Confessing to The Night: LAST PART completed- pg 23 (manveer finally!)

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Vibha Bangalore

@..IshqShava..

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Posted: 13 years ago

#151

thanks for such a wonderful update Payal ! you r a true genius!! pls pls write d next part soon...:)

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pia

@pia.raha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#152

do cntinueee soon!!!!!!!!!!!! its lovelyy!!!!!!!!!!

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chitra_rao

@chitra_rao

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Posted: 13 years ago

#153

Hey payal 🤗, OMG u updated after I guess ages 😆. The update was splendid👏.

I really like the way u squeeze out every emotion ur character goes through so crystal clear.Some writers just ooz out some of the emotions that the character goes through leaving the rest for the readers to analyze and guess, but u r so crystal clear in everything. That is what I love about ur writing.😃

Though I dint find much of action in these two updates, but I'm on for ur action sequence , I'm sure u will do a commendable job there as well.Eagerly waiting for ur next update, no hurry, eat well, sleep well, study well but please dont make us wait fopr ages before u update 😉, and please...please make the next update little longer.

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princess_T

@princess_T

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#154

this was amazing..👏 I love it.. so I'll keep quite😳

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xxDaydreameRxx

@xxDaydreameRxx

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#155

Oh my god Payal!! Your OS just gets better everytiem you update! I swear this chap was soo frikken amazing, like I felt something in my heart! 😳 You describe every single emotion soo beautifully and detailed that I can feel it! Like literally I was about to cry when you described Manyata's pain and then the ending part where UV felt bad seeing her so hurt..Gosh you made me so emotional! 😳

And I honestly hate you for where you ended it! Pair of hands grabbing her! Really now? Such a cliffhanger! 😡 Please man, I usually dont do this but today for you I'm begging you to update soon so I can be blessed with your beautiful writing!

PS: are you like a university english student or something? Or do you just read a lot of books? caz your writing is that damn brilliant!