manveer ss:phir mohabbat karne chala hai tu CHAPPY:23 PG:90 - Page 16

Mindblowing update Swini. This SS has Lots of suspense.I like the twist in the story.

Awww...Uday & manyata ki beti...and by the way its not pakau dear its jsut awsome...u r gr8...love it...plzzz...update soon.

awww how sweeet...manveer daughter...luvly...n manyata thinks dat uday had left her 4 J...hmmm...hope soon our manveer meet n dere misunderstanding r cleared up...

Hey nice on continue soon and when u update agaoin pls pm me

Wow Roshni iz manveer daughter yeppi.n Vj bhai ko sabkuch pata hai.Uv aur J yeh samajhtey hai ki M margayi.oh god ab ayha asli maja.n Uv Anveysha sh milna hah raha hai.jao jao Uv yeh tumhari Manayata hi hai.cont soon dear.

Ok guys mere iss chappy ki 2 parts hai.pliz pliz pliz guys read it n do comment.n dont forget 2 presst the kike button.
cont down...

PART~11
V:M tum jitna chahey apni kismat seh bhaglo lekin tumhey laut keh vahi ana parga jaha tumhari kismat tumhey dkhna chahti hai.
M:kismat yeh kismat main M trust karti thi.iss kismat neh M ko apny hissab seh chalaya.Anveysha ko nahi.aur Anveysha jaiwal apni kismat khud likhti hai.
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Uv phone pain
Uv:choti tum humseh abbhi naraz ho.
U:dada humarai naraz honey sh ya na honey seh kya faida.humar maaf kardene seh kya sab kuch tike ho jayega.
Uv:choti humpe trust karo.humari sach main koi galti nahi thi.
U:nahi kiya hoga dada.lekin kya M vapas ayegi.nahi na toh ab iss barey main baat karney ka koi faida nahi.
Call cut
Uv's pov
Princess tum kaha hoon.pliz vapas ajao.
end of the pov
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V:M bhai agar Uv bgonah huya toh??
M(in angry tone):mujhey uss insaan ka naam nahi sunna.chir ati hai mujhey uss insaan seh juri haar cheez seh.
V:phir toh tumhey Roshni seh bhi chir ati hogi.
M(shouting):bass Vj bhai bass.hum apko akhri bar keh rahey hai ki Roshni sirf meri beti hai.uss insaan seh na toh mera air na hi Roshni koi vaasta hai.itz that cleart 2 u Vj bhai?
V:haan M bhai..
suddenly koi door pain knock karta hai.
M:come in..
Manegar:mam nayi secetry ka intezaam ho gaya hai aur mam vo garh jo apney abhi abhi kharida vo
M:vo kya??
Manegar:vo actuall MR:Sing yeh garh kharidna chahtey hai.unki seetry neh call kiya tha.
M:hmmm toh..
Manegar:vo uski liya muhn maangi kimaat dene keh liye tayiar hai.
M:toh unseh kehdo ki hum bhi iss garh keh liye unhey muhn maangi kimaat de saktey hai.lekin yeh garh nahi.
Manegar:jee mam.
aur vo bahar jakey Uv ki secetry sh baat karta hai.
M1:hello mam neh mana kadiya.unhony yeh kaha ki vo Mr.Sing ko unki muhn maangi kimaat dengey lkin yeh garh nahi.
M2:kya???lekin yh garh toh sir ka sapna hai.tumney unhey yeh nahi kaha ki yeh garh Mr.Uv sing kharidna chahtey hai.
M1:jee unhey sir ka pura naam nahi pata.unhy yh nahi pata ki Mr.sing actually main yuvraaj Uv sing hai.
M2:toh tumney kun nahi kaha unhey??
M1:vo sunna nahi chahti thi.aur mujhy nahi lagta ki naam sunkey bhi unka dcision chang hoga.
M2:ok..
call cut.
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M:sir vo nahi maani.
Uv:kya???
M:yah sir usny yeh kaha ki uss garh ki jagah vo apko muhn maangi kimaat dengy.
Uv(in mind):kitni ghamandi larki hai yeh.samajhti kya hai apney apko.relax Uv relax tumhey yeh garh kissi bhi halat main kahirdna hoga.yeh tumharey princess ka sapna hai.
M:sir..
Uv:haan t...tum ek kaam karo humain uss Ms.Jaiswal ka number do.hum khud unseh baat kareengey.
M:yes sir main abhi apko numbr bhejta hoon.
kuch time keh baat Uv M ko call karta hai...aur M vo callpick karti hai.
M:hello..
Uv:no response..
M:hello..
Uv:h..h..hello...
M(shocked):no response.
Uv:hello.
M jaldi call cut kardeti hai.
M(darrke):Uv..
aur vaha
Uv(with teary eyes):princess...
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ok guys main ajhi chappy 11 ka part 2 update kardungi.anyways hope u guys like it.pliz pliz pliz press the like button n do comment..love u all.

Plzzz...update soon...i have already read it 3 times...

Wow nice one.but really very short.so cont soon n a long one pliz.

Loved it...twist in the story!!! I enjoyed a lot...but it's kinda short please make it lill longer...thanks for this update and PM...waiting for next one...please update soon...