manveer ss: Two HEARTS:that BEAT as ONE...part-64th pg-51 - Page 14

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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey Pari 🤗, again a wonderful update, Manyata phir ghar se bhag gayi aur sedhe Uday ke ghar wapis 🤣🤣, gosh use apne hone wali sasural se kitna pyaar hai, Mayke mein jana hi nahi chahati 🤣🤣.
Gosh all will break akash marriage oosome, add more manveer scenes also in the next update dear. and thanks for the PM.😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update. Thanks for pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
it was awesome pari u wrote brilliantly well
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome please update soon manyata is so funny🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago
Manveer ss.
Two HEART:that BEAT as One.:-)
Part-20th.

Unanti'agr wo ldki sundr hui to..
Jagat'tb to akash krlega shadi...
Akash'or agar bhains hui to.
Uday'to bi kr liyo..patle-moti ki jodi bn jayegi...
All laughng..

A:arey yar mujhe tnsn ho ri h..main kisi or se pyar krta hu
j:oye,such..aye haye btaya bi ni...
Uday'ab bta kaun h wo fuljhadi..
A:arey wo sb main bad me btauga..manyata plz hlp me.
M:arey don't wory kal tumhari shadi tuit jayegi...
Jay'hm keise ayenge?
Jagat'tere pair kya kal fast pe rhenge kya?
Uday'vijay ek phook mar diyo halki si to h,ud k aa jayegi..
All laughng...

Unanti'inhe main le aaungi..
Vijay'done tara ko bi le lenge...
Uday'ha ha jrur or bi logo se puch le,party me ja rha h na...
Vijay'oye,mujhse dur rha kro dono wrna,
jagat'ha malum h,tod dega ya utha k faik dega...krte wrte kuch ho ni...

To vijay ekdum se jagat ko utha leta h
Jgt'oye, ye kya kr rha h..mjak ko searous le lya..
V:ab bol faik du ya tod du..

All laughng..
Tb vijay use utar deta h..
Jgt'arey baap re dum h..
Jay'pta chla ab..ullu khin ka..wo dono chale jate h...


In nxt mrng..
Akash aata h'chalo sb maine jay or vijay ko le aaya hu,wo gadi mein niche hi chod deta hu,tum log aajana.main chlta hu mere papag wait kr rhe h..bye.jaldi aana.

Uday'main or ye lalmirch window se ayenge,tumdono jao tb tk..
Jagat'bhai aram se,chal unanti..

Wo chale jate h.
Uday'utha k faiku kya?utr phle tu..
Manyata'tu kud phle tb utrugi...main.

Uday'tubi kudegi..
M:ha,jaana...

To uday phle jump krta h..
To jgt whi gadi leke Khada h..
Jagat'aja bhai,teri sit khali h..
Uday'ruk ja lal mirchi bi kudegi..
Jagat'oye,hoye catch kroge..chl main smjh gya tu kya chahta h..

To manyata jump krne wali hoti h,tbi jgat bolta h
O teri tere piche maya..
Manyata ekdum se dar jati h,or jump ni krti,gir jati h,to uday use catch krleta h.
'jb jump krna ni aata to ni krna chahiye,mere zameen bch gai..naugty smile.
Manyata'tujhe mujhe catch krne me mja ata h kya?jb dekho hath faila k khada rhta h...
Uday'ni catch krta to gir jati.
M:ni girti..chod
U:chod du.
Manyata'ha..
To uday use chod deta h,to wo girti ni h qki usne uday ki shrt ka coller pkad rkha h..
Uday chid k'mera coller chod,or chal.
Manyata'main ni jaungi..main zameen pe gir jati to,teri zameen ka nuksaan ho jata.
Jagat!ary ld bad me lena,wha akash ro rha hoga..jaldi chalo.
Both r eyecntct.
Manyata naghtynes me h,or uday guse me...
Manyata'main ni jgat agar ye gira deta to mera suit khraab ho jata to...
Jay'di giri to ni na aja...
Manyata uday ko wink krti h..uday ko or gusa dilane k lye...
Jgt'hm late ho rhe h bhai.
To uday manyata ko fastly pick up krta h,or gadi me beith deta h.
Manyata naugtynes say'thanku ullu..
Jagat'ye glt bat h lal mirch ullu mera nam h.
M:arey ha,thanku pagal..
To uday jane lgta h,manyata smile krti h,or uday uski naugtynes pe aage face krke smile krta h...

To wo akash k ghr phuchte h..
Akash's father:uday beta tum sb.ye kudiya kaun h.
Manyata'main manyata akash ki..
A:colge frnd jeise unanti h.
Jgt'uncle g in shrt hm bi jayege,akash k liye ldki psnd krne.
A.f:pr kyn?
Uday'wo kya h na use psnd aagai to wo shadi krlega,agr hmein pasnd aa gai to hm krlenge..
All laghng.
A.f:aacha chalo...
Nd aap beta,u r luking adorable.
M:thanku uncle.
Uday'adorable..manyata se dhire se'fake complment h.
Manyata fake smile'tu kyn chid rha h...

Sb phucte h.
U:ghr to bhoot bda h...
V:bde ghr me item bi bdi rhti h.
J:hmse better koi ni smjhta...chalo..

Phr sb ander aate h...
J:bhai,idhr to saari ptli h...
U:to krle shadi..
J:main to drect ldki dekhunga...

Thodi deir bad,ldki aati h...
She s vry beautiful,means wo gud luking h...

J:muuummmii.
U:yar,ye to bhoot sunder h...
A:ni,tumlog krlo,mujhe ni krni...
V:main krlu.
Tara guse me'chup chap beithe rho,ha ni to...
Manyata'akash mera boyfrnd k liye taiyar rh.
Uday'ni,ni kyn?
M:qki tu mera boyfrnd bnane layek ni h..
U:ha mujhe pta h tu meri gf bnne layek ni h.akash bi ni h..
Uday dhire se'
Akash teri kheir ni,uska hath chd..
M'ni,hm aise hi rhege.tu chup rh uday..ha ni to.

Wo dono whi dhire-2 ld rhe h,or sb unhe dekh rhe h...jitne bi yung h udhr wo sb tightly hs rhe h...
Uday ko ajeeb lgta h.to jagat khta h.
'akash,beta mere pas aa,wo khada hota h...
J:bhai lal mirchi k pas ho,wo uday manyata ki side ho jata h,akash jagat k pas aa jata h.

Manyata'akash mera bf h,use bhej yha.
Uday'wo kb se..
M:gadhe,ldki ko yhi bolna h,shadi tudwani h na..
Uday-jagat-akash shocked...

3no dhire se bolte h
'kmal h abi ek ghanta hua ni ki,dimag chlana start kr diya'...
M:ha,ab akash tu idhar aa..
U:ni,abi jb ldki se milne jayenge tb
Ki,bat h.chup chap rh...
M:ziddi.
U:wo to main hu..

Wo ldki tea lake rkhti h,tb wo akash ko dekhti h.
A:oye uday wo mujhe dekh ri h...
J:ja,aankh fod de uski..
Uday tightly laughng.'oye akash bol mujhe akele me ldki se bat krni h..
A:ni ni,pagal h kya?
Jay'koi ni bat bol wo pta h..
Manyata khadi hoti h'o g,ldke nu demand h ldki se akele me bat krne ki.
Akash dar k'maine kb.
Uday uska muh pkd leta h,kamine chup chap jo ho rha h wo hone de..
Uncle:ha n g jrur,chalo chat pe le chalte h.
Tara'are aap bde bat kro,hm sb hna chle jayenge..
Aunty:g..phr jaiye.kya aap sb jyange?
Jay'koi problem h kya?
Aunty'o ni g.
Vijay'chalo na,wrna bdo ka man bdal jayega..

To phr sb chat pe jate h...
Manyata'o g aapka nam kya
Jgt'akash,tu kya krne aya h?puch na sawal.
A:o g aapka nam kya h?
Grl:g sakshi..
A:chii.
Sb shockd
Sakshi'g chii kya?
A:chiii ni..eii..bda mst nam h..
Uday'nam se aage bdh...

Tbi sakshi ki ek frnd aati h,'arey sakshi,toude dekhne wale aaye h,or tune btaya ni...

Sakshi'aaja,sb yhi h..o g ye meri frned dolly h.
Uday,jagat nd unanti shockd...
Wo piche mudke dekhte h to whi dolly h jiski shadi uday se hone wali thi...
Wo 3no dekh k suddn bck face krlete h...
Unanti'main main paani pike aati hu..
Wo chali jati h.
U:unanti to bch gai..

Dolly'sb se mil li main,aap dono kyn muh chupa rhe ho aap..
Uday'dekh k dar jaoge g..
D:ni g,aisa kuch ni hoga.
J:arey ni dregi to drane layek bna degi tu..
D:arey aisa kuch ni hoga g.
Manyata'dolly g ye dono bde nautanki baaz h ruko.
Manyata dono ka bckcoler pkdti h,or unka Face aage krti h..
Dolly shocked'haayee rabaa tu..
J:aap jante ho inhe.

Uday'itne anokhe chahre ko keise bhul skti hu..
Manyata'kaun h ye?

Tb uday saari bat btata h...
Manyata'oye hoge tubi apni shadi se bhaaga tha,btaya ni tune.
U:to tune bi to bhoot bad me btaya tha.
M:lekin maine bta to diya tha.
U:main bhul gya tha..
Again manveer fight..
Tara'arey chup,tum dono apni kyn shuru kr dete ho hr jagh..'

Sakshi'akash g aap mujhe pasnd ho..
Akash'pr ye meri grlfrnd h,main main ise shadi krunga.
M:ha ni to..

Doly'jha ye h na wha to koi shadi ho ni skti.
Uday'hang ye bat to shi boli...
S:niche kya bolege..
M:wo hmpe chod do,hm smbhal lenge...

Dolly and sakshi cnfusd.

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Pari
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hillarious update PaRI !!
u had me cracking

whn Uday caught Manyata
hai rabba me mar java

beautifully written
Akash loves sum1
hope its not Manyata
agar vo ho gabad ho jayegi
i hope its Tara

manna padega M ke dimag ko
wah wah

ab pata nahi kya plan hai shadu tudvane ka

very vel written Pari

and thanks 4 de PM
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update dear loved it :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
Superb update Pari.👏 Read both the parts 19 & 20.😊
Too good. I loved it.😛
It was so funny.😆 I love all the characters in this SS.😳
Thanks for the update & PM.😉
Love you.🤗 🤗

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Posted: 13 years ago
Manveer ss.
Two HEART:that BEAT as One.:-)
Part-21
Dolly'akash g aap to inke jeise ni
lgte..kya such me aap is ldki se
pyar krte h..
Uday'lo doly g akash ldka h to ldki
se hi pyar...
Dolly'aap to mujhse gal kro mt..
Akash'o g,pyar bta k thode
hota,bs ho jata h..
Manyata'ha ye bi shi kh rha h...
Sakshi'aapko keise hua?
A:wo to ni pta g.
Uday'is ghanchakker ko to kuch
pta hi ni.
Dolly'aapko bda pta h,pyar-wyar
aapke bs ka kha..
Uday'pyar,o g ye bat to shi h,ye
kb keise kyn hota h,ye pta ni
chlta..lekin hm jiski khushi dekh k
khush hote h,jise bole bina chain
ni milta,usko dukh ho to wo hmein
feel hota h.pyar wo h g...
D:oye sakshi inki baatoin pe mt
ja,kuch bi kr skte h ye..filmi dia.
Manyata'of oh,uday ye kya prem
ki baatein leke beith gya,tum
dono btao,ye shadi krne k liye
mna krdegi na tu...
D:ye mna ni kregi..tum log kuch
aisa kro ki meri sakshi tumhare
ghr me na jaye
Uday'ha laana kaun chahta h.
D:kya?
Manyata sharart kri h'ha uday
puri bat bola kr,muh me mt bola
kr ha ni to.
Uday irritate hota h'tu na chup rh
wrna tujhe uthake faike dunga.
Jagat'ye cheetng h,ye manyata
ka dialoge h.
Uday arey'ha,jyada mt bol
wrna,tere muh seal krdung.
Manyata'ja na,hat bnder.
Uday'hmara nya nam bnder
manyata bndriya.
Bnder-bndriya.
Manyata'hawww.tu na wo use bck
pe marti h.
Uday bi marta h.
Doly'weise lg ni rha akash g,ki aap
ki gf h...
Pyar to uday-manyata k bich me
lg rha h...
Uday-manyata stop fightng.nd
both r eye cntct.
Jagat'oye hoye,bat to pte ki h.
Jay'o tu chup rh jb dekho bak bak
krta rhta h.
Manyata'Eii..iske 7th pyar,ye to
dushman bnne layek bi ni h.
Dolly g lucky ho shadi ni hui.
Uday'lucky ye ni main hu..ha ni to.
S:o g weise mere dolly me
problem kya thi jo,aap bhaag gye.
J:o g kuch ni,bs bhai ne socha
shadi se bhaag k dekhu keisa lgta
h,or kuch ni.
Uday nd jagat laughng.
Dolly'waah..kya tarika h.mard h ki
ni h
Uday'oye,jyada mt bol,sun ek to
tera kamre jeisi body,uper se
main najuk,mujhe tu pasnd ni aai
thi,tuhi mujhe dekh k machliyo ki
trh bhaagi thi,
'ha papag mujhe ldka pasnd h.
Mujhse kisi ne bi ni pucha,or kya
krta phr..
Manyata'haayee rabba jhuth hi bol
deta,ldki bura maan gai..
Jagat'ha jha mard hone pe sawal
uthe or hm chup rhe waah..
Akash'o jaldi ye shadi
tudwao,apna bad pe clr krna..
Manyata'ha thik h,main iski gf hu.
Uday-jagat'to kya kre aarti
utare,niche to chalo.
Uday'doly g hurt krne ka mood ni
tha mera,pr aapne baat hi aisi boli
ki..chado.sry.
Wo bolke chala jata h.
Manyata smile krti h'dolly g bnda
aacha h,dil ka bura ni h.lekin ab
bura bnaoge to wo to bnega hi
na...chale..
Wo bi chalte h..
Jagat'bhai mst jwab diya.
Uday'arey ye bar-2 manyata main
gf hu bol ri h menu aacha ni lg rha
h...isko kya h?
To dono ekdusre ko dekhte h or
bolte h'grlfrnd change krdete h...
J:lekin kisko?
U:tara..
J:aye haaye..chl.
Akash father'or beta ldki pasnd
aai.
Uday'ha mujhe to pasnd aai,or
akash se puch lo...
Jagat'mujhe ni lgta akash ko uske
aage koi aachi lgegi.
Sakshi mother:kiske aage beta.?
Manyata'mere aage aunty.
Uday-jagat shocked.
Uday'tu such me bndriya h.
M'jyada mt bol.chup chap jo Ho
rha h hone de..ha ni to.
Jagat-uday hit manyata bck'kya
mjak krti h.
Jaga'ye ni h wo uncle..
Uday'ha wo to koi or kudi h.
Sb youngstar surprized h,or bde
bi cnfused h ki ye kya bolege.
Dolly'to kaun h?
Manyata bdi aankhe krke'ye kya
kr rhe ho?
Akash'itni
Jaldi keise bdal gai.
A.F:kaun h wo akash?
A:arey baap re uday bolna..kya
bolu.
Uday'uncle ye dar rha h'wo ldki
tara h...
Sb shockd..
Manyata'ye kb bni,gf to main thi
Jagat'tu thi whi to problem thi
na...
Saare
akash,uday,jagat,jay,vijay,tara,unanti,manyata..sb
colect hoke dhire-2 bol rhe h..
Jay'di thi to,kya problem thi.?
Vijay'hmein kyn ni btaya?
Unanti'bdali kyn?
Akash'meri shadi tuit jani chahiye.
Tara'main iski gf ni bnugi..
Manyata'tum log apna dimag mt
chlaya kro,ab aage...kya
Uday'ay lal mirchi muh bnd rkh
apna.tum sb
M:ni phle tu ye bta gf kyn change
ki?
Jay'of oh di ye bad me puch lena...
M:ni phle mera swal ka jwab.
J:ary tu iski gf bnke ghum ri thi
kisiko aacha ni lg rha tha..ab chup
ho ja.
Manyata dhire se'kisko?
Jagat'ghr chal tb btauga,bhai
bolna.
To uday sbko samjhata h,or
manyata use cntinuos dekh ri h.
Use lg rha h ki uday ko hi bura lg
rha hoga...
Jb uday bolta h to to uska man bi
divert ho rha tha,bar-2 apni njro
ko manyata se bcha rha tha..
Jay'aacha plan h.
Jagat'ha to tere se kisi ne pucha.
Akash.father'ye kya jhund bnake
baatein kr rhe ho,akash phle kyn
ni btaya tara teri gf h..
Akash's mother'beta phle bta
deta hm phr yha aate hi ni...
Akash'wo mujhe to khud pta ni
Uday pinch akash'kamine chup rh..
Jagat'o uncle g,sakshi To bhoot
sunder h unko to koi bi munda mil
jayega...
Sakshi'father'ek min.o uday beta
teri shadi ho gai..
Uday hsta h'o na g abi to kuwara
hu..
S.f:o to tu krle meri beti se shadi..
All shocked..
Manyata'kya?kyn?
Dolly'ni ni ise to bilkul bi ni.
S.f:kyn?doly beta.
D:wo isme mere
Manyata jaldi'chup kr wha wo
jagat khada dikha usse ni puch
skte the.
S.f:arey ni,wo apni beti sakshi ko
uday k 7th lake khada krte
h,dekho kitni shoni jodi.
Uday'ni koi shodi jodi ni lg ri uncle g
main to...kisi or
Jagat'arey hm ldke sikke h kya jb
bdal diya,wo uday ka hath pkdta
h,or bolta h,bhai abi shadi ni krna
chahte,or weise bi jodi jb jiske 7th
bnani hoti h bn jayegi.ha ni to.
Jagat uday ko manyata k 7th
khada krta h...
Or is bat ko srf uday notice krta
h.or wo phr jgat ko wink krta h...
Manyata'ha sakshi bhoot pyari h
koi na koi mil jayega..
Akash'f:ye ho kya rha h?akash k
lye ldki dekhne aye the.
Akash'mother'lekin main kya kh ri
hu,tara bi bdi pyari h,akash k liye..
Akash'father:g kh to shi rhe
ho.hm tara k ghr.
Sakshi's father:mere ghr me
aake meri insult kr rhey h aap
log,jaiye yha se,mujhe ni krni apni
beti ki shadi apke pariwar
me...jaiye.
All say
Dhire se bolte h'yes.
Akash'ha main jata
hu,aajao..sb.follow me...
Sb khush ho jate h.
Uday dolly k pas jata h'o g,maaf
krdena,ye bi to ho skta h ki main
aapke layek na hou..bye.
D:o g,main guse me kuch jyada hi
bol gai,such to yhi h ki aap sbke
7th aache lgege,lekin aapke 7th
srf manyata aachi lgti h..deir mt
krna use btane me.bye
Uday shy..hmm..bye..
Manyata Jagat k kaan pkdti h'tu
na,bhoot bolta h,tu chal main..
Jagat'aa..aa mere kaan..arey tu
akash k 7th aaachi ni lg ri thi..
Sb ldte-2 hste huye bahr aate h..
Or uday smile krta hua bahr aata
h...
Uday'akash happy ab to...
A.F:ha ab to happy hoga,qki ab iski
shadi tara se jo hogi..
All shocked
Kya??
Aaksh parents:ab kya hua?chila
kyn rhe ho..
Jagat'keise baap ho love mariage
krwao doge..kya?
A.f:ha mujhe koi problem ni h.
Manyata'arey tara kuch
bolna,sundrta bad me dikha diyo.
A.m'akash tujhe koi dikkat h.
A:ni ni maa
U:aacha chl sakshi se hi kr.
A:ni ni,papa mujhe abi shadi ni
krni..
Tara'uncle main srf kuch ganto k
lye gf thi...
Wo hm sb
A.m:akash tu hmein bol deta,hm ni
krate teri shadi..
Uday'o teri,tere parents to bde
change h..
A.f:ab ghr chal jb tk tu ni khega tb
tk teri shadi ni krege.
Jagat'uncle se ek limit tk wait
krwaiyo,50 ka hoke mt khiyo ki
mujhe shadi krni h.
Uday'ha to abi kaun se 26 ka lgta
h,mjak kr rhey h yar.ab khush
hoja...
All happy...
Precap-uday's birthday..
Pari
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update.
I love UV-Jagat bonding yaar. Both are just too good.
Love both your SS Pari. You're my favourite SS writer because you updated your SS regularly & I feel just like reading an episode rather than watching.
Thanks for the amazing update.
Hugs.🤗 🤗

Edited by sonam2801 - 13 years ago

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