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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: livvy

I just luved it can u pleez pm 4 da nxt part


oh hi...😛
thnxxx dear fr ur comment...i m really glad tht u liked the update...😃

about the next update... i m nt sure yaar,,,,whn i m gonna update next ...
but dont worry i will surely pm u if i write the next part...ok...😛

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Posted: 13 years ago

PLZ UPDATE THE NEXT PART I WANT TO READ THE NEXT CHAPTER SOOM

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when u will update ur next part ? i cant wait more plz update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey friens,,,,,,,,😊
as we all know tht dek is ending on 2nd august, nd tht date is not too far...😭😭😭 nd we are left with just 5 episodes of dek,,,,,, so i really hope in thse 5 episodes, we all get to see the best of manveer .😃
i was really very sad whn i got this news nd i know we all dekians were very depressed about the same nd did our best to save the show but still this show is coming to an end...

newys, i think all good things come to an end nd same is the case with dek...i m gonna surely miss it very much speciallly priyash, manveer, uday, manyta, vijay nd others...😳 nd i really hope we get to see priyash in some other show together or we get dek 2 😃😆
coz i m not gonna watch lmyam because tht show looks more like a saas bahu stuff, as its makers are balika vadhu fame...nd saas bahu stuff is really not my cup of tea...😆

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thnx to all of u for ur comments nd pm for motivating me to write further...👏

whn i got the news of dek ending, i was so sad nd depressed tht i really dint feel like continuing writing it further but at the same time i wanted to continue coz i i have a beautiful storyline in my mind regarding manveer confession,,,,,,, but becoz of my lazinesss i stopped writing it😆

but now i have decided tht atleast i will update the next 3 chapters of the story, where manveer will confess their love to each other,,,,,😳
nd will update those 3 parts soon...😃

so once again wanna say thnxx to all who commented nd sent me pm for writing further,,,, u guys deserve this👏


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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: imkool

hey friens,,,,,,,,😊

as we all know tht dek is ending on 2nd august, nd tht date is not too far...😭😭😭 nd we are left with just 5 episodes of dek,,,,,, so i really hope in thse 5 episodes, we all get to see the best of manveer .😃
i was really very sad whn i got this news nd i know we all dekians were very depressed about the same nd did our best to save the show but still this show is coming to an end...

newys, i think all good things come to an end nd same is the case with dek...i m gonna surely miss it very much speciallly priyash, manveer, uday, manyta, vijay nd others...😳 nd i really hope we get to see priyash in some other show together or we get dek 2 😃😆
coz i m not gonna watch lmyam because tht show looks more like a saas bahu stuff, as its makers are balika vadhu fame...nd saas bahu stuff is really not my cup of tea...😆

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thnx to all of u for ur comments nd pm for motivating me to write further...👏

whn i got the news of dek ending, i was so sad nd depressed tht i really dint feel like continuing writing it further but at the same time i wanted to continue coz i i have a beautiful storyline in my mind regarding manveer confession,,,,,,, but becoz of my lazinesss i stopped writing it😆

but now i have decided tht atleast i will update the next 3 chapters of the story, where manveer will confess their love to each other,,,,,😳
nd will update those 3 parts soon...😃

so once again wanna say thnxx to all who commented nd sent me pm for writing further,,,, u guys deserve this👏


Nira, You Lazy Girl.😉 I'm also sad yaar just like you because of DEK ending 😭& because of that My poor FF also suffers.😭
Please yaar We'll continue our FF/ SS after DEK ending also, because after that we'll have only one thing left OUR IMAGINATIONS.😍 Jo DEK mein nahi mila wo humare FF & SS mein milega. 😊I'll also not watching that new crap BEHNA SHOW. 🤢I don't like BEHNA Shows. So please eat some energy bars & lag jao kaam par ok.😆 Ise end karne ke baare mein sochna bhi mat, ok.😈 TIGHT HUGS.🤗 🤗
I miss your long update so much.😳 Do continue ASAP.☺️ ☺️
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Ni, why are you so upset? I know you love dek. Everybody loves the show. It's a grate shock for us that dek is ending. Believe me every good thing end early which we don't want. Dek is one of the best show in Indian television. It has a unique storyline unlike any other show. We're lucky to have such a show. But it had to be end one day but it is ending now. We'll have to accept it. But we can keep them alive in our FF/SS. So please don't end your story. It's indeed good. Make up your mind and continue the story. One thing is true, characters like Youveraj Uday veer Singh, Rajmata Mrinalini Devi and Youverani Manayta Kumari can never be forgotten. Such strong characters won't come tv again. They will remain star of Indian television and heros of our heart. Please keep them alive with your story. It's a request. And yes don't be lazy. If I won't get your update quickly then I'll leave cockroches in your bed,so... Update soon.
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hey friens, hi😃
i m updating next chap tht is chap - 8,,,, actually chapter 8 had turned very very long 😆, so i have divided this chapter into 2 parts, of which i m posting the first part now and the rest will post in the evening 😛



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ey friens😛

i know, i m updating this part quite late, so i m really sorry guys,,,,,really sorry plz forgive me,,,,u all know the reason for it ????? i was really sad nd depressed with news of dek ending tht i dint feel like writing further although i wanted to write becoz i hab a beautiful plot regarding manveer confession in my m ind so here i am once again...😃

i would like to say Thanku thnku thnku thnku 🤗, to each nd evry pesron who all have given such nice , awesum, beautiful nd lovely comments and pressed the like button.,,,,,..thnxxx friens...thnxxx alot for ur appreciation .👏👏👏

Friens , once you finished reading this part.,,,,plz dont forget to give ur precious comments on the same..,,,,,nd if u find this update worth liking, thn plz do press the like button...😆😃


so here is the part 8.



CHAPTER - 8.1


RECAP :


Manyta moves her hand, from his back to his hair nd clutches his hair tghtly in her hand. She slowly moves towards his neck nd gently places her soft, petal like lips on his neck. He closes his eyes tightly getting completely engrossed in her hold. She again gives a small peck on the same place. She kisses his neck nd gives small pecks on the same place again nd again. Finally she gives him a long passionate lovebite on his neck by gently biting nd sucking him from there. He had snaked around his arms on her nd tighten the grip of his hug on her, completely lost in his moment nd says softly ,,,very softly

Uday == p,,,r,,,I,,,,n,,,c,,,e,,,s,,,,s,,,,,,,,,,,,,,(whispers)

He caressing, cuddling nd snuggling through her neck, ears nd cheeks finally reaches her forehead nd places a kiss on her forehead nd says

Uday == I love u princess,,,,, I love u a lot,,,,,,just love u nd only u,,,,,(whispering)

Manyta == (says softly in shaky voice ,,,stameringly),,,,,,,uday,,,,,I,,,,,I,,,I,,,,,,,

Mannyta one hand was snaked around his neck nd other was clutched in his hair. Both were coming close to each other,,,nd shortening the distance tht was left in between them,,,,,their lips were just few inches apart When Manyta got the fb of uday nd neelaxi,,,,hw they both were so closely standing with each other nd uday had kissed her. She evn had said to uday to move into her room,,,,,she got tht flashback

As soon as she remembered tht scene, a lone tear escaped through manyta eyes.,,,,,



PRESENT


Manyta pushes uday away from herself with all her mite tht he could nt understand the sudden change of events. he was looking at her with confused nd astound expressions nd thn


manyta == (says a bit shoutingly nd cryingly)... dont touch me...mat aao mere kareeb, mere paas, dur raho mujhse...samjhe,,,just dur raho...tum layak he nahi ho ki tum mere yun aise kareeb aao..,,,jao yahaase abhi isi waqt,,,mujhe tumhari shakl bhi nahi dekhni ,,,jaao,,,get lost,,,,...( says crying very hardly.,,,, )


uday was looking at her confusingly not getting wht happened to her all of a sudden...she was crying like hell nd was shaking due to her extreme anger, whn once again the thought of uday -neelaxi pondered in her mind.,,,,he tries to come close to her , to pacify nd control her...she moves back and points her index finger at him nd says


manyta == (says angrily yet cryingly),,,, maine kha na dont come close to me,,,,mat aao mere paas,,,,,...move back


(trying to pacify nd control her,,,he says ,,, )


uday == manyta,,,akhir hua kya hai,,,,tum aise,,,aise,,,,,yun...(confusingly)


manyta== maine kaha na mat aao mere paas,,,,jao yahan se,,,aur dobara mujhe apni kabhi shakl bhi mat dikhana,,,jao yaha se,,,,get ;lost,,,,,mai tumse milna toh dur baat tak nahi karna chahti,,,,,i hate you uday,,,,i hate u ,,,,i hate you very much (says cryingly but angrily)


Uday == (says in anger nd frustration),,,,tum akhir chahti kya ho manyata,,, kya chahti ho tum humse,,,,,batao,,,,hum samaj nahi paa rahe hain tumhe,,,... (says, moving her back nd forth),,,,,\\ ek pal mei tum hamare itni kareeb hoti ho,,, jaise tum humse behad pyar karti ho, ,,,,,lekin dusrey he pal hame apne aap se itna dur kar deti ho jaise hum tumhare liye kuch bhi nahi,, hamara koi wajood nahi,,,,.,,hmmn,,,akhir kya chahti ho manya tum.,,,,(says frustratingly, in anger nd hurt)


manyta == (says cryingly cupping his face, ) ,,,,,mai kya chahte hu...ye tum mujse puch rahe ho,,,,????,,,,hmmn,,,, tum kya chahte ho uday,,,,akir tum kya chahte ho ???? (again remembers uv-nelaxi fb),,,,,tumne kaha tha na ki tum mujse sirf mujse pyar karte ho,,,,,,,ki mai he tumhari zindagi hu,,,,,tum sirf mere ho haina,,,,,(uday with moist eyes nods his head in yes)


uday == han princess,,,i love u only u,,,,,,hum sirf tumse pyar kartey hain,,,,,lekin


manyta == (cuts him in b/w nd says cryingly),,,,toh fir vo sab kya tha uday???? kya tha vo sab jo tum,,,tum aur neelaxi,,,,,aise kaise ,,,,kaisey uday kaise,,,,kar sakte ho tum,,,,,ek pal ke liye bhi tumne mere barey mie mnahi socha,,,mera khyal nahi aya tumhe vo sab karney se pehley,,,,(nd thn she cries very hardly)



uday thought, tht manyta is upset about his dancing with neelaxi. whn he, in order to jealous manyta, danced with neelaxi nd evn said tht his nd neelaxis chemistry was better thn his nd manytas.,,,,,. he thought tht manyta is upset coz of this.,,,thts y she is confronting nd shouting at him like this


So, he wanted to make it clear to manyta tht he delibrately said tht to save themselves in tht situation whn everyone including akash, jay nd others were looking at thm suspiciously nd weirdly after he nd manyta had danced,,,,but


he was totally cluless of this thing nd dint know tht manyata had seen him nd neelaxi whn she forcibly had taken him alongwith her, nd tht manyta had misunderstood the whole situation tht he had kissed nelaxi nd went with her in her room ,,,,not knowing the actual picture, tht he dint let her kiss him but instead confessed to her tht he loves only nd only his princess his manyta.

holding her arms he says:


uday == manyta,,,nahi,,,,tum hame galt samaj rahi ho,,,humne toh nelaxi ke sath dance sirf isliye kia tha,,,(but before he could say)


she immediately jerked his hands away frm her nd says


Manyta == maine kaha na tumse dur raho mujhse,,,dont touch me,,,,,mat aao mere paas,,, mat chuo (touch) mujhe,,,,,(says in anger),,,kyun baar baar mere kareeb atey rehte ho,,,,ek baar kehne se samj nahi ata kya tumhe,,,,,(taking a pause nd wiping her tears ,,,she says),,,,,

ab samajh aaya uday,,,ab mujhe sab kuch samj aa gya, akhir tum chahte kya ho,,,(uday looks at her in confusion),,,,tum mujhse pyar nahi kartey uday,,,,tum mujse pyar nahi kartey kyunki tum sirf sur sirf meri body se pyar kartey ho,,,tum mujhe sirf pana chahte ho,,,,,,taaki apna man behla sako,,,haina,,,,,yehi baat hina,,,,,(says shoutingly nd in extreme hurt,),,,,,,toh congratulations yuvraaj udaybeer singh akhir tum jo chahte the vo tumhe mil he gaya,,,,,,(she says cryingly in extreme pain nd agony,,,, he looks at her with extreme hurtness nd pain,,tht how could she say tht),,,,,,,

jo bhi tumne kal raat mei kaha tha tht u love me alot..,,,vo sirf ek natak tha na,,,,,mujh tak pahunchne ka,,,,,haina,,,,kyunki agar tum sach mei mujse pyar kartey toh tum kabhi,,kabhi bhi vo sab nahi kartey,,,,,, (thinking once again about fb of uday nd neelaxi, she cries very hardly)


uday has had enough of her nonsense, in extreme anger nd hurt he forcibly nd tightly clutches her in his hands nd says:


uday == (says angrily with extreme pain in his eyes),,,, tumhey ye lagta hai ki mai tumse pyar nahi karta,,,,,,mai sirf tumhe paana chahta hun,,,,,apna man behlana chahta hun,,,, hmmn,,,,ye lagta hai tumhe ????


manyta == (angrily),,,,,haan (he clutches her so hardly tht it was really paining her alot),,,,, aah,,,ouch,,, (screams in pain),,,,uday choro mujhe ,,,


uday == kyun???? dard ho raha hai ?????


manyta == haan (she winces in pain)


uday == (says with extreme pain nd agony),,, aur us dard ka kya princess jo tum bar bar hume deti ho,,,, bar bar aisi ghatiya batein kar ke hume takleef pahunchati ho,,,,baar baar hamare pyar ka mazaak udati ho,,,,,,,us dard ka kya princess jo tum bar bar hume apne aap se aise dur karkar deti ho,,,(she also looks at him in pain),,,,,tumhe ye lagta hai ki hum tuse pyar nahi kartey balki apna dil aur apna man behla rahein hai,,,,,(says with acute pain in his eyes)


manyta == (thinks with moist eyes),,,,,pehle nai lagta tha uday but aj jb khud tumhe aur neelaxi ko aise dekha toh ,,,,chii,,,,,uday,,, agar tum sachmei mujse pyar kartey toh kabhi bhi uskey itney kareeb uskey room mei nahi jatey,,,,(she snapped out of her thought whn he says)


uday == tumhe ye lagta hai ki hum tumse pyar nahi kartey,,,,(says with pain nd hurt)


manyta == haan ,,, mujhe yahi lagta hai,,,tum mujse pyar nahi kartey uday,,,,nahi kartey ,,,,tum sirf jamare sath apna timepass karna chahte ho,,lekin ab aur nahi uday aur nahi,,,ab mai tumhe apne sath yeh dhokha aur nahi karne dungi,,,,,,,(she gulped down while crying),,,,,,, agar yeh bat nai hai toh batao,,kyun aaye ho tum yaha mere room mei,,,,hmmn kya kar rahe ho tum is waqt mere room mei??? (says angrily with reddened eyes)


Uday == (abhored with wht she said,,,he says angrily clutching her tightly),,,, mujhe tumse zaroori baat karni thi manyta, isliye aya tha mai tumhare paas,,, yaad hai na maine tumhe call kiya tha, par tum mera phn pick nahi kar rahi thi,,,,,,



Manyta remembers, how uday was calling her again nd again but she kept on disconnecting it nd switched it off later nd even did nt talk to him whn he called on vijay bhai's cell,,,,she was still lost in her thoughts whn uday shouts at her :


Uday == (angrily),,,,sirf tumhari wajha se yaha aye the hum manyta, sirf tumhari vajha se,,,,,kyunki jab tumne pehli baar hamara phn uthaya tab tum hame bahut disturb sound ho rahi thi,,,jaise ki bahut ro rahi ho,,,,aur fir tumne humaraa phn switch off kar dia,,,,,,isliye waha hum tumhare barey mei soch sochkar pagal huye ja rahe the ki akhir kya hua hoga jis wajha se tum itni pareshan lag rahi thi,,,isliye hume yaha aana para,,(she looks at him with pain nd hurt in her eyes)

pta hai manyta ,,,aaj humei najane kyun aisa lag raha tha ki jo baat tumhare dil mei hai vo aaj tum hamse kahogi,,,,keh dogi ki tum hamare liye kya feel karti ho,,,,tht,,, tht u love me,,,u love me alot,,,,(she looks at him with painful eyes)

jab party mei, tumne humse kaha ki jis tarha se hum par sirf tumhare haq hai theek usi tarha se tum par sirf hamara haq hai,,,,,,(PART-5)

jab humne ek sath dance kia us pal ko bhulkar ki vahan sab present hai ,,,,,,, jab tumne akash ko dance ke liye mana kia hamare liye,,,,,tab se hume aisa lag raha tha ki ho na ho aj tum hame apne dil ki baat zarror bata dogi,,,,,,,lekin dekho na hame kya pta tha ki aj ek bar fir tum hamare pyar ka mazaak bana dogi,,,,(he says with extreme hurt nd pain,,,,,she also looks at him in pain nd agaony)



Manyta looks at him confusingly with moist eyes,,,thinking tht he was saying the truth she wanted nd was about to confess her true feelings to him today but thn whn she saw him with neelaxi, she could not bare it.,,,,,she again gets tht fb of uday nd neelaxi,,,,, was thinking about tht fb whn he says snaping her out of her thought


Uday == hum tumhe isliye phn kar rahe the kyunki hum tumhe batana chahte the ki dinner ke baad hume neelaxi mili thi ,,,,(manyta instantly looks at him in anger with her eyebros raised),,,,, aur tumhe pta hai unhone humse kaha ki vo,,,,,,(he was about to tell the truth of what nelaxi had said to him, tht she knows he loves manyta,,,,but before he could complete her sentence,,,, manyta felt so angry with uday tht she shouts at him)


manyta == (says angrily gnashing her teeth),,,,choro,,,,choro mujhe,,,,,choro,,,,, nhai sunna mujhe ki us neelaxi ne tumhe kya kaha ,,,,samjhe ,,,kuch nahi sunna mujhe,,,,tum bas abhi isi waqt yaha se jao,,,,mujhe tumhari shakal bhi nahi dekhni,,,jao yaha se,,just jao uday jao,,,,,,,(udays anger nd blood was boiling seeing manyta behaving like tht),,,,,, aur kitni bar kahu ki, mai tumse koi pyar vyar nahi karti ,,,,aur mat bhulo ye ki meri sagai akash se ho chuki hai aur bahut jald shadi bhi hone wali hai,,,,,(he looks at her in extreme pain , hurt nd agony),,,choro mujhe,,,,,aur jao yaha se



seeing manyta such cold hearted behaviour towards him, his eyes became noist ,,,nd teras get clustered in his eyes but he did not shed them,,, feeling so hurt, he pushes manyta away frm him so hard tht she stumbles a bit ,,,,,she looks at him in shock,,,, for a sec, she literaally got scared seeing such bulging anger nd hurt in his eyes,,,,she was crying whn he clenching his hand in a fist , says very very very angrily


uday == theek hai,,,nahi chahti na tum ki hum tumhare paas aye,,,nahi ayenge,,,,(he says angrily, she looka at him with tearful eyes) , hum yaha se chale jayein,,,, chale jaayenge,,,,(says with hurt nd anger, she looks at him in shock),,,,,aj se balki abhi se hum yuvraj udayveer singh tumhari aur tumhare akash ki zindagi se nikaltey hai,,,(she looks at him with extreme shock ,,,tears rolling down frm her eyes non stop),,,, tum khush raho apne akash ke sath,,,,,, ab bs hum tumhara tamasha aur sehen nahi kar sakte,,,,, tumhe pta hai manyta hume lagta tha ki kabhi na kabhi tum humse apne dil mei chupi hui baat zaroor bta dogi ki tum bhi humse pyar karti ho,,,lekin aj hume akir samaj aa he gaya tum,,,,tum,,,,tum hamse pyar nahi karti bas TUMHE HAMARI AADAT HAI,,,,hmmn aadat hai tumhe hamari,,,, lekin ab aur nahi manyta aur nahi,,,,,, u get tht (he says with extreme anger nd hurt)



Saying tht , he goes towards the window to go,,,,manyta was still standing at her place amortly nd dejectedly with tears rolling down frm her eyes continuously,,, he looks at her nd she at him one more time nd thn he goes away from there,,,,,she goes towards widow to see him, but he without looking back at her kept on moving f/w,, holding nd tightly hugging his tht black shirt which he forgot to wear, she sits on the floor, nd cries bitterly ,,,very very bitterly nd finally says


manyta == (says lookin at his shirt),,,, kyun kiya tumne mere sath aisa uday kyun kiya,,,,,kyun dhokha diya mujhe kyun,,,, i hate you uday,,,i hate you,,,,i hate you very much,,(saying tht she gently kisses his shirt nd says),,,,,,i love you uday,,,,i love you so very much,,,,,i just love u alot,,,,,


Hugging his shirt very tightly,she lies on floor nd cries bitterly,,,,very bitterly.



XXX,,,,,,XXX,,,,,XXX



Unnati, after searching uday in each nd every corner of their house finally saw tht he was stnding outside in the lawn ns was practicing boxing,,,,, she goes to meet nd wish him, her heart came to her mouth whn she saw,,,, it was raining ,nd uday without without wearing any shirt was so engrosesd nd lost in exercising tht he was punching on punshing bag/sack very angrily, fiercely aggressively nd forcefully,,, his eyes had turned red with the anger.


unnati understood tht her brother is definitely extremely upset, hurt nd angry over something because whn his anger, frustration nd hurt seems no bound thn its only the way through which he vents all of his anguishness nd hurtness out tht is by giving pain to himself,,,,, unnati calls him 3, 4 times but he does not listen nd instead starts pucnhing nd kicking more hardly, angrily nd fiercefully...,,, she lifts her hand to stop him nd ws about to say something whn,,,,


uday ==== (very angrily) ,,,,choti jao yahan se,,,,,(she goes from there with moist eyes nd he gain starts kicking nd punching on the punching bag/sack with extreme anguishness...)



Manyta was very hurt, sad nd depressed tht drops of teras were continuously running down from her eyes.,,,,,So, she lying on her bed with the comforter over her ,was pretending tht she wasnt feeling well so was sleeping so tht she could avoid all questioning eyes of everyone whoever was coming in her room to meet nd greet her be it her maids, ds, her mom ,,,, She even does not respond to vijay whn he also comes to her room to ask her about the yesterday's phone call of uday nd pretends as if she was sleeping.


Whn akash also comes to meet her later tht day, she even doesnt meet him telling the same reason,,,,, Later in the evening, unnati informs uday tht manyta is not well so tht they both could go nd meet her but he completely avoids unnati saying tht he has lot of work to do, so he is going to office nd asks her to go alone,,,,unnati could not believe tht he said tht, so decides to go alone without asking anything further,,,,,,,



Four (4) days had been passed, uday nd manyta did not meet each other, forget about meeting they even hadnt talked to each other on phn ,,,,,,neither uday had called manyta nor she had called him,... but they both kept waiting for each other phone calls . uday had drown himself in his work whreas manyta while pretending only had actually caught herself with a mild fever.



Finally on fifth (5) day, she was feeling a bit better . Akash comes to meet her nd asks her out for a dinner date,,,, she dint want to go out with him, but after being forced by akash, ds nd her mother she relunctantly agrees. akash asks her for a dance with him, she dint want to dance but still agrees whn he kept asking nd requesting her.


Both were dancing,,, akash eyes were sat on manyta , but she was lost in thoughts of tht night whn she nd uday had danced together. akash was holding manyta from her waist nd kept on staring lovingly at her, she dint feel comfortable whn he held her from her waist. Both were still doing slow dance on some romantic number. While dancing, akash starts coming close to her face, he was so mesmerised with her beauty tht he encircles his arms on her waist tightly. Feeling awkward, uncomfortable nd gross, she looks at him in shock.

Because she knew if there is anyone who has the right to come this close to her, to hug her, to kiss her, to touch her, to caresse her,to cuddle her thn its only her love, her uday, only him. Not only her heart but her body also has given this right only to uday, Not only she but her body nd soul also belonged to uday. she always had felt so pure nd safe in udays arms whnevr uday had come close to her or made love to her.


Whn akash held her in tht grip she felt her body which belongs only to uday, which was so pure nd intact uptil now is getting maligned with akash 's touch,,,, she was feeling as if is she is no more pure nd holy for uday. ...(i know very filmy...😆)


Akash was still coming close to her, she was looking at him with her eyebrows raised in shock nd confusion. their was one hand distance b/w thm. akash unlock his left hand from her waist nd cups her face nd starts pulling her towards himself,,,,,, she who was still looking at him with her wide eyes , immeditaely unlock his hold from her nd moves backwards from him nd shouts at him:


manyata === (angrily),,,,,,akash ye kya kar rahe ho tum ????? i m not at all comfortable, samjhe tum,,,,, aur dobara kabhi mere sath aisa kiya na to mujse bura koi nahi hoga,,,,, (she stormed off from tht place in anger nd goes towards dining area,,,, aksh was completely astound as to wht happened to her,,,,he goes towardsher)


aksash == moniya kya hua,,,,mai toh bas tumhare sath close dance he kar raha tha,,,,,


manyta == (says frustratingly) akash plz,,,, i m not at all comfortable with this sortaa things,,,,, aur vaise bhi i think hume ye sab karne se pehle shaadi tak wait karna chahiye,,,,, nd i will be glad agar tum isme mujhe support karoge,,,,hmmn,,,,,,aur i dont feel like partying anymore,,,,,plz mujhe ghar jana hai,,,,,plz,,,,,,chalein,,,,,,,(saying tht she stormed outside in anger nd frustration)



Akash thinks, how on tht day she was standing close to udaybeer tht they were agglutinised with each other as if they were one body,,,,,,he further thinks how on tht day, she had done close dance with uday ,,,,,tht time she dint have any problem dancing with him but

why the hell now she created such fuss whn he (akash), her love , her fiance danced with her . he was still not tht close to her which would make her uncomfortable as there was one hand distance b/w them but on tht day she was glued to uday in such a way tht not even air could pass b/w them...


thinking about all this, he remebers jaynandinis words tht (part -7 ),,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,fb


jay ==of course uday accha kyun nhi lagega itna passionate nd intense dance ,,,(says looking at akash, nd akash who was already burning with jealousy looks at her in anger,,,,manyta gulped down in nervousness),,,,, vaise vo dance tha ???? "I mean jis tarha se aap dono yun chipke huye the aisa lag raha tha ki aap dono dance nahi balki romance kar rahe ho,,,akir chakar kya hai,,,, hmmn kahin aap dono sach much mei toh pyaar ??????" ...,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,ends



remebring that, he closes his hand in a fist nd says very very very angrily


akash == tum meri ho moniya,,, sirf meri,,,,,ab mai akash verma nahi akash "chaudhary" hoon,,,,mai ab kamzor nahi hu,,,,,,,tumhe to mai apna banake chorunga,,,, mai janta hu tum sirf mujse pyar karti ho isliya toh tumne mujse sagai ki ,,,, lekin ab mai aur 2 months wait nahi kar sakta tumhe hamesha hamesha apna banane ke liye,,,,,,,,,,(he thinks something),,,,,,,,ab mujhe pta chal gaya ki mujhe ky akarna hai...(says angrily) ,,,,,,,,,




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Thats it friens 😛

HOWSSS IT ??? i really hope u all have liked this part,,,,,,😛

i m sorry for updating quite late,,,,really sorry ,,, u all know the reason very well 😭😭

newys 😛

do share ur views friend on this, nd plz press the like button if u found this part intersting.😃

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PRECAP

uday goes to australia fr some important work relating to his new project.

manyta mets with an accident and

manyta confessing her feelings to uday.


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Edited by imkool - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
FINALLY you updated Nira. Yaaayyy *happy dance*
Omg I loved this update, It was so emotional and heart breaking. Poor Uday, I feel so bad for him . Manyata is n ot even ready to hear him, and that's why he can't even clear the misunderstanding between them. Seriously loved the part where they both are fighting and are so hurt. And now they are not even talking to each other. Sigh, their egos 😛 . Lol. But I was so happy to see Manyata telling off Akash 😆 . And that Akash ka bacha, zaroor koi ghatiya planning ker raha hoga. But as long as Uday is there, not to fear 😉 . Now the precap is still the same. So much suspense 😲 , you are killing me 😭 . I am sure Akash will bring his plan in action once Uday leaves the country and he would take advantage of that. And maybe Manyata's accident also happens because of Akash. But whatever it is, atleast that would bring Uday back and Manyata would finally confess her love for him. Eeepp Nira I am dying to read the next part 😳 . Update soon, and it better be long 😈


Edited by fia21 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome very nice alit short if compared to your previous update but very interesting as usual the precap sounds interesting please update soon and thank u for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey imkool!!
gr8 update

very emotional
loved the way u expressed M and UVs feelings so beautifully


personally i feel M shud hav listened 2 wat UV wanted 2 tel her abt neelaxi but
she didnt :( i cant understand the turmoil of her feelings 4m ur elegant wr8in

but yaar hamesha ye misunderstandings lovers ke beech me aa jathi hai
kya kare? but wid out tat lovestory me tadka kaise rahega ?

finally dumb akash realises tat M has feelings 4 UV
eager 2 know abt mr intelligent idiots blockbuster pyaar


precap was very gud .
i was always confused whn i heard tat UV vud meet wid an accident in DEK
i mean 2 bring thm close dey shud hav hurt M so tat UV cud realise his
burning and unconditional 4 her is stil alive

i m happy 2 knw u l update de next part soon
i had loads of fun reading dis part

excitedly waiting for the confession u hav planned
and yaar v r al depressed wid DEK ending and r 1ly life lines r de
FFs wr8en by de amazing writers here @ IF .so do cont


tom is my b'day and i m hardly excited cuz dek wil b ending
but ur update has cheered me up


keep rocking

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