Twilight a manveer vampire stry updted ch10 pg 15

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snowdream

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Posted: 13 years ago

#91

hey whts it M being Precious to Uday...????Anyways beautiful update👏.pls gv the ans soon

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@-The_Tomboy-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#92

Wat was that sudden kiss!!! and wow!!! nice update!!! the only thing jo mere bheje mein nahi ghusa is abhi abhi toh frnds h candle light mein usse jyada hogaye hmmm!!!! u are kinda diff!!! mein toh wahi pe satak gayi haila!!! kiss!!! but anyways as a very gud update!!!

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Riyu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#93

I READ ALL UR CHAPTERS U R A AMAZING WRITER I LOVE UR STORY PLZ UPDATE NEXT PART SOON😃CAN U ADD ME IN UR PM LIST???

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Marwa.A.W

@Marwa.A.W

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Posted: 13 years ago

#94

its awesome...

ubdate soon...dont forget to pm me...😉

Edited by Love.anjlenirma - 13 years ago

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Anny

@SyedAinah

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Posted: 13 years ago

#95

Nyc update aww kiss was soo romantic ,i tell u

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Niha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#96

just read parts 5, 6, 7 and 8

awesome updates

love how your linking them in with twilight, vamp diaries and pkek etc

do update soon.

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-TellyPrincess-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#97

Lovely Update, with your last update I can tell you are a One Direction fan, well you have another fan right here. By the way again, great update:)

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anushruthi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#98

beautiful ff please pm me whn u update

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Gargi

@sweet_gargi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#99

hey...m getting impatient to read ur ch9..plz update sooon...plz plz plz plz...

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..Re..

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Posted: 13 years ago

#100

SORRY FOR LIKE UPDATIN THAT LATE BUT WAS SUPER BUSY IN SCHOOL'S WORK AND YES ITS GONNA BE SHORT PLEASE DON'T KILL ME FOR THAT SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY BUT NEXT WOULD BE VERYYY LONG PROMISE BUT FOR THIS SORRY

AT Jay and manyata's home

M : GODD jay finally you are here i really wanted to talk to you
J : yup sure sis but what it is bout as ur tellin it looks like its very urgent
M : it is I ...III ... I
j : YES i'm listen you did what
M : i iii...
J : sis will you tell the DAMN thing
M : I KISSED UDAY
J : WHAT WHEN HOW WHERE WHY GOD SIS TELL ME
M : when you left he came for the project and *tells her the whole story*
J : oHH My GODDD!!!! sis you are in love
M : what no IMPOSSIBLE i like met him like TODAY
J : God sis Love don't happen at a fix time actually fallin in love doesn't depend on time and by the way if love at first sight is acceptable than why not love in one day
M : no Jay i don't think so oi need to know him as such for the kiss i think i just caught in the moment
J : god whatever sis just listen to your heart okkk
M : okk i'll go to sleep
J : ok sis sleep well *To herself* you'll sleep when your so called caught in moment kiss will be vanished from your mind *leaves to her room*

With uday and unnati

Uday : god what's wrong with me no JUST NO i can't love her if i will she'll burn with fire glued to me NO UDAY JUST NO!!!!\
Un: wassup bro so how was our meeting with manyata
Uday : *tensed* God no It can't happen *not listenin to unnati *
UN : BROOO R U EVEN LISTENIN
U : huh!!! what stop shouting unnatti i'm listening to you alright
Un : *crosses her arms* really what did i say ?
Uday : ahhh good night *confusing face*
Un : so what R U THINKIN HUH
Uday : look i i jus... i just ki...
Un : OMG BRO U KISSED SUM1 WHO???
Uday : *confused as un figured it out very fast* Ma...many...
Un : mayata Omg manyata r u like serious bro u can't love her right wait a sec do you love ger ?
Uday : what absurd no ofc not
Un : good for u bro u know if u will her life is in danger

Meanwhile with Manyata

M : *thinking of the kiss and smiles* wait why am i smiling ughhh god what wrong with you manyata you know you can't right you know you can't like in just a day impossible

THIRD PERSON *me* POv
manyata couldn't sleep was thinkin bout the kiss her and uday shared ughh that girl just lost her heart afterall meanwhile with uday it was the same but manyata is determined that till she doesn't get all the signs of being in love she will avoid uday yup avoid means avoid

What will happen next sorry if its short actually i have a suprise for you new FF comin up and once again

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by the way https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/dekha-ek-khwaab/3028500/love-forever-chapter-1-by-lipika my new FF love Forever ???

Edited by -Lipika- - 13 years ago

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