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Manveer ss.
Two HEART:that BEAT as One.:-)
Part-16th.

Jay-vijay janbujh k apni window se chori chupke utrte h.
Qki unke ghr k aage jeet k gunde phra de rhe h.
To ek gunda dekh leta h or jeet ko phone krke btata h ki ye chori-2 khin ja rhe h rat ko...
Jeet'oye main aa rha hu,inko jaane de shaq na ho ki koi inka picha kr rha h...
Jay vijay khush ho jate h or jaane lgte h...or bich raste me jeet unka wait kr rha h..ki wo ayenge phr main unke piche jauga..

Idhr sb jay vijay ka wait kr rhe h.
Manyata'ye kha rh gye dono.
Unanti'arye aajayenge..
Akash'kis kis cheez se pitoge.?
Unanti'main to danda leke aai hu..
Jagat'phle tu bta tu kis cheez se pitega.
Akash'main ye iron rod leke aaya hu.
Uday manyata ko dekhta h'mujhe to bs shrt utarni h,or apne hatho se pituga...
Manyata use dekhti h,nd he s smile.
Jagat'sb hatho se hi maaroge,main pairo se marugi..o g manyata aap to btao g.
Uday'ye to sidha uthake patak degi..
Tbi jay vijay aate h.
Jay'arey chup jao,wo piche h...
Jgt music tej krta h,or sb chup jate h...

Jeet apne do gundo k 7th ghr me nter krta h..
Jeet:oye us rum me dekho.
Wo dono jate h wha jagat uday unhe pkad k bandh dete h,or khud bahr nikal jate h,or unhe bnd kr dete h...
Jeet ghum rha hota h ghr.
Uday'or be kaun h tu?yha kya kr rha h.?
Jagat'jay vijay ya manyata nu kise dhund rha h..
Jeet'oye 3no ko.
Uday charo trf dekh to zra.
Wo dekhta h sb apne apne weapons k 7th khade h.

Wo jeet manyata k pas sudden jata h
Or uska hath pkdta h'tujhe hi to kb se dhund rha tha,chl dulhan mil gai'Dekhta h usne uska hath pkda h wo guse me aa jata h...
Manyata'chod de mera hath kamine chod..
Uday aata h,jeet ka hath pkdta h'chod iska hath,mere rhte huye to tu ise kuch nuksaan ni kr skta'.
Jeet'oye ye meri hone wali biwi h,tu kaun h be.
Uday'main ni janta teri kya h?mujhe ye bi ni pta meri kya h?pr mere ghr me h to mere ghr ki izzat h..chod iska hath..
Manyata inocently uday ko dekhti h..
Jeet uska chod deta h.
Uday dhire se manyata se bolta h'apni khwaish kal puri krogi kya?
Manyata jeet k pas aati h or ek tightly slap marti h..

Uday'u deserve dis nd ye punch mere saamne tune iska hath pkda,to uday use ek punch marta h..
Wo jagat k pas jata h'ab besharm chuddiya phn k beith ja,ldki se pange le rha tha,to wo apne pairo se hit krta h.
Jeet ko sb apne apne weapons se sb milker pitte h..
Jagat'oye pinky tune koi weapon ni liye,tere hatho se to chot bi ni lgti.
Jay'lai hu na,wo phr ek knief nikalti h.ye h mere pas.
Sb dar jate or use marna bnd krdete h.
Jagat'o teri,ye to hmare ghr me bi h.
Uday'tu sidha marne k iraade se aai h kya?
Manyata'mar de tu mar jayega to dharti ka bhoj km hoga..
Uday'ni jay manyata pagal h tum to ni na..
Jeet unki baaton ka fayda uthake jay k hath me se knife lene jata h,or phr manyata jay ko bchna k liye jati h,lekin knife jeet k hath me aa jati h or glti ldte huye manyata k hath pe lg jati h...
Manyata aa..aa
Uday again angry luk me aata h,phle wo manyata ka hath dekhta h phr uske tears dekhta h or uski aankho me bi khun utr rha h,or wo jeet k hath modta h or knife se uske Hath ko bi kaat deta h,wo chilata h..
Or uske bad uday use buri trh pitta h..uski puri body me se khun nikal rha h.
Phr milke sb use marte h.
Manyata apna hath leke beithi h..
Jeet'mujhe maaf krdo ab se ni kruga aisa..
Uday'dubaara is ldki pr ya iske ghrwalo k 7th kuch kiya to,tu janta h kya hoga?
Jagat'bhai smjdar to tu bhoot h jo bhai ne kha wo dimag me beitha le..
Jeet'ha jrur,ab main na is ldki k na iske ghr pe ni jauga..

Akash wo dono gundo ko leke aata h.
Jagat'apne blwan shaheb ko lejao.
Uday'or sun apni izazt bchana chahta h to ye mt btaiyo ye keise hua or kyn?

Jeet apne 2gundo k sahare chala jata h...
Manyata khdi h apna hath liye,uday guse me uske pas aata h..
'tum smjhti kya ho apne aap ko.?
Kya jrurt thi bich me jane ki,srf bolne se koi taqatwar ni bn jata smjhi tum.knife khin or lg jata to..dimag to tum ldkiyo me hota ni...

Or tum jay chaku utha k le aai use marne k liye hmare ghr me bi tha ye sb,or ise better quality ka tha..
Jay'2min.k liye mujhe bi lga aap bi usko jaan se mar donge jb di ka hath cut hua tb.
Uday silent..
Manyata apna hath pkde bahr chali jati h...
Vijay'jay ghr chalo.
Uday'ni akele ni,
Akash'main chod deta hu chalo.
Wo 3no chale jate h...
Manyata 'she s cryng or apne hath ko weise hi leke khadi h usme se khun nikal rha h.
Uday,jagat nd unanti aate h...
Jagat'main bucket leke aata hu,khun usme colect krege..
Uday'bh jane do blood,kya pta wjan km ho jaye.
Unanti'2 bucket lana ek tears k liye bi...
Uday phr uske pas jata h,wo uske hath ko pyar se pkdta h,pr manyata

Uday jb Guse me apna hath wapas khinc leti h..
Jagat'bhai,kuch jyada hi bol gye the,bt tum mna loge lal mirch nu.mujhe pta h..chal.
Jagat nd unanti wha se chup chap chale jate h...

Uday phr uska wo hath dhire se pkdta h wo phr apna hath leave krti h or guse me jane lgti h bt 'He fastly slandering his arm
around her waist claiming her.
She pulled her hand away and
looked away. He made a angry face luked hr pasinately.nd automaticaly say'mujh se naraj hoke mt jaya kro,meri gltiyo ka 4give kiya kro,pta ni lekin tumhara naraj hona brdaast ni hota..'
She made a serious face,nd cntinuosly looked hm...
Uday phr use whi bahr,hath pe bndage krta h.nd manyata bs use innocntly dekh ri h...
Manyata smile thout'tum man ek shararti bache ki trh h,or man seeshe ki trh saaf...
Sudden rain start hoti h...
Manyata happy phr wo bahar jati h,nd uday wall se touch hoke smile krke khada hoke use dekhta h...

Manyata rain ko njoy kr ri h,jeise ek bacha njoy krta h...
Or uday use dekh rha..
Manyata puri trh bheeg gai h,.
Uske pure kapde uski body me touch ho gya h.
Uday uski trf attrck ho rha h...
Wo automaticaly uski trf attrck ho rha h..
Nd manyata dance krne me bg h...
(Start little shrt bckgrund sng)
Male version
'Ek umr ka safr,
Pal me cut gaya,
Jinda to hu magar,
Tukdo me but gya..'
(Green wet suit wid wet body lightly cling to her white milky
skin. Her curves r now more
visible as it was a net green suit little
transparent. He mesmerized
completely. He came out nd
steps
to hr slowly2)
(Jinda to hu magar
Tukdo me bu gya.

Tune mujhko diwana kiya kuch is kadr,
Ek tere siva kuch na aaye najr...)

'Manyata still dancing on
hr tune. Uday came closer to hr
nd she dont even senses hs
presences,due to which hr finger
hit his eye.
Manyata realize she
hrt
him she stop suddnly nd get
closer to hm. She put hr soft
hand around hs eye nd trying to
open it.''
Manyata blow on hs hurted eye.
He
feeled relaxed.she come mor
closer to hm and blow warm air
to gave hm relief.In dis process
hr soft supple lips touched hs
eye
softly.he feels like heaven.
Manyata dragged him fr a
dance,nd
he cant able to denied her.uday
hold her wet skin.althouh her skin
is cold but it create burning
sensation in him... Both start
dancing.
Uday pushed her to hm and in a
swift she moved nd crushed in
hs
hard frame...

{Rain drops falling
from hs curved face. Manyata
caress hr soft palm on hs raw
stubble. Uday agin gave twist to
her. Her bare back tagged to hm.
Her one hand is holded by hm nd
wid hs anothr hand he rubbed hs
palm along on her arm and gave
another move nd turn hr to hm.
Manyata's hands rested on hs
shoulder. Both lost in each
other's
eyes. Uday wrapped hs arms
aroun hr waist nd push hr to hm.
Nd in a swift he slammed his lips
on her supple plum lips. He kissed
her gently. She stunned wid his
insane action.

A shudder ran
throuhg her spine. Her cold skin
suddnely start burning in new
urge of her body's demand. She
wants to push him away,bt its
was just she trying to fool her
head. She wants to stop hm so
she wriggle slightly,bt Uday's
hand momnt on her bak made hr
mad. Uday squeezed her waist's
creamy skin in his fingers.}
[Manyata too give up nd urge to
feel
him more. She wrapped hr arms
around hs neck nd hld his nape.
She parted her lips to allow him
in.
Uday sucked hr upper lip and
relishing sweet taste of her.
Manyata
too sucked hs lower lip. Manyata
push
his nape to deepen the kiss.uday
explore evry corner of hr mouth
nd hs toungue toyed with
her,caress hr enfold her. He
sucked her lips passionately and
she moaned his name in their
never ending like lip lock. Both's
urges are same,their demands
are same. Uday's hands start
moving upward towards her
eager breasts,who bagged his
attention. Uday's hand moved on
her back continously and his
tounge relish her mouth.. Both
trying to touched their
souls.both r vry tightly hug in rain...

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it was awesome very well written cont soon loved it

Manveer ss.
Two HEART:that BEAT as One.:-)
Part-17th

Manyata ko ehsaas hota h,to wo achanak uday ko thoda push krti h nd wo use dekhti h.
Uday bi shocked hota h.
She s cryng..
Dono ko bhoot jyada embressed feel ho rha h...
Uday bck step lene lgta h,manyata roti-2 rum me bhaag jati h...

Uday to phle rain me beith k puri trh bheega,or manyata ro ri h..

In nxt mrng.,
Jagat'oye hoye bhai hall me hi,o teri tujhe to bukhaar h...

Uday'arey ni bs aise hi..wo
Unanti bhagi-2 aati h,manyata ko fever h..
Jagat'bda ajeeb concidnce h.
Uday'arey,concidnce ni h,kal hm rainy rainy khel rhe the dono.chal rum.jaldi.

Manyata beithi hui h njre jhuka k.
Uday'tum thi...he thout'kis muh se puch rha h,meri wjh se sb hua h'wo phr piche jane lgta h.
Manyata'pura sawal to pucha kr,wo kal rat ko
Jagat'ha ha malum h rainy rainy khel rhe the,hme bi bula lete na..
Uday'ha rainy game khelna bhari pda,fever game ho gya.
All launghng...
Uday'o teri hitler or maa ka date ko chal pe plan kiya tha na.
Jagat'o teri,main jata hu wrna.
Uday'jaldi jaa,wo dono to hmse bi jwan h...
Jagat laughng'bhai..maa ka pta ni lekin hitler hmse bhoot jwaan h...
Wo bhagta h..
Unanti'main kaada bnake lati hu..tum dono k liye...
Wo bi chali jati h.

Rum me uday or manyata h.
Uday'wo kal k liye sry,wo maine
Manyata'clappng ek hath se ni bjti,tu glti smjh k bhul ja...
Uday'tum itni samjdar kb se ho gai?mtlb itni shaant,mujhe to lga tha tum such me mujhe
Manyata'tujhe tod dungi,yhi na...kbi-2 shant hona pdta h...
Uday'ab wo tera hone wali dulhan tera picha chod degi.
Manyata'dulhan..
Uday'qki dulhe jeise to tewar tere h,wo to dulhan hi tha tere saamne.
Both laughng...

Jagat'arey baap re bhai,kal rat mumy papa bi rainy rainy khel rhe the...

Gr'arey,jaldi kaadha leke aa..aaj k bad chat pe kbi ye sb mt krna.
Uday'o bs kro na,bimar ho lekin awaaz sher wali hi chahiye.ha ni to.

Gr'ye uday ki awaaz h,
Maya'tusi rhne do,aapko or hmsbko pta h aapka uday kitna ziddi h.jb tk bulaoge ni tb tk wo aane wala ni h..'to awaaz kha se.
Jagat'kaan bj rhe h inke.ye lo kaadha pee lo...
Jagat phr rum me jata h...
'o g manyata g rainy rainy keise khlte h?mujhe bi btao..main bi kheluga jb rain hogi.,
Manyata'rhne de tej hwa ayegi to ud jayega,barish ho yegi to hm to bhaag bi aye,lekin tu whi jam jayega..ha ni to..
Jagat'ha tu..
Manyata'tu kya?
Jagat'kuch ni,ab kuch glt bolne ka man ni kr rha h,khin ro degi to chup krana mushkil hoga...
Manyata'tune mujhe rote huye kb dekha.
Uday'jo hsti itna bhaynak h,wo roti to bhoot bhaynak hogi.
All launghng...

Jagat'wo pink mirchi kb ayegi...?
Manyata'wo ni ayegi,papag ki tbiyet thik ni h.'

Uday darte-2 manyata ka 4head check krta h'jagat iski med.leke aa,wrna ise tej fever ho jayega...
Manyata'haddi,mere med. K 7th apne bhai ki bi med.leliyo...

Uday'mujhe med.ki jrurt ni h,main apne aap thik ho jaunga.
Manyata'automatic body h kya?
Jagat laughng..uday smile...
Jagat'main med.leke aata hu..
Gr:oye jagat ja mere liye or apni maa k liye med.leke aa.jaldi.
Uday irritate hoke'ha aapke liye to med.ki factory bnwa rha hu.
Jagat laugh
Komal:o g khana to kha lo...
Br:o mujhe meri manyata chahiye,mujhe meri beti lado main wada krta hu uske 7th koi zbrdasti ni kruga..
Jay'papa g phle aap utho...di ko hm leke ayenge..
Vijay'ha phle aap khana kha lo.wrna bimar pd jaoge..
Br:ni mujhe ni khana.
Jay'chod do jb tbiyet or khraab hogi tb kha lenge.ha ni to...

Jay rone lgti h'or jake phone krti h manyata ko...

Jagat pic d cal'hello,ha pinky bol kya kam h?
Jay s cryng'jagat,di ko phone de.
Jagat thoda imotional ho jata h'oye kya hua?ro kyn ri h?ruk deta hu.
Manyata ko phone deta h wo'ha jay kya hua?
Jay'di aap yha jaldi aa jao,papag ki tbiyet khraab ho ri h bhoot jyada,wo kuch kha pee ni rhe h,kh rhe h manyata ayegi tb khauga...
Manyata'hy bhagwan sb mere dushman bne h,ek min.behosh kr or gulcose chda de.
Jay smile di aap.
Manyata'bs tu hsti rha kr,or main aati hu.
Sb ye bat sunke chok jate h.
Specialy uday..
Uday phone leta h'jay sun jeise jo sambhala h sambhal le,manyata ni jayegi,uski tbiyet khud thik ni h...
Jay'kya?main aati hu.cal cut...
Manyata'ye kya pagalpan h mere papag ne khana ni khaya h wo mera wait kr rhe h.
Uday gusse me uski trf jata h'mujhe ni pta lekin tum puri trh thik hoke jaugi.smjhi..
Manyata'ye kya mtlb hua?mere papag ki tbiyet khraab h,or tu mujhe jane se rok rha h,.main thik hu,or main jaungi..
Uday'ha ni to..tum ni jaungi to ni jaungi.bs.
Manyata soute'pr kyn?
Uday double shout'qki main tumhein yha se jane ni...
Chup

Maya door knock krti h'oye unanti ye keisi awaaz aari h itna kyn chila ri h.ye din bhar kmre me krte Kya ho?
Manyata-uday angry eye cntct me h.
Jagat'arey kya h?jake aaram kro na,unanti ne t.v me bhut ko dekh liya,to chila ri h.
Break both eye cntct
Gr:oye darwaaza khol menu bi dekhna h bhut...
Uday'ha to apni sakal mirror me dekh lo,bhoot bi dar jayege.
Gr again cnfused'ye to
Jagat'ab ye mt khna bhai ki awaaz h...
Gr rote huye'oye jagat ja mere uday nu le aa,uske bina sb sunaa h..
Unanti'sachi.
Gr'ha
Jagat hapy'oye to thik h main aaj hi dhund lunga..

Manyata'tu to apne ghr aajayega,or main kya zindgi bhr idhr rhugi.
Jagat'bhai,bat to ye bi shi kh rhi h.
Uday ko chid ho ri h uski jane ki bat sunke.
Manyata'arey bolna,jb jwab ni hota to aise hi chup ho jata h tera bhai,main ise aachi trh janti hu..
Uday'ha to jb itni aachi trh janti ho to smjh kyn ni ri ho main kya chahta hu?
Manyata'dekh phliya mt kr,main thik hote hi chali jaungi.ha ni to.
Uday'ha thik h,jb thik hojana tb jana..
Jagat thout'bhai,phli bar jitni meri chinta krte ho,utna ya usse khin jyada chinta aap kisi or ki kr rhe ho..i m happy 4 u bhai or apne liye bi..
Uday'tu kya soch rha h,kha gayeb ho gya.
Jagat'kuch ni,bhai jra idhr aana,wo dhire se bolta h..'apne dil ki bat bolo to shi,uske bad hm dono sambhal lenge.'
Uday mtlb.
Jagat smile'mtlb tu smjh rha h,bs deir mt kriyo...

Manyata'saare akal k aandhe h.
Jagat'oye hoye,shi kh rhe ho aapke ghr me saare akal k aandhe h..
Uday laughng
Manyata'abe o haddi main tere ghr k logo ki specialy ye uday k baare me h.

Uday'ha ha tum to akal aankho dono ki aandhi ho..
Manyata'jyada mt bol mujhse wrna
To jgat uday 7th bolte h'ha ha pta h tod dogi ya uthake patak dogi.bhoot taqtwar h tu.

To na manyata jagat k kaan pkdti h'tu bhoot bolta h,tujhe to aaj hi tod hi dungi,idhr aa.
Jagat'mere najuk bdan ka mjak mt udao,himmat h to bhai ko utho..

Manyata'ye kuch jyada hi mota h.
Uday'mota ni hu tumhari trh,body sody h meri.ha ni to.

Manyata'tu na hat wo use push krti h or jake chup chap beith jati h...

Jagat-uday laghung..
Precap-manyata bhaagne ki koshish krti h..
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awesome please continue soon 😃

Read last two parts together. Loving the nok jhok and the romantic parts. Infact, even I dont want manyata to go back. LOL

both updates were awesome !!!!

@sonam thanx darlng.
Love u 2..
Nd same 2 u dear.
Loved ur cmnt..

@lily thanx dear.
I m watng u r cmnts
nd same 2 u.

Happy frndshp day 2 ol of u.
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