Twilight a manveer vampire stry updted ch10 pg 15

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Gargi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#81

hmm..I think its like the Vampire Diaries...Maybe UV knew someone who looked exactly like May or is her bloodline..or maybe she is a reincarnation of his Ex????...break the suspense soon dear...😉

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Posted: 13 years ago

#82

thank u all

Edited by -Lipika- - 13 years ago

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@wendy25

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Posted: 13 years ago

#83

lipika update soon,

can't wait.

love may, k, uday and j here.

so love triangle b/w karan-may-uday is on the way.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#84

AT M & J's house

M : god wat a tiring day J i'll go and get freshen up
J : ok sis but where is dad
M : yahh i think he ain't here *gets a message from her dad* i was right he ain't here he is gone on a business trip for 2-3 days so i guess we are alone
J : wow so amazing its party time hurray
M : first i'd like to take a bath *by this she leaves to her room*
J : i' guess i should watch t.v *turns on the t.v and watches vampire dairies* gotta love this show god elena is so lucky she got 2 hot boys in love with her and that too vampires i love damon he is sooo cute *day dreaming*

MEANWHILE at Uday's house

Unnati and uday enters and their mom welcomes them
Maya : so how was your day
Both : nice mom
Maya : uday your dad needs to talk to you alone so he's wating for you in study room
Uday : ok i'll go then
Unnati : mom i am tired i'll go and take rest
Maya : okk sweetheart
with uday and his dad
Uday : dad why you called me
D : yup uday you know she's here
U : in my university dad
D : uday do u know how precious she is if they find out about her than everything would be finished
U : don't worry dad i'll not let them know about her and i am even goin to her house
D : what? WHY??
U : for an assignment dad and trust me dad i'll protect her
D : good son i'm proud of you
U : dad akhir beta kiska hoon
*both smiles*

With manyata AND J
manyata has taken a bath as is all fresh and she changes into this http://www.polyvore.com/sexy_simple_chick/set?id=49963679 simple and hot and walks to the drawing room to join jay

M : Jay you and your vampire diaries obsession
J : sis you don't know vampires are so hot
M : commom Jay they don't even exist
J : they do sis they do
M ; whatever *takes the remote from her and starts flicking through the channel and suddenly stops at vh1 one direction's song whats make you beautiful is playing * yeahh 1D i just love all the boys in 1D They are soo cute and hottt !!!!!!
J : even i like 1D and u know what its my favourite song
than the chorous starts to play and both M & J sings with them

BABY YOU LIGHT UP MY WORLD
LIKE NOBODY ELSE
THE WAY THAT YOU FLIP YOUR HAIRS
GET ME OVERWHELMED BUT WHEN U
SMILE AT THE GROUND IT AIN'T HARD TO TELL YOU DON'T KNOW OHHH OHHH
YOU DON'T KNOW UR BEAUTIFUL OHHH OHH
THATS WHAT MAKE YOU BEAUTIFUL
*the song ends*
M : i love this song soo much
J : me too sis love love love 1 direction
*jay's phone rings*
J : hello
K : hello jay
J : may i know who's speaking
K : its karan here
J : ohhh karan *blushes and M sees this* so whats up
K : actually i was thinkin that could you comeover for
J : for what ????
K : for assignment silly
J : sure i'm comin in an hour but your address
K : i'll msg it to you in a minute and yess
J : what
K : come fast
J : *smiles * ok
M : ohhh so you like karan huh?
J : *blushing* sis aisa kuch bhi nahi hai
M : really awww my sis is in love
J : sis i said its nothing
M : sum1 is blushin
J : abb sis chod na i need to leave
M : where
K : at Karan's house for the assignment
M : ohhh andar hi andar ladoo phoot rahi hai . hai na ??
J : SIS i need to go bye
M : ok bye now go and yes take the keys i hope you know how to drive
J : sis uski chinta mat karo now bye *she leaves*
M : soo i guess i'm alone *and remembers* ohh teri uday would be comin any moment god he me alone in my house no noo he's a good guys its just for assignment
*bell ring*
M : he's here *goes and opens the door*
U : hii may how are you
M ; i'm fine
U : won't you call me in
M : ohh yeah i'm sorry come in
U : soo where is jay and your parents
M : J is gone to karan's house and dad is on business trip
U : ohh and your mom
M ; mom don't live with us *sad*
U : *sees she is sad and that hurts him too* soo whats our topic
M ; you must be knowin that
U : i don't know
M : what you don't know neither do i
U : so what are we doin today than
M : well MASTIII vaise bhi we are friends right so we should know about eachother a little more
U : but
M : *puppy face*
U : ok fine
M : good

Edited by -Lipika- - 13 years ago

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@wendy25

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Posted: 13 years ago

#85

hey it was amazing

update soon

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Anny

@SyedAinah

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Posted: 13 years ago

#86

Aww waitng for manveer in one house

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ilvuday

@ilvuday

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Posted: 13 years ago

#87

thanks for pm...love ur posts n ur ff reminds me of pkyek,twilight n vampire diaries...it was awesum continue pls...😃

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@-The_Tomboy-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#88

That was nice but ashort update though

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Gargi

@sweet_gargi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#89

awesome update...this story is so different!..wow i liked it..

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Posted: 13 years ago

#90

M : so tell me about your likes and dislikes
U : i have no dislikes and no likes
M : impossible ab mujhse kya chupana bata bhi do na uday
U : hum farsi nahi bol rahe hai what i said was right
M : you know what you are the most weird person i have ever met
*luaghs* so tell me do you have any girlfriends huh
U : NO!!! i prefer being single
M : dude u are actually weird
U : sab yahi kehete hai so teell me bout urself
M : okkk fine i love red my fav colour, i like chocolates alot i like junk alot actually and i luv luv luv tom cruise damn he is soo cute and i love VAMPIRES LOL
U : you do
M: yup you know wat i always wanted to be a vampires girlfriend weird right
U : *doesn't know how to react* yeahh weird
M : tumhe kya hogaya
U : kuch nahi tum toh humse bhi zada weirds ho
M : woh toh i am
*suddenly light goes*
M : screams mami !!!!!! and hugs uday tightly
U : loh vaise toh bade sherni banti phirti ho aur light se darti hoh
M : *scared* look uday i know but tumhe main chodne to wali hu nahi i am afraid of the dark mujhse andhere se bahut dar lagta hai
U : may vaise mujhe english aati hai
May :*smiles* jo bhi arghh ye light kab aayegi
U : kyu hamri bahoon mein maza nahi aa raha
M : dekh tu na zada ban mat abh samjha
U : are hum toh bas tumhara dar kam karne ki koshish kar rahe hai aur hum ho ki humpe hi chila rahi hoon
M : vaise tu na etna bhi ajeeb nahi hai
U ; wat do you mean
M : u know when i first saw you i thought you are very selfish rude arrogant type of guy but you are really sweet
U : i think we should just light up a candle
M : yess do it right now
U : where are the candles though
M : would be somewhere here only
U : thik hai i'll find the candle but uske liye u need to leave me
M : *remembers she is still hugging him* ohh i'm sorry
U : no props
*starts finding the candle and finally finds one and also a liter and he lits up the candle*

M : god ab jake jaaan me jaan aayi phew
Uday : tumhara kuch nahi ho sakta
M : i know "may" ase hi hai
*both laughs *

THIRD PERSON's POV *its just to explain whats happening between them*

both were siting on a sofa and because of our romantic candle's light they both could see their faces both were staring into eactothers eyes and whats next both came closer closer closer and more closer and whats next their lips were a cm away but the cm was also gone to a trip and THEY KISSED the kiss fillled with passion and desire both felt differnet and very sepical well passionate is a good word they both passionate it was sepical very sepical may was begging to enter and uday allowed her too and their tongues were dancing like crazy as if they were vidya balan of dirty picture ans sum1 played oolalalala than uday remembers this ain't wrong and he broke the kiss *remember twilight scene*

END OF POV

U ; this ain't right
M : I ii--iii am sorry uday
U : i need to go
M : *holds his hand and stops him* uday don't go don't please stay here
*fullto twilight scene if u remember*
U : i need to go May byee
M : but uday *to herself* i need you
*the light returns and uday left*
May'S POV

whats was that why i didn't wanted the kiss to end why it felt a special why i didn't want him to leave me why god i need to relax is this what people call no nooo May calm down god i can't calm down i need to talk to sum1 but who Silly me i have a sister i should talk to jay bout this but she's with karan i don't want to ruin her happiness i will wait then

*end of pov*

Uday : what was dat i srsly forgot that i was a vampire for sometime i actually felt i was a human a normal person like evryone else i always feel that way with MAY but why i need to talk to unnati fast

MEANWHILE WITH KARAN AND J

J knocks the door and karan opens it
J : hi karan
K : ohh hi jay come in
J : sure

btw it what karan's house look like

J : wow nice house
K : thank you
J : so lets start our project
K : okk
Zayn : ohh hi ahh ______
J : jay
Zayn : Soo hi jay
J : hii but what r u doin here u r zayn right
K : yup he's my bro
J : *to herself woh to dekhne par hi pata chal raha hai * okkk you both look bro's tho
K : so lets start our project
J : sure
K : okk so come to my room
J : EXCUSE ME ??
K : i mean for the project
J : oh okk

*this is karan's room*

K : soo lets start
J : okk but where are the books
K : ohh here they are so which topic first i guess
J & K put there hands on same book karan's hand is above
J : *well dil ki halat kuch asi hai but will behave like * ahh so lets start
*jay gets call on her phone from may*

Phone conversation
J : hello sis
M ; J plss come fast plszz
J : but what happened
M : will you just come here i need to talk to you right now
J : okk sis i'm comin right now

PHONE ENDS

K : any problem
J : i need to goo back right now
K : itni jaldi why
J : woh sis
K :*worried* what kya hua may ko is she okay
J : *feels awkward* nothin
K : i think you should leave now she needs you
J : okkk
K : jay stop
J : what
Karan cupped her face and gave a kiss on her on her... cheeks lol and jay hearts is like

J : bye karan
K : bye jay and yes drive save
by this J leaves
Zayn : bro whats up i know you don't love her than why
K : becoz she is may's sis aur may tak jane ke liye jay ko patana hoga jo bilkul mushkil nahi hai
Zayn : bro but why
K : becoz May sirf hamari hai sirf aur sirf hamari
Zayn : so sedha jake use kahe doo na
K : can't usse pehele i need to clear my hurdle
zayn : hurdle whick hurdle
K : a guy named uday
Zayn : why what has he done
K : ab tak toh kuch nahi magar kuch na kuch to zarror karega

Edited by -Lipika- - 13 years ago

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