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Chapter 10

He dragged her out of the room in anger and took her to the west wing of the mahal.

(this is the west wing)

M:chodo mujhe ,kaha le jaa rahe ho.

Uday:tumhare sawaalon ke jawab dene.

He dragged her to a room,it was really very beautiful with fine art of interior,

(this is the room)Manyata was just admiring its beauty

Uday:jaana chahti ho ye kiska karma hai………..tumhara, its ur damm room manyata,..wahi karma jisse aunty komal ne 16 saalon se sambhala hai

He pushed her towards the wardrobe "kholo isse……open it manyata"

As she opened it it was filled with gifts wrapped up

Uday:pata hai yeh kya hai…..yeh who gifts hain jo dadisahab ne 16 saalon se har saal bina bhule tumhare liye sambhal kar rakhe hain,iss ummeed mein ke unki poti manyata jab lautegi toh who ye saare gifts apne haathon se use dengi

He again bought her to another wordrobe,opened it and pointed towards it.it was filled with expensive clothes and assessories

Uday:yeh sirf menge kapde nahi hain,yeh who cheese hain jo tumhari choti behen tumhari liye shamesha iss umeed mein leti hai,ke uski badi behen manyata jab wapas aayegi tab wo khud inhe tumhe present karegi, aur..

M: (with a lower tone and tears forming in her eyes)toh phir kyun mujhe alag kiya

Uday:nahi manyata,tumhe kisi ne alag nahi kiya,tumhe alag kiya haalaton ne aur uss…(n he clenched his fist)

M:aur…aur kisne?

Uday:manyata bas itna jaan lo ke dushmani ki wahaj se tumhe kidnap kiya gaya..aur uss kidnapper ne tumhe hum sab se door kar diya….kuch din pehle hi jab wo pakda gaya tab usne humme bataya ke ussne tumhe 16 saal pehle anat ashram me choda tha.

Manyata was feeling guilty for not trusting them.she moved forward

Uday:but tumhe kya farak padta hai haina.tumhara pariwaar tumhaare liye kitna bhi tadpa ho but tumhe kabhi koi farak nahi padega,haina..

And he left her in that room,she broke down on her knees,her heart was getting heavier,the tears forming in her eyes wants to flow out.

j entered in manyata's room in a hope that she can talk to her

She ordered to open the door.she entered and saw manyata,her jiji for which she ever waited

J:jiji..

Manyata looked over,there stood a girl with a pleading voice,as if she she was pleading her that she is with her.

J:jiji…

J run to her,she got on her knees and hugged her,her jiji for which she ever waited.

The tears dripped through her eyes.

J:jiji..hum hain aapki choti behen J.

M:..j

J:hum bhi na,hum jaynandini…par aap humhe j bulati thi haina.

J hugged her again "aap kaha thi jiji,hum aapko kitna miss karte the,aapko kitna yaad karte the hum jiji.plz ab humhe chod kar mat jaana kabhi bhi nahi,nahi jaaogi na?

Manyata lifted her hands and returned her hug "nahi jaaongi j,kabhi nahi"

Manyata's heart felt lighter.she saw her mother standing on the door.komal was about to leave,

M:maa..

Komal's step got frozen,she felt as if she got the whole world,she looked at her daughters,especially the one she got back,her life manyata.

M:maa.bohot bhuk lagi hai

Komal got tears in her eyes "seema rajkumari ke liye khaana laya jaaye"

The maid got the food komal feed her with her own hands

J:wow jiji,aate hi itna pyaar…aapko pata hai aaj tak kisi ko bhi akele room mein khana khana allow nahi hai,hum humesha sabke saath dining par baith kar hi khana khate hain,haina mom

M:sach maa

Komal just nodded in affirmation "par aap jaise chahe waise reh sakti hain,beta"

Soon rajmata and brijraj entered

(I m cutting this scene as it will get too long)

In jaigarh palace

Unnati: (in excitement)dada did I heard right…manyata is back. And u bought her…is it true?

Uday was just starring the bracelet "hmmm………."

Unnati: (got little serious)dada…I know dada u that girl on that day…u really miss her but

Uday(with his smirk)but what choti,humne kaha than a,hum unhe dundh lenge.

Unnati:dada now forget her

Uday:nahi bhool sakte choti,bilkul nahi bhool sakte

Unnati:dada enough…now its manyata who is important in ur life..

Uday:I know choti,now its her who is important in my life

Unnati:dada..

Uday:humne kabhi sapne mein bhi nahi socha tha chutki,ke humari bachpan ki dost,humari mangetar,devgarh ki yuvrani aur jaigarh ki honewali maharani humme jaigarh ke yuvraj ko kabhi thappad maar sakti hai.

Unnati's eyes got widened,she was shock to her this,her heart beat was almost stopped,she was about to faint but steadied herself. "WAT!! she is manyata?"

Unnati:she …she…

Uday:khud ko sambhalo chutki,hold on.

Giriraj entered the scene "I m proud of u uday"

G:today u proved that u r my responsible son

He hugged him

Next morning sun rosed up,Morning newspapers were published with the photo of uday bringing manyata back to mahal and headlines were printed "LONG LOST PRINCESS FOUND"

"PRINCE BOUGHT HIS PRINCESS BACK"

There far in a dark room a figure crumbled the news paper and a laughing voice roar in the room

"this is not going to happen,I will not let u both be happy ever…….."

So guys hows this

Now the real story will start,

Guys this dark figure is not aakash pakka,u will soon get to know

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Posted: 13 years ago
What his not Akash then who is he?omg now i cant wait yaar.ont soon n thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi Jazz, i started reading this ff yesterday finished all the chapter, it is just outstanding, loved it, and could you please add me to ur pm list.😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice one.cont choon.n thanks for the pm.
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Just read both parts Amazing finally Manyata found her family and prince... J is good in here too for a change... who is this dark figure if its not Akash probz sm nw guy aftr Manyata or new girl after Uday.. cont soon

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