Twilight a manveer vampire stry updted ch10 pg 15

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SaHillover101

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Posted: 13 years ago

#101

Nice update Lipika!! N dun worry its fine!! School comes first!!:)

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@wendy25

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Posted: 13 years ago

#102

Nice update, lipika,

and its ok, school is more important. try to update ASAP

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jane niroopa

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Posted: 13 years ago

#103

nice update and plz cont soon😊

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Gargi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#104

nice update dear...n its ok as school work is more important...will be waiting for the next update and yes will read ur new FF...

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Posted: 13 years ago

#105

AT SCHOOL WITH ALL

manyata and jay were on their way to their bio class may was still thinking what she actually feels bout uday well after the caught-in-moment kiss uday has been takin over May's mind she was looking down and was lost and there jay was going on tellin her this and that omgg that guy is soo cute me and karan are good friend and blah blah blah and May didn't listened to any of her crap for her more important topic was Uday and there karan comes to them
"hi karan" jay says
and karan replies "hi Jay and Hi May"
May wasn't listening
karan again says "hii May " she still ain't listening
karan gives a whats-going-on look to jay and there jay just have a look "i -don't know"
karan snaps a finger and finally manyata is out of uday's thoughts

"oh hi karan how r u tumyaha kabse ho"

"since past 10 minutes and by the way May good morning " karan replies

"sisi where were you lost huh" jay says

"woh nothing was just thinking bout ud-" remembers what she's saying

"whom were you thinking bout uday " little curious and jealous too

"ahh bout mine and uday assignment we didn't finished anything" May retorted

"ok sis okk i think we should 15 min for bio class to start come on sis lets go" Jay says

"Jay and Karan you both go i'll come later need to take some books from the locker"

"May i'll come with u waise bhi locker tumse khulta kaha hai" karan replied with a smile

"no karan you both leave i'll manage" may said

"but May" karan was bout to say but gets cut off by jay

"come on karan sis will manage afterall she is sherni lets go" jay drags karan along with her

"sis come soon okk" bu this she leaves

May walks towards her locker and extracts her books and notes and is on her way to the class she;s still lookin down and bumps into sum1 all books and notes falls from her hand actually she herself was bout to fall and closed her eyes and she felt those strong arms around her eaist holding her unwaveringly and all the paper falls for May it was like she and uday are at some beautiful place and rose petals are falling on them but instead papers were falling for them time froze for a second and it took time to come back to reality uday takes off his hands from her waist and by now manyata is standing on her own

"ahhh tha thank you uday" may said
"no props " uday replies
"ahh so lets go to our bio class" May said in a low and sweet voice
"sure lets go " uady replied tho he was anxious bout that kiss

they both left leaves for the class both felt awkward there was pin drop silence between them than finally both said breaking the silence

"woh actually" Both said at the same time
"i was thinkin bout" again both at same time
both smiles a little

"woh actually i wanted to say" again both

finally both again said "sorry" at the same time and both laughs

"i'm really sorry for the you know what" May said

"don't be culpable it not ur its our mistake and iam sorry to " uday said in a calm voice

"So lets just forget last night friends again" May puts her right hand forward

"friend" uday and manyata shake hands and smiles

"now lets go i don't want to get late for the class lets go" May says and drags uday along her for bio class

In bio class

Morson ; ok guys i have a good news for you all

WHOLE CLASS IS HAPPY TO HEAR THIS

moron continues "you are going on a trip to chingwells in london "

WHOLE CLASS "HURRAY "

morosn "but don't be that excited guys its related to your bio project "

Class "very sad and looks at the teacher with pleading eyes"

"guys no puppy face okk and one more thing its a partner trip and ur partners are ur project partners and no more luxurious hotel rooms for ya all its a adventurous trip and you'll be staying in a tent with ur partners okk guyss and yes you'll make the tent too told u its adventurous trip so jungles would be surrounding you okk " morson says

NOW ALL 4 Thoughts

May's thoughts were :

"what no god no when i and uday were in my house which was big enough we kissed and when me and him in a small tent god knows what will happen god no why me but i don't know why i'm excited too whats happening to me uff"

uday's thoughts were :

"ohh god not to chingwells thank god i am May;'s partner otherwise she would we hanging between death and being alive but as i am with her i'll protect her and why does this university chose chingwell ahh don't they know there powerful vampires live "

Jay's thoughts were :

"yippe thankii god finally u listened to me me and karan in one tent just WOW can't wait for tomorrow i tell you"

karan's thoughts were :

"what no May and Uday in one tent i can't let this happen and i heard in chingwell the powerful vampires lives who rules the vampires and as i am a wolf i need to be careful as wolf and vampires are janni dusman "

guyss sorry for cutting uday and zayn i just don't know what to do with them so they are excluded from this trip they are not going but i will write some lovey dovey moments between them

SO We have reached the end hope you liked it

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Posted: 13 years ago

#106

hey lipika nice update but u did not pm so sad but its ok next time pls hsow more of uv n m

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Posted: 13 years ago

#107

yyyiiipeee im the 1st one to comment huraaay

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Gargi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#108

great update!...n wow!! UV n M in one tent😳😳😍 😍 😍 😍 😍 😍 😍 😍..plz dnt let this Karan to do spoil it...n i liked that thought of May that in one big house when they were their they kissed..n what will happen in one small tent...

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Posted: 13 years ago

#109

Originally posted by: maneta
yyyiiipeee im the 1st one to comment huraaay

YIPPEE ur the first one i replied after writing ch 10 😆😆😆

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Posted: 13 years ago

#110

Originally posted by: gargib
great update!...n wow!! UV n M in one tent😍..plz dnt let this Karan to do spoil it...n i liked that thought of May that in one big house when they were their they kissed..n what will happen in one small tent...

thankiii and no karan won't spoil anything and trust me i have planned many things for the trip u'll enjoy alot reading those