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@-The_Tomboy-

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Posted: 13 years ago

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You call this lame!!!! it was freaking awesome dude!!!! loved it to the core!!!! that ws supercalifragilistic expecalidociously stupendo fantabulously fantastically magical mann!!! loved it!!

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Sunshinegirll

@Sunshinegirll

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Posted: 13 years ago

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awesome start... u write so well shals... 👏 wud love to see how the story can proceed from u.. coz no idea wat the CVs have in store😉
even i have started writing an article on manyata.. just an analysis of the most confused character 😉 will post it after finishing..

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@wendy25

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Hats off to you for writing OS from Manyata's POV. She is the most complicated character and its really difficult to understand her. Just love it shals. I really wish if cvs have ever shown manyata's inner dillema's by her solo scenes , we would have never disliked Manyata. I think lack of screen space given to her self talks about things, make her go beyond our understanding!

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@-JEHAN-

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Posted: 13 years ago

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loved it...i really wanna see this in show too...i hope VB will help her...as he always did...and all the lines u wrote about UV...omg...amazing!!loved it!!not just those lines but ur OS...and don't worry don't hide we will not through chappals on u...come near ur screen here u go a big tight hug!!!🤗

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@Badtameez_Dil

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Posted: 13 years ago

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it was beautiful shal..just amazingggly written it was last few episodes only where M's side of some emotions could be reflected...though her actions were indeed again went wrong but it could be understandable on her side...its very true her character graphis way to poor but it past dew episodes her side little could be understandable...could feel sad for her...
u wrote this beautifully

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Adden

@Add123

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Aww! such a beautiful piece of writing Shals :D

Loved it ... Manyata's inner turmoil was displayed in words perfectly ..

Is it her kismet or kerma?

It should be her kerma, caz her kismet is Uday ;)

Awesome Job hun xxx

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Shazzie

@Shazzie

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: Inkpen4877
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Seriously like 9 thousand gold stars ⭐️ ⭐️⭐️⭐️ I would actually put 9 thousand stars but that would take awhile...

WOW KAT! I am overwhelmed. You are soo encouraging ☺️

Thank you soo much for such words! 🤗

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Shazzie

@Shazzie

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: Amibaiju
Wowww yarrr!!!! Awesomeee!!! What a emotional discription of manyata!!! Hats off to u...and loved at the end vijaybhai was there for her...I hope in real DEK also Vijaybhai will there for her!!! Neway loved it...thanks for such a lovely OS...

Thanks a lot! I was in serious doubt after writing it. Because mainly it is all sadness and depression.. but jst wanted to express what Manyata might be feeling. Although it can be very different from what happens on show. I hope so too that Vijay bhai and later Unnati also helps Manyata!

Originally posted by: princess_T
Shals I loved it.👏 M's feelings were described so very well...!! I loved it...!!

Thank you soo much dear. You write so amazing FF/OS and I just love them soo much. Your praise really means a lot to me.

Originally posted by: Gowri05
You call this lame!!!! it was freaking awesome dude!!!! loved it to the core!!!! that ws supercalifragilistic expecalidociously stupendo fantabulously fantastically magical mann!!! loved it!!

Awwhh Gowri! you are a sweetheart! It was seriously my first attempt and I was soo nervous after posting it. See. what my love for Manveer has made me do! Thank you sooo much. Your words are soo appreciated. I absolutely love your FF - love at first fight! WOW!! I m soo happy after reading your reply. mwaahhh to you

GUYS! Thanks a lot! Your words really have encouraged me a lot 🤗

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Inkpen4877

@Inkpen4877

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: Shals9

WOW KAT! I am overwhelmed. You are soo encouraging ☺️

Thank you soo much for such words! 🤗

It's purely selfish on my part 😉 I'm seriously hoping for a companion piece!

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Shazzie

@Shazzie

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: Sunshinegirll
awesome start... u write so well shals... 👏 wud love to see how the story can proceed from u.. coz no idea wat the CVs have in store😉
even i have started writing an article on manyata.. just an analysis of the most confused character 😉 will post it after finishing..

Thanks a lot Sunshinegirl (love your username) 😃 Wow! you guys are soo sweet and encouraging me. I just read your article! It is fabulous post. She is certainly most confusing character and we never could relate to her actions. But it is because CVs never have shown us what she feels or justified her actions.

Originally posted by: wendy25
Hats off to you for writing OS from Manyata's POV. She is the most complicated character and its really difficult to understand her. Just love it shals. I really wish if cvs have ever shown manyata's inner dillema's by her solo scenes , we would have never disliked Manyata. I think lack of screen space given to her self talks about things, make her go beyond our understanding!

Thanks a ton Wendy. 🤗 Yes M defo is most complicated character because we never ever could know whatz going on in her mind and what she is going to do. Whenever unnati or vijay bhai talks with her about uday, she is just silent and listens. Thats the reason when in April, she was soo friendly with uday and hugging her, I assumed that she has started loving uday and forgot Akaash. That is why after the coronation it was a huge disappointment and frustration to me! To be honest, even now I m not sure that she loves uday. It is more like she is accepting her destiny.. maybe now we will see love developing in Manyata. Its high time our lover boy gets what he deserves. 😉

I hope so too that CVs show some of her dilemma & self talk on Monday episode. Dont want that she is normal and not affected by what happened on her wedding day.

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