manveer ss:phir mohabbat karne chala hai tu CHAPPY:23 PG:90 - Page 14

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: jazzthakur

<font color="#cc3333" size="5" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">dear really it was very nice promo</font>


<font color="#cc3333" size="5" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">don't stop yaar other wise how I will leave yaar</font>

<font color="#cc3333" size="5" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">do cont. soon</font>😊😊


thanks yaar n dont worry i will continue.


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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome promo...lots of suspense...😈hmmm...i think i am getting it..plzzz cont it...i will wait for ur update...ur promo sounds really very interesting...
thanks for the PM...
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Posted: 13 years ago
nyc promo loving the suspense . ofcourse u shud continue
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Posted: 13 years ago
~~PART~9~~
M:acha partner main chalti hoon.Ap ajka plan mat bhuliyega.
G:haan beta hum nahi bhulaiyenge.lekin abhi ab jayi.warna apka vampire aj sabko kha jayega.
M smile karkey chali janey lagti hai.lekin tabhi achanak vo phir vapas ati hai...
G:kya huya partner app phirse vapas agayi.
M:haan vo actually apko kuch bolna tha..
G;haan boliye na..
M:yehi ki ab abhi meethe ko hath bhi mat lagana..
G(daarke):h..h..humney kab hath lagaya.
M:nagi lagaya lekin intention toh apka vahi tha na.chaliye chup chap cake ko table pein rakhiye.
G ek bachey ki tarah cake ko rakh deta hai.
M(smile):good boy...Shanti app yeh cake lejayiye.
Shanti cake ko leke chali jati hai.
M:acha toh ab hum chaltey hai.aur ha khaney ki bat app apni medicines lengey,samjh partner.
G:ys mam.pata nahi agar app nahi hoti toh humara kya hota.
phir M chali jati hai.
(M's pov)
oh god aj toh sachmey bohout late hogaya.abhi Uv humse bohout gussa karega.kher koi baat nahi agar vo gussa karsakta hai toh humme bhi ushe manana ata hai.
END OF THE POV
M Uv ki room main jati hai.par vaha andhera hota hai.
M:yaha itna andhera keun hai.
suddenly koi peeche seh akey uski left ear main kehta hai
Person(whisper):keunki humari princess andhere main aur bhi khubsurat aur masoum lagti hai..
M:Uv..tum..
Uv:ha hum kun kissi aur ka intezar tha.vasai inti late keun..
M:vo actually partner seh baat kar rahi thi.
Uv:acha yoh ab pata chala ki actually humare dad hi humate lovestory ka asli villian hai.
M:Uv...
Uv:kya Uv..i mean akhir unke vajase hi toh humari wife humarai pass itni late ayi..
M:tum bhi na.kher light on karo na.
Uv:nahi pehley humara shadi ka gift.
M:acha toh yeh baat hai.toh bolo ki actually main humare hubby ko chahiy kya???
Uv:promise...
M:kya promise???
Uv:haan promise ki tum humseh apni haar problem share karoogi.
M:acha baba promise.
Uv:promise ki tum kabhi bhi humare liye apni jaan kabhi bhi khatrey nahi daloogi.
M:Uv...
Uv:M promise karo...
M:acha tike hai hum promise kartey hai.
Uv:promise ki tum humeisha humari sath rahogi.
M:promise promise promise my halkat,veda..mera shonu..
Uv(with smirk):promise ki tum abhi issi wakt humme humare lips pain kiss karoogi.
M:haan han(eyes wide open)haan lip kiss che sare achey achey promises ki bich main yeh ganda vala promise keun tapak parah.
Uv:no no no princess tumhe toh kiss danahi parigi..
M:nahi bilkul nahi.acha yeh batao ki tumney mujhe miss kiya.
Uv:princess tum abhi topic change mat karoo.
M:acha tike hai toh phir hum chaltey hai.
Uv:arey nahi nahi janey ki kiya jaldi hai princess.haan hu?ney tumh bohout miss kiya aur tumey??
M panga lney ki sochti hai.
M:hmmm..actually sach kahoo toh mainey na tumhey jada miss nahi kiya.
Uv:aur vo keun???
M:vo kya haina vo jisney mujhe kidnap kiya thana vo itna handsome tha kya batou..
feel a bit jealous.
Uv(with jealousy):acha itna handsome tha vo..
M:haan tabhi toh tumhari yaad nahi ayi.
Uv:acha toh jaona uskey paas.
aur vo M kh waist sh apna hath haata leta hai aur jany lagta hai.
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RanKat thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
very...nice..plzzz...update soon..😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
M'S pov
oh god kahin kuch jaada toh nahi keh gayi.oh toh abhi phirse manana parega.phir M Uv ko peech seh hug karti hai.aur Uv smile karta hai par vo M ko yeh dekhana nahi chahta.[BR
Uv:m humme choro..

M:nahi...

Uv:M choro.

M:nahi bhool gaye ki humney tumhe abhi thori time pehly kya promise kiya tha ki hum tumhe kabhi chorkey nah
i jayeng toh phir abhi kaise chorde??

Uv:M humai choro..

M phir Uv ki samney ati hai.

M:Uv dekho hum sirf tumse hi pyar karte hai.vo toh bass hum tumhe jealouse karwaney ki koshish kar rahe the.
Uv(with smile):hmmm toh humarei wife humain jaloue kar rahi thi.
M:tum gussa nahi.
Uv:hmm gussa toh hai.so toh tum humme jealouse kar rahi thi ha.
M:Uv vo..
Uv:chalo aj hum tumhe dekha hi dete hai ki jab humm gussa ata gai,jab hum kissiko miss kartey hai toh hum kya kartey hai.jab humain jealouse fel hota hai toh kya lya hota hai..
aur phir vo M ki kareeb janey lagta hai aur M peche jany lagti hai.suddenly M ko yhsaas hota hai ki vo aur wall ki bich main khari hai.
M(darrke):Uv vo..
Uv:so miss ha nahi jab humain gussa ata haina toh tab hum..
vo aisa khk M ki apney taraf kinchta hai aur usse passionatly kiss karta hai.after 10 seconds vo kiss end karta hai.
M shocked aur Uv ussey dekh key smile karta hai.
Uv:jab humain jealous fel hoti hai toh
Vo M ko apni aur kareb kinchta hai aur phir ussey love kh sath kiss karta hai.after 30 seconds vo phirse kiss end karta hai.n now M havily blushing.phir Uv ussey apbi itney close kinchta hai ki hawa bhi in 2no ki bich nahi asakti.aur vo phirse M ko kiss karta hai.but this time love N passion dono keh sath.after 1 minute M ki ankho main anso ajatey hai.Uv sochta hai ki M ko chot lagi hai.
Uv:oh I m so sry princess tumhe kahin choot toh nahi lagina.
M ussey tightly hug karyi hai.Uv bhi smile keh sath uski hug vapas karta hai.
M:Uv tum humme kabhi chorkey toh nahi jaooge na.
Uv:nahi princess kabhi nahi.
phir kuch time kh bat M apna control khony lagti hai.vo Uv ko usky neck pain kiss karti hai.aur Uv uski anarkali ki dori kholny lagta hai.
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Edited by Swini01 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
~~~~~AFTER 9 YEARS~~~~~
MUMBAI(2019)
ek handsome,tall admi apna car kabarstan keh pass rokhta hai.vo car bahar nkalta hai aur ek kabar keh pass jata hai..
Person:akhir tum humm kun chorkey chali gayi.jany seh pley ek baar bhi humare bare main nahi socha..keun bolo keun chali gayi tum...
vo aisey bol rahe the jaise iss kabar ki neche unki jaan hai.uss admi ki ankh main anso agay the.suddenly ek aurat ati hai aur kehti hai.
Person:Uv...
Uv pechee mourkey dekhta hai.
Uv:tum yaha kya kar rahiho.
Person:hum toh yaha tumhare liy ayei hai.
Uv:mujhe kissi ki jarrorat nahi hai.
Person:par humme hai.pata hai Uv ki jab tumney humme propose kiya tha vo humari life ka sabse best din tha.
suddenly Uv ki samney ek flashback ata hai(the old one)
Uv:so princess will u marry me??
M:phirse..
Uv:bolona princess will u??
M:haan han haan yuvraaj Uv sing hum aps shadi karngey.
n the hug eachother.
END OF THE FLASHBACK
Uv:hum tumseh pyar nahi kartey.
Person:par main toh karti hoo na.
Uv:shutup ok..
Person:C'mon Uv tum bhool kaisey saktey ho vo din jo humare life ka sabseh important din tha.
Uv:vo sab bass ek plan tha damn it Devgarh ko panay keh liye...aur kuch nahi.humme tumseh kabhi pyar nahi tha vo toh bass ek natak tha natak aur kuch nahi.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~END~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
OK guys this iz the end of my chappy 9.ab bolo confused kiya keh nahi.hope u guys liked it.pliz pliz pliz pliz pliz pliz hit the like button n do commnt if u like it.n thanks for waiting.n sry if i wast ur time.



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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved it...but lil bit confuse abt last part(after 9 years)...hope that person is not Jay!!! But really dying to know who is that mysterious person...please update next part soon dear...thanks for this update...
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Posted: 13 years ago
nyc one..but again i m confsed...dat in da sec part...uday n manyata r bout to do ing dong...n den all of a sudden how come 9 yrs leap...itz really confusing...plus in da last part 4m da falsh back it seems as if its manyata...but who died den...its really confusing...
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice...update but i m still confuse...yaar...plzzz...update soon...

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