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Shazzie

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: -JEHAN-
loved it...i really wanna see this in show too...i hope VB will help her...as he always did...and all the lines u wrote about UV...omg...amazing!!loved it!!not just those lines but ur OS...and don't worry don't hide we will not through chappals on u...come near ur screen here u go a big tight hug!!!🤗

Jehan!!! Thank you sooo much for lovely reply! ME too!! I really want her solo scene on Monday.. thinking about her actions and its reactions. I hope so too that VB helps her. I have a feeling he will because although he was not supporting her when she was standing but behind her he was the only one who was supporting her and showing true colors of JN.

Awww!! Thanks for the hug sweety! It felt awesome!!

Originally posted by: Add123
Aww! such a beautiful piece of writing Shals :D
Loved it ... Manyata's inner turmoil was displayed in words perfectly ..
Is it her kismet or kerma?
It should be her kerma, caz her kismet is Uday ;)
Awesome Job hun xxx

Adden!! WOW!! THANK YOU SOO MUCH!! 🤗

I am soo glad you liked this. Really means a lot to me! You write so wonderful OS/FF and I just adore them! True! Uday is her kismet.. so it is her karma!! Right now her kismet is angry at her.. and now it depends on her actions (karma) that how she is going to win her kismet (Uday)

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Shazzie

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: pyaar_ka_panchi
it was beautiful shal..just amazingggly written it was last few episodes only where M's side of some emotions could be reflected...though her actions were indeed again went wrong but it could be understandable on her side...its very true her character graphis way to poor but it past dew episodes her side little could be understandable...could feel sad for her...
u wrote this beautifully

Oops.. I missed your post. Thanks a ton Tanvi

Agreed with you! Her character graph is really poor. Definitely, her actions are wrong and there is no way that those can be justified. Being an Indian girl, it is impossible for me to accept or understand this that she will put her family in so much trouble and destroy their reputation and honour for her love. That too.. not only once but multiple times! Yeah! this week's episodes, certainly put a light on her actions. I feel sad too but would never ever want to be in her place.. only advantage to be in her place is to have such a handsome hunk as fiance. 😉

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Shazzie

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: Inkpen4877

It's purely selfish on my part 😉 I'm seriously hoping for a companion piece!

Aww!! love you kat! I can try.. but I m really bad at this! 😕 Lemme get my thinking cap on! oops.. I hv lost it!! LOL

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anushruthi

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Lame attempt ? u hav got to b kidding me !! it was so goood . plz plz plz will u cont? i vud love to read more of ur os . y dont u make it into an ff ? plz cont and PM me if possible .

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Sunshinegirll

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: Shals9

Thanks a ton Wendy. 🤗 Yes M defo is most complicated character because we never ever could know whatz going on in her mind and what she is going to do. Whenever unnati or vijay bhai talks with her about uday, she is just silent and listens. Thats the reason when in April, she was soo friendly with uday and hugging her, I assumed that she has started loving uday and forgot Akaash. That is why after the coronation it was a huge disappointment and frustration to me! To be honest, even now I m not sure that she loves uday. It is more like she is accepting her destiny.. maybe now we will see love developing in Manyata. Its high time our lover boy gets what he deserves. 😉

I hope so too that CVs show some of her dilemma & self talk on Monday episode. Dont want that she is normal and not affected by what happened on her wedding day.

you may never know.. they might just show she just wakes up the next day and starts addressing the press 😆😆😆 seriously one show where the protogonist lacks screen space 😆

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Shazzie

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: Sunshinegirll

you may never know.. they might just show she just wakes up the next day and starts addressing the press 😆😆😆 seriously one show where the protogonist lacks screen space 😆

You were absolutely right! UFF!! what a waste! Wakes up and starts addressing media.

Her redemption track has just started so they cant show her sorry and crying in one day. Lots of work cut out for her! She has gone rock bottom now! All Alone!

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Shazzie

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: lilybabes
Lame attempt ? u hav got to b kidding me !! it was so goood . plz plz plz will u cont? i vud love to read more of ur os . y dont u make it into an ff ? plz cont and PM me if possible .

WOW! I m overwhelmed 🤗 Thank you so much dear. Bless you

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Tannu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#28

WOW awesome OS

beautifully written nd expressed :)

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Malangan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#29

WOW!!!

Fantabulously fantastic
I loved every bit of it dii :D
her emotions,pain,dilemma,hate,love
Was blended perfectly ...a way to a perfect characterisation of a lonely soul !! Her question whose answers are missing ..missing for now or the life time ..true few questions doesnt really hav any answers !
Loved it loved it loved iy
How did i missed it :(

Wish to read more from ur side

Hmmm i knw my appreciations stands no place infront of this piece of writing!! Still heart wrenching!!

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