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Heart breaking and Very Emotional Update! Cant see ManVeer Seprated... Ahhh Dis Akash Hate him to d Core !! Ty 4 d pm & update sooon 😃
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This part is realy emotional. Poor UV he is so hurt. I realy love ur ff. But sorry I never coment bc I m very lazy. I m sure u won't let A success in his stupid plans. Pls update soon n thnks 4 the PM.
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The chapter was beautiful swty i m happy for da precap finaly manyata wil c0nfes her feelingx waiting for da next part
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manyata uday ko kitna hurt krti ha 😭 iss manyata ko thori akaal do pleejj awesume update 👏 uncle akash becharay romance krna cahtay han😆 uncle je ap ko chikki kay sath jana cahiay date pr fir wahain khoob romance krna

ufff ab yeh uncle agay kia krnay walay han😕
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Nira Fantastic Update,👍🏼 I love it.👏 👏 👏
UV-M Love -Hate scene was so, so intense.☺️ ☺️ ☺️
Both Lovebirds tarpofying because of Manyata's Misunderstanding.😭
Now this Ba****d Akash Chaudhary🤢 wants, Mujhe lagta hai koi tapori type, chavannichap, ghatiya plan banayega Manyata ko close lane ke liye.🤢 😡
Precap was Damn interesting, 😳Wow, Manyata confesses her love for Uday.☺️ ☺️
Please Update ASAP,Now I can't wait to read the next chapter.😛
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that was awesome i really loved it i just hope manyatas misunderstand gets cleared and god what is this akash going to do please update soon and thanks for the pm
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wow the precap...it saves me from heartattach.lol...
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this is the second last part of this ss


here is the part 2 of chapter 8,,,,do read it nd tell hows this chapter...u like it or not...

its a lengthy chapter,,,,,, actually entire part 8 had turned out to be really lengthy thts y i divided this chapter 8 into 2 parts of which i have already updated the part 1 nd this is part 2,,,,which is really very lengthy so plz dont fell bored reading it,,,,,


so here is the part 8.2



CHAPTER - 8.2

RECAP:

Akash closes his hand in a fist nd says very very very angrily


akash == tum meri ho moniya,,, sirf meri,,,,,ab mai akash verma nahi akash "chaudhary" hoon,,,,mai ab kamzor nahi hu,,,,,,,tumhe to mai apna banake chorunga,,,, mai janta hu tum sirf mujse pyar karti ho isliya toh tumne mujse sagai ki ,,,, lekin ab mai aur 2 months wait nahi kar sakta tumhe hamesha hamesha apna banane ke liye,,,,,,,,,,(he thinks something),,,,,,,,ab mujhe pta chal gaya ki mujhe ky akarna hai...(says angrily) ,,,,,,,,,



PRESENT

NEXT DAY (Morning)

Manyta was taking shower in her bath room.

DS == (says smilingly) ,,,,,hamei bahut khushi hui uday beta aapka kaam dekhkar,,,,hame yakin hai ki ab bahut jald hum ye hotel deal crack kar lenge,,,, well done uday beta ,,,well done

uday == thanku dadisaab thanku very much,,,,agar aapka humpar ashirwad nahi hota toh hum ye kabhi nahi kar patey.,,,,,


Actually uday dint want to come to raj mahal, nd he was avoiding coming here becoz he didnt want to face manyta,but today after a gap of 5 days finally he had to come whn ds called him for an imp meeting relating to their hotel project


Ds == hamara ashirwad toh hamesha aapke sath hai uday,,,,,(smilingly),,,,, aur vaise congratulations to you yuvrani neelaxi, apne sachmuch is hotel deal ke liye bahut mehnat ki hai,,,,,, akhir ye project devgadh, jaigarh aur raigarh ke partnership mei he toh banraha hai,,,, hum bahut khush hai apke kaam se beta,, bhagwan kare aap aise he safal rahe...(says smilingly)

neelaxi == dhanya waad maharaani sa,,,hume khushi hui ki aapko hamara kaam pasand aya,,, bas ab baki jo 20% kaam bacha hai vo bhi jaldi se ho jaye fir finally india ke almost her state aur foreign countries mei hamre 3 rajgharano ke hotels honge (says cheerfully)

Ds == (smiling;ly) bilkul beta,,,, toh uday beta , its final na ki aap aur neelaxi next week abroad jaa rahe hai,,,,

uday == jee dadisahab ,,,next week hum australia jaa rahe hai, hamari meeting hai mr smith ke sath aur neelaxi canada ja rahi hai,,,,

neelaxi == (smilingly),,, aur jaari meting hai mr cameroon ke sath,,, i hope, we crack this deal...

Ds == we will beta,,,we surely will (says smilingly with confidence)

neelaxi == ok ab hum chltein hai,,,

Ds == arey itni jaldi,,,,thori der rukiye beta,,

neelaxi == nahi maharani sa,,,aaj nahi,,,next time pakka ..i promise...vo kya haiana kaafi kaam pending hai,,,next week canada janey se pehle jo hame finish karna hai,,,, i m really sorry (sayssmilingly)

Ds== its ok,,,beta hum samj sakte hai,,,work comes first,,,acha aap do minute rukiye humabhi atey hai,,,,(saying tht ds goes frm there to komal so tht before neelaxi goes, they could give her a gift or something)

neelaxi == (after geeting up from her chair, she says) ok bye uday ab hum chalte hai,,, i hope hum apni respective deals crack ker lein

uday == dont worry neelaxi,,, we will surely crack this deal.,,,(nd then he gives her a friendly, side hug,,,,,,, nd guess what?????)


At tht same time, manyta after getting ready was descending down from the stairs whn her eyes caught a minute glimpse of the two hugging each other,,,, her vision was not clear she thought:

manyta == arey yeh kaun hai yaha ds ke office mei...????? (she goes close to thm to see who were they,,, as they both were standing facing their back towards manyta,,,,


Once again manyta gets another biggest shock of her life whn she found both of thm hugging each other, even though it was side hug, but it was more thn enough to piss manyta,,,, afterall, how could she bear some other girl in arms of his love???? she was still looking at thm angrily yet dejectedly, whn in anger she storms off from tht place,,,thn

komal == arey manyta beta aap ready ho gayi,,,,,,


Both of thm break their hug to see manyta nd komal standing behind them,,,, it was after 5 days tht both manyta nd uday saw each other,,,,uday as usual was looking haindom in white shirt nd manyta was looking breath taking in her blue anarkali,,,,,,,, manyta nd uday keep looking at each other for some minutes with anger and hurt,,,,,,,,after tht uday breaks eye contact with her nd turns around nd starts reading the file,,,,,, manyta feeling hurt nd angry with his this response goes to her mom angrily nd frustratingly

neelaxi == (noticing their silence,,,,,smiles nd thinks),,,,,lovers tiff,,,aww,,,,so cute (she goes there whre komal nd manyta r)

komal == (smilingly),,,toh neelaxi beta,,khatam ho gayi apki meeting toh fir kya decide hua, kab ja rahe hai aap aur uday abroad ,,,hmmn

neelaxi == jee aunty,,,next week


Manyta looks at both of thm shockingly nd confusingly,,,once again she misunderstood tht uday nd neelaxi, are going to abroad together without exctly knowing tht he alone is going to australia whwreas she is going to canada... manyta angrily glares at neelaxi

komal == acha beta,,aap mayta se baat kijiye hum chalte hai,,,(says smilingly nd gives her the gift which she had got fr her on ds command n thn goes)

neelaxi == hmmn,,,,hi,,,good morning manyta ,,,,kaisi ho,,,,,,,,,,,,,(says smilingly)

manyta == (looks at her angrily nd replies mockingly),,,,huhn,,,akir good hai kya is morning mei,,,,,,,aur vaise bhi pehle theek thi but ab nai lagata ki mai theek hun,,,,(neelaxi getting confused gives dry smile to her)

neelaxi == (smilingly)== ok,,newys manyta pta hai,,,hum bahut khush hai ki akhir uday aur tum,,,,,

manyta == (cuts her in b/w) === dekho mujhe abhi zarrori kaam hai,,,baad mei baat kerenge (nd she angrily goes from there,,,, neelaxi looks at her confusingly nd then eventually goes.


AAKASH , MR Chaudhary nd his mom come to rajmahal,,, his real father had died coz of heart stroke ... he excitedly calls nd invite each nd evryone in hall nd all including brijraj, giriraj, komal, jay, jagat, menaka, vijay nd manyta assemble there. DS asks uday to join thm too but he, in order to avoid facing manyta excuses himself saying tht he will join after finshing reading this file nd thn finally ds also goes from there where every1 was.


Akash == (says lovingly nd smilingly),,,,, hmmn,,,,moniya mai janta hun hamari shaadi mei abhi 2 months baki hai, but ab mai tumhara apna banae ke liye aur intezaar nahi kar sakta,,,,,mai tumhe jald se jald hamesha hamesha ke liye apna banana chahta hun,,,,,, (manyta was lookin at him confusingly),,,,,,

akhir hum dono ek dusrey se pyar kartey hai toh shaadi chahe kal ho ya 2 months baad ,,,kya fark padta hai,,,,,,, haina,,,,,,,(now manyta was looking at him shockingly),,,,,arey arey,,,tension mat lo mai tumse kal he shaadi karne ke liye nahi keh raha hu,,,,, mai bas chahta hun ki jaha hame 2 months mei shadi karni wahi hum thora jaldi muhurat nikalkar shaadi kyun na karei ,,, haina,,,

actually apke rajpurohit ji ne bataya hai ki 15 days baad bahut he shubh muhurat hai,,,,,,vo din bahut he auspicious hai,,,,,, kehte hai aisa muhurat 20 years mei ek baar aata hai,,,us din sabhi bigdey kaam ban jaatey hai,,,,us din sab kuch auspicious hota hai,,, jo us din miltey hai vo hamesha hamesha ke liye mil jatey hai, hamesha sath aur khush rehte hai,,,,, toh batao moniya,,,,,WILL U MARRY ME AFTER 15 DAYS ????? (says lovingly nd smilingly)


Manyta looks at him shockingly nd confusingly looking totally numb nd speechless,,,,. her face was turning pale with each passing second.

Meanwhile, uday also comes there nd had heard what akash had said just now,,,,, he looks at manyta with shcking, confusing yet hopeful eyes thinking wht she will answerr to akash,,,,,,her gaze also fell on uday,,, nd she looks at him totally numb nd speechless with paled face trying to question him through her eyes,,,,,, both were lookin at each other,,,,rest of all could not see uday , as all were either sitting or standing facing their back at uday.


Vijay smiles a bit nd thinks tht finally today all will come to know the biggest truth tht its Uday whom manyta loves nd wants to marry not Akash,,,, he was happy nd relieved nd had decided tht he will help manveer whn the truth will be out to control the situation nd the sudden outburst of evry1's reactions...

rest of the family members were not shocked but were lil confuse, as now, none of thm had any problem with manyta nd akash alliance as he was now mr akash chaudahary,,,a rich nd powerful business tycoon,,,muh bola beta of mr chaudhary ,,,,,so all were looking at manyta nd waiting fr her answer



Manyta once again looks at uday nd thinks about the time whn she got engaged with akash, thn her consummation with uday, then udays dance with neelaxi in the party, thn uday-neelaxi kiss nd how she heard neelaxi telling uday to come to her room, then how uday 5 days before had gone to meet manyta in her room, then their intimate moment whn both had got lost nd engrossed in one another, thn their confrontation afterwards, nd thn now, how uday once again hugged neelaxi just few minutes ago nd avoided looking at manyta,,,,,,

she was busy in her thoughts whn,


akash == bolo na moniya ,,,kyua tum mujse shaadi karoogi ?????

manyta == (looks at uday, once again straighten her head a bit nd thn says confidently nd smilingly a bit),,,,, nahi aakash mai tumse shaadi nahi karungi ,,,,,,, (all look at her shockingly including akash,,,,, uday looks at her so happily as if he has got new life in his extreme weak nd amort body, its very difficult to expreess udays feelings in words)

akash == (shockingly nd angrily),,,, kya ?????

manyta == (smilingly),,,, arey pagal,,,, tumse shaadi nahi karungi toh aur kisse karungi,,hmmn,,,, han,,, haan,,, haan, akash mai tumse shaadi karungi,,,,,,, (says smilingly nd thn looks at uday)

aksh == feeling so faapy nd contented gave manyta a simple hug...


Uday felt as if manyta had murdered him, nd crushed his heart into million nd trillion pieces once again,,,, He could not speak, move or evn blink his eyes for next minutes,,, he stood at his place dejectedly nd amortly like a dead body as if there is no life nd strenght left in his body,,,, he was completely shaken up from within.

a lone tear rolled down from his eyes. manyta notices this. She was continuously looking at him all this while,,,,,,, Gaining his conscious back , the file fell on the floor from his grip , he wiping the tear off his face straightforwardly zoomed out nd rushed away from tht place without meeting anyone,,,,,,


Unnati meets with uday at the entrance gate but before she could say nething he stormed away from the palace,,,, she kept on calling him but he went away,,,,,,,, looking confused, she goes inside nd gets the breaking news there .Everyone was congratulating one another , akash was really happy , actualy he never expected tht manyta will say yes as he was doubtful of her nd udays closeness which he had seen himself, but now he was sure tht manyta truly loves him,,,he was regretting tht he doubted on manyta.

Vijay just could not believe wht he had heard just now,,,,,he still was in shock, he couldnt digets tht news, he immeditely runs to manyta to question her ,,,,,,but instantly was called off by brijraj in mean time.,,,,,

Rajmata was trying to show tht she is happy by puttng up a fake smile across her face but in reality she wasnt happy at all,,,becoz all these years she always waited for manyta to return nd thn getting her married to one nd only one uday,,,,,,even whn manyta got engaged o akash, deep inside her heart she always wanted tht somehow,,,,somehow uday nd manyta get close ,,,,, though now, she dint have ne problems with akash as a person but still she had always wanted uday to be the life partner for her granddaughter manyta.

Everyone taking their seats, started discusions about preparations of marriage...like how grand the marriage would be nd bla bla bla.


Everyone was congratulating manyta nd akash, manyta was feeling as if she has stabbed her heart nd choked her throat in a manner tht she couldnt breath properly...she felt as if her heart had stopped beating,as if it has broken into milions pieces.,,,, her eyes were filled with tears nd tears were about to roll down frm her eyes ne moment whn all of a sudden feeling extremely weak and pale she fainted onto the floor.

All gets tensed seeing her tht condition nd she was immediately taken to her room... Dr saab carefully checks her out nd while checking her out, he looks at her in confusion with his wide eyes,,,,nd thn once again he checks her out.


After some moments, dr saab assured everyone tht she is fine nd not to take ne worry, it was just a mild dizziness coz of which she fainted nd advised every1 to leave so tht she could rest,,,,, everyone dispersed frm there including akash.,,,,,before going out, dr saab once again ooks at manyta in tension nd thn finally goes frm there,

Getting up from her bed, manyta somehow locks the door nd thn cries her heart out bitterly very very bitterly...she cries her heart out loudly,,,drops of tears were continuously rolling down frm her eyes...she had cried so much tht the pillow had got wet nd drenched from her tears,,,,,,her eyes had turned red coz of her continuous weeping..,,,,, after some time, she was still crying bu tnow her eyes were completely dried nd the tears had completely soaked from her eyes.


Akash nd family had left frm there nd here in rajmahal everybody was busy in chitchatting with each other regarding marriage preparations.



(AFTERNOON)

Uday reached his house,,,, he was burning nd suffering in extreme anguishness, hurt, pain, agony...remebering wht manyta said to akash, he got so angry tht he started breaking off the things of his room like glass table, vass, lamps ,,, he was breaking each nd everything tht was coming in his way,,,, ultimately he looks at himself in the mirror in extreme rage nd anguishness nd thn " BAM" he punches very hard onto the mirror coz of which mirror breaks off nd thn his hand started bleeding...

After venting out his anger, he goes towards his bed nd sits there numbly nd dejectedly...his eyes had turned red nd had completely dried coz of the extreme pain nd agony tht he was going through becoz of the girl whom he loves to death.


Uday remebers all the moment he spent with his princess, his manyta,,,,,,

* right from their first meeting at beach till the time whn manyta after getting engaged to akash, had come runningly to uday to lonavla nd there,how they both had became one forever...,,,

* he remebers how she danced with him at club nd even somwht confessed to him about her feelings whn she had pulled him behind the pillar (part-5)

* he further remembers how later tht night also, they got completely lost in one another in their intimate moment whn manyta gave him a lovebite on his shoulder,,,,,the mark of which was still on his shoulder,,,,

* he thn remebers about their confrontation tht occured later,,,,,, tht how manyta behaved with him nd asked him to get out of her life forever... nd finally

* remebers how she told akash tht she will marry him just few hours earlier.


Thinking about tht moment, uday clenched his hand in a fist nd shouts very angrily:


uday ==== y,,,,,y ,,,,, y ,,,god y,,,,,,, kyun kia mere sath aisa,,, kyun itna pyar karta hun mai manyta se,,,,kyun badal dia maine khud ko us insan ke liye jiske liye mai kuch bhi nahi,,,kyun,,,,kyun aayi tum meri zinadgi mei manyta kyun,,,,,,(he was bursting in anger),,,, mujhe tumse pyar karna he nahi chahiye tha,,,,, mai toh sirf tumhe devgarh haasil karne ke liye tumhe paana chahta tha,,,,fir kyun mai tumhe itna pyaar karne laga,,,,kyun,,,,,,kyun,,,kyun,,,,,,(he was bursting in anger nd rage whn once again he remebers how manyta said yes to akash for marriage nd thn he took out his cell nd dialled a number)


uday == hello,,,,mr shah,,,,hamari liye australia ki ticket book karaiye (says angrily)

mr shah== (confusingly) but sir,,,aap to,,, australia next week ja rahe the na fir aj ki ticket????

uday == jaisa aap ko bola jaye aap vaisa hi kijiye,,,samjhe,,(disconnected the call angrily)

after half an hour

mr shah == sir apki ticket book ho gayi hai,,,,, apki flight aj raat 9:00 baje ki hai...

uday == thnxx


Manyta was still resting in her room nd was still crying but there were no tears in her eyes as her tears had completely dried...


Unnati reaches her home nd straightforwardly goes to udays room.her heart came to her mouth, she was completely shocked whn she saws the condition of tht room,,,,,,the pieces of broken things like vass, glass,lamps,showpieces were scattered all over the room clumsily,,,,, some blood spots were also there on the mirror nd on the floor, nd thn she saw tht uday;s hand was tied with bandage... she was really concern for her brother,,,,

unnati knew tht uday is completely heartbroken with akash-manyta marriage news,,,,,, she knew tht even though uday had broken his engagemnt nd roka with manyta nd handed over manytas hand in akash's hand for manytas happiness... she knew tht, now manyta nd uday are best of friends, he tries to show to everyone tht now he is only a friend of manyta but unnati knew very well tht he still loves manyta very much...tht still his heart only beats for manyta but he tries to show to everyone nd even to manyta tht now he is just a friend of manyta,,,,, unnati knew tht her brother can never stop loving manyta even if he tries to,,,,,,,


Meanwhile, ds had called uday to know whn he left all of a sudden nd it was thn tht uday informed her tht he is going to australia today itself, as he got an important call from his client so its really very imp for him to leave today only.,,,,, vijay bhai heard ds conversation with uday while walking through ds office,,,he was going straight to meet manta but was called by brijraj nd komal in b/w, so he went ther


Removing her tears unnati asks:

unnati == (composing herself, she says),,,,,, hey dada,,,, aap kahan ja rahe hai,,, i mean y r u packing ur bags nd stuff

uday ==== (says with pale smile) === arey,,chhoti,,,tum kab aayi,,,,, humne toh tumhe dekha he nahi,,,,haan vo actually hum australia ja rahe hai , aj ki flight se toh isliye bags pack kar rahe hai

unnati == (says softly but scaredly) == but dada aap toh next week janey wale the na????

uday == haan but vo ,,kuch zarrori kaam nikal aaya toh isliye aj he jana pad rah hai,,, (says trying to avoid eye contact with her


She remains mum for some seconds nd then somhow says, gaining her courage

unnati == (gulping down),,,, its coz of manyta na dada,,,,,,,,(uday looks at her with hurt, painful nd moist eyes but dint say nething to her nd starts packing his bag...) ,,,, she says dada agar apke man mei koi bhi baat hai toh plz aap hame bta sakte hai (says concernly)

uday == (trying to be coolnd compose says)... arey aisi koi baat nahi hai choti ok,,,, hum theek hai,,,,ab aap batiye kya laye hum apni choti ke liye australia se?????

unnati == ( says with half nd pale smile),,,,, bas dada aap jaldi se aajaiye ga hume isse zyada aur kuch nahi chahiye...

uday == (smiles nd hugs her),,,,,,ofcourse choti,,,hum jaldi aa jayenge,,,,


unnati looks at him in confusion, wht he was doing nd thn says

unnati == arey dada aap apna cell phn drawer mei kyun daal rahe hai,,,dont tell me ki aap apna phn nahi le ke ja rahe...agar ye baat hai toh plz dada aap apna phn leke jaiye apne sath,,,,,,,, hume agar aapse baat karni hui toh fir hum kya karenge


uday == nahi choti hum apna phn nahi le ke ja rahe.aur plz tum mujhe force mat karna,,..frankly speaking hum thore din akele rehna chahthe hai bina is phn ki disturbance ke sath,,,, toh plz try n understand,,,,(says pulling her nose sweetly ),,,,,...aur vaise bhi hum tumhe waha se morning aur evening mei call kartey rahenge,,,ok so dont worry,,,,,hmmn

unnati == (concernly),,,but dada fir bhi,,,,

uday == nahi choti,,,,,,,,,newys hamari flight 9:00 bje ki hai,,,nd its almost 6:30 ,,, i think hume nikalna chahiye,,,,,nd yeah hum akele chale jayenge aap ghar par he rahiye ok...nd dont worry hum jaldi waps aajayenge within 2 weeks...hmmmn,,,,,(giving her a sweet hug nd kiss on her forehead, uday left for the airport.)

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MANYTA'S ROOM (around 7:30 pm)


Manyta was looking at herself in the mirror with her moist, painful nd reddened eyes whn vijay suddenly enters in nd closes the door behind...seeing vijay, she quickly wipes her tears


vijay == (flashing his 32 teeth smile),,,hey manyta bhai,,,,kya haal hai aapke,,,,uff stupid question once again vijay,,,,, i mean aj toh tum bhaut he khush hongi na m bhai,,,,,finally jo tum chahti thi vo tume mil he gaya,,,,,rite ???? ,(manyta looks at him with moist eyes),,,,, i mean ab tum bahut jald yuyrani manyta kumari se mrs manyta akash chaudhary ban jaogi ,,,haina,,,, is waqt to apke pet mei titaliyan parrr mar rahi hongi haina manyta bhai ,,,,(says sarcastically,,,, manyta looks at him with moist eyes but syas nothing)

vijay == batao na m bhai,,,i m very excited... tum toh bahut khush hogi na aaj... I TELL U

manyta == (avoiding his eye contact, says palely),,,,,hmmn vijay bhai mai bahut khush hai...

vijay == (says sarcastically nd angrily),,,, OF COURSE M BHAI,,,,,,tumhari khushi toh saaf saaf tumhare chehre pe nazar aa rahi hai,,,,,, dekho na tum itni khush ho ki tumhari ankhen baar baar in khushi ke ansuon se bhar jati hai,,,,,,,

manyta == (very softly),,,,,mmn han vijay bhai...

vijay == (now angrily),,,,, aur bar bar ye khushi ke ansu jab nikalenge toh ankhen laal to hongi he haina,,, itni laal jo tumhara sara dard aur takleef beyaan karde ,,,,,(she looks at him, whn again a tear rolled down from her eyes)

manyta == vijay bhai aap kya kehna chah rahe hai hume kuch samj nahi aa raha

vijay == (angrily)...,,,manyta tumhe samj aa nahi raha ya tum samajna chahti nahi ho ,,,hmmn.,,, ye kya karne ja rahi ho manyta tum,,,hmmn (he says, holding her from her arms ),,,,,. tum,,,,tum us akash se shaadi kaise kar sakti ho jab tum bhi ye bahut achi tarha se janti ho aur hum bhi ki tumhare dil mei kaun hai aur tum kisse pyar karti ho...

manyta == (looks at him in shock nd replies angrily),,,,dekhiye vijay bhia aapki in fizool ki bato ke liye hamare pas time nahi hai to behtar hoga aap jaiye yahan se...samjhe (says cryingly)

vijay == (shoutingly)...OH STOP IT MANYTA,,,JUST STOP IT...OK,, hum ye bahut achchi tarha se jan chukey hai us party ke baad ki tumhare dil mei agar koi hai toh vo sirf aur sirf uday hai,,,,tum sirf uday se pyar karti ho ,,,,fir tum kyun apne aap ko aur uday ko itni takleef de rahi ho,,,,kyun aksh se,,,,,,,,,,,,(cuts him in b/w)

manyta == (says shoutingly nd angrily).,,,,, hum uday se pyar nahi kartey vijay bhai,,,nhai kartey hum usse pyaar samje aap,,,,(she shouts at him with tears rolling down frm her eyes),,,ab ap plz jaiye yaha se

vijay == oh,,,,toh tum uday se pyar nahi karti hmmn ok,,,theek hai manyta toh swear on urself manyta nd say tht u dont love uday,,,,u dont have ne feelings fr him,,,swear on urself manyta nd say it

manyta == (shoutingly),,,,hum apni kasam kha kar kehte hai vijay bhai ki hum uday se pyar nahi kartey,,, nahi kartey ,,,,, mil gaya na apko aapka jawabab ap ap jao yaha se

vijay == (angrily),,,,not yet manyta,,,not yet...theek hai toh ab swear on uday aur bolo ki tum ussey pyar nahi karti...tumhare man mei uske liye koi feelings nahi hai,,,bolo (she looks at him in shock with tears still running down),,,,,bolo manyta,,,, chup kyun ho gai,,,,bolo na


manyta == (cryingly she says) ,,,,,mai uday ki kasam khakar kahti hun vijay bhai ki,,,,,, ki,,, mai mai,,,,,(she finally broke down nd cries her heart out nd says while cryingly),,,,,,ki I LOVE HIM VIJAY BHAI,,,I LOVE HIM ALOT,,,,,,HAN,,,,,,MAI UDAY SE BAHUT PYAR KARTI HUN VIJAY BHAI BAHUT,,,, APNI JAAN SE BADHKAR CHAHTI HUN MAI USEY,,,,,,,(vijay bhai smiles whn she confessed tht, even his eyes also became moist),,,,,,,,


manyta == (once again anger coming across her afce),,, but usney,,,,usney ,,,,,mujhe dhokha dia hai vijay bhai bahut bada dhoka,,,,,(he looks confuse),,,,, pehle mujhe lagta tha ki vo bhi mujse behad pyar karta hai,,,lekin jab us din maine khud usey aur neelaxi ko ek sath itna kareeb dekha,,,,,chii,,,,,, vo aise kaise kar sakta tha vijay bhai,,,,,, i hate him vijay bhai... i really hate him (saying tht, she sits on the floor nd cries her heart out)


All of a sudden, this thought came across vijays mind, he remebers how on tht day after the dance nd dinner, he met manyta at the corridor nd found her cryingly running through there ,,,,,,he thn remembers, how he went in tht direction from whr she had come runningly nd cryingly,

He also saw uday - neelaxi standing there,,,,for once evn he also got confused thinking tht uday n dneelaxi both were kissing each other but whn he moved a bit close to them to know wth was happening ,thn he got to know the truth,,,,,, tht how uday backed off from neelaxi nd did not let her kiss him,,, nd confessed to her tht he loves only nd only his princess his manyta,,,he also remembers how neelaxi was the one who had guessed tht its only manyta to whom he belonged to...nd how she was happy to know abut uday nd manyta . he was still lost in this thought whn he snapped out litening manytas cries nd tears


manyta == (cryingly)...i hate him vijay bhai,,i hate him,,,usney mujhe dhoka dia hai

vijay == (says worriedly),,,, nahi manyta nahi,,,tumhe bahut badi misunderstanding hui hai, aisa kuch bhi nahi hua tha jaisa tumhe lagta hai,,, (manyta looks at him in shock),,,,,,, uday ne wahan na toh neelaxi ko kiss kia tha aur na he uskey room mei gaya ta,(she instantly gets up from the floor shockingly nd confusingly)

manyta == (shockingly),,,ye aap kya keh rahe hai vijay bhai humne apni akhon se...

vijya == (cuts her in b/w),,,,,, kabhi kabhi ankhon dekha bhi galt ho sakta hai manyta bhai,,,,beleive me,,,,,,,uday loves u nd only u,,,usney tumhe koi dhokha nahii dia,,,,(nd then vijay tells manyta the entire truth of tht day)


As he was telling the truth, manyta was getting more nd more shocked,,,she was breathing heavily... she was regretting tht she doubted udays love,,,evn her heart was telling heragain nd again tht uday loves her nd only her alot , he can never ever betray her but her mind nd eyes had totally misguided her,,,,,she remembers how even uday was trying to tell her about him nd neelaxi whn he came to her room tht night but she dint let him finish off the sentence

Whn vijay told her the entire truth, she sat on her bed dejectedly nd amortly...she was left completely numb nd speechless...nd after someseconds, huge drops of tears started flowing down from her eyes...she cries her heart out very loudly . vijay bhai comes nd hugs her tightly to pacify her,,,,,,while crying nd hugging vijay bhai she says:


mnayta == (cryingly) ,,,,i am sorry uday,,,,i am really sorry plz,,,mujhe maaf kar do,,,,,,i m very sorry (she says while crying only, whn vijay suddenly says)

vijay == (tells her worriedly),,,, manyta ,tumhe pta hai uday aj raat 9:00 baje ki flight se australia ja raha hai


Manyta looks at him in extreme shockness tht her face had turned totally pale,,,, she started breathing heavily becoz she could not breath properly as she was getting really restless nd nervous,,,her heart was beating at a jet speed

manyta == asisa nahi ho sakta vijay bhai,,,aisa kabhi nahi ho sakta,,, app jhuth bol rahe haina...(she says while crying only in extreme tension, nervousness nd restlessnes)


Taking her phone, she immeditely moves out of her room speedingly. she was moving so speedingly nd rushly tht she forgot tht she was wearing her footwears only in her one foot nd other foot was bare. she even forgot to carry her dupatta also..

vijay == manyta apni sandal aur dupatta toh,,,,,,,,(but before he could say she stormed out of the room rushly, he follows her)


Moving speedinly, she was passing through her house whn brijraj nd komal called her but she dint listen to them nd continued walking nd moving fastly, she nd vijay bhai reaches the palace gates

manyta == plz vijay bhai jaldi chaliye,,,mujhe mere uday ke paas le chaliye,,plz ,,,plzz,,,,,vijay bhai,,,, plz ( she says crying very hardly ndfolding her hands)


He nodded his head in yes,,,both sit in the car nd zoomed the car off from tht place,,,,,

This song was playing in their car, in a very low nd bleak volume (BHARE NAINA)


"""""" Kyun, Na Bole Mose Mohan
Kyun, Hai Roothe Roothe Mohan Yun
Kaise Manaun Haye Kaise Manaun

Manyta dials udays number, but he didnt pick up her cal

Kyun, Na Bole Mose Mohan
Kyun, Hai Roothe Roothe Mohan Yun
Kaise Manaun Haye Kaise Manaun

,,,,,,she kept on dialling his number but still he dint pick up ne of her calls,,,,


Unn Bin Kate Na Raina
Unn Bin Aave Na Ik Pal Chaina
Unn Bin Jiyun To Kaise Main Jiyun Haye
She was crying like hell, drops of tears were continuously flowing down from her eyes.

Bahe Naina Bhare More Naina, Jhare More Naina
Mohe Naina Sune Nahin Kehna, Bahe More Naina
Bahe Naina Bhare More Naina, Jhare More Naina
Mohe Naina Sune Nahin Kehna, Bahe More Naina


vijay looks at her, she was still crying very hardly. He tries to pacify her but still she kept crying nd dialling udays number. Atlast, she dials unnati number nd cryingly asks her about udays whereabouts nd why isnt he picking up her calls.

Unnati, sensing tht manyta is crying nd is extremely very upset, tells her tht uday has left for the airport nd he is at the airport rite now,,, she further tells manyta tht he is not carrying his cellphone alongwith him,,,,,,

This was the another gravest shochk tht completely jolted nd shook manyta from within...she disconnects the call nd tells vijav about the same cryingly,,,,he was pacifying her nd she was crying very hardly nd bitterly,,,,,, fresh drops of tears were running down frm her eyes



Uday was at the airport, ...his flight was scheduled to take off at 9:00 nd it was already 8:30 pm. He thought of calling manyta just one last time. ,,,,he goes to pco there nd was about to call her whn her words echoed in his mind "mujhe tumhari shakal bhi nahi dekhni,,,,door raho mujse"" ... thinking of this, he puts the receiver down.


Manyta nd vijay were very near to the airport but had got stuck in traffic, it only takes 10 minutes by car to reach airport from that place where they were rite now,,,,,, there was lot of chaos nd ruckus on the road. manytas heart was beating very fastly,,,,she looks at the time...it was already 8:35...


she was in hell lot of tension, still they were stuck in traffic. her heart was beating very fast , it felt as if her heart is going to come out any second... tears were still slowing down from her eyes,,, she looks at time , the clock had struck 8:40...this was the limit... she could not wait any longer.

She gets off, from the car to go to the airport. vijay bhai calls her to stops her but all his efforts went in vain as she had left . she was walking speedingly without carrying her dupatta nd with bare foot crying very hardly. she was walking so rushly nd crazilly, tht instead of taking underpass , she crosses the road which was full of moving vehicles...she had almost reached the airport... vijay bhai was also following her, his teeth started tittreing badly whn he saw how dangerously she had crossed the road... he calls her shoutingly


vijay == manyta.. dhyaan se

manyta looks at him in his direction nd hn watches the time one more time, it was 8:50... she was so engrossed in looking at the time in her mobile ,tht she did not look at the heavy vehicle tht was coming from another side... vijay shouts from there itself at peak of his voice

vijay == manyta,,,,, watch it...


Manyta looks in tht direction with her mouth nd eyes wide opened with shock, terror , nd then


"BBBAAAMMM"


She fell on the divider of the road nd gets collided with the heavy fence/railing which was put up at the edge of the divider. Blood started streaming out profusely from her head. her eyes were getting close slowly nd slowly. she was getting unconcious, whn she speaks bleakly


manyta == ...,,,,,uda,,,,uday,,,,,,,,,(she fainted)

vijay == (shouts) ,,,,,M,,,A,,,N,,,Y,,,A,,,,T,,,A,, (with a look of shock, terror nd horror on his face)


uday had already boarded the flight, he was sitting on his seat in business class. whn all of a sudden, he felt something very strange nd a vwery weird kind of sensational feeling ran down his spine. he was feeling, as if something majorly had happened wrong...unknowingly, his heart had started beating fast, he was getting restless with his fast heartbeat,,,,, in order to pacify himself, he closes his eyes

uday == princess,,,,,, (says softly)


He immediately opens his eyes. he thought of calling manyta once more,,,but dammnit he had not brought his cell phone... he asks his co-passenger to lend him the phn as he had to make an urgent call. he gives him...

Uday was about to dial manytas number, whn once again her words echoed in his mind... "HAN AKASH I WILL MARRY YOU"... he closes his eyes in pain, but still dials manytas number, the phone was switched off,,,,,, uday disconnects the call , closes his eyes nd take a long breath


XXX


HOSPITAL (9:30 PM)

Manyta was taken to hospital by vijay nd meanwhile all including DS, brijraj komal, menaka, griraj,unnati had come to hospital instantly whn vijay informed thm about manytas accident. Here in icu, Manyta was being treated by Dr saab nd other 4-5 doctors. while all her family members were restlessly waiting outside the icu.

11:00 PM

Dr saab comes outside, all anxiously go to him nd ask hows manyta... dr saab informs, tht there are some cuts, bruises nd scratches on her body nd her foot has also got sprained and luckily she has nt got any fractures anywhere on her body, listening this all breath a sigh of relif,,,,,

but dr saab says slowly, all look at him worriedly nd concern whn ds asks him:

DS == but kya dr saab ???? jaldi bataiye mera dil baithe ja raha hai...


Dr saab informs everyone tht, whn manyta fell on the ground, her head had got collided nd struck with the sharp pointed stone with a lot of force coz of which she have got a massive head injury. Just becoz of tht, she can get into the coma or might face memory loss if within some hours she doesnt come back to her senses,,,, she is not in her senses right now, if within 11-12 hours, she doesnt come back to her senses thn she can slip into comma so lets pray for the best...dr saab informed every1


Vijay remebers how manytas accident happened...tht whn truck was moving with full speed in manyta direction, at tht time, manyta had turned towards her right nd had got collided with the trucks side very slightly escaping the major collision but whn she turned around nd hopped onto the divider of the road thn loosing her balance, she fell on the dividers edge on a very big nd sharp pointed stone tht was there on the ground,,,,,,, nd within seconds, the blood from her head started streaming out,,,,,,, thinking abut these events, tears rolled down from his eyes nd he went to the other side,,,, noticing this unaati comforts him nd pacifies him.


Ds, komal cries whn menka tries to pacifies thm,,,,,, there in raj mahael JAI was enjoying nd having celebration with KAY nd L whn she got the same news.

Komal calls aakash nd informs him about everything. Akash fr a sec, was left completely shocked whn he heard tht. he tells komal to relax as moniya very soon will get fine nd further informs her tht rite now he is in a business meeting which is worth of crores so he will try to come to his moniya very soon in the morning once the meeting gets over nd he cracks the deal

komal asks him to come soon , as manyta might need him,,,her love,,,her fiance,,,her akash whn she opens her eyes in the morning,,, he says he will come soon.


MORNING (11:30)


All were gathered in manytas room nd waiting for her, meanwhile akash nd his dad "CHADHRY" had also come to hospital. manyta very slowly, moves her hand a bit which was noticed by DR...

nd then

she starts getting all the flashbacks of her life

whn she was a kid nd while praying she took the laddo from the plate,

whn she sat on ds chair in devgarh,

whn she playing with a sword with a lil kid of her age nd while playing only, he hit her with sword,

thn she gets the fb of the time she spent with murari all these years,

thn she remebers coming to mumbai for the first time nd meeting akash in a bus,

thn she gt the fb of the time whn she met uday fr the first time at beach, thn at his restro bar whre he tried to flirt with her, thn at jail thn how she took her to mahal nd told everyone "yeh hai devgarh ki yuvarni aur hamari honeywali maharani"

thn she remebers all the time she spent with uday whn he used to iritate her alot, thn she remebers their first date whr they played shooting, thn how he hepled her in each nd everything while doing dharna (protest),

thn she remebers how he helped her in getting a makeover,,,, all the scens of lipstick smudging, zip scene, their first dance,

she remebers, how she saved her in jungle nd how she hugged him whn she won her 2nd task of yuvrani thn she went to devgarh with him,,,,, nd thn she bacame yuvrani nd how uday brought her back after she had eaten tht poisnous apple

thn she remebers how she sent uday to jail, thn their jungle scenes , how he carried her in his arms ,,,,thn remebers how she got engaged to uday

thn she remebers how she got to kknow tht akash is alive nd aryan is indded akash, nd thn how udays breaks off her roka nd engagement with her nd gives her hand in akash hand for her happiness.

thn she remebers how till thn she had fallen in love with uday but hided her feelings for uday under the mask of frienship...

then she gets the fb how after her engagement to akash, she went to meet uday in lonavla nd there what all happened b/w thm,

thn she remebers how she had danced with uday in the party, thn later how he had come to her room nd thn they both had got lost in their intimate moment,, thn she remebers about her confrontation whn she tells him "mujhe tumhari shakal bhi nahi dekhni,,,,door raho mujse"" thn how she agrees to marry akash ,,

finally she gets the fb how vb told her the entire truth tht uday only loves her alot nd how she was going to meet him at the airport to stop hhim nd thn she sees the sharp beam of bright light coming towards her nd thn


"BBBAAAMMM"

she immediately opens her eyes scaredly nd frighteningly gets up nd shouts very loudly),,,,,,,,,

MANYTA == N,,,,,A,,,,,,A,,,,,,,H,,,,,,,,,I,,,,,,,,,, (she says scaredly nd shiveringly)


she gets up on the bed instantly such tht she is half sitting nd half lying,,,,,,breathing very heavily she starts crying, with huge tears rolling down from her eyes...,,,,,she sees komal infront of her nd thn hugs her tightly very tightly while crying only...there were tears of happiness in komal, ds ,brijraj nd vijay bhai eyes seeing tht their daughter was fine ,,,,,,

manyta == maa ,,,,,maaa,,,,,(she was crying)

komal == (says with tears in her eyes),,,,,ghabrao nahi,,,,sab theek hai manyta beta,,,,,,,


Each nd every person alongwith dr saab breath a sigh of relif whn they noticed tht manyta was alrite,,,,,

komal == dekho na manyta beta,,,sab aye hai tumse milne,,,,,,


manyta sees who all were there in her room,,,she smiled looking at ds, brijraj, giriraj, akash, vijay bhai nd unaati..,,,, thn she further looks at her room nd says

manyta == (softly) ,,,,,U,,,D,,,,A,,,,,Y,,,,,,, maa uda nahi aya,,,,,uday kaha pe hai,,,,, (akash looks at her in confusion, tht she took the name of uday first not him,,,,,, unnati also looks at manyta in confusion,,,, nd says)

unnati == manyta,,,,dada toh australia gaye haina vo toh abhi bhi apni flight mei he honge,,,


somehow vijay controls the situation before manyta could blurt out anything else

akash ===(says softly) ,,,,,, MONIYA,,,,,,,MONIYA,,,tum theek to ho na


Komal looks at every1 nd gives a hint to move out ,,,,,,everyone except akash goes out , so tht they both could spend sometime with each other,

akash comes close towards her bed nd sits on her bed,,,,,,cups her face with his left hand...nd smiles at her,,,,, she dint feel comfortable but still gave a half nd pale smile to her...

akash starts coming close to her face, to give her a kiss on her forehead but manyta turns her face sideways nd says:

manyta == akash plz,,,,, maine kaha tha na shaadi se pehle ye sab nahi ,,,,i m not at all comfortable with all this things rite now, ,,,so plz,,,,


akash dint feel good whn she said tht nd felt very angry but somehow he controlled his anger ,,meanwhile unnati enters the room nd saw nd heard wht manyta said to akash.,,,unnati was really confuse with manyta behaviour,,,, she thought manyta who loves akash nd is going to get married to him after 2 weeks is not letting him kiss her on her forehead. she was really confuse whn snapping out of her thought she tells akash tht chaudhary uncle is calling him

akash == accha moniya ,,,mai chalta hun,,,actuallu meri abhi 12:30 bje ek bahut imp meeting hai,,,,toh usey he attend karke jaldi se aata hun tumhare paas theek hai,,,tab tak tum apna khayal rakhna ,,,,hmmn,,,,,,(he smiles saying tht, even manyta smiles at him nd thn akash goes frm there


In the meantime vijay also enters in, his eyes were moist but manyta looked at him nd gave a swett smile to him nd thn manyta asks unnati

manyta == unnati,,,,,, uday ka phn aya kya,,,,,,, (she speaks concernly, unnati looks at her in confusion nd says)

unnati == nahi manyta abhi tak to nahi aya,,,,,

manyta == mera ek kaam karo gi unnati,,,,jab bhi tumhare dada ka phn aye tumhare paas tum plz ek baari meri usse baat zarror kara dena,,,plz,,, ya so sake toh us halkat vede ko kehna ki ek baar mere phn pe call kare,,,,,hmmn kahogi na usey tum,, (says with moist eyes)

unnati == (she was a bit confuse with whwtever was happening but replies her sweetly) ,,,, of course manyta,,,,,,ruko mai ek baar dobara check karti hun kabhi dada ka call to nahi aya,,,,

thn she remembers tht whn she got to know about manytas accident thn she forgot to take her mobile while coming to the hospital nd tells manyta the same,,,, manyta tells her tht unnati should go home now as uday can call her mobile at any point of time ns, as she is also ok,


UDAY NIVAS (1:30 PM)

uday called at unnati cell to inform her tht he have just landed now but he was amazed tht unnati dint pick his call,,, she dialled some 2-3 times more but still she dint pick up the call , finally he called on the landline number, nd it was thn tht the maid informed her tht unnati has gone to rajmahal, nd she had forgotten to take her mobile... he disconnects the call... he thought tht he sjoud call rajmahal but ultimately dropped the idea thinking of manyta... he took the cab nd reached his hotel.


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Thats it friens 😛

HOWSSS IT ??? i really hope u all have liked this part,,,,😃

newys friens, do share ur views friend on this chapter, nd plz press the like button if u found this part intersting.😃 i m waiting eagerly fr ur comments

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PRECAP ( last part of this ss)

all go to devgarh palace in rajasthan but only the young generation not the older one except komal.

at devgarh palce, manyta is sitting on her couch, completely lost in seeing the childhood pictures of uday nd her whn she saw uday at entrance door...

she confesses her love to him,,,,,,,,,

their sweet , cute nd lovely romance infront of everyone including akash nd komal

at night. uday goes to meet manyta in her room at devgarh palace

akash sees photographs of uday nd manyta in a close intimate moments,,,,,,


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Edited by imkool - 13 years ago
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awesome update👏i want to read more do continue soon👍🏼
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