray To sb dar
jayege..aacha hua hmne talwar ni
nikali...
Manyata'hoti tb to nikalta...ha ni
to...
Akash'hai to
Jagat'akash aja main tujhe
sikhata hu kaun si bat kha bolni
h..'
Akash'ha chal bhai.
Uday'ye akash bi na dimag ka
bhoot tej h,gadha.
Manyata'ha tumhara dimag hi to
bhoot birilient h na...pagl.
Uday'or tum pagali..ha ni to.bhul
gai..pagla-pagli..
Manyata'gadha tu...
In nyt sb soye h..
Lekin manyata window k pas
khadi h,or chand ko dekh ri h..
Ekdum se uday jagata h,to wo
dekhta h,chand ki roshni me wo
or khubsurat lg ri h...
Uday cusion ko hug krke use
dekhta h..
He thout'haaye..chand ki
khubsurti me to or khil ri h...
Manyata bilinkg eyes with smile..
Uday leita h use dekh rha h'yar ye
ek din jan lelegi,bolne me tej
h..lekin masum bhoot h bache ki
trh..njre htane ka man ni kr rha
h...
Phr achanak manyata bckturn
hoti h,to uday jaldi se aankhe bnd
krleta h...
Manyata uday ko dekhti h,'phr wo
uske chahre ko dekhti h..
She thout'tu sote huye peace ful
lgta h,jga hota h,to din bhar ldai
krta rhta h..lekin aacha lgta h...'
Manyata phr searious sochti h,sb
soye h,main window se utar k
apne ghr bhaag jati hu...
To wo apni chunni muh pe bandhti
h..or window se utrti h.
Uday phr aankhe kholta h,to wo
dekhta h..wo window se utar ri h...
Manyata jb utrti h,to piche mudke
uday ko dekhti h...
'jaane ka man ni kr rha h,pr papag
ka khyal aa rha h bar bar'
Uday'ye kha ja ri h?jrur bhaag ri
h...
Manyata ka pair ekdum se means
uska balance bigdta h,wo gir jati
h,or chilati h aa..aa..
Uday jaldi se uthata H..jagat bi'oye
ye keisi awaaz thi...
Uday khidki ki trf jake dekhta
h'manyata giri h.
Uday'ye manyata bi na,khidki se
bhaag ri thi,niche giri pdi h.
Jagat'o teri..bhai ye bdi ziddi type
h...arey preshan mt ho na,hm
pkad lenge chal.
Uday'isko fever h,weakness
h,isko samjhana bda muskil kam
h..chinta uski bi h,or jha giri h wha
ki zameen ki bi.
Jagat'arey ha.
Tbi,gr'oye kaun gunda ghr me
gusa h.talwar la meri.
Oye maya lyt chalu kr.jaldi.koi
chor h...
Jagat'o,ye to kbi sota hi ni h,jb
dekho taiyar rhta h...
Uday'main bahr jata hu,tu window
k pas khayal rkh.
Jagat'o aram se jaiyo,wo talwar
tere pe na chla de..
Udhr manyata giri h to usko pair
me chot lg gai
h...'haayee,rabba,ab kya kru,ye to
saare gunde jg gye.or mera pair
bhaag bi ni skti...
To gr apne rum se talwar leke
bahr niklte h,or lyt on krne jate h.
Tbi piche se uday'o papag talwar
mujhe do,or lyt bad me on
krna,or sidha face kiye
hue,talwar gr se leke chla jata h.
Gr'oye jagat aaram se,dekh koi
nuksaan na ho...chor ko pkad k la..
Maya'lyt to on kro...
Phr wo lyt on kr deti h...
Manyata dhire-2 drd hota h use
phr bi uthti h...
Or jane lgti h...
Tbi 2gunde'oye kudi kaun h tu yha
ki kr ri h..
Manyata dar jati h..wo bck turn
hone wali hoti h,tbi unke piche
uday aake un 2gundo ka muh bnd
krdeta h,or talwar se unhe marke
faint krke manyata k
pas,manyata ne bi chunni se apna
face cover kiya h,uday ne bi ek
kapde se apna face cover kiya h..
Uday uske pas aata h,or uske gle
pe talwar rkhta h,manyata feard
eyes nd uday angry eyes k 7th
unka eye Contct ho rha h...
Manyata'mein wo.
Uday'wo talwar uske gle me
gusaye ja rha h,or uske kareeb
aya ja rha h...
Manyata ne dar k uday ki waist se
tightly uski shrt pkdi h..or uday ne
ek hath me sword pkda h,or
dusre hath wall se touch kr rkha
h..
Gr'oye,jagat kha gya tu,chor
mila...kya?
Manyata or dar jati h..lekin uday
use cntinuos dekh rha h..
To jagat piche se aata h bolta
h'idhr kya kr rhe ho,chor udhr
h.chalo.
Wo phr gr ko leke chla jata h..
Or phr manyata'main wapis rum
me jati hu..
To wo ghabra k uday ko dhakka
deti h..or window pe carefuly
chane lgti h.. Lekin phr uska
bl.bigdta h,or gir jati h,to use uday
catch krleta h...
Uday'mujhe pta h tu bhoot smart
h,pr itna smart bnna bi thik ni..
Manyata dar ri h uski dhadkne tej
ho ri h..
To uday use arm pe pic up krke le
jata h,
Jagat'o papag aapke rum me koi
h.
Maya'haayee.
Jgt'arey jaldi dekho na jake,wo aa
rhe h.
Gr:kaun aa rha h?
Jagat'arey idhr hi khade ho,rum
me jao.
Wo 3no jate h.
To jagat baahr niklt jata h,gr or
maya ko rum me bnd krdeta h.
'so jao,koi chor ni tha.gud nyt..
Tbi uday manyata ko leke aata
h,both r eyecntct..
Jagat'arey nain milan bad me
krna,chalo jaldi rum me...
To wo 3no rum me jate h..
Uday use bad pe fall on krta h,or
uski chunni remove krta h.
'tumhein meri bat smjh ni aati
kya?maine kha tha,ki tum jb thik
ho jaogi,tb chali jana,bhagne k
chakker me apna pair ko chot
phucha di..ab jana or muskil
hogya.
Manyata chup h...
Uday shout'ab chup kyn ho?
Manyata'mera suit bi fat gya,pair
me bi chot lg gai,or uper se
talwar leke Mujhpe swar the,or
uper se papag ne or dra diya,un
2gundo ne bi dra diya..ha ni to.
Uday phr shocked hoke jagat ko
dekhta h.
Jagat'bat to shi kh ri h..dr gai h
bechari...
Manyata'oye bechari hoga
tu..smjha..main apne risk k bhaagi
thi.ha ni to.
Uday'ye bechari ni bechara h.or
tum risk mt liya kr,uska natiza
hmesha bura hota h.tumhare liye
to hota hi h,hmare liye bi hota h.
Jagat'bat me point to h...
Manyata apne pair ko dekh ri
h,use drd ho rha h..
To uday bndage box leke aata h
Or uska pair pkdta h,or bndage
krne lgta h.
'tum itni ziddi kyn ho?jo bat khta
hu smjha kro,fayede me rhegi..ha
ni to.
Manyata'tubi km ziddi ni h,mujhe
jaana h apne papa k ghr..plz.ab
wha sb thik h...
Uday'thik h main tumhein kal chod
dunga..lekin rat ko...
Manyata thout'mujhe lga phr
daatega pr ye to shant ho gya...'
Uday chat pe chla jata h,jagat bi
aata h.
'bhai,tu chinta mt kr,kal use
phucha denge..
Uday face niche krke khda h,jagat
'bhai meri trf..
He s little cryng.
Jagat'arey,tujhe aachi trh pta
h,tujhe aise ni dekh skta..kya
hua?
Uday'jagat,mera man ni h use
jaane dene ka...
Jagat use hug krta h'bs tu chinta
mt kr ro mt sb thik ho jayega...
Jagat'weise shi kh rha h,uske 7th
hmari sharate or mst ho jati h...
Are jha hm dono wha kuch
impossible ni h..
Uday'ha,chal niche...
Manyata talk jay
'jay papag ne khana khaya..
Jay'ni di,wo to aapki rat lgaye
beithe h...
Manyata'main kal aajaungi,rat
tk..tb tk tu sambhal le...
Jay'g di...main rkhti hu,cal kal bat
krti hu...
Uday-jagat aate h.manyata phone
rkhti h..
Uday kuch ni Bolta chup-chap jake
so jata h...
Manyata'jagat se dhire se bolti h
'ay haddi,tera bhai shant aacha ni
lgta.
Jagat'or use tum hr ada me
pasnd ho...
Wo bolke chala jata h..
Manyata'ye kya bolke gya..?
Continue
Pari
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey Pari 🤗, usse tum har ada mein pasand ho! wow so cute 😳, par gadhi ko abhi tak samaj mein nahi aya hoga .
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Posted: 13 years ago
@chitra darlng
manyata h na dimag ki loose.
Original me shuru se uday k pyar ko smjhte-2 hmara show hi end krdiya.lol

pari
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Posted: 13 years ago
hi Pari dear Nia yaad haina.So did u miss me.I missed u alot:)Ok now back 2 the update.Awesome update yaar.So cute awww.N Uv n M sword scene waz so so so cute.I like the bonnding between two brothers yaar.N the last scene haye idiot M samajh hhi nahi sakti kya?Love it 2 the core.n happy friendship day my kamini 🤗
Edited by princessnia - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
yes i remember u.
Kamine logo ko main bhulti ni hu.
Tu mujhe bhul gai h.ab to mere ss bi aache ni lgte tujhe..
Ha ni to

same 2 u my kamini @nia.

Pari
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: maneet..

yes i remember u.
Kamine logo ko main bhulti ni hu.
Tu mujhe bhul gai h.ab to mere ss bi aache ni lgte tujhe..
Ha ni to

same 2 u my kamini @nia.

Pari


oyee kisney kaha mujhey teri ss achey nahi lagtey ha?jara uska naam bol.abhi uski hospital ki ticket katwati ho.n agar tuney kaha haina yeh toh Pari teri toh kheir nahi.tuna jada antaryami mat ban.yupp i dont like ur ss beacouse i love ur ss samjhi.apney dimaag main yeh baat gusa deh.
Edited by princessnia - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
I LOVE JAGAT IN THIS SS⭐️, KYA CHARACTERIATION HAI USKA.😆 I LOVE HIM YAAR.😉
UV IN LOVE WITH MANYATA.❤️
THANKS FOR THE BRILLIANT UPDATE.😛
THIS SS IS SUCH A RELIEF FOR ME FROM ALL THE TENSIONS, A FUNNY & CUTE SS.👏
LOVE IT.😊
GREAT JOB.👍🏼 👍🏼
🤗 🤗

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Posted: 13 years ago
it was a brilliant update
u wrote always so well with so much regularity
loved it cont soon :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
this was so LOL .
M gets hurt in de process of running away
GR is disturbed and goes after de gundas but UV takes de sword 4m him

he caries M to deir room
and him crying was a lil sad

he shud confess his feelings
i lyk de nicknames in ur ss lal mirch pinky
and M calling Jagat haddi was cute and funny


loved de last line very much
" use tum har ada me pasand ho "

awww hope dey understand deir feelings 4 each other soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Manveer ss.
Two HEART:that BEAT as One.:-)
Part-19th..

Sb beithe h..
Manyata'uday tere se ek bat puchu?
Uday'mna kruga,to bi puchegi puch..
Manyata'tera sbse aacha dost kaun h?ek jagat h mujhe pta h,uske alawa..

Jagat' thank god tuhje pta h..
Uday'phla jagat,dusri hmari dadi..
M'dadi..kha pe h wo?
Jagat-uday'hmare baap se ldai ho gai,wo chali gai...apne ghr.
Un'ha manyata,uday-jagat bhai ki koi bi bat ho wo bina bole inko smjh jati thi ki ye kya chahte h,or wo hmesha hmari hlp krti thi...ha ni to..

Jagat cryng'lekin ab wo aati hi ni...
Uday'oye chup ho ja ldki kb se bn gya.
Jagt'or pta h hm unhe kya bulate the.
M'kya?
3no sath bolte h
'ds..
M'ds means.
3no hste h.
Uday'wo mera diya nam h,'DESI SEXY'.
M'hawww..dadi ko ye nam.
Jagat'hmari dadi ko bhoot aacha lgta h ye,hm to use yhi bulate h..or hmari dadi hmari sbse mst dost h..
M'ghr me koi ni puchta ds kya hota h?
Again all laughng
Uday'hmare liye dsi sexy,ghrwalo k liye 'dadi shaab...
M'tere pas na bda bhaynak dimag h.
U'ha to tere pas bi koi najuk dimag ni h..ha ni to...

Un'manyata tumhara koi bst frnd.
M:main khud,jay nd vijay...or tara..
Jagat'tumhari ds ni h.
Manyata made a kid face'ni..
Uday'aaj ds ko itne dino bad yad dila diya.
Manyata smile'bhule kb the..dil k kreeb jo rhte h,wo dur ni jate kbi..
Uday suddn use dekhta h he thout'lekin tum to ja ri ho.,
Jagat'lekin tu to jaane ko kh ri h.

Sb chup..
Manyata uday ko dekhti h,or uday use inocently dekhta h...

Unanti'main aati hu,manyata aaj dadi ki yad dila di tumne...

Uday bi thoda sad ho Jata h..
Manyata thout'oye uday aise muh mt ltakaya kr aacha ni lgta..'ha ni to...

Jagat'chl manyata taiyar ho ja,jaana h na tujhe..rat hone wali h..

Uday bhoot sad hojata h.
Jagat uske pas aata h'bhai,tu
Uday'chl jagat main ise chod k aata hu...
Jagat'main bi chlta hu.ruk.pinky ko bhoot dino se ni dekha.
Wo 3no phr jate h...

Jagat'o g,aap hmein bhulogi to ni na.
Manyata'ni g,aap jeise jokero ko bhulna muskil h.
Uday'apni phchaan hmein btaya kr.

M'tu to mujhe ni bhulega na.
Jagat'tujhse jyada shaitan mil gai to kya pta bhul bi jaye.
Uday'milegi jrur milegi.
Manyata'oye chup rhe mujhse jyada shaitan koi ni,ha ni to..'

Uday stop d car.
'jaa,tera ghr aa gya,jee bhr khana khilati rh apne baap ko...
Manyata sad hoke utrti h.
Uday sir niche jhukaye beitha h or soch rha h'tumhein jate huye ni dekh skta main ni dekhuga,wo chup chap gadi bck leta h.

Jagat manyata ko bye krta h'o g yad aye to,bta dena..bye

Wo gadi leke jane lgta h,or manyata cntinuoes dekhti h . To uday bhoot dur jake use rha ni jata to piche mudke dekh leta h,to manyata dekh ri hoti h.
To uday hste huye gadi chalane lgta h,o jagat wo ayegi.
Jagat'kaun?
Uday'lal mirchi.
J'kb.
U'wo pta ni lekin wo dubaara ayegi...ha ni to..

Jay'oye di tu aa gai,chl papag ki tbiyet bigad gai h.
M'ha chl,phle ye bta rum me kaun-2 h?
Jay'koi ni..
Wo rum me jate h,wha vijay h.
Vijay'manyata ko dekh k manyata bhai.
M'ek kam kro mike leke chilao,jay ja jaldi khana leke aa...

Manyata jati h br k pas'tbiyet kharab krli na apni...mere se dur hone ki sja h.ha ni to.
Br thodi si apni aankhe kholte h,to manyata unhe dhundli dikhai deti h..wo khush ho jate h.

Manyata phr unhe khana khilati h,dwai bi deti h..or wo restful so jate h..

Manyata roti-2 apne rum me bhaag jati h.
Jay vijay bi aate h..
Jay'thanku di,wo
M'pagl h kya?wo mere papag bi h..

Vijay'to manyata chalo maa se mil lo.
M'ha chal.ni
Wo ruk jati h.
Jay'kya hua?
Manyata apni chunni fold krti h weist pe'main phr se uday k ghr ja ri hu.
Jay'kya?pr
Vijay smile'mujhe pta tha,manyata bhai,ruko main chod deta hu.
Manyata'jaldi,abi wo haddi or pagal phuche ni honge,wo raste me hnge.
Jay'ruko main bi chalugi...
Vijay'gari nikalta h,weise manyata bhai tum dubaara ja kyn ri ho?
Jay'ha achanak kyn?
Manyata'arey main bhoot special hu sbke liye,mujhe yad kr krke sbka bura hal ho gya ho ga.
Jay'pr papag.
M'arey papag dubaar 5-6 din cut jayega,lekin wha to sb marne ki halat me hnge...jaldi chl.unse phle phuchna h.
Vijay'ha ho to tum sbki jan..
Jay'arey shrtcut le na.

Vijay,jay or manyata phuchte h..
M'jay chad k dekh rum me kaun kaun h?
Jay chad k dekhti h,di srf unanti h..

Unanti'arey jay tum uper aja ya whi ltki rhogi,kya hua?
Phr dhire-2 3no aate h..
Un'manyata wapis kyn?
M'arey,mujhe lga mere bina sb ro rhe hnge isliye..wo 2no aye to ni.
Un:abi ni...
M'tere ghr k jyada log is darwaaze se aate h.waah.
'ye tere bhai kb tk ayenge,ruk main dekhti hu..
Wo window k pas dekhne jati h,tbi jay'di,kya tum pure din kamre me rhti ho..
Manyata face bck krke bolti h ni re kbi kbi bahar bi,tbi uday niche dekh rha h,or ekdum se Ander aata h to,manyata k uper halka sa jump krta h,
Manyata chilati h.'aa..aa..aa.
Uday bi'arey..o..o

Then uday manyata ko liye huye zameen pe dono girte h...

Uday shocked...manyata feared expresion..
Uday'meri sakal tere se jyada sunder h,phr hmesha mujhe dekh k chilati kyn h?
Manyata'taki sbko pta chle tu sunder ni bhoot h.
Uday'wapis kyn aai?
Manyata'jis din apni family walo k saamne aajayega,us din main bi chali jaungi...or mujhe lga mere bina kisi ka man ni lgega...
Uday'ye teri gltfahmi h..main to shi slamat hu.
Manyata'koi gltfahmi ni h,weise bi ye tera ghr ni h,maya ka ghr h..ab hat pre.
Uday smile or tightly use pkdta h'such bta kudiye,kyn aai tu wapas?
Manyata'jo bola h wo such h,or tujhe pta chal jayega..

Jagat window k pas aata h or jay ko dekhta h phr girne wala hota h'to vijay use khinc leta h.

Uday-manyata uthte h.
Uday'oye jagat teri pinky tere pas khinchi chali aai h.
Jay'ei,main iske pas ni aai.
Uday'ab to pakka isi k pas aai h.
Jagat'or manyata bhai,kadam bde lambe h aapke,hmse bi jaldi phuch gye..
M'main ldkiyo ki chal ni chalti.
Uday'ldkiyo ki chal chlne k liye ldki hona jruri h,tum to tadka ho.
M'or tu raavan..ha ni to.

Jagat-uday'apne baap ko apne hatho me chamch se khana kila diya..na.
Jay'ha,di ne khila diya..

Maya'jagat,idhr aa kuch kam h?
Jagat'aata hu maa..
Bhai papa ne bi kha tha tujhe leke aane ko to tu aaj sham ko papag k saamne khada ho jaiyo..

Uday remembring manyata words or jagat se dhire se khta h'ni yar,agar saamne aa gya to phr koi yha se chla jayega..
Jagat'o Sachi bhai,chl thik h.koi ni..weise bi mja aata h is khel me...
Uday smile...

Manyata took uday nd thout'teri bekufiya,tere khilkhila k hsna,main mis kr ri thi.ha ni to.isliye wapis aai...'

Akash aata h,ay uday mujhe teri hlp chahiye
U'kya?
Akash'yar plz meri shahdi ho ri h kal ldkiwalo ko dekhne jana h,use tudwa de.
Sb ek dusre ki sakal dekhte h
Phr sb hste h.
Jagat'oye ekdum ryt jgh pe aya h,manyata h na'kyn g kregi.
Manyata'sb 7th doge mera...
To sb bolte h ha..
Jay'wow,phr mja ayega.
Jagat'oye hoye shadi krke dekh or mja ayega.
Jay'kamine,hat yha se..

Manyata'phr se msti.
Uday'phr se ldai.
Un'tu bhaag kyn jata akash.?
Uday'iska baap heartpatient h ye yha bhaaga or wha iske papag gye..
Akash'ryt yar...

Precap-again all fun..

Pari

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