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Posted: 13 years ago
That was too awesome yar👏...This is what a normal human being would react whn a truth comes in front of her.Not the way that idiotic CV's 😡showed...Thanks a lot 4 updating
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey friends thanx for ur complimentsi m glad u all liked it
and i surely wants manyata to behave like a human and more than that she is a yuvrani so to stick to her words not like in the show😡
so i potrayed her like a sensible person
hope u will like her more in this😊😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Oh, it was absolutely wonderful. PM whenever you update. Thanks😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
i like the sensible M better . but if u see from the CVs point of view they probably wanted the serial to last longer and tats y made her such a rebel and gav her too much time to adjust and settle down . honestly CVs i dont think any manveer fan wants the serial to end soon but tat doesnt mean they hav to drag the show along . manveer coming 2gether shudnt mean teh end of the show . i vud luv the watch the after marriage life of manveer . i hav high hopes 4m ur ff . dont forget to PM me whn u update
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Posted: 13 years ago

Chapter 11

It was morning,rays of the sun entered the room.the room got glowed,manyata's face got twinkeled in the shining rays ,sweetly she yawned like an angel with such an innocent smile

Uday stood at the door just admired her angelic beauty

,he was lost in her.suddenly he broke off.he jerked his head"control uday,yeh tumme kya hogaya tha……..c'mon uday tum sirf manyata se shaadi karna chahte ho taaki tum devgarh ki will tak pahunch sako" his chain of thought were broken when manyata screamed "TUM"

Uday:haan hum (he advanced towards her)

M:tumhara ghar nahi hai kya?

Uday:hai na,tumhare dil mein(and he leaned toward her)

M:woh mujhe tumse kuch kehna tha

Uday:toh kaho na princess(still leaned towards her)

M(she feels little uncomfortable) woh kal maine kuch jyada hi …….

Uday: (innocently)jyada hi..kya princess

M:who main ..woh…

Uday:shukar hai tumne humme dobara thappad nahi maara(and smile)

Manyata's eyes widened

Uday:tum toh aise shock ho rahi ho jaise humne kuch naya hi kaha ho tumse kyu?

M:kya?

Uday:kyun tumne apna action sequel humme nahi dikhaya tha kya,waise humme tumhare chone se koi problem nahi hai,par itne force ke bajaye aaram se bhi toh..

M:u r impossible

Uday:galat. Agar tumhare words ko agal kiya jaaye toh banta hai I m possible.

M: (rolls her eyes) uuugghhh

She gets up and tries to move but uday pulls her.

Uday:kaha chali princess,humare liye breakfast lane,waise humme na theekha bohot pasand hai tumhari tarah.

M:lagta hai mera action sequel bhul gaye ho tum

Uday:tumhari koi bhi adaa hum kabhi nahi bhul sakte princess

He leaves her and leaves the room with a smirk

Every one was settled on the dining table when rajmata ordered

Ds:seema rajkumari manyata ka nashta unke kamre tak pahuncha diya jaaye

M:kya mein aap ke saath nashta nahi kar sakte dadisahab.

Every one looked towards her.she was standing in a pleading look

Ds:bilkul manyata,par humne socha shayad aapko ab kuch waqt chahiye ho,bas isiliye.

M:mein ab thik hu dadisahab

She took everyone blessing,uday was just looking at her.

Brij:humme bohot khushi hai manyata

K:aaiye beta yaha baithiye,humare paas

She took her seat,they had a happy breakfast(guys I m skipping this part)

In manyata's room,j was trying to call someone

M:kya hua j,tu kisse itna call kar rahi hai

J:jiji..humne aapko sabse milaya but unnati se toh milaya hi nahi,who to sabse important hai

M:unnati who kaun hai?

"hum hai"unnati tug her head in the room from the door

J:unnati…

She ran and they both hugged each other.

J:unnati look today manyata's jiji is with us

Unnati ran to her "OMG manyata" she hugged her

M:hi unnati

Unnati:I was so desperate to meet u,humme toh raat se nnend hi nahi aa rahi thi.

J:oh unnati,she is my sis

Unnati:yeah I know but she is awesome.so beautiful……and so brave

M:brave?

J:tumne kab jiji ki braveness dekhi

Manyata and j were so confused

Unnati;dekhi nahi suni

Jn M:kya

Unnati:dada ne bataya tha.

M:dada?means ur brother right?

J:use kab sapna aaya

Unnati:wait let me talk to her first J…so manyata tumne dada ko …I mean…pehli hi meeting mein….i mean

M:kya,I cant get u

Unnati:tumne seedha hi dada ko thappad maar diya.

Vijay bhai just fell down from behind the door coughing hardly

J:WAT!!!

They all were hell shock unnati just glare to vijay bhai

Vb:wat,humme toh bas apne bhaiyon ki baatein sunni thi,but yaha toh 1000 watts ka current hi lag gaya,haina J

He looked at her,she was so shocked and stood like a statue,they all jerked her

J:hhh….yeah I m still alive,m I heard right wat u said unnati,really jiji

M: (innocently)who tumhara bhai hai unnati

All of them at once:hhhmm……

M:tum toh kitni sweet ho aur who

Vb:aur who?

M:aur who thik hi hai

Vb:par M bhai ne thappad maara kyun unnati?

Unnati:iska jawaab mere paas nahi hai

They turned at once to manyata and looked at here for an answer,she just smiled

M:who mujhe laga who koi goon hoga

Vb:wat(almost fainting)humhe koi sambhalo

J:seriously jiji,uday ki ek jhalak dekhne k liye rajkumariyaan marti hai,aur aapne …I don't know ab who kya karega

Unnati:I don't think so,abhi tak toh dada ne kuch nahi kiya

Vb:u know tab toh aur bhi serious baat hai.

M:kyun?

J:kyunki jiji,jab uday kuch nahi karta tab kuch bada hone wala hota hai

Unnati:but

Vb:but kya unati,don't u know ur so called dada

Unnati:ho sakta hai..

Vb:ho sakta hai wo tumha kidnap karke 3rd degree thunder shock treatment de ya phir I TELL U

Manyata was scared now "nahi who aisa nahi kar sakta"

"kaun aisa nahi kar sakta,princess"

They all turned to look and was shocked and scared to see uday standing on the door

They started to leave one by one silently and to control their laughter,but stopped

Vb(whispering to j and unnati)kamaal hai thappad khane par bhi chehre ka glow nahi gaya.

Manyata was so scared now,uday sensed that something was wrong

Uday:I want to talk to manyata alone.

M:no,why alone?

J:sure uday

They were leaving and suddenly passing by uday vijay spoke "cheeks ka glow accha hai,koi naya treatment hai kya"

He was unable to understand,he locked the door and turned to face manyata

M:tumne door kyun lock kiya

Uday:taaki hum apna kaam aasani se khatam kar sake

Manyata's eyes got widened "ye kya sach mein mujhe shock treatment dega"

He advanced towards her and she back off

M:I…i.. m sorry..

Uday:sorry…

M:kaha na sorry,dobara aisa nahi hoga pakka

Uday(confused even more)but princess..(he lifted his hand)

M:nahi…(she covered her face with her hands)plz…plz…

Uday:princess…(he tried to talk)

M:I m really really sorry(her voice level rised)PLZ..I M SO SORRY

Uday(holding her by her shoulders)ssshhh………

So guys how was this

Now my friends I will surely update the next part tomorrow pakkawala if promise

And sorry for the delay,I will try to give double updates

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Posted: 13 years ago
Love the update!!!! Poor , confused UV!!
Hope to see the next update ASAP
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Posted: 13 years ago
Love this update!!!! Especially the last few lines!!!
Don't forget to update ASAP

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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing Update great idea to add pictures
Cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it.. Vijay's dialogue was nice.. chehre ka glow.. lol
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it...VB was awesome...cheeks ka glow...🤣
and eagerly waiting for the next part...

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