manveer ss:phir mohabbat karne chala hai tu CHAPPY:23 PG:90 - Page 15

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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice one.loved it.but i m confused.n i know tum humare confusions flashback main hi khatam kardogi.hmm hop that person iz J not M.but that manz ki M margayi...hmm intresting.but pliz pliz pliz uss larki ko J hi banana.
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow i actually read all the parts in one day and tbh it was fab really loved it the last part is really a mystery who is that person please update soon really cant wait for the next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
LOVED IT...yeah...u confused us...😆more than confusion...i m waiting to know that who died???M?????? and who is that women??
so update soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
--PROMO--
P:lekin yh bhi ek sach hai ki uskey maut ki sabseh bari vajah tum ho.
Uv:haanhum hain.humai vajh sehi vo humse durr ho gayi.lekin u know what humme aj bhi laagta hai ki vo jinda hai.vo yehi kahin hai humare pass.hum ussey uski honey ko mehsoos karsaktey hai.
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ek bhout bari aur khubsurat(beautiful)garh main ek maid apni hath main ek breakfast ki tray leke ek larki ki room main jati hai.
M:babyyy ab abtak nahi uthaye.
G(still sleping):no response...
M:app uth jayi warna mam wapseh gussa hongi.
G(still sleeping):no response...
M:Roshni baby uth jayiye.
R(angrily):soney dona..
M:mam gussa karengi..
R:main mamma(mother)ko mana lungi...
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R:arey mamu(uncle) just chill na.
M(uncle):haan vo bhi sahi hai.
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M:vo yuvraaj sa uss garh ki nayi owner vo garh nahi becna chahti.
Uv:vo uska sapna hai aur hum issey haar halat main pura karkey rahenge.tum usse kehdo ki hum iss garh ki liye usse muhn maangi kimaat dengey.
M:lekin uski secretry neh yh bataya ki''she'z not interested''.
Uv:koun hai vo???
M:vo uski company abhi tak ki second position main hai.Jaiswal company ki owner ANVEYSHA JAISWAL.
Uv:ANVEYSHA JAISWAL..
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Ok guys hope u like the promo.main ajj update karney ki try karoongi.pliz pliz pliz hit the like button n do comment if u.warna ajj update nahi karoongi:-))anyways next update pakka bohout long hoga.so bore mat hona.



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Posted: 13 years ago
Hmm intersting.so maari koun hai yaar.lagta hai M.aNYWAYS cont soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow again a nice promo.n waiting for ur update.again lots of suspence.humain marny ka iraada hai kya??anyways so now i know ki marney vala M hai.n Roshni n Anveysha.yeh dono koun hai.omg kahi Roshni toh Manyata nahi??so desperetly waiting for ur update.pliz cont soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
~~PART-10~~
P:dekho Uv humme pata hai ki tum humseh gussa ho.apni lalach ke vajaseh humney tum dono ki life barbaad kardi aur shyat apna bhi.lkin Uv hummp issbar trust karo.humain kuch nahin chahiye.hummy bass apni galti ko sudharney ka k mauka do.
Uv:galti tumhare galti sudharney keh baat kya vo vapas ajayegi nahi na.
P:dekho Uv vo maar chuki hai.tum jitna ussy yaad karoogi tumhain utnahi chot ponchega.
Uv:kabhardaar agar aise baat phir kabhi bhi kahi toh.uskey yaadein hi meri jeney ka sahara hai.
P:akhir kabtak Uv.hum sab apni life main agey barr chuki hai par tum vahi ho jaha usny tumhe chora tha.tum vahi keh vahi ho air vo bhi akle bilkul akeley.
Uv:hum akley nahi hai keunki vo humari sath hi hai hum ussey mehssos kar saktey hai.vo humari ass pass hi hai.
P:vo maar chuki hai.
Uv:nahi vo jinda hai.humari princess humari M jinda hai samjhi tum J.
aur vo vaha seh chala jata hai..
J:kash aisa ho sakta Uv.kash aisa hota.but yeh hum bhi jaantey hai aur tum bhi ki jiji ab iss duniya main nahi rahi.uss raat ..
but J apni baat complete nahi kar pati keunki uskeh phone pain call ata hai.
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ek maid ek garh main ek room ki taraf breakfast leke jati hai.
M:Roshni baby app abh tak nahi uthi uth jayi.
R(still sleeping):no response..
M:uth jayi babyy warna mam gussa karngi.
R:main mamma ko mana lungi tum jao.
M:babyy ek toh app aj bhi school nahi gayi aur upar seh itna late mam bohout naraz hogi.
R:uffo abhi toh sirf 11:30 bajeh hai.aur mamma mujhse nahi tumseh naraz hogi.aoh mujhe kya...?
M:lekin baby school jana toh jarrori hota haina app jabseh Canada sh yaha ayi tabseh app school nahi jati.
R:keunki school ganda hota hai.
suddenly koi vaha ata hai
P:aur humari Rish ko school acha keun nahi lagta.
R:Mamu(uncle)..
aur vo bhag keh ussey hug karti hai.
P:ary haa toh batao humari girl friend akhir kaisi hai.
R:mamu main toh tik hoon.but yeh jo haina dolly didi yh humesha mujhey utha deti hai.aur haar time baby baby kehti rehti hai.
jab keh main abhi 7 saal ki ho chuki hoon.phir bhi.aur haar time mamma dantengi aisa kehti hai.
P:Dolly tumney aisa keun kaha jabki Roshni ahi 7 saal ki ho chuki hai.
R:vo darasal VJAY sir.
V:hum kuch nahi sunna chahtey aftrvall abhi Roshni 7 saal ki ho huki hi.itni bari hony kh baat bhi tum kaise issy baby bula sakti hoon.
M giggles..
R:arey mamu calm down.
V:lekin ap toh bari ho chuki haina toh.
R:alm down.
V:tike haoi app kehti hai toh...vasai humari bhai aur apki mamma kaha hai.
R:vo toh office gayi hai.
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in Jaiswal office
Secetry:mam vo..
Person:kaam huya keh nahi...
S:vo mam actually unhoney humar sathkaam karney sh manna kariya vo unhey presentation pasant nahi..
P(interuupted):kisny di presentation??
S:vo actually mainey di thi..pr
P(again intrrupted):tumhey kal seh kam pein aney ki jarrorat nahi hai..
S:par mam.
P:mere office main lossers ki liye koi jagah nahi hai...out..
S:par mam ek aur chance
P:main kissiko kabhi bhi second chance nahi deti..
S:but..
P:out ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
nyc...means roshini is manveer daughter...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Manegar:sir yuvraajsa actually vo garh
Uv:vo garh kya??
M:vo garh uski nayi owner nh bechney sh mana kardiya
Uv:ky???Lekin apney unseh yeh nahi kaha ki hum unhey iss garh ki jagah muhn maangi kimmat dengey.?
M:haan sir kaha toh tha magar unki sectry neh kaha ki''she'z not interested''.
Uv:koun hain vo??
M:sir vo unki company abhi 2nd position main hai.Jaiswal company ki owner Ms.Anveysha jaiswal.
Uv:Anveysha jaiswal.
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P:hello manegar chahey jo bhi ho jaye mujhey aj hi ek nayi secetry chahiye.warna apki bhi job
M(intrrupted):nahi mam aisa nahi hoga.hum ajhi ek nayi secetry rakhengey.app fikaar mat kijiye.after all hum sab kuch jo sam
P(interrupted):agar app apni yeh bekaar batoon ko chorkey kaam karng toh appkeh liye acha hoga.
M:tike hai Anveysha mam.hum abhi kardete hai.
aur vo chala jata hai.
A:oh god yeh Vjay bhai abtak keun nahi ayey.
tabhi Vjay bhai ata hai.
A:Vjay bhai thank god ki app agay hum aphi ka wait kar rah the.
V:haan toh humara bhai hummey bulay aur hum na aiyee aisa kabhi ho sakta hai.
A:voh toh hai.
V:vasai tumney kya socha ki agy tum kya karoogi.
A:kuch nahi jo kaam tha vo karkey phir Canada chali jaoongi.
V:Manayata bhai.
M/A ussey gusse seh dekhta hai.
V:what ab chey duniya keh liy tum jo bhi ho humare liye toh tum humari choti behen Manayata hi rahoogi na.
M:lekin Vj bhai abhi yeh M vo purani vali M nahi rahi abhi yh Anveysha bann gayi hai.
V:chahey tum jo bhi bolo tum hoto akhir humari M bhai..aur vasai bhi aisa kabtak chaley ga.kabtak tum yeunhi marr marr key jioogi.
M:hum marrkey nahi jee rahe hai Vjbhai.
V:acha toh phir yeh batao ki akhir tum abtak keun chup rahi hoon sabseh.keun nahi baatan deti ki tum jinda hoon haan bolo.
M:keunki main nahi chahti ki meri itna ghinona past meri Roshni ki future pain bhari pareh.main nahi chahti ki uss insaan ki chaya bhi mere Roshni pain pareh.
Vlekin tum yeh bhool rahi hoon M bhai ki Roshni tumhare sath sath Uv eh bi beti hai.
M:nahin Vj bhai Roshni sirf meri beti hai aur kissi ki nahi.usspeh sirf aur sirf mera haq hai.
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Uv:app un keh sath humara meeting fix kar dijiye.hum unsey baat kareengey.jo bhi ho humain vo garh haar halat main chahiye.yeh garh humar princess ka sapna tha aur iss sapney ko hum kissi bhi halat main pura kareengey.
M:yes sir...
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ok guys i know ki yeh short hai but main already next chappy likhna start kardiya hai.so gussa mat karna ok.n i hope ki maine tum logo ki kuch confusions ko clear kardiya hai.hope u all like it.n thanks mere yeh pakao(boring)update ko parney keh liye.pliz hit the like button n leave ur precious comments guys.

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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow awesome sis.n omg omg omg Roshni iz manveer daughter.wow yaar kahani main new twist.seriously tu aur Pari tum dono ko na best juniour Ekta kapoor ka award milna chahiye.i mean story ko tum dono kaha seh kaha le jatey ho yaar.just loved it yaar.Cont soon.

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