Twilight a manveer vampire stry updted ch10 pg 15

Posted: 13 years ago
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pls pm me when u update continue soon

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: maneta

pls pm me when u update continue soon



okk btw i remember u can i m snding u buddy list
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Posted: 13 years ago
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continue soon n pls pm...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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interesting story...update soon...n plz pm me wen u update...

Posted: 13 years ago
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mmm hey lipika make it maneta or else somethimg else starting with m like maithli but priyal n uday the names sounds weird together
hey i hope u dont mind im not forcing u ok u r ff so ur wish is final😊
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I MEAN MANYATA NOT MANETA

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Originally posted by: maneta

mmm hey lipika make it maneta or else somethimg else starting with m like maithli but priyal n uday the names sounds weird together

hey i hope u dont mind im not forcing u ok u r ff so ur wish is final😊



i'll try as first i need to take all permissions so if all say yes than okkk than i have no props :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Yaaa add me in too pm me wen u update and accept the buddy request which ill send u
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wow...its different story......
.pm me when it will update...
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OKK GUYS HERE IS PART 1 ENJOY

SHANSHI : (SITTING ON HER BED) : Its time now. tanya (there maid) call J and Manyata
Tanya : okk ma'am (leaves to J's room) J ma'am may i come in
Jay : ya sure Tanya come In soo whats up
Tanya : woh ma'am your mom is calling u and manyata
JaY : ok fine we'll be there and i'll inform manyata jiji too u can leave now
tanya : okk ma'am *leaves*

JAY WALKS TO MANYATA'S ROOM

JAY : jiji mom is calli- oho jiji kabhi toh time par uth jaya karo

manyata is asleep and j trys to wake her up she shouts , turn on the radio on full volume,
rings her alarm clock but nothing works well if its manayta than notin actually works and waking her up is the most difficult thing u'll ever find

J : god sis ur evn stuborn when u r asleep i tell u but hum bhi appki hi behn hai appko to utha ke ki rahegi

jay starts singing chinkni chameli chup ke akele pahua chada ke aayi and yes it worked manyata woke up
Manyata: god jay appna behura gana ban kar nahi toh
jay: nahi toh kay hume mar dalogi jiji
manyata : shh god i swear if u call me jiji again u r dead aur agar apna gana band nahi kiya toh
jay : toh
manyata : Toh hum
Jay : toh tum kya
MANYATA : toh hum ye karege

manyata Takes a pillow and starts fighting with j and j is no less she too starts fighting with j and bang on whats next pillow fight (in a funny and nice way)

Shanshi : tanya
tanya: yes ma'am
shanshi: where are my daughters
tanya : woh ma'am humne j ko bataya tha and she said woh manyata ke saath aa rahe hai
shanshi : okk fine hum dekne jata hai tum jao go
tanya leaves and shanshi goes to manyata room

Manyata : jai tu mujhse is game me nahi jit sakti maine isme phd ki hai
Jay: oh really sis than f9 humne bhi isme graduation ki hai
Both starts laughing than shanshi enters
S : J manyata oh my my you 2 again god save me
J and manyat together : MOM!!!
S : just kiddin by the way humne tumhe bulaya tha remember J
J : oh ShIt I forgot lekin not my fault akkir hamari sis hai hi asi ki sab bhula hi deti hai
M : oh really j wait and watch
J ; sis i was kiddin
S : ok stop both of you i have an important new
M AND J : really What is it ??
S : u Both r Goin To La To stay with ur dad he called me up and he misses u 2 alot
M and J : Yay mom we are so happy but r u fine
S : Yup i am so u 2 goin flight is tommorow
Both Yup We are ready
S : god so start packing flight tommorow
M & J : Okk mom luve ya *hugs Shanshi*
M : j I'm so excited i missed dad a lot finaaly i'm oophs we r meetin him
J : yah Me too i miss him alot so yeah finger crossed chalo ab yeh sab chodo lets pack
M : yeah *with teary eyes*
J : hugs her ohh sis evrythin would be okk trust me we will soon be a happy family
M : yeah hope so fingers crossed
Both smiles M&J : LA we r comin

Okk guyss so its manyata nick name manya and UDAY AND ALL in next epi
hope U liked it

THANKS FOR READING - BY LIPIKA











Edited by -Lipika- - 13 years ago

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