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Posted: 13 years ago
thanks for the PM
loved it, it was an awesome update
do update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Great Part
She will finally find out shes a princess
Cont Soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
note
friends i have written the next chapter
but it is saved in my pc and i hav some problem with my net connection
it will be sought out in a day or two
as soon as it will be repaired i will update it
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Chapter 8

Moniya and shivangi were on the terrace,settled on the railing hanging theirs legs in free space

Sh:kya yaar,neel ko bhi abhi jaana tha kya

M:shivu,wo uska kaam hai

Sh:tere uss yuvraaj ne mere hero ko mujhse poore do hafton ke liye dur kar diya

M(shocked)oh hello!! Wo mera yuvraaj kabse ho gaya

Sh:kal raat se,jab se usne tujhe true hero ki tarah bachaya hai tabse.

M:c'mon shivu who uski insaniyat thi,meri jagah koi aur bhi hoti toh who uski bhi help karta

Sh:haan haan jaroor karta,par duniya janti hai wo ladki uske hotel room tak jaati,par tujhe toh usne safely ghar drop kar diya,wow!!!! A true gentlemen

M:tu kya keh rahi hai yaar,jo ladkiyaan aisa karti hai na wo khud hi uske upar girti hai,wo kisi par bhi force nahi kar sakta,haan nahi toh.

She was shocked to hear moniya defending uday

Sh:tujhe kya ho gaya,kal tak toh who tera dushman tha aur aaj achanak se hi

M:kal tak baat kuch aur thi………(changes the topic)chal jaane de iss baat ko,tujhe pata hai mera bracelet,silver wala

Sh:haan wo jo tune apni first saving se liya tha

M:hmmm pata nahi kaha gaya

Sh:kaha gaya?,kho gaya kya…jaane de,dusra le lenge.

M:nahi yaar,wo kitna pyaara sa ha.aisa lagta hai meri pehchaan tha who,pata nahi kaha chala gaya

The bracelet was shining in uday's palm

Ds:aap kya keh rahe hain uday beta,saaf saaf kehiye.

Uday:dadisahab,rajkumari manyata yehi hain,hum unse mil chuke hain

K:kaha aur kab,aapne humme kuch kaha kyun nahi.

Uday:kyunki shayad tab tak hum bhi iss sach se bekhabar the aunty komal

Brij:par aap itne yakeen ke saath kaise keh sakte hain ke wahi humari beti hai

Uday turns to face them,he looks towards dadisahab

"kuch nishaan shayad zindagi bhar ke liye humari pehchaan ban jaate hain,haina dadisahab"

Ds understand what he wants to say,tears starts forming in her eyes but as a strong lady she controls herself

"bahut hua ye khel uday beta, ab aap jald se jald humari bacchi ko ghar vaapas le aaiye,ab humse aur nahi saha jaata"

Moniya was running behind shivangi

M:ruk mein tujhe abhi batati hu,aaj teri khair nahi haan nahi toh

Sh(while running)pehle pakad toh le…aur dyaan se,agar gir gayi toh tera yuvraaj tujhe uthane nahi aayga.

M:hwww ruk tu abhi

There stood chiki spoke "kya bharosa aa bhi jaae"

Moniya and shivagi got stood on the spot

M:oh plz ab tum dono bhi shuru mat ho jaana.

Soni:kyun nahi moniya,suna hai kaafi achha dikhta hai

Sh:haan bilkul,aur usse acche log pasand hai..(wispers under her breath)tum jaisi bandariyaan nahi.

Chiki:waise agali baar kab mil rahe ho tum dono.

M:kabhi nahi,bas bohot ho gaya. Usne sirf mujhe safe ghar pahuncha kar meri madad ki hai

Soni:matlab tu ab use nahi milegi

M(roll her eyes)never ever happy,aur ab koi bhi mere saamne yeh topic nahi nikalega

Sh:yuvraaj udayveer singh

M:maine kaha na shivu,ab aur nahi sunna chahti mein uska naam

Shivangi spoked as if she was stunned to see someone "aur agar wo tere saamne aa jaaye toh"

M:toh… toh apni aankhe band kar lungi

Sh:toh phir kar le

M:WAT!!

She points in the opposite direction.moniya shifts her gaze in the pointed direction and is shocked to see him walking towards them followed by the nuns and the gaurds.

He walked up to her with his signature smirk and confidence.

Uday(bowing in front of her)good evening …………princess Manyata

M:maine tumhe apna naam nahi bataya,toh kya tum mujhe kuch bhi bulaoge.

Uday:aahaa..sirf aapke hi naam se rajkumari.

M:lagta hai subah subah chadha ke aaye ho,haan nahi toh

He signals the gaurds and they leave and turns to look at the nuns

Nun 1:come on u all with us.

All of them was moving

Nun 2:not u moniya………shivangi u come with us.

Nun 2; (blessings to moniya)god bless u my child,may u get all ur happiness in ur life

Nun 1:shivangi say bye to ur friend

They all were getting confused but much was moniya.she was unable to understand for what was going on.in few minutes the nuns and her friend left her

M:nanny..

But before she can continou her hands got a firm hold.

Uday:ghar chalein RAJKUMARI MANYATA.

M:kya bakwaas hai ye(screaming),MERA NAAM MONIYA HAI AUR YEHI MERA GHAR HAI, ACCHE SE SAMAJH LO HAAN NAHI TOH.

Uday pulled her towards him and dragged her towards the car.moniya was struggling to get herself free

M:dekho mein manti hu tumne kal raat meri help ki thi par iska ye matlab nahi ke tum kuch bhi bologe aur mein maan lungi

Uday just pushed her in the car and sat beside her "chalo driver"

M:dekho..

Uday:dekh hi toh rahe hain

M:jaane do mujhe

Uday:who hum nahi kar sakte..

They reached to the estate of devgarh,the huge gates were crowded by the news hunger media.

Manyata was still struggling to get free.he dragged her in,there stood the family ready to welcome their dearest daughter back.he looked towards ds as if asking a permission and ds nodded in affirmation.he took her inside in a room.

It was in shades of purple and white,

He left her hand and looked at her with a smirk.

M: (screaming out of her voice)BOHOT HUA YEH NATAK,AB YE TAMASHA BAND KARO, KOI..HAI..

Uday moved to her and holded her by her shoulder "ssshhh…. rajkumariyaan itna uncha nahi bolti."

M:mujhe yahan se jaane do,mere dost mera intezaar kar rahein honge.

Uday:ab tumhara sab kuch yahin hai manyata

M:kaun manyata,mera naam moniya hai,manyata nahi,tumhe koi misunderstanding hui hai.

Uday:misunderstanding toh hui hai but tumhe….humme nahi,hum yuvraaj udayveer singh,humme kabhi koi misunderstanding nahi ho sakti.(he traced his finger on her face and moved through cheeks to her lips)

M(almost jerking his hands)halkat vede yede ,tune kal raat mujhe bachaya iska yeh matlab nahi ki tu jo chahe wo hi kare,samajha.apni hadh mein rahiyo, haan nahi toh

Uday:waah princess politeness se direct gaaliyaan.

M:haan ab tujhe samjhane ka yahin tareeka hai(moves away from him)

Uday(moving towards her)tumahare muh se toh galiyaan bhi tumhari tarah meethi lagti hain.

Uday reached to her,manyata not realizing that he stood behind her,turns around and her hair crossed his face,he was lost in her eyes and so was she,and they both share a beautiful eyelock.

Uday breaks it realizing his falling for her,as he always regret it.he never wants to fall for anyone as love always makes the one very weak.

M:dekh ab tera Mazak bohot hua ab jaane de mujhe,thik hai (waving her hands) bye-bye, cya..

She moves towards the door when he pulls her and pinned her to the wall,

M:jaane de mujhe,mein teri koi stupid bimbo girlfriend nahi hu..

He leaned towards her, and whispered in her ears "girlfriend toh nahi par humari toh ho,humesha se aur humesha ke liye"

Her eyes got widened…

So guys how was this,sorry if not so good but I tried my best

And I apolozise for my delay,my net connection got lost so sorry

So guys I wanted to tell u that my further update would be early but I don't know after that.

My cet results are out and I need to rush for my admission as I don't know I will secure admission in my choice of college or not.

So guys wish me luck

And don't forget to hit like button and comment plz

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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update and all the best with the admission 👍🏼
Edited by janeniroopa - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Omg that was brilliant 😍
Loved it. Please update the next part soon!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice one.cont soon n thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Love it!!!
It is fabulous!!!!
update soon


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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing Part

Lots of gd luck with ur admission hugz
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it update da nxt 1 soon :))

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