ss-PKHTNIK, LAST CHAP (All parts ) UPDATED pg-153 - Page 130

Nira... You made me cry!! You are certainly an awesome writer... No doubt about that! Its best compliment to you that readers are soo moved by the story that they couldnot control their emotions.

All the updates were fabulous. This SS was very close to my heart and I ll miss it a lot. The ending was very unexpected and heart-wrenching. I could feel the pain, the helplessness and the immense love of uday and manyata. No words to describe your update... would just say that reading the last update made me cry.

Pls write another FF...

Hey...nira tume saza toh milegi itna rulane ke liye...ek naya SS tumhari saza hai...jaldi se plot sochan start kardo haa nahi toh par jab bhi tumhe time mile i know ur busy with ur study...but try karna ok...love ur writting

Originally posted by: bushra...

hello sis,,,,,,,hey deary !!!!

apki story buhot achi haan maine pari mujhe buhot maza aya main tu fan hogayi tumhari awsome mindblowing.,,,,,,,Thanxxx alot dear, m glad u loved it this much.

i m new if so main 2 days main hi puri story parli,,,,,,,,, par tumne facebook pe toh already meri story padhi hui haina fir tumne dobara puri story padhi IF pr ??? AWWW. Itni achchi lagi ye story ???

yaar sab acha laga lakin ek cheez achi nai lagi sorry sis but end bilkul acha nai tha,,,,,,,,Actually end kisi ko bhi achcha nahi laga..,,, nd y r u saying sorry fr it ?? its totally ok. trust me.😳

i m feeling really cry because kaal ki puri raat main royi hoon zindagi main phali baar itna royi. . i love manveer ager aisi ending hone wali haan mujhe phale pata hota tu main kabhi nai parti sorry again yaar lakin main buhot sad hogayi itni achi story thi,,,,, I can really understand it y were u feeling tht way ? u had gt emotionally attached to this story alot. But, u plz dont cry dear. Its just a normal fiction story. OK😊

i love manveer ager aisi ending hone wali haan mujhe phale pata hota tu main kabhi nai parti.

sorry again yaar lakin main buhot sad hogay. itni achi story thi romantic happy,,,,,,, AWW, ITTI pasand thi tumhe yeh story. plz, dont opologise bushra. i completely understand. Actually, i like sad nd tragic stories so just becuse of that i ended this story in a ragic way

meri favourite story thi fb pe bhi n if pe bhi,,,,,,,, really ?? this story was ur favourite story on FACEBOOK nd on IF too ??? cant beleive. Bushra, trust me dear, u hv no idea, how happy nd delighted u've made me by ur kind words of appreciation... Thanks alot sweetie for ur such sweet nd wonderful words..,,,,,,

u r great writter,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,thnxxx once again bushra.

but ending aisi q i dont belive it ke ending manveer is died i m again crying yaar ,,,,,,,now, plz dont stop crying.

plzzz ending change kardo,,,,,,,,,,,,sorry dear. I have finished off this story. i cant change it now. But u know, i hv a good news fr u. There is a girl named SAFIA, who is writing the sequel to my story tht is "PKHTNIK-2" died. ,,,if u wanna read wht happen after manveer died thn U can read in her version of story. I m sure u will gonna love her story as well as u loved mine.

baki sab awsome great tha buhot achi thi n sorry again ager tumhe bura laga hoon tu sis i m sorrry but jo mera dil main tha maine wo kaha diya haan nai tu... 😭 i so sad n crying😭 aisa lag raha haan i m died 😭 ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,oh !!! bushra, plz dont say like tht. nd also plz dont opologise deary. mujhe bilkul bura nai laga. infact, i feel so happy ki tumhe meri story itni itni itni pasand aayi. I cant tell u how happy u have made me by giving such nicest feedback to me...

n u r good writter i clap u but end so sad👏,,,,,,,,,,,thnxxx so so so much fr the lovely compliment. you are also a very sweet nd adorable girl.

Tumne us din scrap mei mujse pucha tha na ki mai kabhi uar story likhu toh tumhe zarroor bataun. haina ???

u know i m writing another innense nd romantic story on manveer by the name "whispering hearts"...do read it whn u hv time.

heres the link of it ...

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3389975

ab toh khush😳

Sorry fr the late reply deary but kya karein i was really busy