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Posted: 13 years ago
good luck with ur admission
great update
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Posted: 13 years ago
dat was awesome especially loved this dialogue girlfriend toh nahi par humari toh ho,humesha se aur humesha ke liye hayee really cant wait for the next part update soon and thanks for the pm
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Loved it! that was amazing. pls update soon.
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Very nice update!! Plzzz do continur soon n thanks for the pm!!!:)
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Chapter 9

Ds ordered to unlock the room.uday released her on hearing the voices.ds entered the room with brij and komal.

K:manyata..(she rushed to her but stopped on hearing ds)

Ds:rukiye komal..

M:wahi toh mein bhi keh rahi hu,bas kijiye and let me go..plz

Ds walked to her and she lifts her hands and moved towards manyata's back shoulders and caressed it,her hands got brushed with the scar on her neck.her eyes got moistened "aap sahi the uday beta ,kuch nishaan zindagi bhar ke liye humari pehchaan ban jaate hain"

Manyata was now hell confused,she busted out "yeh kya drama hai,dekhiye mataji aap mujhe yaha samajhdaar lag rahi hain.aap toh mujhe samajhiye,mujhe jane dijiye,plz..PLZ…."

Brij:maasahab aap kuch bol kyun nahi rahi hain…(turns to manyata) beta aap manyata..humari beti manyata..,devgarh ki honewali yuvrani manyata.

M:ye kya mazaak hai

K:((still sobbing)manyata,humari bacchi…aap humari beti hain,humari manyata

M:oh toh ab mein apki beti bhi ho gayi,thik hai fine ,mein aapki beti hu,…toh itne dinno tak aap log kahan the aap log,ab tak toh meri yaad nahi aayi,aur aaj achanak.

Brijraj wanted to talked but rajmata cut him..

Ds:maharaj brijraj iss waqt hum inse akele mein baat karna chahte hain,aap log jaaiye,maharani komal sambhaliye khud ko,uday beta aap bhi..

Uday:jee dadisahab

They all left the room.

M:dekhiye

Ds:aap suniye manyata

M:mera naam..

Ds:manyata hai

She goes near the table and brings the glass of water to her

Ds:peejiye ,phir hum baat karenge.

Manyata gulped down the water at once. M:ab bataiye

Ds:beta itni jaldbaazi thik nahi

M:mere liye hai,yeh bakwas khatm kark mujhe wapas lautna hai

Ds:aapko yeh sab bakwas lag raha hai

M:nahi,yeh toh bohot interesting drama chal raha hai

Ds:hum samajh sakte hain aap ke liye yeh sab ajeeb hoga,par ab yehi aapki haqiqat hai,rajkumari manyata,apki pehchaan ab yehi hai,hum hi aapka pariwaar hain

M:pariwaar..r u serious?yeh mera pariwar hai,……toh mera yeh so called pariwaar tab kaha tha jab mujhe unki jaroorat thi,mujhe ek anaat asharam mein anathon ki zindagi jeene par mere issi pariwaar ne mujhe majboor kiya hai,..aur aaj apko apnapan achanak se yaad aa gaya.

Ds:aap sach se anjaan hain manyata

M:toh bataiye na sach kya hain,mein bhi sunna chahti hu.bataiye….chup kyun hain aap

She was shaking in anger.

Ds :aap iss waqt samajh nahi paayengi

M:kyunki aap kuch samjha nahi paayengi.

Ds:hum aapse baad mein baat karenge

M:no way mujhe abhi jana hai yahaan se

Ds left her in the room and locked it,she was banging the door.

It was dawning and the noise of breaking the crokery were getting louder with every passing minutes.uday entered the mahal "khamma ghani dadisahab". He greeted every one.

J:dadisahab aap jiji ko aise kaise room mein band kar sakte hain.

K:maasahab unhone subah se kuch nahi khaya.

BANGGG!!! Another sound was heard

They all were worried.

Brij:maasahab can y didn't we tell her the truth

Ds:she wont understand now brijraj.

Uday:dadisahab can I once..

Ds:hmm…aap koshish karke dekhiye uday beta,shayad kuch ho sake

Uday headed towards her room,as he entered he was stunned to look the condition of the room,he signaled the maid to keep the foods there,

Uday:so princess,ye throwing practice baad mein karna,pehle apna energy level toh badha lo

Manyata was fuming in rage she headed towards him and threw all the food on the ground

M:NAHI KHANA MUJHE KUCH BHI,YAHA KA TOH PAANI BHI NAHI PEENA MUJHE,SAMJHA !!

Uday pulled her towards him.

M:chod mujhe!! Halkat vede!!..(he was still smirking)tu na bohot pachtaayega…tu bhi aur tera ye ghatiya pariwaar bhi

Uday:BAS!!! Ab bohot ho gaya

He got the hold more firm on her,manyata got frightened by this sudden shried behavior of him

Uday:yeh pariwaar humse jyada aapka hai manyata..aap ko apni zindagi ke bare mein jaanne ka hak hai,par iss pariwaar ki ijjat uchaal kar nahi,aapke har sawaal ka jawaab ab hum denge,chaliye humare saath..

He dragged her out of the room in anger and took her to….

So guys how was this

I know this was short but next will be long one and it would be updated soon

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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice one.cont soon n thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Very interesting!!!Want to know where uday took manyata...please update soon dear...
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great update, loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey u updated really faster this time...as usual great update...👏👏
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Nice one.cont soon n thanks for the pm.

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