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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing update, now maya has to go to jail when she gets caught! I am so happy that Manyata is safe!! Can't wait for the next update! Have fun with your dad :)

Simran :D...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Great continue soon and when u update pls pm me I love your story it is amazing
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Posted: 13 years ago
it was realy awessum yaar...great update...👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
woww loveeeddd ur update n ur twist👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
so sorry for delay plz read this part and let me know ur kind suggestions

Chapter 21

Maya was on the phone

Maya:kya hua

"maam mere khayal se aapko apna plan thode dino ke liye postponed karna padega"

"what?"

"maam yuvraj udayveer singh khud iss case ko investigate kar rahe hain"

"hmmm…"

"maam agar unhe thodi si bhi bhanak lagi toh phir.."

"thik hai abhi ke liye sab band kar do,aur haan wo sim card jisse mein calls kiye wo"

"usse thikane laga diya hai"
"good"

Maya(thinking)thode din aur ji lo manyata, phir tumhari saanse toh waise bhi band ho hi jaayengi

***----***

Manyata was resting in her room

,she was still scared after hearing this that the girl was dressed like her,that means instead of her she was to be killed.

Everyone tried to console her,but all in vain.even after yesterday uday was busy sorting out the press and getting through the case.

He very well sorted out the press and handled the situation.

Nearly three days were passed and manyata was still lost in her thought

Firstly the murder,then get to know that she was the target and lastly that car just got through her.

unnati and j tried to talked to her but she still didn't reponded,even vijay bhai tried to crack joke but no result. Even every one in both the families were very concerned.

*******----------------------*******

It was fourth day in the morning manyata was resting her head on the bed

when a familiar voice caught her attention

"princess"

She opened her eyes

and saw him sitting in front of her.A smile formed on her face.

M:uday..

She lifted her hand and caressed his face softly.

She taught "This was the sweetest dream of her life"

Uday:kaisi ho princess.

Now reality struck her.

he was not a dream he is truly present here.

She got her hands back.

M:tum sacchi mein ho

Uday:nahi,humara bhoot hai.

Manyata just hugged him.she again sobbed

Uday:princess,just calm down

He rubbed her back concernly

Uday:I know princess u r afraid,just calm down.

M:uday woh..woh..

Uday:sab kuch thik hai princess,tum pehle khud ko sambhalo

M:par w..o ..woh..ladki..mein..mujhse..

Uday:princess sab thik hai..pehle tum khud ko sambhalo

They break the hug. Uday wipes her tears

M:wo who.. log mujhe maarna..

Uday:sshh..kuch nahi hoga tumhe. Hum tumhe kuch hone hi nahi denge.

M:par wo..

Uday:princess kya tume humpar bharosa hai?

Manyata nodded her head in affirmation,she was so innocent,like a kid that uday just smiled at her

Uday:toh phir bas hum hain na

M:tum humesha humare saath rahoge na?

Uday:nahi

M:kya..

Uday:ab humesha saath rehne ke liye…tumhe humse shaadi karni padegi.

Manyata playfully hit her "uday.."

Uday:arrey ab hum tumhare sirf dost hi toh hain

M:nahi

Uday:kya?

M:tum mere sabse acche dost ho.

Uday:haan nahi toh

They both laughed at it and shared some fun moment

Uday tucked her hair strand behind her ears

Uday:accha princess ab sabke baare mein bhi soche

M:matlab?

Uday:princess aap ke saath saath sab pareshan the darre hue the,but aap ki iss halat ne sabko aur pareshan kar rakha hai.

M:oh terii…mein bhi na,bas..sab kitne udaas honge na uday.

Uday:woh toh hain,afterall apni itni pyaari zindagi ko koi kaise udaas dekh kar udaas nahi hoga.

M:mujhe sabse baat karni hai.

Uday:aur phir?

M:phir bas dekhte jaao,haan nahi toh

*****-------------*****

All were on the breakfast table,there was really sad.even today vijay bhai's mood was off.

Unnati tried to lightened the atmosphere but even she was having faint smile

Even j was not in good mood today

She just gave a name sake smile to everyone

Everyone was having the breakfast silently. When manyata entered

M:itna sannata kyun hai bhai!!

Everyone looked over her in amazement. She smiled and walked towards them along with udayveer.

Uday:khamma ghani(joing his hands)

Everyone greeted him back.he settled down.even manyata greeted everyone but all were shocked.

Shocked to see her smiling at them

M:meine kuch galti kar di kya? Dadisahab kya hua

Ds composed herself "nahi beta kuch nahi,wo aap itne dinno se udaas thi aur aaj achanak aise"

M:achanak itna kuch hua ke mood off ho gaya tha aur aaj achanak on bhi ho gaya,haan nahi toh.

J:jiji humme yakin nahi ho raha hai.

Manyata smiled and took her seat beside uday.

Vb:but humme yakin ho raha hai,afterall uday banna jo hain.I TELL U

Uday:ab humne kya kar diya vijay banna

Vb:manyata ko khush.

Unnati:seriously dada, aaj subah tak manyata baat tak nahi kar rahi thi aur ab

M:ye baat toh sach hai agar uday humse baat nahi karta toh na jaane kitne aur dinno tak hum ussi kamre mein statue bankar baithe rehte, haan nahi toh.

Everyone laughed

j:matlab credit goes to uday right?

Vb:ye bhi koi puchne wali baat hai

Unnati:really humare dada hai hi sabse accche

M:hmm afterall humara sabse bestest friend jo hai.

Till this time all elders left the table blessing everyone.

J:kya jiji abhi tak friendship par hi ataki ho..

M:(confused)kya?

Uday:kuch nahi princess,ye bas aise hi keh rahe hai.tum apna breakfast khatam karo c'mon fast.

M:yeah yeah,aur tum kya vrat rakhoge.

Uday:princess I m already full.

M:what already full,atleast give me company?

She forcefully servs him,vijay signals unnati and j and they trio leaves the dining.

Uday and manyata both had their breakfast

*****----------*****

J:dono kitne acche lagte haina saath mein

Unnati and vijay together:haan nahi toh!!!

Unnati:tumhe pata hai j.. dada kitne change ho gaye hai.

Vb:humne kya sabne dekha hai. Pehle uday once in ages smile deta tha

J:aur tab ye page 3 ki hot news ban jaati thi,and ab toh..

Unnati:ab toh dada ko khush rehne ki wajah bhi nahi chahiye.

Vb:ur right unnati!!

J:u mean THE YUVRAJ UDAYVEER SINGH OF JAIGARH ko pyaar ho gaya hai.

Vb:no doubt in that

Unnati:bas accept nahi karna chahte

Vb:wo bhi karega,ek din uday khud iss baat ko accept karega bas usse ehsaas karwana hai

J:aur manyata jiji ko pyaar…..,(they both looks at j)arrey jiji toh dosti ke aage badhti hi nahi

Unnati:u r right j.manyata abhi bhi dada ko sirf apna dost manti hai

Vb:sabse accha dost(he smiles at their confused and questioning face) u both r wrong this time,…c'mon yaar j tum toh thik ho but unnati I taught tum toh samjhdaar hogi

J:(glaring him) what do u mean by vijay bhai?

Vb:sorry j bhai humara wo matlab nahi tha, actually unnati dear tumne apne dada, THE YUVRAJ UDAYVEER SINGH OF DEVGARH ke andar ke uday ka dil padh liya but humari confused manyata bhai ki aankhon ko nahi dekha.

Unnati:hum kuch samjhe nahi.

Vb:accha tell me bhai toh hum aur j bhi hai manyata ke but agar usse dar lagta hai toh wo kisse pehle yaad karti hai

Unnati:dada ko..

Vb:usse raat hum sab manyata ke liye pareshan the but usne kisse pehle yaad kiya

J:uday ko

Vb:usse majnu aaksh ke matter ko solve karne mein manyata ne trust ki par sabse jyada kiya

Unnati:dada par

Vb:sabse pehle hug kisse kiya

J:uday ko

Vijay:itne dinno se udaas chehre pe smile kisne layi

Unnati:of course dada

J:yeah of course uday

Unnati:ek minute hum samjh gaye, u mean to say ke manyata bhi dada se…OMG I cant believe this..

J:what? Toh phir jiji batati kyun nahi?

"kya nahi batati j…"

Manyata said as she entered the room but heard only the last words of J..

They all got scared

Vb:ku..ku..kuch …nahi..kuch nahi m bhai

Unnati and j both nodded in unison

M:are u sure?

J:yupp

Unnati:waise tum yahan?dada kahan hai?

M:mere alawa tumhare dada ke paas aur bhi kaam hai.

Vb:arrey m bhai aaj se tum bhi busy

M:matlab

Unnati:matlab aaj se tumahari training ki shruwat hai

M:oh teri..mujhe dadisahab ne bataya bhi tha..

Vb:first and most important thing "mein" nahi "hum".

j:and then "tum nahi "aap"

unnati:oh god j..ab aap is so formal haan, itna bhi royal thik nahi

vb: yeah hum tak its ok

j and unnati:haan nahi toh

m:oh teri meri ..no no I mean humari nakal,haan nahi toh

they all shared some happy moment.

M:ab me..nahi hum chalte hain ,humari classes ka time ho raha hai

Vb:tumhare teachers tumhe nanisahab batayengi

J:j:but dance teacher ka kuch pata nahi

Vb:humne kuch socha hai

M:kya?

Vb:pehle tum niche jaao

Manyata left from there.

Unnati:kya socha

Vb:ab inn dono uday-manyata ki naiyya humme hi paar lagani hai

All trio says together "HAAN NAHI TOH"…

Hey guys so sorry for such a late update and also for such boring part

I will try to make it interesting

bohot hardwork lagta hai yaar especially photos mein so plz plz

Plz do hit like and comment

Mariam12 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
thank god u updated it was awsum
waiting 4 next and plz maya wala matter jaldi sort karo
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow nice one Jazz.loved it.cont soon...n abhi main bhi tumsey same ques karo.itney achey ideas atey kaha seh hai dear???
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it awesome was waiting for it i knew u were busy but it was worth waiting loved cont soon dear
thnx for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: princessvishaka

thank god u updated it was awsum

waiting 4 next and plz maya wala matter jaldi sort karo

sure dear i too dont like this maya
iska case jaldi khatam karne ka try karungi
and next time jaldi update karungi
😃😃😃😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Swini01

Wow nice one Jazz.loved it.cont soon...n abhi main bhi tumsey same ques karo.itney achey ideas atey kaha seh hai dear???

sab aap jaise talented logo ka asar hai
dear ur ss:phir mohobat had inspired me alot😃😃😃😃

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