manveer ss:phir mohabbat karne chala hai tu CHAPPY:23 PG:90

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey guys that is my first ss..hope u all like it.
PART 1
3 months later
J:omg jiji.u look awesome.
M(with smile):thanks J.
J:ur welcome jiji.vesai pata hai jiji ajke din k liye hum kitna wait kar rahe the.abhi humme lag raha hai ki hum 7ve asmaan mein hai.
M:vo toh dikh hi raha hai ki tum kitni khush ho.
J:haan after all aj humara sapna jo pura ho raha hai.hum jisske liye intezer wait kar rah the vo finally aj pura hoga.
M:J tum bohout lucky ho.
J:hmm...vo toh hai hum.after all humme humara pyar jo milne vala hai.humme Uv jo milne vala hai.humari engagement jo hone vali hai uske sath.pata hai jiji agar app hum sabki uss din misunderstanding clear nahi ki hoti na to toh aj hum itna khush kabhi nahi ho sakte the.thanku jiji.
M(with break tone):umm ur w..welcome
J:acha jiji hum chalte hai.
aur J chali jati hai aur M vi apne room mein jane hi lagti hai ki koi usse store room mein kinchta hai.aur M ka muh apne hatho se cover kar leta hai taki vo chilla na paeh.aur jab M alm ho jati hai toh vo apna hath hata leta hai.
M:tum tum yaha.
Uv:haan princess hum yaha kya huya daar gayi.
M:n..nahi toh hum nahi vasai tum yaha kya kar raheho.
Uv:oh c'mon princess hum toh apni fiance seh milne aye the.
M:haan toh milo J toh apn ekamre mein hai.
Uv:humne kaha apni fiance seh jisse humara bachpan mein hi roka huya tha aur joh humari sath hai.matlab tumse..
M:yeh kaisa mazak hai Uv?bant karo yeh sab.
Uv(in serious tone)exactly M bant kar yeh sab.bass abh bohout huya bant karo yeh natak.
M:Kaunsa natak Uv?yh natak nahi sach hai.humerai life ka sabse bara sach.
Uv:oh really princess agar yeh sach hai toh yeh bhi sach hai ki tumhare iss faisle koi khush nahi rahega.na hum na tum aur na J.
M:nahi Uv J khush rahigi.aur mein vhi.aur time keh sath tum bhi khush rehna sikhlo gai.
Uv:u know M humne ajtak tum jaisi selfish larki nahi dekhi.tum sirf apni aur apni family keh bare mein sochti the,sochti ho aur shayad hamesha sochti rahogi.lekin humara kya humare rishte ka kya?haan M bolo uss promise ka kya jo hum logo ne 1sath liya tha?bolo uss sath bitay lamhe ka kya?bolo M Bolo.
M is silent
Uv:koi jawaab nahi.hamesha ki tarah koi jawaab nahi.
aur phir Uv baha M ko hor kar chala jata hai.
M:i m sry Uv.par mein majboor hoon.tumne sahi kaha hai Uv ki mein selfish hoon.maine apni family keh khushi ki khatir humare rishte ko kurbaan kar diya
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4 months ago
Uv:princess kya soch rahi ho?
M:I m sorry Uv.maine uss Akash k vaja seh tumhe bohout chot pohonchai hai.
Uv:its ok princess.galti tumheri nahi hai.tumne toh usse pyar kiya tha.ab kisse pata tha ki vo itna kamina niklegaa.kisse pata tha ki vo revenge lene keh liye Ariyan bank ayega.
M:hmm lekin kissne kaha ki main usse pyar karti hoon main toh
Uv:tum toh
M:main toh mere halkat se pyar karti hoon.
Uv:acha toh tum apni halkat se pyar karti ho.
M:haan tumne usse kahi dekha kya?
Uv:haan lekin tumhe usse bolna parega keunki
aur vo apne knee pe baith ke bolta hai
Uv:princess will u marry me.


Edited by Swini01 - 12 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey guys hope u like it.n sry agar maine ap logo ka time waste kara toh.guys if u like it then pliz hit the like button n commnet pliz.
PRECAP:flashback ki akhir keun ab ho rahi hai Uv aur J ki engagement.kya hoya tha inn 3 mahino main.
hai guys pliz comment ki main next part update karu keh nahi.
Edited by Swini01 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey no one like my ss.then mujhe yeh ss nahi likhna chahiye.sry guys for wasting ur time.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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No sweetheart i do.i like ur ss.n precap is so intersting.cont soon n pm me if u can.
Edited by princessnia - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Excellent!!!!very nice start...but do update soon bcaus I can't wait for next part!!!pleaseee!!!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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No I love ur SS!! Its very interesting n I'm dying to know what happens next so plzzz continue soon n plzzz pm when u update!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanku guys for like my ss.
A BIG THANKU TO:
Princessnia,Jehan,Manveer4ever,Aklover101,Amibaiju.
thanku guys for all ur precious comments.Thanks a lot.I will cont soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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M:hmm..
Uv:hmm..kya?princess tum sochlo agar tumne nahi ki toh hum kissi aur rajkumari se shadi karlenge phir mat humme bolna ki akhir hummne tumhe 1chance keun nahi diya.
M:halkat,kamine,luche tujhe sharam nahi ati.aur kya kehrahatha ki agar maine na kardiya toh kissi aur rajkumari seh shadi karlega.acha tu bol kaunsi rajkumari seh shadi karega tu.oh main toh bhol hi gayi rajkumari Minakshi seh nahi.toh tu sunle agar main vhi chipku number1 hoon.asai peecha nahi chorungi.fevikol ki tarah chipki rahoongi samjha tu.
Uv:hai hum toh yehi chahte hai ki tum humse chipki raho.lekin vasai idea bura nahi hai.rajkumari Minakshi hot toh hai.jeans,t-shirt,skirt hai sachme bohout hot lagti hain na.
M:teri toh meri hote huye tu kissi aur larki ko dekhta kaise hai.aur kya kaha tune ki vo bohout hot lagti hai.arey vo hot nahi churail hai samjha.kher ja tu mujhe tumse baat hi nahi karni han nahi toh.
Uv:sry princess humme maaf karo.vo toh bass hum tumhe chirah rahe the.i m sry.
M:my foot.tu jana apne uss Minakshi keh paas.after all tumhe vo hot lagti haina.
Uv:uffo princess humme maff kardo.aur jaha tak hot hone ki baat hain toh agar Minakshi hot hai toh humari princess koi kum nahi.vo iss doniya ki sabse khubsuraat larki hai.
M:theke theke maine maaf kiya.
Uv:thanks vasai mann gaye princess humari abhi tak shadi vi nahi huye aur tum humare liye abhi se itna possesive ho gayi.
M:haan vo toh hai.keunki tu hi toh ek hai jisse main apni life main kissi ke sath share nahi karpaungi aur na kabhi karoongi.
FLASHBACK END
Manayata ke ankh main ansu ajate hai aur tabhi koi door pe knock karta hai.aur phir M apni ansu ponchta hai.
M:ajaiye.
V:Manayata tumhare pass vo engagement ring hai kya?
M:haan yeh lijiye.
V:thanks abhi hum jate hai.
M:ek minute Vj bhai.pehle app humare bff jaise the na phir kya huya akhir keun pechle 3mahino main apne humse baat hi nahi ki keun Vj bhai?
V:M yeh jo tum keh rahi hona uska jawaab tumhare paas hi hai ki akhir hum tumse baat keun nahi kar rahe the.chalo pehle tum bolo ki akhir tumne J ki Uv se engagement ki baat sochi bhi kaise?
M:app kuch bhi nahi jante ki akhir aisa karte huye mujhpe kya gujrei hai akhir mujhe kitni chot poochi hai.
V:oh really M.toh tumne aisa keun kiya haan bolo keun kiya tumne aisa?
M:3mahine pehle kya huya tha yeh ab bhi jante hai na toh keun pooh rahi hai.
V:keuki M tum bohout bholi ho.tumhe apne pyar apne haq ki liye larna chahiye tha.khai tumse baat karne ka kya faida tum thori na apna faisla badlo gi.
PRECAP:akhir kya huya tha 3 mahine pehle.
i m really sorry guys ki maine phirse vahi Precap diya lekin yeh jarrori tha.lekin agar tumlogo ko yeh acha laga then pliz hit the like button n pliz pliz leave ur comment if u have time.


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice one again dear...but I think u need to make it lil bit longer...but neways can't wait for next part so update soon please...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey ur welcome Swini.n yeah nice one.but cont soon sweetheart.now i cant wait.n thanks for the pm Swini.

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